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In Maryland, a Soviet-Style Punishment For a Novelist

An anonymous reader writes A 23-year-old teacher at a Cambridge, Md. middle school has been placed on leave and—in the words of a local news report — "taken in for an emergency medical evaluation" for publishing, under a pseudonym, a novel about a school shooting. The novelist, Patrick McLaw, an eighth-grade language-arts teacher at the Mace's Lane Middle School, was placed on leave by the Dorchester County Board of Education, and is being investigated by the Dorchester County Sheriff's Office, according to news reports from Maryland's Eastern Shore. The novel, by the way, is set 900 years in the future."

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  1. Sue the bastards by realmolo · · Score: 4, Insightful

    Wow. Talk about a lawsuit that you are *guaranteed* to win.

    This guy is going to make millions.

    1. Re:Sue the bastards by Jack9 · · Score: 4, Insightful

      Let's hope so.

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    2. Re:Sue the bastards by mysidia · · Score: 5, Interesting

      I don't know. It sounds like they kidnapped him in the night, forced him to leave hims hometown, and have imprisoned him somewhere against his will, just based on a fictional novel --- probably a jail or psych ward, where they are already administering drugs, so he won't have the mental faculties left to pursue any action, not that he could without ability to travel and speak to an attorney.

      McLaw was suspended by the Dorchester County Board of Education pending an investigation and is no longer in the area. He is currently at a location known to law enforcement and does not currently have the ability to travel anywhere.

    3. Re:Sue the bastards by jythie · · Score: 4, Interesting

      The person's chances are not all that good. Unless the union backs them up (and even then it can be a stretch) schools are pretty hard to go up against. "Think of the children", while often mocked, is a pretty powerful rallying cry for local officials who might be worried about parental outrage or practicing 'cover your ass' security where it is better to come down hard and be seeing to be doing something then risk something happening and be blamed for not acting. The life of some middle school teacher does not even begin to factor in.

    4. Re:Sue the bastards by gurps_npc · · Score: 3, Insightful
      The schools are good at keeping people from teaching.

      But they do this by paying LARGE amounts of money.

      If the union backs him, he will probably get his job.

      If the union does not back him, he won't get his job, he will instead get a ton of money.

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    5. Re:Sue the bastards by chemicaldave · · Score: 4, Funny

      "Think of the children"

      The book is 900 years in the future. I think you mean "Think of the great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-grandchildren."

    6. Re:Sue the bastards by donscarletti · · Score: 4, Interesting

      If his books are any good in the slightest, then he's going to make a killing on this publicity.

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    7. Re:Sue the bastards by jythie · · Score: 4, Insightful

      On the other hand, in my high school we had a teacher with whom a freshman became obsessed including showing up drunk at his house. Even though he never did anything with her and rebuffed her advances he was fired because parents were concerned about one of their daughters and a teacher.

      Meanwhile one of our other teachers, a woman, was known to sleep with students and married one after he graduated, nothing was ever done to her. The difficulty of firing a teacher pretty much comes down to how much PR is involved and if the union feels it will be better served getting rid of the person vs keeping them, either due to internal or external political concerns.

    8. Re:Sue the bastards by GameboyRMH · · Score: 4, Funny

      Someone should write a dystopian sci-fi novel about this (oh wait/Yo Dawg...).

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    9. Re:Sue the bastards by Archangel+Michael · · Score: 4, Insightful

      Think of the children is the battle cry of Tyrants everywhere. I won't vote for anyone, even if I agree 99% with them politically, if they make any statement similar to "do it for the children". I urge every slashdotter to do the same this election cycle, even if it means voting for the "other guy". AND let the Politicians know that hiding behind skirts and baby strollers is what terrorists do.

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    10. Re:Sue the bastards by jlb.think · · Score: 3, Insightful

      Law enforcment is not bound by HIPPA, but are hesitant to divulge what may be considered private under HIPPA. I have had people close to me sent to psychiatric institutions and once they are there the staff won't tell anyone they are even there without a waiver being signed by the patient. This is very frustrating when the police show up and hall off your loved one, and they seem to disappear into a blackhole. A few days later I did recieve a call. But if a patient was sufficiently drugged and unable or not allowed to make phone calls they could disappear indefinitely, drugged-incapacitated and without the mental capacity to challenge their detention.

    11. Re:Sue the bastards by gbjbaanb · · Score: 5, Interesting

      America.... home of the fr... yeah right.

      Anyway, take a look at the kind of books that are *taught* in schools:

              Romeo and Juliet by Shakespeare
              Macbeth by Shakespeare
              Huckleberry Finn by Mark Twain
              Julius Caesar by Shakespeare
              To Kill a Mockingbird by Harper Lee
              The Scarlet Letter by Nathaniel Hawthorne
              Of Mice and Men by John Steinbeck
              Hamlet by Shakespeare
              The Great Gatsby by F. Scott Fitzgerald
              Lord of the Flies by William Golding

      So lets see... underage sex, murder of your relatives, regicide, racism, lynchings, rape, adultery, organised crime, a mentally-ill killer and of course - lawless schoolboys killing each other! What's not to love about the American school system, yeehaw!

    12. Re:Sue the bastards by ShanghaiBill · · Score: 3, Insightful

      Let's hope so.

      So we should hope that someone can collect millions in taxpayer dollars because they were placed on paid leave? TFA is a biased opinion piece presenting third and fourth hand information, and quotes with no context, in a clear attempt to generate outrage, and thus pageviews. I have no idea what the real story is, but maybe everyone should just calm down and wait for the facts to come out from a reputable source that doesn't use "Soviet-Style Punishment" in their headline. The Soviets didn't send their enemies home on paid leave.

    13. Re:Sue the bastards by Phreakiture · · Score: 4, Informative

      I have no idea what the real story is,

      There is a less hysterical piece at NewsOne, also this from the Washington Times. There is also an opposing opinion in the Baltimore Sun.

      Does that help?

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    14. Re:Sue the bastards by ShanghaiBill · · Score: 5, Informative

      Does that help?

      Yes, that helps, since these sources contradict many of the "facts", and the main theme, of TFA:

      - His book The Insurrectionist was published more than three years ago.
      - School authorities have been aware of the book since it was first published.
      - His book had little or no influence on the decision to place him on administrative leave.
      - The main reason for his suspension was a "bizarre" four page letter that he wrote to county officials, that raised mental health concerns.
      - He has not been arrested, and is not being charged with any offence (TFA does not say he was, buy many commenters here have assumed this).
      - It does not appear that his mental health evaluation was mandatory or coerced in anyway other than as a condition of returning to work.

      So it appears that there were some legitimate concerns about his mental health, and that authorities' response to those concerns was measured and reasonable.

    15. Re:Sue the bastards by ShanghaiBill · · Score: 4, Insightful

      So what you're saying is that rather than a story of "Over-reaction by elected officials and law enforcement", we instead have a story about "piss-poor and irresponsible reporting by the mainstream media"?

      I think the much more interesting story is "Why do presumably educated and internet savvy Slashdot readers repeatedly believe journalistic garbage that can be debunked with a 30 second Google search?".

  2. In Soviet Maryland by Mr+D+from+63 · · Score: 5, Funny

    Book burns you.

    1. Re:In Soviet Maryland by SQLGuru · · Score: 4, Interesting

      Stephen King is probably lucky he lives in a different area of the northeast.......otherwise, he'd be on trial for all sorts of sick demented things.

      Seriously, though -- if the teacher had other suspicious behaviours, it would be one thing, but just writing a fictional story based on an area he's familiar with isn't enough to indicate criminal thought.

    2. Re:In Soviet Maryland by JeffAtl · · Score: 5, Informative

      they need to take to avoid future litigation for "not acting", that you can't necessarily blame the police

      This isn't accurate. The police are under no requirements to act - they even won a Supreme Court case regarding the matter.

    3. Re:In Soviet Maryland by Jason+Levine · · Score: 5, Insightful

      The police don't need to act on every tip reported in. If that were the case, they would need to respond to every 911 call that reported that the McDonald's teller gave them a medium fries and not a large like they ordered. You know, because it might possibly become a violent situation and if they don't act they might be to blame.

      Even if they did "act" on this tip, all it would warrant might be a visit to the guy's house to talk with him briefly and run some background checks on him. That would have shown that he's a fiction writer and not publishing some manifesto about how he's going to go berserk and kill everyone. Then the author and the police would go their own ways with as little fuss as possible. Forcibly taking him in for "an emergency medical evaluation", not letting anyone know where he is, and releasing statements phrasing everything he did as if he was an imminent threat isn't "acting", it's overreacting. Overreacting never takes down valid threats - at least, not without also taking down a lot of non-threats as well. If they actually, properly "acted", we wouldn't be reading about this because it would have been a routine interview and closing of the report.

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    4. Re:In Soviet Maryland by Zalbik · · Score: 5, Insightful

      you can't necessarily blame the police or the school

      Yes I certainly can; people who uphold bad laws are almost as bad as those who enact them.

      And more importantly, unless there was evidence that this teacher was posing an immediate threat to children, they had no authority to arrest / detain him, regardless of any potential future litigation.

      To put it simply, based on the current description of the situation, it appears the police did something both illegal and immoral and the school board did something immoral and possibly illegal.

      Note: Every news story I find on this is pretty vague on the details. I suspect there is more going on here than initially reported. The news agencies have quite possibly left out important and pertinent information as it makes a great click-bait story.

    5. Re:In Soviet Maryland by powerlord · · Score: 4, Informative

      Except this is Maryland.

      The police there think that being close to the capital has granted them more authority, and the people are wacko, self-entitled over-reactors to start with.

      http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/C...

      ... During the period from 1962 until 1967, Cambridge was a center of Civil Rights Movement protests as blacks sought access to work and housing. They also wanted to end racial segregation of schools and other public facilities. Race-related violence erupted in Cambridge in 1963 and 1967, and forces of the Maryland National Guard were assigned to the city to assist local authorities with peace-keeping efforts.[13] The leader of the radical movement was H. Rap Brown, the Minister of Justice of The Black Panther Party,[14] and local organizer Gloria Richardson.[15] These individuals incited the local community to burn the 2nd Ward area of Cambridge, Maryland which housed most of the African American community. The local population's homes, most of which were destroyed, were rebuilt under a 1969 Public Housing Act by the then Governor, Spiro Agnew and the Federal Government. With the passage of the Civil Rights Act in 1964, public segregation in Cambridge officially ended. ...

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    6. Re:In Soviet Maryland by Archangel+Michael · · Score: 3, Insightful

      You CANNOT stop crime. And arresting people for "Pre Crime" is right out of Sci-Fi (Minority Report).

      A free society is messy. And often terribly so. We MUST accept being messy, sometimes nasty and ugly, if we are to truly appreciate the beautiful. Anything less is ugly, without any beauty to appreciate.

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    7. Re:In Soviet Maryland by TheCarp · · Score: 4, Insightful

      You are both right and wrong. The police yes....however the DA and Sheriff are often both elected positions, meaning that they do have certain "requirements" if they want to be re-elected, and often respecting civil rights is unpopular with the populace; and a LOT of people are willing to give them a pass for violating rights if they come up with even a flimsy excuse.

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  3. Prequel by Roger+W+Moore · · Score: 4, Insightful

    Well after this he'll have plenty of great material for a 900-year prequel that will tackle some different, but still very troubling, social issues.

    1. Re:Prequel by kruach+aum · · Score: 3, Insightful

      Are school shootings really a social issue? I don't think it has either a hashtag nor a dedicated jezebel columnist, so how can we be sure?

  4. Slow on the take by just_another_sean · · Score: 5, Insightful

    As if the story itself could not be more horrible I can't believe the books were published in 2011 and 2013 and just now they decide to go after him. Either he pissed off someone high up and they just found a reason to go after the guy or some bored cop just got around to discovering fiction...

    Unbelievable!

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    1. Re:Slow on the take by iluvcapra · · Score: 3, Insightful

      "Fascism" was a political system practiced in several Mediterranean European countries in the early part of the 20th century. It usually entailed economic and cultural coordination by the state, a personality cult around a leader, a single-party or sham democratic system, national idealism, and militant, expansionist foreign policy. It's applicability outside of this narrow context is hotly contested, you can start fights among historians by asking "Was Falangist Spain Fascist?" or "Was Nazi Germany Fascist?"

      Committing a guy for writing a book is many things, but it ain't fascism. It's people like you who apply it scattershot to every instance of emotive negativity toward the state that have stripped the word of its "rich meaning." You should know who said this:

      In conversation, of course, it is used even more wildly than in print. I have heard it applied to farmers, shopkeepers, Social Credit, corporal punishment, fox-hunting, bull-fighting, the 1922 Committee, the 1941 Committee, Kipling, Gandhi, Chiang Kai-Shek, homosexuality, Priestley's broadcasts, Youth Hostels, astrology, women, dogs and I do not know what else.

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  5. Set In The Past by Jason+Levine · · Score: 5, Interesting

    Instead of 900 years in the future, he should have set it in the past. Or at least included dinosaurs. You'd never get in trouble for writing about Dinosaurs... Oops, sorry. Forget about that.

    In all seriousness, though, school shootings are a problem. However, I'm much more afraid of my oldest son (who begins middle school in a couple of days) getting in trouble for someone mistaking something he says/does as being a threat against the school than I am afraid that someone will walk into the building and kill a bunch of people. (My oldest is diagnosed with Asperger's Syndrome and anxiety disorder. He can tend to be clueless about "other meanings" to the things he says or how people might take offense to certain phrases that he means in an innocent manner. Not a good combination with overzealous administrators who are jumping at the slightest whiff of trouble.)

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  6. Re:Clap clap by sycodon · · Score: 3, Interesting

    Check off one more box on the list of Police State attributes we are now experiencing.

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  7. More to the story? by Media+Archivist · · Score: 3, Interesting

    All of the stories I have read about this use the same reference: WBOC. There is, as of yet, no other source. I think there is more to this story than has been reported so far. I am not suggesting the lack of facts is a coverup, just that it is still in the early stages of falling into place.

    1. Re:More to the story? by Actually,+I+do+RTFA · · Score: 3, Informative

      Well, there's also the school board's press release: http://www.dcps.k12.md.us/file...

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  8. Well Obviously... by fuzzyfuzzyfungus · · Score: 4, Funny

    Only a verifiable head case would write about a school shooting 900 years in the future. I have it on good authority that the last 'chemical/kinetic homicide' was recorded in the waning days of the Transcend Uprising in 2234. By 2914, the most common spree killings, by method, are 'engineered retroviruses', 'covert antimatter decanting', and nanoassembler override.

    Also, ever since Heuristic Neural Patterning became economically viable in the mid 24th century, 'school' exists as little more than a footnote in some of the low level neural patterning modules. I'm not sure why you'd expect to find enough people for a mass casualty incident visiting one.

  9. Not necessarily by Zontar_Thing_From_Ve · · Score: 5, Informative

    Wow. Talk about a lawsuit that you are *guaranteed* to win.

    This guy is going to make millions.

    My best friend is an attorney and we've known each other for years. He has taught me a lot about how the law really works in the USA (I live in the US too by the way). Literally anything can happen in court. You may be right in that the odds may be good that he'll be able to sue and win, but it all depends on factors we can't control or predict. The judge the case gets is important. If it's a jury trial, the outcome may have more to do with the abilities of the lawyers involved than the actual merits of the case. Then if you don't like the verdict and appeal it, you go back to square one because some appellate judges tend to favor one side over the other. You get a really conservative appellate male judge in the Scalia mold and you could find that he'll basically allow the government to do anything if they feel that public safety was potentially at risk. Keep in mind too that the author may be greatly exaggerating what happened to him and what really happened may be a lot less sensational than the news report.

    1. Re:Not necessarily by Qzukk · · Score: 4, Informative

      Keep in mind too that the author may be greatly exaggerating

      Keep in mind that nobody's spoken to the author. Sheriff Phillips is the one telling everyone that he "is currently at a location known to law enforcement and does not currently have the ability to travel anywhere."

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  10. Voltaire by MobyDisk · · Score: 5, Insightful

    It's awesome that his pen name was Voltaer which sounds like a reference to Voltaire who was fighting for civil rights and had his books burned.

    It sounds like this guy is brilliant. He was smart enough to use a pen name to hide his writings from his students, and also smart enough to choose a pen name that mocks anyone who uses these writings to defame him. Clearly, Voltaire should now be required reading by Dorchester county students.

  11. Re:Don't Compare One Guy Getting Fired... by Jason+Levine · · Score: 5, Interesting

    They aren't comparing his getting fired to Soviet-style punishment. The comparison is to the forcing him, against his will, to "an emergency medical evaluation" in a location that only the police know of and won't release any details about. Making a guy disappear because he's suspected of bad behavior isn't something that's supposed to happen in the US. (That last statement might sound a bit naive. Take it as a goal for how our country should operate instead of the totalitarian method of just letting the authorities do whatever they want for whatever reason.)

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  12. Do Everything Wrong Day by RevWaldo · · Score: 3, Insightful

    There should be a Do Everything Wrong Day where students and teachers alike do things like play dodgeball, cops and robbers, offer pats on the back and hugs, bring copies of Mad Magazine and Guns and Ammo to school, call each other names, walk to school, say they look nice today, and so on and so on. Then everyone lodges official complaints against everyone else, so administrators now will either have to either suspend everyone and then crawl through hundreds if not thousands of hearings, or agree that a lot of the rules against these things are ludicrous if not completely anti-American.

    The slogan for the day? "If everyone is in trouble, nobody is."

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  13. Re:change.org petition by Shatrat · · Score: 5, Insightful

    Well, there was the Declaration of Independence, but those people followed up the petition with gunfire.

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  14. Re:Now I just have to ... by Eunuchswear · · Score: 3, Funny

    But amid all the despair and hopelessness, people were working indefatigably to stabilise the nation and alleviate the prevalent tumult; and on 28 August 2298, the sedulousness of these committed inidividual was recompensed.

    Zow. This guy was supposed to be a "language-arts" teacher. I think we can clear the Sherifs department of any charges of overreacting, Patrick McLaw is obviously a danger to himself and society.

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  15. Stephen King and Rage by timrod · · Score: 3, Interesting

    Stephen King did something very similar to this years and years ago, under virtually the same circumstances. He wrote a book called "Rage", under a pseudonym, which was about a fictional school shooting in a setting that would've amounted to the present when the book was written. Of course, the shooter in Rage was also portrayed sympathetically (he goes insane because all of his classmates are assholes). There were even cases where the shooters in actual school shootings were carrying around copies of Rage, which made him (voluntarily) pull the book from publication.

    Yet strangely, I don't recall anything about Stephen King being arrested in the middle of the night and involuntarily committed to a mental hospital.

    1. Re:Stephen King and Rage by MiniMike · · Score: 3, Funny

      Yet strangely, I don't recall anything about Stephen King being arrested in the middle of the night and involuntarily committed to a mental hospital.

      Yeah, just who do you think is going to voluntarily go to Steven King's house in the middle of the night?

  16. There might be more to this story by wonkey_monkey · · Score: 3, Insightful

    It would be useful to know if McLaw is under investigation for behavior other than writing two novels

    Yes, it would be very useful to know that before people go writing articles about how this guy has been locked up (if that) for (and only for, seems to be the implication) writing two novels. Oop, too late.

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  17. Habeas corpus by DigitalSorceress · · Score: 4, Insightful

    Seriously, where is he now?

    How is it possible for a person to simply disappear and have their whereabouts listed as "known to law enforcement".

    IANAL, but it seems to me that someone with standing should file a writ of Habeas corpus because people should not just disappear like this in a first world country.

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  18. Reports are still too sketchy by aNonnyMouseCowered · · Score: 3, Insightful

    The reports (the Atlantic article is an opinion piece about the local reports regarding the incident) are too sketchy at this point to decide if there's a good probable cause for the teacher to be arrested (besides his having written a presumably controversial book, which is not a good reason for somebody in a presumably democratic country to get arrested).

    What it does reveal is the attitude of the local reporters who appear to be somewhat supportive or at the very least neutral to the police action. I know, a news report is supposed to be objective. But I don't see any mention in the quoted parts of the news reports about the teacher's free speech rights. The "first ammendment" comment is in the Atlantic article not the news reports. Since these are local news reporters they probably also reflect local biases. Possible threats to safety are given more importance than any free speech rights.