Female Gamer Talks Girl Gaming
Snowcone writes "As gaming becomes more mainstream, it's inevitable that many girls will join the ranks of the die-hard gamer. Gaming is typically reserved for those with that extra chromosome, which poses the question; in a world dominated by the male sex, why do women choose to put themselves in the position of the minority? As a female gamer, Dots @ Snackbar Games discusses reasons why it's ok for girls to enjoy gaming just as much as the guys do." This is another perspective on a much-discussed subject.
First Post! My girlfriend is a hardcore gamer already.
I mean, I might agree with the point she was making, but the author of the linked-to article comes off as a complete moron. In lieu of a detailed analysis, allow me to give several quotes, explaining what's wrong with them:
Although the first two sentences here are gramatically correct English sentences, the logic strongly suggests that they should have been one sentence. Why does the first sentence end with a "why"? Even if this could be correct, a good writer should see that this would be misread and choose a different phrasing. The use of the semicolon in the third sentence is not only superfluous but incorrect. "Which made me think" is not a clause.
That should be "decent".
If this is two questions, there should be a comma after "impressive". If it's a compound question, there should be another "why", as well as a bit of rephrasing.
This is another incorrect use of the semicolon.
Here's an example of what I really object to in this article. It isn't so much grammatical incorrectness (although I do find that annoying, and by the way it's irritating too, and it really bothers me a lot) as excessive wordiness. Why couldn't this sentence have been "I know that this is changing as gaming becomes recognized as a healthy activity, but here are five reasons why girls should continue to play video games as they grow up."? That would have been clearer and made the author look like less of an airhead.
So cognitive recognition and memory aren't part of being smarter? She's confusing me by making assumptions about the correct theory of intelligence. She doesn't even bother to state them explicitly.
I find this conversational style annoying even in email. People seem to be so afraid of long sentences that they take them and just break them up at points having little to do with grammar. If one really wants to avoid long sentences, there's almost always a way to reword things, but inserting periods instead of commas isn't it.
With all due respect, I think video games have rotted her brain a little. Why not "Working in an office may stil
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