1936 Perspective on Television
An Anonymous Coward writes "The New Yorker is running an article from their archives from 1936. In it, E.B.White (author of Charlotte's Web) discusses a demonstration he attended of the current state of television, which didn't impress him at all."
ouch... I mean "who say something stupid".
Your second sentence is a fragment; it should be joined to the first sentence by a comma.
It seems that you could benefit from reading the Strunk and White, too.
... when i have /.
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And a proposition to end a sentence with?