Proper commenting structure for claims that require sources:
Crime dropped X % after Y event occurred, on average Z % per month. Prior the event Y crime increased / decreased by X% in total with Z % per month.
Sources go here, more detail the the better, note variation in data is normal and expected, if the crime drops the same every month its should be regarded as suspicious.
Avoid:
Framing such statements as a question, and other rhetorical devices to make your statement seem self-evident and widely accepted.
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Proper commenting structure for claims that require sources: Crime dropped X % after Y event occurred, on average Z % per month. Prior the event Y crime increased / decreased by X% in total with Z % per month. Sources go here, more detail the the better, note variation in data is normal and expected, if the crime drops the same every month its should be regarded as suspicious. Avoid: Framing such statements as a question, and other rhetorical devices to make your statement seem self-evident and widely accepted.