Ok, maybe I'm being a bit harsh...but reviews really should be edited a bit more before posting.
As for me...I'm never going to "emphasize" with a dinosaur...I might "empathize" with one (if I met one in a deplorable condition)...who knows?
Now to speak about sentence fragments.
In summary, this review is a good review that really shines in some aspects and falls short in others. With some improvement, it could be a great review. Of course...if you improve anything, it gets better, now doesn't it?
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As for me...I'm never going to "emphasize" with a dinosaur...I might "empathize" with one (if I met one in a deplorable condition)...who knows?
Now to speak about sentence fragments.
In summary, this review is a good review that really shines in some aspects and falls short in others. With some improvement, it could be a great review. Of course...if you improve anything, it gets better, now doesn't it?
Ack.