Agreed. The declaration itself could use some editorial work as well - what a poorly written piece of dren.
I agree with the concepts the declaration is intended to support and would happily sign it, if it were written in anything even remotely resembling meaningful and legible language. I mean, talk about a run-on sentence! The ifrst one is 300 words long! That's an accomplishment in itself.
Seriously though, I'm sure some will say that if the concepts are worthy then folks should sign it, and never mind the language. I firmly believe, though, that the way we say something is very nearly as important as what is said (OK, I admit I was an undergrad English major). This is written in such a way as to sound stiff and pompous.
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steganography: the hiding of a secret message within an ordinary message and the extraction of it at its destination.
Agreed. The declaration itself could use some editorial work as well - what a poorly written piece of dren.
I agree with the concepts the declaration is intended to support and would happily sign it, if it were written in anything even remotely resembling meaningful and legible language. I mean, talk about a run-on sentence! The ifrst one is 300 words long! That's an accomplishment in itself.
Seriously though, I'm sure some will say that if the concepts are worthy then folks should sign it, and never mind the language. I firmly believe, though, that the way we say something is very nearly as important as what is said (OK, I admit I was an undergrad English major). This is written in such a way as to sound stiff and pompous.