Mandriva Joins Ubuntu With a Linux For Netbooks
Slatterz writes "Linux publisher Mandriva has unveiled a version of its platform designed specifically for the new breed of mini laptops. Mandriva Mini features a fast boot-up, comprehensive connectivity support and multimedia codecs, and is adapted to work on key netbook platforms such as Intel's Atom. Mandriva previously offered a customised version of its 2008 Spring release for the Asus Eee PC, and was a distributor of Linux for Intel's Classmate PC initiative."
I usually don't try to be a spelling/grammar nazi, and if you're not a native english speaker I'm sorry but:
I was exited when I saw the Eee-PC first.
You were not the first person to see it => I was exited when I first saw the Eee-PC.
install base of the same hardware base
Second "base" is redundant => install base of the same hardware
built a new iPod revolution
Revolutions are made, not built => made a new iPod revolution
could have built a new iPod revolution and break with
Could have applies to both => could have (...) broken with
At the CeBit
Remove the "the" as it's already specific => At CeBit
an unusable Windows XP configurations
"An" and plural don't mix => an unusable configuration OR unusable configurations
lot of extenions
extensions
hald a dozen
half a dozen
a hundret other netbooks
hundred
with different screen sizes, hard drives, chipsets.
Either continue or finish with and: with different screen sizes, hard drives and chipsets.
The content is good which is the most important but I've rarely had to read a comment that many times to get it right...
Live today, because you never know what tomorrow brings
You are full of s***.
Mandriva was the best distribution ever until 10 fucked it up. I was a long time user and their newest version was so buggy it was like going back five years...
...to pay your $699 licesing fee you cock smoking teabaggers!