Sudden Death Experience
Charles Manson writes "I'm sure you and your readers have already heard about this evil monster, but I just stumbled upon a fantastic review of it. Cedar Point has always been an innovator, but god damn, this thing is just sick. I'm glad I only live a hundred miles away becuase I'll be practically living there this summer. My favorite quote of the article is 'If Hell has thrill rides, this brilliantly evil machine should be one of them.'" We mentioned the Cedar Point coaster earlier. The best parts of roller coaster riding are the little surreal notes, i.e. looking over the side and seeing 500 hats on the ground below.
The title doesn't explain what the article is about. "Sudden Death Experience"? What? Nor do the phrases "this evil monster" or "this brilliantly evil machine" in the text. What the hell is "Cedar Point"?
It's clear that you are excited, but next time, try to add a little bit of information to your post. The only reason I knew you were talking about a roller coaster was because michael mentioned it at the end.
Man, has quality taken a dive here. I think it would be a lot better if editors started actually editing instead of posting submissions as quotes. (And yes, I'm willing to take a karma hit to try to draw attention to and change things.)
As much as I care about this sort of t..h....zzzz.
Quack, quack.
you pussy, roller coasters dont hurt
the bigger the better, and thats the truth. i cant believe you didnt even ride the raptor, that coaster is real fun and not that bad.