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Kids Improve Writing Online
aelfric35 writes "Ben Franklin advised his son not to allow schooling to interfere with his education. Even though many have disparaged the effects of IM on schoolchildrens' prose, some kids are actually becoming better writers by participating in online communities. Henry Jenkins writes in MIT's Technology Review about how some kids are gaining writing and editorial experience far beyond what their schools can offer by participating in Harry Potter fan fiction forums (sorry about the alliteration)."
This is my first story. Please rate it. I wrote it from scratch, so it is a bit rough. It actually turned me on as I was writing it.
Rob Malda had, what some might call, a "gay experience" while in college. One night he and his roommates got very drunk, even moreso than usual. Everyone was having a good time, playing various games and talking about anything and everything. Two of his roommates decided to call it a night and get to bed; they both had to be to work the next day. Rob and his other roommate, who I'll just call "John", stayed up a while longer. They ate some pizza, drank some more beer, and talked for a long while about nothing in particular. They were dead tired by 2 AM and said their goodnights. But Rob was so drunk he could barely walk. John had to help him down the hall to his room and into bed.
As fate would have it, while John was pulling Rob up into his bed John's hand brushed over Rob's penis. Rob giggled a bit and told John to do it again. John put his hand over Rob's crotch and moved it back and forth simulating masturbation. Rob and John both laughed this time. After Rob told him to do it yet again, John knew what would come out of this night. John started caressing Rob's penis and balls through his pants. Rob had a big smile on his face and was starting to moan. John asked Rob if he was OK with this, and Rob simply said "Yes". John asked again, just to make sure, and Rob responed by grabbing John's arm and pulling it across his lap. Without uttering another word, John carefully began to unbuckle Rob's belt, unzip his pants, and slide them down to his ankles.
John could see Rob's erection through his underwear, which made John very horny. John then stripped down to his underwear, throwing his shirt and pants to the floor. They both carefully pulled each other's underwear down and began to caress the other's cock and balls. Rob was still sitting on his bed. He got up, took his clothes off from his ankles, and layed on his side on the bed. John moved onto the bed and took position behind Rob. Both of their hearts were beating quickly; their breath was slow and deep. John reached around with his right hand and grabbed Rob's cock. He began to stroke it, gently at first. John told Rob that he was going to go inside him now, and asked if it was alright. Rob gave his permission and John pushed his now fully erect penis in towards Rob's anus. Rob had never recieved cock before, so his anus was tight and not used to this kind of thing. It took a John a minute or two to coax his cock into Rob's ass. After getting Rob to loosen up with a massage, it almost slid right in.
John began pumping his cock in and out of Rob's asshole, going very slowly at first to make sure that Rob was not in any discomfort. After pushing in and pulling out a few times, John grabbed Rob's cock with his right hand and started pumping it again. John had the timing just right, pushing his cock in Rob's ass while pulling down Rob's cock, and then slowly pulling his cock out while pulling up on Rob's. After a few minutes the two were reaching a climax, and John started going faster. The faster John went the faster Rob wanted him to go. John just kept pumping, ever faster, until Rob started to moan. He was moaning much loader than before, and was begging John not to stop now, no please don't stop now i am about to cum oh my god it feels so good keep going faster.
When John came in Rob's ass, it startled him slightly. Rob could feel his friend's hot cock pumping hot cum deep into his asshole. It felt like warm butter, flowing in the crevices of his asshole. This added sensation made Rob's climax even more powerful. John kept pumping Rob's cock, even after he had cum in Rob's asshole. He wanted to make sure that Rob had a good time. Finally Rob reached his breaking point. In one fell swoop all the sexual tension is let go. His cock pumps cum out all over his bed sheets. John doesn't stop until Rob's cock is pumped dry. After cleaning up with a towel, the two lay down together. The next day Rob awakes to find John's arms wrapped him. Rob had finally become a man.
unless their original writing was worse than that to begin with...
and this daily phrophet thing is very scary, tax-exempt status for a website that caters to harry potter fans who wish they were in hogwarth?
THIS IS THE BEGINNING OF THE HARRY POTTER CULT! LOCK YOUR DOORS AND ARM YOUR CHILDREN!
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"Harry Potter fan fiction forums"
.. anything from "harry has affectionate thoughts for [random male cast member]" to "harry rapes/gets raped by [random male cast member] using a monkey, a tub of lard, a spare tire, and a crowbar". In between is a mix of bondage, teenage romance (with [random male cast member]), and some more bondage.
Yea, I know a lot of these Harry Potter writers. They have a pretty broad range of topics....
Something about the little dude seems to have drawn together every slash writer that can put together a coherent sentence (and most who can't).
I'm not saying this is a bad thing, but don't be fooling yourselves.
Sure, you're 12 year old daughter is imagining herself as a wizard at Hogwarts, flying around on a broomstick and chasing dragons. Just remember that at the end of the day when the classes are over and the dragons are chased, she'll be in the back-room, sodomizing little harry potter with her broomstick.
Better writing? Then how do you still explain the presence of niggers?
i have perhaps met three people who know english. english is a hack, of many different languages and dialects, warped and twisted generation after generation. i sure has hell don't claim to know english.
seriously though, why should anyone be expected to learn a language as bloated, and crufty as english? while i have yet find a replacement(esperanto?), i think if it is understandable, that is all that matters. isn't that what the point of a language is, in the first place? to get meaning/information from one point to another?
this thinking people as worse because of their incapability to learn a near-impossible language is just naieve. there's infinitely more important things to do than learn how to communicate absurdly more accurately.
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Loose = what Bill Clinton lists as job requirements for interns. Lose = what GWB does at elections.
Subtle difference.