1936 Perspective on Television
An Anonymous Coward writes "The New Yorker is running an article from their archives from 1936. In it, E.B.White (author of Charlotte's Web) discusses a demonstration he attended of the current state of television, which didn't impress him at all."
First Post for my sister-in-law's graduation! Get it in ya!
...but here's a post for Heather Donahue
ouch... I mean "who say something stupid".
Your second sentence is a fragment; it should be joined to the first sentence by a comma.
It seems that you could benefit from reading the Strunk and White, too.
... when i have /.
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And a proposition to end a sentence with?
Remember to "omit needless words". Your second sentence is a bit flabby. We know from the context that it's a book -- there's no need to tell us again that it's "a book" -- use a pronoun instead.
"Many here would benefit from reading it", perhaps?
BTW, it's coauthor or co-author.