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Hominids: The Neanderthal Parallax

robinw writes: "Hominids is the latest novel by the accomplished Canadian science-fiction writer, Robert J. Sawyer. It is also the first book in a trilogy which he calls The Neanderthal Parallax. While far from his best offering, Hominids is consistent with the quality we've grown to expect from Mr. Sawyer, and is a worthwhile addition to any science fiction fan's library." Hominids: The Neanderthal Parallax author Robert J. Sawyer pages 448 publisher Doherty, Tom Associates, LLC rating 8 reviewer Robin Ward ISBN 0-312-87692-0 summary When worlds collide, and one of them is full of Neanderthals ... The book is centered on the Many-Universes Interpretation of Quantum Mechanics. In layman's terms, for every possible decision that can be made, the universe branches out into many universes, one for each possibility. All decisions are therefore dealt with in some form, and the universes are identical except for the choice that has been taken one way or the other. Normally, the interpretation states that the parallel universes cannot communicate, but in the novel a failed experiment in Quantum Computing suddenly brings two such Universes together. The first is our modern day society, and the second is a parallel universe where Neanderthals and mammoths prospered while we perished.

The story of the two universes, and their interactions are told in parallel. After the failed experiment, a Neanderthal named Ponter finds himself in rural Ontario, in the world famous Sudbury Neutrino observatory. Back in the Neanderthal universe, his partner Adikor is blamed for his absence, and is put through an extensive trial.

Sawyer has obviously done his research. The alternate version of Earth where the Neanderthals exist is amazingly well thought out. Everything from the social ramifications of an enhanced sense of smell to the 1984-esque communicators that monitor everything the Neanderthals do is integrated into the story perfectly.

There is very little action to be found in the novel, but it remains exciting nonetheless. Personally, I was fascinated with the dialogue Sawyer presents between the character Mary Vaughan and Ponter the Neanderthal. Although I believe that Sawyer has a love for humanity and our technological prowess, he uses the conversations between the human and the Neanderthal as a way of exposing some of our atrocities in the thousands of years that have passed since we developed intelligence. You have to admire the honesty of the character Mary for willingly exposing things in our past that we'd rather forget, but towards the end of the book it almost becomes too much. In fact, I had a hard time believing that Ponter had anything good to say about us at all to his fellow Neanderthals.

The lack of privacy that the Neanderthal society lives with might be of particular interest to the Slashdot crowd. All Neanderthals are required to wear a communicator implant in their arm that transmits everything they do to a central recording center. Interestingly enough, Sawyer argues in favor of such technology, saying that it virtually eliminates crime (who would murder someone knowing fully well that it could be played back by the authorities?) and that we don't really have any privacy anyway. In fact, the book begins with a quote to that effect.

Sawyer's writing is simple and to the point. He has a way of explaining complicated concepts without being overly confusing or long and drawn out. The 400+ page novel is actually a fairly quick read. Unlike some oth-er authors that I'm familiar with, you don't have to go back and re-read passages to find details you might have missed. Don't get me wrong - although the book is easily digested, it manages to inspire. Also, despite the fact that this is the first novel in a series of three, it stands very well on its own. In fact, had I not known that there were two more novels dealing with the same characters being released over the next year or so, I would have been completely satisfied.

Hominids comes highly recommended. If you're at all interested in hard-SF, you owe it to yourself to head down to the bookstore and check it out.

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35 of 132 comments (clear)

  1. Get your hands off me you damned dirty apes! by GerberBaby · · Score: 3, Funny

    Where is Chuck Heston when you need him.

  2. privacy by Jucius+Maximus · · Score: 3, Insightful
    "All Neanderthals are required to wear a communicator implant in their arm that transmits everything they do to a central recording center. Interestingly enough, Sawyer argues in favor of such technology, saying that it virtually eliminates crime (who would murder someone knowing fully well that it could be played back by the authorities?)"

    If a person is disturbed enough to make them commit a murder, putting a locator implant in their arm will not make them less disturbed. It will not lead to a happier society.

    Their anger will simply be manifested differently. Would you want to work in the same office with a person like this? Would you want to live in the same building? Treating the Symptoms != Solving the problem.

    1. Re:privacy by DragonMagic · · Score: 2

      *MAY SPOIL*

      In the novel, though, people who commited horrible crimes such as murder, had to have their genetic code cleansed from the gene pool. It may sound to be an easy fix for crime just there, but to ensure that any of the "bad genes" would not be around, *ANYONE* who shared at least 50% of their genes (brothers, sisters, children), were ALSO sterilized.

      It makes it a little more involved to have your family ensure that you're an angel, knowing that their crimes can end your ability to have a family.

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      Human nature is the same everywhere; the modes only are different. -- Earl of Chesterfield
    2. Re:privacy by drox · · Score: 2

      If a person is disturbed enough to make them commit a murder, putting a locator implant in their arm will not make them less disturbed. It will not lead to a happier society.

      Exactly. The disturbed-but-clever people will just find better ways to make it look like an accident or a natural death.

      Oh well. It's fiction, so I suppose it's okay. Better that we devote our efforts to combating real abuses rather than fictional ones.

    3. Re:privacy by bungo · · Score: 2

      Oh, shit. My above post may have contained a spoiler.

      (a bit more explained below)
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      It's been a months since I read the story, but I think you don't find out about the 50% DNA gene pool purge until later into the story.

      Sorry about that.

      At least I didn't say that the lone gunmen were killed.

      Which reminds me of the best spoiler I've ever seen. In the credits to, I think, Loaded Weapon, near the end, they had
      Gaffer - ...
      Best Boy - ....
      The secret to the crying game - The girl's a guy
      Property Manager - ....

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      "The best part? I became an ordained minister while not wearing pants." -- CleverNickName
    4. Re:privacy by Jucius+Maximus · · Score: 2
      "A symptom of being deranged could be a strong desire to kill people. Catching the person after the first time allows you to treat the disease, and stop the symtoms. I would be happier if I knew that multiple-homicides were far less likely. Wouldn't you, or are you just scared you'd get caught ?"

      No. I think this cost of catching serial murderers that you propose is too high. It forces the assumption that the majority of people will commit a crime worthy of pursuit by law enforcement. I do not want to live in a society like this.

      "Those who would trade a little freedom for a little security deserve neither." -Benjamin Franklin

    5. Re:privacy by DerekTheRed · · Score: 3, Interesting

      This is such a terrible solution to the crime problem and I can't believe that anyone knowledgeable about biology would ever discuss it without severe prejudice...

      Biology does not make people into criminals, for the most part. It's criminal law that does that. But that's not my main objection, and I don't care to argue the merits of it -- my main objection is that the human gene pool is dangerously homogeneous already, and we should not, at this point, be going out of our way to make it more so.

      Human beings have, since distant prehistory, slaughtered many millions of minority ethnic groups. "Parallax" does not shrink from that fact. What we are not acknowledging, however, is that their genes are gone forever. By committing so many atrocities, we have made ourselves incredibly (and nearly irreverseably) vulnerable to diseases that depend on common genetics. By killing people with different genetics, it leaves only those with similar genetics to reproduce with each other. It makes each of us genetic siblings, to a degree...and I shouldn't have to tell you why siblings can't reproduce...

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      "Thank you, God, for your healing gift of religion."

    6. Re:privacy by Tackhead · · Score: 2
      > (who would murder someone knowing fully well that it could be played back by the authorities?)"

      Didn't seem to stop 19 jerkwads from pulling off 9/11, did it?

    7. Re:privacy by Suidae · · Score: 2

      You should say 'wuy siblings ought not reproduce', since it is clear that they can, and indeed, occasionally do.

      The genetic risks associated with interbreeding are, according to some studies, overblown. Interbreeding of closely related individuals also has benefits of bringing out other traits, which actually increases genetic diversity.

      In short, the situation is more complicated than 'incest=bad'. Animal breeders regularly interbreed their stock, usually with no problems at all.

  3. Murder by JJ · · Score: 3, Insightful

    While absolute certainty of punishment would drive down random murder rates, it would not eliminate murder. A majority of women murdered are murdered by someone they know, normally a male.

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    So long and thanks for all the fish . . . !!!
    1. Re:Murder by arivanov · · Score: 2

      Genetic elimination should solve this over a period of time. I am glad the author has suggested it.

      It has solved it for many societies on Earth after all. If you give it a thought in some societies things like pe**philia are almost unheard of.

      Which one is a different matter. There are many statistic handbooks on crime - look into them and find out for yourself. This data also gives a very nice perspective on the idea of the effect "tough stance on crime - more jails and more police" and the real effect it has on crime.

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      Baker's Law: Misery no longer loves company. Nowadays it insists on it
      http://www.sigsegv.cx/
    2. Re:Murder by Daniel+Dvorkin · · Score: 2

      Actually, most murder victims of either sex are murdered by someone they know, very often a family member, and that someone is usually male. The circumstances are often different, of course, but this fact holds true.

      Note also that rates of murder conviction among women are rising rapidly; this may be an unintended consequence of the success of feminism (equal rights => equal access to and willingness to use the tools of deadly violence) or it may be simply that juries are now more willing to convict women of serious crimes, being less blinded by the belief that A Poor Little Innocent Woman Could Never Do Such A Horrible Thing. IIRC, the rates of murder convictions have been traditionally been about 90% male / 10% female but are now around 80%/20%.

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      The correlation between ignorance of statistics and using "correlation is not causation" as an argument is close to 1.
    3. Re:Murder by markmoss · · Score: 2

      More to the point: nearly half of all murderers (in the USA) either turn themselves in, kill themselves on the scene, or don't even try to conceal obvious clues leading straight to them. I think that back in the 1950's this was more than 2/3, and it still is in many rural areas. (Of course, the Nicole Simpson murder appears to be one of those obvious cases, and the LAPD managed to blow it. The cops in my rural county have never cracked a non-obvious case, and I'm sure they would do much, much worse against Johnny Cochrane.) So, yes, lots of murders are committed by people with no real hope of getting away with it. Some (especially the gang type murders) might be deterred, but now and then you'd have the gang controlling the police...

    4. Re:Murder by arivanov · · Score: 2
      Secondly, the end result isn't much of a solution. Where is the line drawn between crimes worthy of sterilization and those which need not be purged from the genome? Murder? Rape? Dishonesty? Breach of Contract? Active racism? Passive racism? Conscientious objection? A given disorder or disease?

      It is a question of the actual society model. You are judging the idea of applying genetic selection based on social criteria by our own rules and that is where your mistake comes from. First, your rules may be correct for your society. They are definitely incorrect for the society described in the book.

      In btw, application of genetic selection to intelligent species based on social principles is not such a novell idea. This book is not revolutionary by any means. Let's take for example David Brin's Uplift series. There this idea is most prevalent.

      Cutting a long story short this is nothing but the general theory of evolution applied where the society requirements are the actual evolutionary pressure.

      Myself I am not sure that is right. But looking at the frequencies of certain crimes in some of the human societies it suddenly starts gaining a considerable appeal.

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      Baker's Law: Misery no longer loves company. Nowadays it insists on it
      http://www.sigsegv.cx/
    5. Re:Murder by Rupert · · Score: 2

      pe**philia was practically unheard of in the US until 10 years ago.

      It happened, it's just that no-one talked about it.

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  4. Hmm... by Kredal · · Score: 4, Funny

    Does anyone besides me have a hard time suspending disbelief long enough to get over the idea of "modern neanderthals"? I can't get the image of a guy with a big forehead and a deer leg club going around smashing traffic lights and computers out of my head.

    Either that or the Flintstones... *shrug*

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    1. Re:Hmm... by DaAlbatross · · Score: 5, Funny

      seen any baseball players lately?

    2. Re:Hmm... by Amazing+Quantum+Man · · Score: 2

      Frozen Caveman Lawyer!

      I'm just a simple caveman...

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      Fascism starts when the efficiency of the government becomes more important than the rights of the people.
  5. I second this review by caesar-auf-nihil · · Score: 5, Interesting

    Perhaps this may be modded as redundant, but I'll say it anyway. I read this series when it first came out in Analog this year. I looked forward to each issue that came out and read it rapidly.

    What struck me the most about this whole series was the striking differences in our culture and the one developed by the Neanderthal alternate universe culture. Yes, it's fiction, but it did an excellent job pointing out how historical changes can influence generations of culture, beliefs, and technology. For example, the Neanderthals decided to have everyone monitored with personal monitoring devices, so in the event of a crime, there was a 100% chance of proving or disproving who did the crime. The ultimate in police state monitoring, and yet, the entire Neanderthal culture agreed to not abuse this monitoring, and had it set up in such a way that the monitoring would only be accessed during the event of a crime. Privacy wasn't an issue with this culture, so it came as quite a shock to the main Neanderthal when he was transplanted to our universe that we had such issues.

    The parallels and contrasts between such two entirely different, and yet very possible cultures that could have happened here on earth make this series well worth reading. I'm looking forward to more work from the author.

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  6. Rob Sawyer is a good writer! by farrellj · · Score: 2

    And Canadian to boot!

    At CAN-CON, we have had Rob and his wife Carolyn as guests many times, and they are wonderful people. Take the time to listen to either of them if you ever get a chance at a Science Fiction convention.

    And, of course, read his books!

    ttyl
    Farrell

    co-founder of CAN-CON, a conference promoting Canadian SF Writers, Poets, Artists and other creative people for over a decade!

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  7. Sawyer's site, more stories, etc. by DragonMagic · · Score: 3, Informative

    To read more of Sawyer's stories and order autographed copies direct from him, visit:

    http://www.sfwriter.com/

    Best way to support an author is a direct sale. (:

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    Human nature is the same everywhere; the modes only are different. -- Earl of Chesterfield
  8. who wouldn't? by Ender+Ryan · · Score: 2
    "(who would murder someone knowing fully well that it could be played back by the authorities?)"

    How many here would willingly fight to their own deaths to start a revolution against such an authority? I would.

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    Sticking feathers up your butt does not make you a chicken - Tyler Durden
  9. My little 2c review by SetarconeX · · Score: 2, Interesting

    For those who didn't know, the novel was serialized in Analog, starting January 2002, and running for about three issues.

    I know the concept sounds goofy. I wasn't all that keen on reading a "Neanderthals run around Toronto" story either, considering the crap that's been made using plotlines like this in movies.

    Nevertheless, the book's well researched, well written, and altogether enjoyable. You do owe it to yourselves to at least thumb through this one.

    I mean, we all know someone with an Analog subscription, right? Just go bug them for a couple of back issues.

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    "Isn't that the sweetest little well-balanced undergraduate-level philosophy of life."
  10. You could have read this earlier by EvilBastard · · Score: 5, Informative

    It was serialized in the Jan 2002 - Apr 2002 issues of Analog

    Not a bad story, but I found it to be a bit too much "Humans Bad, Neanderthals Good" to really accept it. Basically, neanderthals have no Crime, Rape, Theft, Pollution, Overpopulation, and they have far more advanced in many physical sciences.

    The sole good thing he had to say about Humans was we landed on the moon,and then he figured out a way to make us look bad over that.

    Hopefully the future books become a little less one-sided

    1. Re:You could have read this earlier by DragonMagic · · Score: 2

      Well, you may be a bit happier, knowing the next book is _Humans_, and the third book is _Hybrids_. The titles alone should tell you how the first book's characters end up.

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      Human nature is the same everywhere; the modes only are different. -- Earl of Chesterfield
  11. Re:Stupid book reviews... by swb · · Score: 2

    Most books reviewed are either technology books or SF, and they seldom (ever?) reach any level of literary accomplishment.

    The people writing the books don't read magazines like the Atlantic, New Republic, New Yorker, or the NYTimes Review of Books and have no idea what a real book review looks like.

    That being said, the reviews here are occasionally interesting because they tend to summarize what's interesting about the book (SF plot, technical details from tech books).

    I've read plenty of literary reviews that spend half their time describing the review subject's rumored anal sex experiences and how they might have influenced their writing, and that's not always helpful or insightful, either.

  12. Another good book by Sawyer by Buran · · Score: 4, Informative

    I hope this isn't too off-topic. :) But hopefully I can recommend my own favorite (so far) Sawyer novel.

    I've thoroughly enjoyed his Far-Seer , which retells the story of Galileo using another planet and society (intelligent dinosaurs, anyone?) to educate. While there are changes in the empirical evidence available, done to compensate for the radically-different setting, the issues presented are the same.

    While I'm already familiar with Galileo's story from reading other accounts of his life, Far-Seer put it into a personal perspective. The wonder of discovery, the process of reasoning how the solar system actually worked (including building on what others had written before) and the shock of being put on trial by society for upsetting the prevailing, comfortable world-view -- they are all here. So, too, is the punishment (again, changed, though I will not spoil it here.)

    The Church didn't apologize to Galileo for 300 years. Give that some thought ...

    1. Re:Another good book by Sawyer by Buran · · Score: 2

      Indeed -- I just thought Far-Seer was the best of the series. (The method for solving the space-elevator stability problem is interesting, though I don't know that it's workable.)

  13. part of a trilogy by Roadmaster · · Score: 2

    after reading hominids you will realize that it purposefully leaves a lot of loose ends, since it quite likely sets the scene for something big bound to happen on the next two books on the series. So while by itself hominids might not seem like robert sawyer's best (a notion with which i disagree, so far i haven't read a rjs book i didnt like and i prefer not to rate them against each other), do keep in mind that its just the beginning of something that could be good.

  14. sawyer's great, but this isn't his best by gdulli · · Score: 4, Informative

    For what it's worth, I've read four of Sawyer's novels and I'd recommend the other three far above this one:

    1. Flashforward
    2. Calculating God
    3. Factoring Humanity
    4. Hominids

  15. My bad review by HeghmoH · · Score: 3, Informative

    I'm going to add another dissenting opinion to the mix. I read it serialized in Analog this winter/spring. I enjoyed it enough to finish it, but really not very much.

    First, the good points. The parallel universe is nicely done, well thought-out, and interesting. That's the main reason I continued on. And, um, I guess that's about all.

    Bad points, wooden characters, horrible dialog, the "points" about humanity all boil down to "we're really pretty horrible" and they're made with all the subtlety of a sledgehammer.

    This is the first Sawyer book I've read. I hope the reviewer isn't right about it being consistent with his usual quality, but I probably won't be hunting out any more of his books any time soon.

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  16. Previously published in Analog + minor spoiler by eagl · · Score: 3, Informative

    This novel was published in a multi-part format in Analog Science Fiction and Fact magazine just a few months ago. It definately kept me waiting for the next issue.

    Warning - minor spoiler

    One issue dealt with the book was what happens when the all-knowing personal monitoring system is compromised or degraded. The ultimate ramifications were not completely explored by the end of the novel, but the chink in the armor was exposed.

    Recommended.

  17. Interbreeding by Martin+S. · · Score: 2


    Interbreeding of closely related individuals also has benefits of bringing out other traits, which actually increases genetic diversity.

    Confirmed.

    Indeed interbreeding is very common in thoroughbred Horses, Pigs, Cattle and pretty common in Pedigree Cats and Dogs. That is why today we the most productive farm animals and most attractive pets in history. Typically interbreeding in not so bad when a very strong selection mechanism against defects is at work. In both these cases a only repeat winners (Races/Shows) are bred and very widely. Though this *can* result in a homogeneous group, it is not certain. Indeed it aid the development of new species, there is considerable genetic difference between the various type of horse, so much so that some types of horse can considered seperate species because they cannot interbreed successfully.

    The main issue is the accumulation of recessive genes and since breeders think in terms of breeding lines (not individuals), a strong selective mechanism is at work against recessive genes when they are defective.

    Interestingly in Humans almost the opposite mechanism is at work, modern medical science, indeed all social security diminish selective breeding and even legal prevents it. The obvious consequence is that Human species is moving from a qualitative nurturing strategy towards an quantitative nurturing strategy.

    1. Re:Interbreeding by Suidae · · Score: 2

      there is considerable genetic difference between the various type of horse, so much so that some types of horse can considered seperate species because they cannot interbreed successfully

      Facinating, I hadn't heard that before. I wonder if there are any examples of deliberate experimental speciation through selective breeding?

      True about Humans and recessive 'bad' genes. Its intersting to me that people in general value highly even exceptionally poor (genetically speaking) specimins of humanity (and allow them to breed). In the long term I expect that genetic therapies and technological implants will eliminate the 'disadvantaged' though. In normal societies there just isn't any other option, unless people start to realize that reproductive freedom has an impact on the rest of society.

  18. Guaranteed punishment would not fix crime by gelfling · · Score: 3, Insightful

    If you knew that you were constantly monitored against your will you would commit just as many crimes. Because you would be slowly be degraded to sub human state and in short order you would come to believe that there is nothing in your life that is under your control. As a result you would simply go out and do whatever the fuck you wanted anyway. Might as well have a good time doing bad things.