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Darwinian Poetry: From Bad to Verse

For those who say design cannot take place through the process of selection, behold: Darwinian Poetry. Cull the prosaic or nonsensical snippets of text, reinforce the rest, and, slowly... genius? Guess we'll find out. Yes, the poems actually have sex.

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  1. Having actulay played with it by Nf1nk · · Score: 3, Insightful

    I say interesting and the more I played the more I realized that this is in many ways better than the stuff that I had to read in english class.
    Another advantage is that no teacher could ever ask;
    What was the authors motivation in writing this particular poem?
    I hate that Question

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  2. Call me a cynic, but... by Magic+Thread · · Score: 3, Insightful

    I rather doubt any good poetry will actually come out of this. It seems to me that two good poems with parts interchanged at random "snip points" will be statistically very likely to become bad poems. A more advanced system is probably necessary before anything worthwhile will be produced.

    The idea of having people vote on which poems are best is a good one, though. Maybe the same principle could be applied to other computer-generated word stuff.

  3. This is how we elect politicians... by subliminal_fugue · · Score: 2, Insightful

    ... and we all know how well that worked out. Yeah, I know the process is a little different, but the notion that art can come from voting is as silly as thinking democracy pushes the best leaders to the top.

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  4. Not much to do with Darwin... by WegianWarrior · · Score: 3, Insightful

    To qoute; The goal of this project is to see if non-negotiated collaboration can evolve interesting poetry using (un)natural selection.



    Darwinism is all to do with natural selection, while this is un-natural selection. It's about breeding poems, nothing more. That aside, I must say I find the idea interesting, and the end result can't be worse than what a lot of modern poets spew out (these days, it seems like "art" is defined as what the selfproclaimed artist manages to sell).



    For a true darwinistic approach thought, it ought to be possible do analyze a heapload of poems written by humans, derive a handfull of rules as to what defines a 'good' poem (lenght, avrage lenght of words etc etc etc) and write a program that 'culls the herd' strickly on basis of those rules, ie: the 50% of the population which come closest to fullfilling the rules (best adapted to their enviromant) are allowed to breed and give rise to the next geneartion, at which point the process repeats.

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  5. Wrong by boomgopher · · Score: 4, Insightful

    No, it's human interpretation the makes something poetry.

    Computers/processes are quite capable of producing works we percieve as art.

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    1. RE: Wrong by BelugaParty · · Score: 3, Insightful

      Right. My human interpretation does not recognize this to be poetry. (I'll adapt my response to the AC who responded to this too, because I think he made a good point. So I'll suppose there is no human input to select the phrases.) Quit co-opting human terms for computer processes! Just because a computer CAN string words together or CAN make something that might (however I doubt universally) make something resemble a work of art, this is irrelevant; these are not examples of poetry or art. Whatever a computer produces independent of humans is its own thing -- NOT poetry and NOT art (these terms are reserved for HUMAN expression). The fundamental difference here is WHAT creates the prose/poetry; art (poetry included) is created by humans; even if you fool an over-opinionated jerk into believing something is a work of art and created by a human, does not make it a work of art - it just makes for one more rediculous candid camera sketch. So yeah. I'm wrong. Get Turing out of your butt.

  6. No, no, no. by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 2, Insightful

    You seem to think that it isn't 'natural' selection if humans pick the poems. But there is nothing wrong with having humans do it. In fact, it's the most interesting thing they could do with this. The evolutionary environment, in this case, is determined by many human minds. This psychosphere or whatever you want to call it is unpredictable and dangerous, just like real jungles.

  7. Re:Putting down creation? Evolution is a religion. by Black+Parrot · · Score: 5, Insightful


    > Evolution is a religion. It is a set of beliefs.

    I believe the sun will rise tomorrow just about the same time it rose today; is that also a religion?

    > Most evolutionists say things like "we have reason to believe", or "we believe that foo is x years old". It is still called a "theory", not a proven fact or scientific Law. Actually it is mathematically improbable even.

    Actually, if you put imperfect replicators in a rich environment evolution is almost a certainty.

    > Just like the early church, the evolution religion changes its views on matters of "fact" and change the timeline and tree of life to fit in with their new findings.

    That's a Prime Directive for science: if your model doesn't fit the facts, you have to keep the facts and change the model. That's how science makes progress.

    > Those who don't adhere to the beliefs are excommunications and sometimes attacked and discredited. Just ask any creationist with a Ph.D.

    That's not excommunication, that's "bullshit walks". Creationists are welcome to submit their articles to the same peer review process that real scientists are. How many do you know of that do so, and what were the reviewers' comments on the rejection notices?

    Conspiracy theories are the last refuge of kooks.

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  8. Re:In anticipation of /. effect by ameoba · · Score: 1, Insightful
    Q: In the example you used, both new poems still suck. Doesn't seem like evolution to me.

    A: That's not technically a question, but it's true: breeding two poems won't necessarily produce a better poem. In fact, if either poem is any good to start with, it will probably produce a worse poem. But sometimes something better will be produced, and such offspring will tend to survive a long time, producing many more offspring. Evolution is all about preserving those rare beneficial developments amidst a sea of failed genetic experiments.


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  9. Re:Putting down creation? Evolution is a religion. by chthonicdaemon · · Score: 2, Insightful

    I suppose if you think that science is a religion, you could argue your points. However, the definition of religion I get in Meriam-Webster implies faith, which my Sunday school teacher always defined as belief without proof.

    Now the idea of science as religion is not new. In fact, there is a nice bit about it in Contact by Carl Sagan, in which the religious guy tells the atheist that she believes in science and does a cool experiment with a Foucault pendulum.

    The difference between science and religion is then not that they believe but what they believe. Everyone believes in something. That's what humans do. Science just attempts to get proof, while most religions (I would say all, but I don't know all religions) are characterised by the lack of proof.

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  10. Re:Putting down creation? Evolution is a religion. by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 3, Insightful

    By referring to people who believe one thing as "real scientists" you have just excomunicated them, yourself. This is precisely what he means. Papers referring to intelligent design are mocked in peer review because they do not think of such as "real science." You have just given an excellent case in point.

    I'm a scientist. The reason I have a problem with the idea of "Intelligent Design" is that it doesn't have predictive power. Science is all about explaining what's going on in the universe - and the main way we test whether we understand something or not is to use a theory we've developed based one one set of evidence to make predictions about experiments we haven't tried yet.

    Evolution has passed the test of time because it explains the existing data and one can make predictions based on it that tend to be surprisingly true.

    Intelligent Design is one equally valid way to explain the existing data. But by definition it doesn't give us any idea about what to predict regarding new data. It in effect tells us "stop trying to understand it, it's like this because somebody made it this way".

    I'm open-minded enough to entertain the possibility that there might be a Creator who designed all of the creatures on the Earth. But there sure is a lot of evidence that says that the creatures evolved, and are continuing to evolve, and in quite dramatic ways over enormous timescales.

  11. Re:poetry generated by... by mestar · · Score: 3, Insightful

    If one could evolve poems, one could do the same with all other forms of written human language, since poetry seems to be the hardest of them all. And you would have AI.

    It is obvious that even the code for this evolution would have to be evolved, and program that would do this evolution could be breed too, etc, etc, up to some pretty simple program that will start it all.

    This is the missing key: When you evolve programs, they must include both the code that produces results, and code that evaluates those results. This way your results have no ceiling and can surpass humans.

    If human intelligence is used to judge the results, then how can we get anything beyond human intelligence (apart from a faster human intelligence)?

  12. Re:poetry generated by... by Uart · · Score: 2, Insightful

    Its hard to have sex while you are posting comments about Beowulf Clusters and Natalie Portman's boobs to Slashdot all day...

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  13. Re:Putting down creation? Evolution is a religion. by jorleif · · Score: 2, Insightful

    As you say, science is all about explaining what we see in the universe

    Well then what is the difference between science, religion and philosophy?

    The difference, in my opinion, is that in science you can measure what we can see in the universe and prove theories wrong. The only explaining power of science is in the theories which may be created by any means from intuition to coin tossing. The scientific part is predicting data from the theory and then measure some real data and see if the theory stands the test. Even if the theory explains some data-set it is in no way a guarantee that the theory is true, because the underlying real reason might just give similar output for the measured data-set.

    Therefore science does not explain anything, it works through disproving, not proving. So whatever the motivation is, there is certainly nothing wrong with "poking holes" into theories from a scientific point of view. If there is, then the theory has become religion.

  14. Well, of course this will work. by b-baggins · · Score: 3, Insightful

    Of course this will work, but all it will prove is something we've known for a couple of thousand years: Selective breeding will bring out desired characteristics.

    What this study does NOT address:

    Irreducible complexity. We already have the groups of words. Well, where did they come from? How do we get the group of words in the first place? We can't do selection on the words until we have the words, so, how do we get the words?

    Intelligent design. Intelligence (namely the humans running the model) is determining what we start with and is determining what the desired results (what constitutes acceptable survival),

    Cost of mutation. There is no attempt to factor in mutational "drag" if you will. All mutations are either considered neutral, or beneficial. The reality is, most mutations are HARMFUL. Any mutation which does not directly improve the organism, will almost certainly harm the organism, greatly increasing its chance of death. If the mutation rate is too high, the species will die out (known as Haldane's dilemna).

    Informational Loss. Nearly all mutations result in a LOSS of information, in this case, the elimination of a word. Once the word is gone, how will it ever come back?

    So, this little exercise is nothing more than a cute gimmick that blind adherents to evolution as the source of all life will point to, smile, and say: See you idiot creationists, one more thing to prove your stupid, unthinking mindset wrong.

    But the reality is, it won't prove or demonstrate anything other than the time-tested truism that trial and error will eventually get you what you want.

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  15. Re:Putting down creation? Evolution is a religion. by chthonicdaemon · · Score: 2, Insightful

    Sorry, I guess I didn't express myself very well in my post. Science also uses indirect proof. I have seen pictures of New York. I have actually been to New York and am now telling you I saw it.

    If you want to get all philosophical about it, we can argue about the existance of existance all we want and still just be convinced that we can think but not much else. That's all semantics. Science seeks proof of all theories, and if new facts come to light that contradict the theory it is refined or discarded.

    So, inasmuch nothing in this world is provable beyond doubt (are you dreaming right now/are you in the Matrix/have you been hypnotised or conditioned to see things that do not exist?) everything is about faith. Some proof is just a tad more believable to most people than others. And religious faith is about belief without any proof.

    Think about it this way: God asks us to believe. It should be simple for him to prove his existance, but he chooses not to, because belief in New York just does not require as much faith as belief in a Being we cannot see.

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