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Book Review: 15 Minutes Including Q&A

brothke writes "When I initially read 15 Minutes Including Q&A: A Plan to Save the World From Lousy Presentations, I enjoyed it and thought it was a good book. It was only a few days later, sitting through yet another tedious vendor briefing, when I reread it and truly appreciated how awesome a book it really is." Read on to see what Ben has to say about this book. 15 Minutes Including Q and A: A Plan to Save the World From Lousy Presentation author Joey Asher pages 112 publisher Persuasive Speaker Press rating 10/10 reviewer Ben Rothke ISBN 0978577620 summary Great book on how to make your presentation heard Author Joey Asher's premise is quite simple and intuitive: if you as a salesperson (or anyone trying to get a message across) can't state your case simply and succinctly, no one is going to get it or care. He notes that a major problem is that far too many salespeople and speakers waste their time on areas they think is important; but not on what the attendee wants to hear.

Asher notes that every day, businesspeople bore listeners with presentations that ramble on, make no clear points and fail to address the attendee 's key concerns. His book lays out a plan for eliminating lousy presentations.

The introduction asks the basic question, why do most presentations stink? The answer Asher gives is that they ramble on, fail to make any points, try to say so many things that they become unwieldy PowerPoint death stars with no impact and ignore key audience concerns.

Asher's answer to the problem is this: keep the presentation short; leave ample time for Q&A and work to get a compelling dialogue and interaction with the attendees. That is the premise of the first two chapters.

The book is divided into 3 sections. Part 1 is about preparing a seven-minute rifle shot presentation. In essence, tell your entire story in about seven minutes. While counter-intuitive at first; the book shows how this can be achieved.

The focus of chapter 3 is to start by focusing on key business challenge. Asher warns against starting a presentation by giving a bunch of background information about the approach. In addition, don't tell the history of the project or do anything other than shine a light on the attendee 's key problems. He suggests using short stories to succinctly illustrate the issue. Just think of how many presentations you have been in where the speaker did not get to the point until 25 minutes and 20 slides into the presentation.

Chapter 11 is titled creating slides to support your message. The book astutely notes that preparing presentations has to a large part become an exercise in preparing PowerPoint slides. The reality is that it should be an exercise in figuring out how to tell your story. Asher notes that if you want to use slides well, you should only prepare your slides after you have figured out the story that you plan to tell your audience. The failure of many presentations is that the PowerPoint drives the story and not the other way around.

Part 2 is about allowing listeners to fill in the blanks and raise questions with Q&A.Asher suggests in chapter 12 to make Q&A a major part of your presentation strategy. He notes that Q&A allows the audience to guide the message and fill in missing information. It also gives the speaker the chance to persuade by responding to objections. And finally, it improves the speaker's communications style.

While he may not realize it, Asher has uncovered what is the Achilles heel of many project problems and failures. It is that the salesperson sells an obtuse problem to a clueless customer who is oblivious to what they want or how they are going to deploy the solution.

The beauty of Q&A is twofold: first, it requires the salesperson to clearly articulate what they are selling, and the customer to articulate what their specific problems are. The answer should be a clear understanding of the issue and how the product can solve it. But the reality is that many companies will deploy expensive hardware or software solutions (often costing millions of dollars) without really understanding why they are embarking on such a venture.

The book concludes with part 3, on delivering the presentation with intensity. Part 3 moves away from the PowerPoint and into areas such as eye contact, voice energy, rehearsal and other important points. These are critical areas as even the best presentation delivered without intensity can turn into a fruitless endeavor.

While the title 15 Minutes Including Q&A: A Plan to Save the World From Lousy Presentations may border on hyperbole, the reality is that the term death by PowerPoint is a real problem. The book shows a clear path in which to stop that. At 104 pages, Asher writes like he talks, clearly, succinctly and to the point. For many people, it is only after reading this important book when they will truly understand how much of their lives are wasted in by viewing pathetic PowerPoint's and listening to rambling sales monologues.

The truth is that Asher's points don't have to be limited to PowerPoint presentations exclusively. Be it e-mail messages, memos, status reports, proposals and more; if you can get to the point, and get your point across, you are often more likely to succeed.

At $7.95, the book is about as inexpensive as they get, which means you can also give ample copies to numerous people in your organization. In fact, it should be required reading to anyone who will be using PowerPoint and giving presentations.

Ultimately, the value of 15 Minutes Including Q&A: A Plan to Save the World From Lousy Presentations is best summed up by Scott Leslie who suggests that one keep extra copies of this book in their briefcase at all times. Next time you re forced to listen to someone laboriously narrate bullet points, quietly slip a copy in the presenters briefcase without them noticing and sign it: "Thought you might enjoy reading this. That way, maybe your audience will enjoy your next presentation. "

Ben Rothke is the author of Computer Security: 20 Things Every Employee Should Know

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153 comments

  1. Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by elrous0 · · Score: 4, Informative

    If it's one thing that almost every presenter needs to learn, it's the power of brevity.

    If you're putting more than 50 words on a slide, you've fucked up.

    If you're putting more than 30 slides in a presentation, you've fucked up.

    Unless you audience is highly technical and specifically looking for a highly in-depth presentation, you should never be violating those two rules.

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    1. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by dkleinsc · · Score: 2

      That was way too long! Your entire post can be summed up in 4 words:

      "Nice guys finish fast"

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    2. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      Your title could be improved by just saying "brevity" once.

    3. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by elrous0 · · Score: 0

      True

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    4. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by elrous0 · · Score: 1

      And I think even the 50 words rule is too generous myself. I would keep it to half that.

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    5. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by hawkeyeMI · · Score: 2

      Usually if you're putting more than *5* words on a slide, you really better be able to justify it.

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    6. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by stillnotelf · · Score: 1

      If you're putting more than 50 words on a slide, you've fucked up.

      You know, most people say "pictures, pictures, pictures" instead of words on Powerpoint slides. At an exchange rate of 1000 words/picture, you shatter this rule pretty fast...

    7. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by moonbender · · Score: 4, Funny

      I presentations shorter by all the verbs.

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    8. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by dgatwood · · Score: 2

      If it's one thing that almost every presenter needs to learn, it's the power of brevity.

      Seriously. I mean, I bought the book-on-tape version of this, and it was way more than 15 minutes. And no Q&A. I mean, seriously, WTF?

      :-D

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    9. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by or-switch · · Score: 1

      At my company, unfortunately, powerpoint presentations at team meetings are pretty much the only way key data get presented and recorded. Some of it's in the database, but because these slides will often be referred to in perpetuity, without consulting the author, there need to be lots of words to make sure the message is clear. While that may be fine internally, too many people have gotten in the habit and their external presentations are way to heavy and wordy. Gotta be flexible depending on your aims.

    10. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by tophermeyer · · Score: 1

      Life is short. Use Abbrevs.

    11. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by utoddl · · Score: 3, Funny

      Yeah, but fewer than 5 should be left-aligned.

    12. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by tomhudson · · Score: 1

      If you're using slides, you better be able to justify it.

      FTFY

      If you really know your topic, you don't need slides, just a whiteboard, marker, and an audience who wants to ask questions.

    13. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by $RANDOMLUSER · · Score: 1

      As my high-school English teacher used to say: "Be brief, be concise, and be seated".

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    14. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by Mongoose+Disciple · · Score: 1

      That assumes you have the skill/talent of being able to write and/or draw legibly on a whiteboard. I certainly do not have that talent.

      I can't read my handwriting -- I certainly don't expect other people to be able to read it.

    15. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by Hultis · · Score: 0

      you accidentally words there.

    16. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by hedwards · · Score: 1

      I used to think that way, but these days I like slides as a way of keeping myself accountable and making it easier for my audience to follow. Some people have a really hard time following long blocks of speech. Plus, previously I was making short lists of points to hit anyways, so putting them down on slides isn't really that much trouble.

    17. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by hawkeyeMI · · Score: 0

      Mod parent funny.

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    18. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by digitig · · Score: 1

      TL;DR

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    19. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by Happler · · Score: 1

      At the same time, in-depth info should be made available on request. Too many times have people built slide decks as the whole of their presentation and totally forgot that there are some people who either by want or need, will request much more info then can be presented in a deck or during the Q&A.

    20. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by maxwell+demon · · Score: 1

      Well, that assumes a whiteboard and marker are available.
      Also, the nice thing with slides is that you can make nice pictures which would be quite time-consuming to draw by hand (and unless you are very good in drawing, might end up quite messed up).

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    21. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by Synn · · Score: 1

      Woah, woah, woah. Way too many words. I was like "What?" and then I was like "Huh?" and then, uh, I got a little bored. Something about slides?

    22. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      +1

    23. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by Phreakiture · · Score: 1

      I disagree on 30 slides. I use an approach that I call "Turbo power point" in which I will rip through that many slides in under two minutes. It does get, and hold, the attention of the audience, but it violates the arbitrary limits you have set.

      I agree with the 50-word limit, though. In fact, I would recommend that the slide should contain either (and only) a picture, by itself (perhaps with something to highlight a specific thing in the picture) or a heading and three bullet points.

      Animation is optional, and should be used with extreme discretion. To that end, I only ever use the "fade" effect, and always with the speed set to "very fast" so it isn't wasting a lot of the viewers' time.

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    24. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      There speaks someone who doesn't give presentations to non-native-speakers of his language.

      I've learned that slides should never omit the CONNECTIVES -- things like "and", "or", "but", "therefore". There's a strong temptation to omit them and make slides with only the key noun phrases, and led the audience pick up the connectives by listening to you. But foreign audiences don't pick up the connectives well enough just by listening.

    25. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      Life is too short already. Don't abbreviate it!

    26. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by DemingBuiltMyHotRod · · Score: 0

      +1

    27. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by Abstrackt · · Score: 1

      If you're using slides, you better be able to justify it.

      Okay, I'll bite. Presenting your information in multiple formats (i.e. verbal and visual) reinforces the material for different types of learners. Charts and graphs are also handy for people who can't visualize numbers. Good slides won't save a bad presentation but they can improve upon a good one.

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    28. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by element-o.p. · · Score: 1

      No, make it a catchy marketing buzzword, like "B3" or "b-cubed"!

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    29. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by cobrausn · · Score: 1

      I don't get it. How does shortening 'Life' to 'Lf' make it longer?

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    30. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by hawguy · · Score: 0

      True

      1

    31. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by kasper37 · · Score: 1

      "Nice guys finish fast"

      I guess that's why nice guys never get the girl.

    32. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by Microsift · · Score: 2

      That's not what she said

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    33. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      Except that, when you want someone to follow your presentation, you tell 'em what you're gonna tell 'em, tell it to 'em, then tell it to 'em again (==overview, content, summary).
      Not that this would be a reason to say "brevity, brevity, brevity"---that would just be to accentuate a point ("developers, developers, chairtossers")

    34. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by Americano · · Score: 1

      I guess my math teacher learned the blue collar version of that: "stand up, speak up, and shut up."

    35. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 1

      Maybe I am strange, but it made me wonder why the reviewer did not put the review in presentation style according to the book's guidelines. From there, I began to wonder why the author wrote a book and not a presentation. Then I remembered this:
      http://norvig.com/Gettysburg/

    36. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by eepok · · Score: 1

      Unless those 50 words are not actually spoken and those 30 slides aren't packed with words.

      In the world of PowerPoint presentations, you have to remember that those presentations are almost always requested by those in the audience as *notes*. If there's not enough information on those slides, then those will be bad notes. If there's not enough slides to fully describe your topic, then, again, they're bad notes.

    37. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by pclminion · · Score: 1

      But when I left-align my presentations, the Republicans all get up and walk out of the room. Any advice?

    38. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by mdmkolbe · · Score: 1

      Four words?! Strunk did it in three: "Omit needless words".

    39. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by Mr.+Slippery · · Score: 1

      Some of it's in the database, but because these slides will often be referred to in perpetuity, without consulting the author, there need to be lots of words to make sure the message is clear.

      Anyone who attempts to substitute a set of slides for documentation needs to be taken out and horsewhipped. Any project manager or team leader who asks for a set of slides instead of real documentation needs to be horsewhipped and then put in the stocks for a week for public shaming.

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    40. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by pjt33 · · Score: 1

      Eschew verbosity.

    41. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by pjt33 · · Score: 1

      Get them to watch the presentation standing on their heads.

    42. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by Cederic · · Score: 1

      The most powerful documents are the ones which fit onto a single page.

      People carry a good picture around for months. They pull it out in multiple meanings, share it with others, use it to discuss issues and set direction.

      If you need notes, sure, powerpoint can provide notes that aren't even on the slides but still print out alongside them. But cut out the crap, reduce things to the simple basics and give people strong concepts they'll remember and work to.

      If you need lots of slides to describe your topic then you haven't simplified enough. Write a document, a paper, a book, a website, anything that could be used as a reference. But present the basic summary, and give people something more basic than that to take away and remind them of the key things that actually matter.

    43. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      "Tell your audience what you're going to tell them.
      Tell them.
      Then tell them what you told them. "

    44. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      Worked for a design company working for DEC, not long before they were eaten by Compaq/HP/etc.

      Bureaucracy was clearly cancerous there; our company would produce the artwork and layout for 100+ slide (at minimum) presentations by management/sales/engineering executives. Each slide often displayed a very detailed multi-step organizational diagram (we had no input on the content, just making it look nice - design purgatory). These slides would be shotgunned into a 5-minute presentation, with an executive prattling on while slides flashed behind them for their allotted time. An afternoon could be filled with these presentations.

      I got the hell out of there.

    45. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by Tacvek · · Score: 1

      For some examples of excellent slides, watch this presentation by Lawrence Lessig: http://randomfoo.net/oscon/2002/lessig/free.html
      He uses many, many slides, but they are often very short, a single sentence, frequently less. His slides punctuate his speech and help keep you from getting bored. They would not really be meaningful in printed form, but that is fine. He has many

      For another good style:
      any one of Steve Job's keynotes. Again though, the slides are not really worth much without the speech, but in this case it is fine,because several dozen blogs will have their own summaries of the presentation available within only a few hours after it ends.

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    46. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by TurtleBay · · Score: 1

      PowerPoint is great for presenting data in ways that aren't possible with white board and marker: - Excel and PowerPoint can make better charts and tables than freehand * Histograms, org charts and pie charts are more understandable than handwritten or oral raw data * Charts can contain more (accurate) data than can be memorized in a practical timescale - Some data in a presentation may be needed "for the record" * Hard copies allow clients/prospects/listeners to not focus on taking notes * For proposals, terms and conditions must be offered in writing * Some presentations satisfy legal requirements (e.g. due diligence) * Written (legal & compliance) disclaimers may need to accompany discussions

    47. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by TurtleBay · · Score: 1

      That is fine if you are working in project management, but what about sales or reporting? Fully fleshed out reports often aren't fit for external consumption. If a sales guy puts a 20 page detailed report on a prospects desk, that is going straight into the waste bin when he leaves and the sale is lost. A great example of reports for perpetuity are quarterly earnings presentations by publicly traded companies. They are both presentable and very much crafted to be part of the permanent public record.

    48. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by Opportunist · · Score: 1

      Hand them a mirror.

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    49. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by KritonK · · Score: 1

      nd mk prsnttns shrtr b mttng ll th vwls.

    50. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      rock on!

    51. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      ok :)

    52. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by (Score.5,+Interestin · · Score: 1

      "Nice guys finish fast"

      That's not what your ex-GF told me.

    53. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by SomeoneGotMyNick · · Score: 1

      Abridge

    54. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by Ol+Olsoc · · Score: 1

      That is NOT what she said.

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    55. Re:Brevity, Brevity, Brevity!! by coolmadsi · · Score: 1

      That was way too long! Your entire post can be summed up in 4 words:

      "Nice guys finish fast"

      TL;DR

  2. amp amp amp by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 1

    15 Minutes Including Q&A: A Plan to Save the World From Lousy Presentation

    Your comment violated the "postersubj" compression filter. Try less whitespace and/or less repetition in the subject line.

  3. 15 Minutes Including Q&amp by bieber · · Score: 1

    I think you might have a little bit of an output escaping bug there, /.

  4. I also recommend Brian Tracy by Okian+Warrior · · Score: 1

    Brian Tracy has a series of lectures about exactly that point (selling).

    If you list the good features of your product no one will care. Worse, no one will give you the 10 minutes you need to describe the product.

    Example1:

    a) Our copier can produce 40 pages per minute
    b) ...has a 500 GB disk
    c) ...has networking capabilities
    d) ...can sort, collate, and staple

    If you put the product in terms which are advantageous to the listener (usually money), then you spark their interest.

    Example2:

    Mr manager, if you purchase our copier you can reduce your costs by $2000 per month.
    Would you like me to explain how?

    It's obvious when you think about it.

    1. Re:I also recommend Brian Tracy by Obfuscant · · Score: 1

      If you put the product in terms which are advantageous to the listener (usually money), then you spark their interest.

      Mr. Manager, I can reduce your cost by $5000/month. My copier doesn't do 40 pages per minute, it has no disk, it has no networking capability, and it cannot sort, collate, or staple.

      It is a cardboard box. Your users lay their originals on top, wait ten seconds, and then walk away with the originals.

      This saves you money on paper needlessly used. It shuts down one major method of employee theft of intellectual property. It doesn't waste people's time waiting for the copier to warm up before it can copy. It saves you in both clerical (filing) time and waste management.

      I'll make a fortune. And I have the patent already. Does anyone want to subscribe to my newsletter?

    2. Re:I also recommend Brian Tracy by tophermeyer · · Score: 1

      Mr manager, if you purchase our copier you can reduce your costs by $2000 per month. Would you like me to explain how?

      You have to be careful not to boil it down too far though. I know you were just making a point, but if you open a sales presentation like that you are likely to sound like an "as seen on TV" direct seller.

      Some buyers like to feel smart, and in those cases it can help to simply demonstrate what it is about your product that makes it special and let them make the link to how it will save money/time/trees/headlight fluid. You're guiding them there of course, but it can help to let them think they made the link.

    3. Re:I also recommend Brian Tracy by Alex+Belits · · Score: 1

      Mr manager, if you purchase our copier you can reduce your costs by $2000 per month.
      Would you like me to explain how?

      Why would anyone want to do that?

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    4. Re:I also recommend Brian Tracy by AchilleTalon · · Score: 1

      Mine is twice as fast as yours, you just wait 5 seconds and go away with the originals.

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    5. Re:I also recommend Brian Tracy by Obfuscant · · Score: 1
      I'm suing you for patent violation, and I just patented an improvement where you don't even have to have an original. I'm calling it the "Psychic Copier".

      It does require your employees to remove their tinfoil hats, however. My research department is working on a solution...

    6. Re:I also recommend Brian Tracy by hubie · · Score: 1

      For your example 2, it depends. I see many clicks that tell me how I can save 15% on my car insurance, but I ignore them.

    7. Re:I also recommend Brian Tracy by Kittenman · · Score: 1

      Mr manager, if you purchase our copier you can reduce your costs by $2000 per month. Would you like me to explain how?

      You have to be careful not to boil it down too far though. I know you were just making a point, but if you open a sales presentation like that you are likely to sound like an "as seen on TV" direct seller.

      You can avoid that by saying "but wait - there's more".

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    8. Re:I also recommend Brian Tracy by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      u have a link to brian tracy?

      who be he?

    9. Re:I also recommend Brian Tracy by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      Mine is twice as fast as yours, you just wait 5 seconds and go away with the originals.

      And mine is the best. It looks just like yours, except is blue. Not only does it save the way yours does, it automatically recycles the originals - and you don't have to wait around for even 5 seconds.

  5. Unless you are in a working session by captaindomon · · Score: 1

    Brevity is important if you are trying to communicate decisions that have already been made and cannot be questioned, or if you are doing a sales presentation for a product that cannot be altered as part of the contract. If you're trying to work with a group (for example, Test, Development, and Build/Release) to make a decision that everyone can support, trying to be too quick about it will destroy any progress possible. Same if you have a highly customizable product you are trying to sell while gaining information from your customer.

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    1. Re:Unless you are in a working session by hedwards · · Score: 1

      As a part of my current coursework I've been doing a fair number of presentations. And brevity isn't really the goal. A better focus is making sure every slide gets you closer to the goal of communicating the whole topic you're covering. Limiting yourself really to no more than about 3 slides or so without involving the audience and cutting down on extraneous information that interferes with the flow of information. And really every slide should have a reasonable and identifiable connection to the talk.

      Powerpoint can be quite useful, but most of the problems are with it being used for things other than illustration and keeping on point. I'm sure there's other uses, but use it for other things at your own peril.

    2. Re:Unless you are in a working session by tophermeyer · · Score: 1

      As a part of my current coursework I've been doing a fair number of presentations. And brevity isn't really the goal.

      You're absolutely right. Clear communication is the goal. Brevity can help that, but is not the goal itself.

      Shooting for brevity risks leaving out or glossing over key information. Perhaps a better way way to think if it would be shooting for conciseness (that word should be concisity, it sounds truthier).

    3. Re:Unless you are in a working session by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      I think the word you are looking for is "concision".

    4. Re:Unless you are in a working session by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      isn't this book made for sales and not major tech presos?

      of course, if you are giving a major research report, sales, etc. and it is an all day meeting, no way to expect to do it in 15 minutes.

      what do ya do w/ the other 7 hours 45 mins in the day ?

  6. Brief by khr · · Score: 1

    suggests that one keep extra copies of this book in their briefcase at all times

    I've never owned a briefcase, you insensitive clod!

    1. Re:Brief by multipartmixed · · Score: 1

      ...then where do you keep your underwear?

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    2. Re:Brief by VirginMary · · Score: 1

      ...then where do you keep your underwear?

      How do you know that he even owns underwear, you insensitive clod?

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    3. Re:Brief by White+Flame · · Score: 1

      In my boxercase.

  7. Treadmill To Oblivion - Fred Allen by ackthpt · · Score: 2

    Hard to come by, but not impossible or expensive - radio comedian Fred Allen's Treadmill To Oblivion covers the workings behind a radio show in the 1950's. Plan to do a show in 30 minutes, have some ideas, write them down, rehearse, remove what doesn't work, add in what would work better. Comedy or business, it's about getting the attention and holding it, you've got about 20 minutes before people start to fidget and look for a clock. It's better to test on an audience before going live, particularly an honest one who will tell you what your are missing - never overlook the obvious, what IS your point here?

    I'm sure the book is great, but tightening up a show for a fixed amount of time is a pretty old science by now.

    --

    A feeling of having made the same mistake before: Deja Foobar
  8. Re:Nothing of a value in this book by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    Goatse man is not amused.

  9. tl;dr by scrib · · Score: 1

    Isn't the book's title a pretty good "executive summary" of the book itself? How do you fluff that out to 104 pages?

    --
    Help! Help! I'm being repressed!
    1. Re:tl;dr by bluefoxlucid · · Score: 2

      Some people need to be told to shut the fuck up about a hundred times before they get it. Motivational and style-type books are an exercise in repeatedly showing you why you're an ass. Sure everyone says "be brief," but I have so much shit to cover, and what do you mean no one cares? After a dozen examples, explanations, and breakdowns, you start to see a pattern of "that's a great pitch!" "Oh... that's really annoying, and nobody gives a shit about anything except the last 2 paragraphs here..."

  10. Presentation Zen by snowbart · · Score: 2

    Also: Presentation Zen by Garr Reynolds. Including pretty pictures!

    1. Re:Presentation Zen by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      i could neva eva read a book by someone named garr

  11. tl;dr by srussia · · Score: 0

    n/t

    --
    Set your phasers on "funky"!
  12. succint by SoupGuru · · Score: 2

    It's harder to write short, succint points. It's much easier to ramble, especially because a lot of people equate long and wordy points with being smart. Orwell ranted about the problem.

    --
    What doesn't kill you only delays the inevitable
    1. Re:succint by SoupGuru · · Score: 1

      As succinctly as possible: fuck this, more coffee.

      --
      What doesn't kill you only delays the inevitable
    2. Re:succint by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      The site you've linked has some important things to say -- but that fucking pop-up which obscures it is just totally unacceptable.

    3. Re:succint by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      why must u be so crude?

  13. 50 Words? by lax-goalie · · Score: 1

    "If you're putting more than 50 words on a slide, you've fucked up."

    50? Seriously? Unless you're showing a screenshot, listing some code, or pulling a quote, the magic number is seven. In general, if you have more than seven words on a slide, you've fucked up.

    More than that, and the presenter is usually just reading the Powerpoint deck. And in that case, why are you wasting my time, when you could have just emailed it to me in the first place?

    1. Re:50 Words? by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      In general, if you have more than seven words on a slide, you've fucked up.

      So you're looking for something like:

      Fire bad!
      Money good!

    2. Re:50 Words? by Heshler · · Score: 1

      Seven words is for the verbose! More than two words and you've fucked up! I'm so hardcore!!!!!

    3. Re:50 Words? by vlm · · Score: 1

      And in that case, why are you wasting my time, when you could have just emailed it to me in the first place?

      An accurate summary of 99% of the time I've spent in meetings over the past decades.

      --
      "Science flies us to the moon. Religion flies us into buildings." - Victor Stenger
    4. Re:50 Words? by maxwell+demon · · Score: 1

      Unless you're showing a screenshot, listing some code, or pulling a quote, the magic number is seven.

      Seven words? Seriously? How many slides per minute are you doing?

      Or maybe you don't have the relevant information on the slides. But then, why have slides at all? They are not helpful then.

      More than that, and the presenter is usually just reading the Powerpoint deck. And in that case, why are you wasting my time, when you could have just emailed it to me in the first place?

      Because I was asked to do a presentation :-)

      --
      The Tao of math: The numbers you can count are not the real numbers.
    5. Re:50 Words? by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      Three letters.

    6. Re:50 Words? by nitehawk214 · · Score: 1

      Seven words is for the verbose! More than two words and you've fucked up! I'm so hardcore!!!!!

      Both parent and GP had more than

      --
      I'm a good cook. I'm a fantastic eater. - Steven Brust
    7. Re:50 Words? by element-o.p. · · Score: 3, Insightful

      Word count matters not.
      Present yourself in haiku.
      Concepts are retained.

      --
      MCSE? No, sir...I don't do Windows. Yes, I am an idealist. What's your point?
    8. Re:50 Words? by lax-goalie · · Score: 1

      + 1.

      Well played, sir, well played.

    9. Re:50 Words? by maxwell+demon · · Score: 1

      Three letters.

      Ah, I see you're trying to avoid four-letter words.

      --
      The Tao of math: The numbers you can count are not the real numbers.
    10. Re:50 Words? by Mr.+Slippery · · Score: 2

      And in that case, why are you wasting my time, when you could have just emailed it to me in the first place?

      You've hit it on the head: 99% of presentations are a waste of time, and could be avoided if people were willing to read.

      --
      Tom Swiss | the infamous tms | my blog
      You cannot wash away blood with blood
    11. Re:50 Words? by donscarletti · · Score: 1

      The goose cries once more,

      Its sound falls with autumn leaves,

      Towards the bored earth.

      --
      When Argumentum ad Hominem falls short, try Argumentum ad Matrem
    12. Re:50 Words? by Opportunist · · Score: 1

      Why, oh why, did I post in here already?

      Finally I'd have someone to mod insightful.

      --
      We used to have a Bill of Rights. Now, with the rights gone, all we have left is the bill.
    13. Re:50 Words? by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      i like it!

      short, to the point..and people will remember it...awresome!

  14. review too long by beernutmark · · Score: 0

    can I get a summary of the review. Too long to read.

    1. Re:review too long by maxwell+demon · · Score: 2

      can I get a summary of the review. Too long to read.

      Let's try to condense:

      brothke immediately liked the book, but only later truly appreciated it.

      The main message of the book is to talk simply and succinctly, or no one cares. But business people usually fail to do so. The introduction asks why, and says it's because their talks are not to the point and too long, and they ignore the audience. Asher's answer is to make short talks and to interact with the audience.

      The book has 3 sections. Part 1 says to talk only seven minutes, to not give unnecessary information, and that your slides should follow your story, not the other way round.

      Part 2 tells you to plan for Q&A in order to fill in missing information and better communicate. Asher uncovers that the main problem often is sales persons selling obtuse solutions to clueless customers without caring for their needs. Q&A forces the salesperson to be clear about the product and the customer to be clear about his problems.

      Part 3 speaks about things like eye contact, voice energy and rehearsal, which are critical for a good presentation.

      The title may border on hyperbole, but the problem is real, and the book gives a solution on 104 pages. It is well written and gives the reader important insights.
      Asher's message isn't really limited to PowerPoint presentations, but can be applied universally.

      The book only costs $7.95 and is a must-read for everyone. Scott Leslie suggests to carry a copy with you and smuggle it into the briefcase of anyone giving a bad talk.

      --
      The Tao of math: The numbers you can count are not the real numbers.
  15. Re:Nothing of a value in this book by bcmm1 · · Score: 0

    Nether 236 (as of time of the writing) slashdotters that got goatse in their face are... Sure you all have seen it, but it is still annoying....

  16. A woman's skirt. by LoudMusic · · Score: 4, Insightful

    Anything presented to an audience should have the same characteristics as a woman's skirt.

    Long enough to cover all the important details.
    Short enough to keep our attention.

    I actually heard that the first time from my apparently gay college english teacher. *shrug*

    --
    No sig for you. YOU GET NO SIG!
    1. Re:A woman's skirt. by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 4, Funny

      ... and if you need to see more, it should be easy to look up?

  17. Don't forget Tufte.. by synthesizerpatel · · Score: 2

    The Cognative Style of Powerpoint Essay
    * http://www.edwardtufte.com/tufte/books_pp

    Also

    PowerPoint Does Rocket Science--and Better Techniques for Technical Reports
    * http://www.edwardtufte.com/bboard/q-and-a-fetch-msg?msg_id=0001yB&topic_id=1

    1. Re:Don't forget Tufte.. by synthesizerpatel · · Score: 1

      Had I really been on the ball I would have titled my post - "Because I'm Rough and Tufte with my Afro Pufftes"

  18. Missing the point by Chemisor · · Score: 1

    While these are all good points for a technical presentation, say, at a conference, they are not applicable to a sales presentation. Describing exactly what your product does is precisely what a good salesman wants to prevent. The reason for that, of course, is that if that were to happen, the customer would realize he does not need it, or that he can already get it cheaper elsewhere. "But my product is great!" I hear you saying; well, if it were, you wouldn't be giving a sales presenatation about it. You'd be too busy packing and shipping orders.

  19. Powerpoint by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    Makes us stupid

    ~Gen. James N. Mattis of the Marine Corps~

  20. Re:Nothing of a value in this book by bcmm1 · · Score: 0

    256 victims now - that's just perfect

  21. 6x6 Rule (briefly) by benjto · · Score: 1

    As a rule of thumb:

    • No more than six points per slide
    • No more than six words per point
  22. Stupid is when you start by Hognoxious · · Score: 3, Funny

    A sentence in the title and carry on in the body, but for some reason capitalize the first word in the latter so the body looks like a sentence but isn't.

    - Forrest Gump

    --
    Confucius say, "Find worm in apple - bad. Find half a worm - worse."
  23. review, too long by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    for a book that emphasizes brevity and clarity.

  24. Tedious Vendor Briefings, Continued by macraig · · Score: 1

    The can't be that awesome if he still has to endure tedious vendor meetings in spite of it. May I suggest a Gameboy and a pair of discrete earphones instead?

    1. Re:Tedious Vendor Briefings, Continued by macraig · · Score: 1

      The book can't be that awesome....

    2. Re:Tedious Vendor Briefings, Continued by SleazyRidr · · Score: 1

      If you read chapter 4, you'll find out that leaving out a few words here and there is a great way to make your presentation more concise. You were already advanced in this area, and didn't even realise it!

    3. Re:Tedious Vendor Briefings, Continued by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      so wats yer poiint?

  25. If PP has to shrink the font, you are too wordy by sirwired · · Score: 1

    For far too many PowerPoint presentations, the presenter has apologized with "sorry this is an eye chart." If you have to apologize for it being too small, you are doing something very wrong. If there is any supplemental detail you'd like to provide, stick it in either a report or slide notes. (I routinely deliver 15-slide presentations backed by a 40-60 page report stuffed with the relevant technical detail; it works WAY better than a 60-slide presentation with the details right there in the slides.)

    My general rule of thumb is to go to the next slide if PP has to shrink the font size.

    Also, don't use complete sentences; complete sentences means that either your audience will either be reading the slides and not listen to you, or if you are a really lousy speaker, you'll start reading the slides. Nothing makes me tune out a presenter faster than one who reads his/her slides. I can read WAY faster than you can talk, and it means that I'm simply going to read your slide, and then ignore the words rambling out of your mouth until the slide changes.

    And for goodness sake: Dump animations and slide transitions. They usually add nothing other than a lousy presenter waiting for them to finish before speaking again.

    Lastly, Death to Clip Art and Stock Photography! It's usually easy to spot a mile away, and again adds nothing to your presentation.

    1. Re:If PP has to shrink the font, you are too wordy by DamonJW · · Score: 1

      Also, don't use complete sentences; complete sentences means that either your audience will either be reading the slides and not listen to you, or if you are a really lousy speaker, you'll start reading the slides.

      I think you should use complete sentences in Powerpoint slides. Many presenters use sentence fragments, or even just lists of nouns -- but to get your story across, what really matters are the verbs, especially the "modal" verb phrases like "I claim that ..." or "everyone agrees that ..." or "in order to achieve X we must ...". Sentence fragments and noun-lists, on the other hand, are only useful as crutches to the speaker, to help him remember his talking points. Or, in Powerpointese,

      • Complete sentences
        • Sentence fragments bad
        • Noun-lists too
        • Verbs important
          • Modal verbs v. important
          • Story conveyance
      • Sentence fragments
        • Speaker's crutch
    2. Re:If PP has to shrink the font, you are too wordy by maxwell+demon · · Score: 1

      My general rule of thumb is to go to the next slide if PP has to shrink the font size.

      PP shrinks the font size by itself? Man, I'm glad that I'm using LaTeX with the beamer package for my talks ...

      --
      The Tao of math: The numbers you can count are not the real numbers.
    3. Re:If PP has to shrink the font, you are too wordy by maxwell+demon · · Score: 1

      Actually there's something between complete sentences and pure noun lists.

      For example:

      Full sentence:

      N is even, therefore N^2 is a multiple of 4.

      Noun list:

      N even
      N^2 multiple of 4

      What I'd put on the slide:

      N is even
      => N^2 is multiple of 4

      It's not the complete sentence (e.g. adjectives are removed, also "therefore" is replaced by "=>"), but it's also not just a noun list (the logical structure is still visible).

      --
      The Tao of math: The numbers you can count are not the real numbers.
    4. Re:If PP has to shrink the font, you are too wordy by maxwell+demon · · Score: 1

      err ...

      adjectives are removed

      should of course have been "articles are removed"

      --
      The Tao of math: The numbers you can count are not the real numbers.
    5. Re:If PP has to shrink the font, you are too wordy by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      excelent point!

  26. Amp by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    15 Minutes Including Q&A

  27. Knuth only got 9/10 by whyde · · Score: 1

    Knuth's Volume 4 only got 9/10 recently, obviously because it is soooooooo wordy.

  28. Out of stock by Gramie2 · · Score: 1

    And the book is out of stock at amazon.com, and doesn't exist at amazon.ca. How am I supposed to buy it again?

  29. ADverbs by Ungrounded+Lightning · · Score: 1

    Eliminating adverbs works better.

    --
    Bantam Dominique roosters crow a four-note song. Once you've heard it as "Happy BIRTHday" you can't NOT hear it that way
    1. Re:ADverbs by slew · · Score: 1

      Eliminating adverbs works.

    2. Re:ADverbs by Ungrounded+Lightning · · Score: 1

      Eliminating adverbs works better.

      Eliminating adverbs works.

      Unfortunately it doesn't ALWAYS work. USUALLY it turns rambling prose into something punchy, without distorting the meaning. But this is one example where it does not. Instead it changes the semantics, turning a true assertion into one both different and false.

      (I thought about mentioning it at the time, as an example of a recommendation that doesn't work on its own text. But I decided to let somebody else try for a "funny" mod.)

      --
      Bantam Dominique roosters crow a four-note song. Once you've heard it as "Happy BIRTHday" you can't NOT hear it that way
  30. Verify your saying you are a programmer TomHudson by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    You said you're a programmer here many times. So let us try your work and see it so we can verify it then. I saw a thread here recently where you bragged about a program you say you wrote that has 50,000 users (relatively small amount really). So prove it, show us and let us try it, since you said you need or, rather demand, verifications and proofs of others. If you don't then you're just doing your pot calling the kettle black crap you have already been seen doing.

  31. Stop using PowerPoint. by NetJunkie · · Score: 1

    If you can help it, stop using PowerPoint. I do a lot of user group and technology evangelization presentations and I'm doing my best to stop using PP. Sometimes I don't have a choice as I can't control the presentation system (large presentations like VMworld, for example). But when I can I'm using Prezi. It really breaks you out of that bullet point process. You throw your talking points and ideas out on a "canvas" and build your thoughts from there. After making the move I've gotten a LOT of positive feedback on it. Even if you can't use Prezi you can get out of bullet points. When having to use PP I stick to a "conversational" style presentation. Very few bullet points and statements, graphics, simple sentences, etc. The slide is about a thought, not a list of points.

    Thanks for the review. I'll grab a copy of this as well.

    1. Re:Stop using PowerPoint. by maxwell+demon · · Score: 1

      But what if the presentation has to run from another computer? Most likely it won't have Prezi installed.
      I prefer to use a format where I'm sure I can give the presentation at all. Which means PDF (yes, PDF, not PowerPoint; I've seen several cases where PowerPoint presentations on different computers had font problems; I never had that problem with PDF).

      --
      The Tao of math: The numbers you can count are not the real numbers.
    2. Re:Stop using PowerPoint. by NetJunkie · · Score: 1

      That's why I say sometimes I can't. But often I can install Prezi on it..just depends.

    3. Re:Stop using PowerPoint. by Missing.Matter · · Score: 1

      I'm sorry, but that is very disorientating. I understand how the zooming is supposed to provide some sort of spatial relationship between ideas, but the effect it had on me was to just make me dizzy.

    4. Re:Stop using PowerPoint. by hounddog32 · · Score: 1

      Won't have a browser installed? Try prezi, it's a flash based web-app. Oh, and they have an app for the bastions of anti-flash, iPad, too. You can export the prezi as a .exe file if you won't have a 'net connection. So you'll only be stuck on locked down computers that won't run executable files and also have no internet connection. In my world that's not many.

    5. Re:Stop using PowerPoint. by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      That's a design issue -- making people feel seasick is the Prezi equivalent of Death By Powerpoint -- do it right and it doesn't happen!

    6. Re:Stop using PowerPoint. by maxwell+demon · · Score: 1

      Won't have a browser installed?

      A browser doesn't help much without an internet connection. And I'd not expect that anyone with a fraction of a brain would allow a stranger to run an .exe on his computer.

      --
      The Tao of math: The numbers you can count are not the real numbers.
    7. Re:Stop using PowerPoint. by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      As with PowerPoint, if Prezi isnt used in the right way it can have a negative effect e.g. motion sickness.

      Check out my blog for some useful tips on using Prezi

      www.theprezenter.com

  32. 43 Folders has good stuff on presentations by cheros · · Score: 1

    I tend to prepare an elevator pitch of what I want to say, then decide how I bring it best in context with the audience, and after that I will create / find any images if I think they will help (if it's not technical you should think about images as setting the audience's mood).

    In my experience, people really pay attention if you mention you have set yourself the task of making your point in 15 minutes or less - it's fun to start a session with a self-imposed challenge, and it keeps questions at bay until you hit Q&A. What's more, 15 mins worth of material you can keep in your head, so you can focus on your audience instead of reading slides..

    BTW, nobody ever complained about a presentation being too short. Instead, they will actively seek you out afterwards to ask questions - you don't have to seek them out. Everyone wins..

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    Insert .sig here. Send no money now. Owner may sue, contents will settle. Batteries not included.
  33. Re: by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    +
    --
    Can't normally have a comment this short

  34. Even a Geek Can Speak by Anml4ixoye · · Score: 1

    Joey Asher also wrote "Even a Geek Can Speak" - a book I give to just about anyone starting out giving presentations. This book looks just as awesome - can't wait to pick it up!

  35. Giving audience hard-copies by skegg · · Score: 1

    What's the general consensus on supplying hard-copies at the start of the presentation?

    Do you find some audience members reading ahead and (seemingly) not paying attention to the verbal presentation?
    Or worse yet, asking questions about slides you haven't yet reached?

    On the upside: it's great for note-taking.

    1. Re:Giving audience hard-copies by donscarletti · · Score: 1

      I find it helps when you have an international team to have printed copies. My Chinese is not natively fluent, but I frequently attend meetings where that is the language spoken and to have an outline in front of me helps to catch up to where the discussion now is so I can resume participating in the conversation, also to look up words I don't know discreetly afterwards is very useful.

      --
      When Argumentum ad Hominem falls short, try Argumentum ad Matrem
  36. For example by presidenteloco · · Score: 1

    Einstein circa 1905 could simply have said:

    Special Theory of Relativity:

    e = m c ^ 2

    QED

    --

    Where are we going and why are we in a handbasket?
  37. I AM EXCITED ABOUT THIS TITLE by Legal.Troll · · Score: 0

    and would like to show you some powerpoint slides explaining why

    --
    "Outdated business models" is code for "I don't like paying for things, but want them anyway"
  38. Prezi can run from any computer by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    Prezi doesn't need to be installed on any computer. You can run it from a browser if there's wi-fi or play a downloaded version when there's no internet access.

  39. Haiku? Where? by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    Haiku? Where?

    Like 99% of foreigners what you screw up an essential part of haikus.

    A haiku must have an indicator of season / time in the first line for it to be a haiku which is called a "kigo", go and research.

    Otherwise you just look like a prat.

    The more you know

    1. Re:Haiku? Where? by element-o.p. · · Score: 1

      Thank you for the correction. Although I did spend some time in Japan (over seven years), I was very young at the time and consequently, there are some gaps in my education. You have helped to fill in one of those gaps.

      However, perhaps people might be more open to what you have to teach if you learn to be less abrasive in your approach. It was not really necessary to be quite so smug and condescending. Just a suggestion; take it for what you will.

      --
      MCSE? No, sir...I don't do Windows. Yes, I am an idealist. What's your point?