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Acts Of The Apostles

Back from his stint in juvenile detention, it's hemos with a review of John F. Sundman's technothriller Acts of the Apostles. And you don't even have to buy it until you're hooked. (Read more to find out why.) Acts of the Apostles author John F. Sundman pages 400 publisher Rosalita Associates rating 8/10 reviewer hemos ISBN 192975213X summary Fast-paced, impossible-odds story with a grasp of modern technology. The path that Acts of the Apostles took to get to me is an interesting path to start with -- and that should have been an indication to me what the book would be like.

Rob noticed this guy at April's Geek Pride Festival in Boston. The guy in question was obviously trying to reach Rob and talk to him, but was having a hard time getting there. (CT:I think John and I suffer from the same problem: We're both pretty shy, and this was a really crowded place) When he did finally reach Rob, he gave him the book, asking him to read it -- or pass it on to me for reading.

That's very similar to the opening of the book, in which the book's protagonist has a computer disk dumped into his world, after enduring some interesting testing times. From there, the thriller develops ranging the world, encompassing favorites like nanotechnology gone bad, mind control, multinational corporate intrigue, computer chip design, seances, and running from the law.

The book is purportedly about Gulf War Syndrome and its causes, but that's only the starting point: The plot itself is believable, for a thriller. I've described it to friends as "What Tom Clancy would write if he were smart." The plot devices, the characters and topics are all very familiar to the geek audience, and it's quite refreshing to read a book that understands the mindset its audience will have.

There a few drawbacks to the book -- as the author's bio states, this is Sundman's first book, and that is readily apparent. While it's well written, there are sections of the book that feel stilted and artificial, and portions of the dialogue feel unnatural. But in light of it being a first novel, I think these are forgivable. Lastly, the story line suffers from some too-familar devices, including the overused theme of an evil multinational corporation as bogeyman.

I salute the publisher and author for their decision to put the first 13 chapters online. Acts of the Apostles comprises 7 "books" with 62 total chapters, so the online chapters give you a very good feeling for the book. I will also say that the writing and story get better as the plot unfolds, something worth keeping in mind while reading the initial section of the book. One of the more amusing parts of the book's Web site is the section regarding John's travels. I would imagine he's quite a guy.

Summary: Good book. It's easy to pick up after being away from for a while, but good enough that you'll want to read it straight through. Support small publishing and purchase this book from fatbrain. With summer coming up, and a bit more free time, this is a good book to keep around to read during kernel compiles.

You can also grab the book from Softpro.

33 of 104 comments (clear)

  1. Not quite.... by zpengo · · Score: 2
    By agreeing that you will find it much nicer and easier to read, you eliminate the possibility that you will not. You no longer have a choice.

    Bwahahahahahahaha!

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  2. Re:Bible Review by bluGill · · Score: 2

    The problem is how do you get an unbiased person to review it? Since the dominate religion in our cultur is based on it, it is hard to be unbiased. It was hard enough for me to take greek mythology, and nobody has belived it in a thousand years or so. (With some exception I suppose, but not a significant number)

    We are clouded by out culture. When I read a new book by an unknown author I can expect the reviewers are honest. When the culture has knowlege of the book things are different. The Phantom Menance is a perfect example, those I know who have seen it tell me that it was a good movie, but because of our culture people expected too much of it. The orginial Star Wars really wasn't much better (Though they tend to agree it was better), but our perspectives are different, we went into Star Wars not expecting as much as we got, so we set the level higher.

    I can give a simple review: a long book, that gets tough going. The book is orginized out of order, and no attempt was made to make it easy to tell which events came first. Mixed in with prophsies of doom against cultures that nobody remembers outside of this book are wonderful short stories.

    Everyone should read the bible. As a christian I say that with the hope that you would convert (or grow stronger in faith), but even if you are an athiest. The bible has had a great impact on our culture, and you should know about it. I took Greek mythology in college for the same reason, it has an impact on our culture. Someone once said that 50% of all references in [western] litature comes from the bible, and 30% from greek [and roman] mythology. A significant part came from Shakesphere, but he based off of the eariler works himself. If you don't understand orginal you won't get the reference. Besides, it is fun to laugh at authors who don't understand that which they make reference to.

    Now if there was just time to do all the reading I want to do as a geek.

  3. Re:running from the law - offtopic by molog · · Score: 2
    It was a small college town and it was heavily wooded. I know it was stupid but when you are partially drunk you don't think right. It was a big enough party that they had other fish to fry so that also played a role. Given the situation it wasn't just luck. Let me just say it was meant more to be a joke. Unfortuantely I was taken too seriously. If you are actually trying to avoid the police you will almost always get caught. It is ok to run from campus security though.
    Molog

    So Linus, what are we doing tonight?

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  4. Re:Gulf War Syndrome? No such thing by borzwazie · · Score: 2
    As someone who has also "been there," I agree that there is more to this story than what we are told.

    I was prodded with many, many needles before I was shipped off to the Gulf. I fortunately only spent about 2.5 weeks there, in Saudi Arabia. 3 days after I got there, Saddam threw in the towel.

    About a month after I got back, I got mono. Then I got strep throat. Then the mono returned. Then I felt like crap with no energy for about 3 months. Then the mono came back.

    I had a sore throat every day for 7 months. Does that sound normal to you? Previous to the vaccinations and so-called "flu shots" that the military requires you to "volunteer" for, I never got sick. I hadn't had a cold in almost 3 years. I lived in Southern California, so it sure wasn't the weather.

    Now, several years later, I no longer get "flu shots." I no longer get anti-CBR (chemical-biological-radioactive) vaccines.

    Oddly enough, I don't get sick much anymore.

    Gulf War syndrome is a crime perpetrated by our own against our own.

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  5. Is this for real? by Accidental+Angel · · Score: 2
    The main home page of the book's site also links to a work called Cheap Complex Devices , edited by a person with the same first and last name (John Compton Sundman), and purports to be a pair of computer-generated novels, the first of which (The Bonehead Computer Museum) is described in the introduction with a plot and characters that are the same as Acts. Both this work and Acts share very similar cover art. I smell a hoax, or at least something very fishy.

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  6. Beginning threw me for a loop... by Doppleganger · · Score: 2

    First sentence of the book:

    "Todd Griffith was going to debug Kali or die trying."

    Heh, my first thought was of the time I spent so many years ago trying to get Descent working through Kali across a Compuserve connection... :)

  7. I go to school with the author's daughter.. by dayeight · · Score: 2

    at Bennington. He's a real nice guy, gave out a bunch of copies of his book, and used to work for SUN.

    As I understand it, it's self published, Rosalita Publishing is his creation and named after their dog. I kept on telling him to get it reviewed on slashdot, hopefully now he won't starve to death :)

  8. 'real-world' sf/conspiracy novels by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 3

    first, let me say that i've also read this book.

    i notice that a lot of the comments here involve one of the issues that i had while reading the book: that, in a science fiction/conspiricy novel set in something very similar to the modern day, it's hard to keep separate where the real world setting is supposed to end and where the fictional parts begin. so in this case, while some parts are clearly slighly-modified fact (using the gulf war syndrome example, the fact that the syndrome was reported and its existence and cause questioned and/or denied), and others clearly fiction (the particulars about the cause of gulf war syndrome in the book), there is a third set (such as the assertion that there really is a coverup) which.... well, it's not clear whether they're supposed to be fact or fiction. in these cases, if the particular part is something you don't believe is true in the real world, you'll probably have a negative reaction, while, if the world were more (or entirely) fictional, you'd just accept it as something which happened the the book and go on.

    i feel that i should mention this because there are some politics in the book (which you can probably guess from the kaczynski reference) which, while i certainly think are interesting, i don't really agree with overall. as such, i found myself hesitant to recommend the book to others, since i didn't want to advocate the 'message' that may or may not be present in the book.

    anyway. that all having been said, it is a really good read, especially for anyone in the tech industry (and if you're in the boston-area tech industry, then doubly so). and it's published by a small publisher and has a good view of copyright and distribution (which are politics i do agree with). so, overall, with the previously mentioned reservations, i'd also recommend the book.

    -allen
    (too lazy to even create a slashdot account, much less log in)

  9. Re:Bible Review by Amphigory · · Score: 2
    Sounds like you (and Homer) need to read it. The Bible, for the most part, is not preachy at all. Mostly, it's a bunch of stories. In fact, there are whole books that don't even mention God, Sin, or anything else we would call "religious".

    Incidentally, that last throws the Fundies into a real snit. Which i think is good for them.

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  10. Re:mostly it's a bunch of begats by Amphigory · · Score: 2
    Suggestion: start with John. Follow that up with Romans (Romans is, admittedly, preachy -- but I don't know of another book that gives as good of an introduction to "Life, the universe, and everything". After that, I would probably recommend the other gospels, followed by genesis, Exodus, and Deuteronomy, 1 + 2Judges, 1+2 Samuel, 1+2 Kings. Then, a coupl,e more epistles, including James and 1Peter. After that, probably Isaih, Daniel, and Revelation. At that point, you pretty much covered the whole thing :) Enjoy.

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  11. EGAD! by hypergeek · · Score: 3

    This author is creating a dangerous precedent which will threaten Intellectual Property!

    If people can read books for free, all authors will starve!

    And what's this "library" I keep hearing about?
    </sarcasm>

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  12. running from the law by 348 · · Score: 3
    and running from the law

    Don't ever run from the law. . . You'll only end up going to jail tired.

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    1. Re:running from the law by molog · · Score: 2
      Don't ever run from the law. . . You'll only end up going to jail tired.

      Well it all depends. I was a runner in college (still am) and my freshman year the police came and busted up a party that I was at with some of the other guys on the team. They were checking the ID's of everyone who had alcholohol and becuase all of us were under 21, we went out the back only to find some cops their too. We took off running and those out of shape cops didn't have a chance and we got back to campus safe and sound. So some times you can run from the law =)
      Molog

      So Linus, what are we doing tonight?

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      So Linus, what are we going to do tonight?
      The same thing we do every night Tux. Try to take over the world!
  13. the intro is awesome....waiting for my copy.... by wrenling · · Score: 3

    A friend of mine had actually pointed me to the online chapters a few days ago.. and my copy is already on order.

    In a way, I wish I kinda hadn't peeked yet, though, because the way he builds the story is terrific, and I am half-afraid of losing the pacing. Not to mention the HUGE delay (TWO DAYS!) in being able to read more.

    My suggestion: If Hemos' review is good enough to get you interested in buying it, buy it blind, and then read it from beginning to end.

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  14. Clancy and Audiences by Devil+Ducky · · Score: 2

    >"What Tom Clancy would write if he were smart."
    "if he were a geek" is better, Tom Clancy's smarter than most people I've ever read.

    >a book that understands the mindset its audience will have.
    How can a book understand the mindset it's audience will have? If I buy this book, it will be directed to me, but every book I buy my g/f eventually reads, this book may not appeal to her. So it didn't understand the mindset of it's entire audience. Of course I understand what was meant, it is nice to see books written for geeks, but the book may not have been written to do that.

    BTW> I'm sure other books have been available where you can read the first few chapters online for free before, but has there ever been an option to download the rest of the book for a nominal fee?


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    1. Re:Clancy and Audiences by jd · · Score: 3

      Personally, I'd be more worried about a book that had sufficient brain capacity to understand anything! If the publishers are that far along in bio-tech, AI and Genetic Engineering, I'd be very careful about going within a hundred miles of the book. Who knows what else the book can do? Or what evil schemes lurk beneath it's dustcover brow, once it understands the minds of its audience.

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  15. Good book, good idea by jeillah · · Score: 2

    I had to buy this book after I read the online chapters. I wasn't disapointed. As an avid reader of Tom Clancy and Dale Brown and other techno-thrillers, I totally recommend this book to any one with like taste. This guy must have talked to Bill Joy!

  16. Book review by Pentagram · · Score: 3

    When I saw the title, I thought Hemos was reviewing the Bible or something. Made me look twice, anyway.

  17. It's great to know by tcd004 · · Score: 2
    someone is taking advantage of the new economies available to publishers of short-run books. Hopefully we'll see more audience-specified works in the future.

    tcd004

    Here are my Microsoft and AICN parodies, where are yours?

  18. Clancy by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 2

    "What Tom Clancy would write if he were smart." Hey now! Clancy is one of my favorite authors, just because he goes with the military themes instead of computers doesn't make him less intelligent. The first few NetForce books were okay, but it's obvious that his partner wrote most of the rest.

  19. Unabomber's manifesto quoted - but name misspelled by fluffhead · · Score: 2

    In the Introduction the author quotes "Industrial Society and Its Future," better known as the Unabomber Manifesto, but credits the author as "Ted Kaczynsky"....

    I believe it's spelled Kaczynski, at least that's the way the court documents read....

    In The United States District Court
    For The Eastern District of California

    United States of America,
    Plaintiff
    v.
    Theodore John Kaczynski
    aka "FC"
    Defendant.

    But that's a small caveat, hopefully the publisher will catch that before it goes into the next printing.

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  20. Interesting that others have fingered a cause... by Tau+Zero · · Score: 2
    See http://news2 .thls.bbc.co.uk/hi/english/health/newsid%5F752000/ 752355.stm. An excerpt:
    Vaccines have been implicated as a potential cause of ill health in veterans of the 1991 Gulf War by an expert study.

    The researchers found a link between ill health and multiple vaccinations - but only in military personal who had received their vaccinations during deployment.

    Other recent science articles have identified physiological changes in GWS victims. Given that, it's awfully hard to dismiss it as "no such thing". (That is, if you're being honest.)
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  21. A good read by Jeremy+Erwin · · Score: 2

    I found this book to be a very good read-- the manner in which it ties together Gulf War Syndrome, nanontechnology and software design is most amusing. I was particularly interested in his descriptions of hardware design and debugging.

    I'm not sure if Sundman is writing from first hand experience, but it would seem to me that several of the comapanies mentined in the book are rather thinly veiled parodies of existant companies. Digital MicroSystems seems very similar to DEC, for instance.

    Oh, and the title-- "Acts of the Apostles" has little of nothing to do with religion and everything to do with megalomania.

  22. Re: Tom Clancy by kevin805 · · Score: 2

    Yeah, supposedly, when Hunt for Red October came out, the CIA knocked on his door and said "who leaked you this information". He had actually figured out a lot of the capabilities of US subs from published sources (who's contracting with whom, what tests are done, published specs, etc.).

    Pretty impressive.

  23. You're a sly one, Hemos. by Black+Parrot · · Score: 3
    Did anyone notice the subtlety of Hemos' presentation:
    And you don't even have to buy it until you're hooked. ( Read more to find out why.)

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  24. You could say the same about Slashdot by sansbury · · Score: 4
    the story line suffers from some too-familar devices, including the overused theme of an evil multinational corporation as bogeyman.

    -cwk.

  25. Re:wow better be good. by SquadBoy · · Score: 4

    Whatever you do don't put "cdidisc" in for the discount code or whatever they call it that would be wrong because you don't work for http://www.cdicorp.com so don't do that it will get you free shipping and stuff but that would be wrong.

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  26. Author by TheTomcat · · Score: 2

    Is the author the guy who was sitting right inside the Castle doors at Geekpride?

    If it's the same guy, he handed me the book, almost in a used car salesman kind of way, and pretty much watched me as I read the back.

    Kind of strange, I felt bad handing the book back to him.

  27. Online version license by snicker · · Score: 5
    I think my favorite thing about this book that I haven't started reading yet is that if you read it online you agree to:

    Feel free to read, save, print, copy and share among your friends in the format as it appears here on screen. When you purchase the printed book, you will find the format much nicer and easier to read.
    By proceeding, you are agreeing to these terms.

    If I don't find it easier to read do I have to... I don't know, give it back?!

    *Nick
  28. Welcome to the world of the QP. by gnarphlager · · Score: 2

    Stands for Quality Paperback. Usually go for between $13-18 each. Larger than the standard paperback, still massmarket. Better binding, and usually better covers (usually not glossy). Better paper (not so pulp-y). Kinda silly compared to a $6 paperback, but it is a higher quality book, and usually you get more "literary" fiction (which I happen to be into).

    Not having seen the book, I can't say if that's the deal, but given the price, that would be my guess. Hit the local bookstore and ask.

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  29. What's the big deal about web samples? by sehlat · · Score: 4

    I don't understand the fuss the reviewer makes about web-available sample chapters. Baen Books has been doing that for over a year now. In fact, Jim Baen has gone even farther with what he calls "Webscriptions." For $10/month, you can download full, copy-edited HTML copies of what he's publishing that month. That works out to $2.50 a novel, which is *CHEAP*. I've been stuffing the HTML into my Palm Vx and carrying them around to read.

  30. Get rebate without cheating by bstadil · · Score: 3

    Use the code 2000CELEBRATE and you will get 10% rebate. They are doing this to celebrate a new new piece of software they put together.

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  31. Re:Gulf War Syndrome? No such thing by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 5

    As an ex-Navy surgical technologist who served onboard a ship off the coast of Mogadishu, Somalia, about 5 years ago, I disagree with your statements.

    Since that was in 1994, many of the men (there were two women pilots onboard, but otherwise it was exclusively male) were stationed in the Middle East for Desert Storm. Part of our daily routine was to operate a "lumps and bumps" clinic, where we operated on and removed various lipomas, sebacious cysts, etc. on sailors and Marines who wanted to be rid of them. While I don't have any official numbers, we typically did 2 or 3 of those per day. I would say, over the 6-month duration of the "cruise", that we performed roughly 150 benign mass excisions.

    Now, think about the math on that one. There were approximately 2400 men onboard the ship, and we performed surgery on about 16% of them. That means that during that one particular 6-month period, 16% of the otherwise healthy men of an average age of, say, 22, had growths that bothered them to the point that they wanted them removed.

    Look around your class/office/hangouts. How many of your 22-year-old friends have had surgery in the last 6 months? A full one-sixth of them? Personally, I feel that the numbers would be pretty statistically significant. I don't have any hard numbers to compare the number of surgeries on Desert Storm personnel versus those who weren't there, and can't compare that to the percentages in the general population of the ship, but don't you find that a little strange? I do.

    Flame away, but as someone who spent a bit of time living and working with Gulf War veterans, I firmly believe that there's more to the story than the government is telling us.