Linspire Five-0 First Look
Eugenia writes "OSNews posted an exclusive first look for the upcoming Linspire 5.0: 'Linspire Five-0 is definitely a good base from which to build. The lack of well rounded applications when compared to other OSes in its class leave me wanting more, however, a slick look, some powerful Linspire specific apps, and a non-crippled undercarriage remain appealing' says the author." The bigger question will be how it stacks up against other commericial offerings in the long run. (ITMJ is also owned by OSTG).
Fairly funny, but you might want to try spelling "Mandela" right from here on out. :)
Am I the only one who had to read the excerpt from the review a few times to understand it? The use of commas and "however" is confusing, to say the least.
I went to the original article and searched on the word "However." On the second page, it's used three times inside of one paragraph.
When I found the original quoted sentence, I didn't understand it any better. There's a different between writing and speaking. With the proper voice inflection, that sentence is perfectly understandable. In cold writing, though, it's confusing.
Quick fix: Remove the "however" from the sentence, and replace it with a period. Make it two sentences and the whole thing makes perfect sense again.