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Newspaper Headlines Bow To SEO Demands

prostoalex writes "News.com.com says the art of writing newspaper headlines is changing due to reliance on search engines for traffic to newspaper archives. Forget about clever puns, double entendres and witty analogies: 'News organizations that generate revenue from advertising are keenly aware of the problem and are using coding techniques and training journalists to rewrite the print headlines, thinking about what the story is about and being as clear as possible.' One big winner for now is Boston.com, The Boston Globe property, which 'had training sessions with copy editors and the night desk for the newspaper to enforce Web-optimized keyword-rich headlines suitable for search engine queries.'" Update: 10/30 14:1 GMT by KD : Corrected mis-attributed ownership: boston.com is owned by the Boston Globe, not the Boston Herald.

75 comments

  1. That's the Boston Globe's site by isdnip · · Score: 4, Informative

    Boston.com does not belong to the Herald, but to its bigger arch-rival, the Boston Globe. Actually they're part of the New York Times Company.

    1. Re:That's the Boston Globe's site by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      Why is this important?

      Did the residents of Boston call this in as a potential terrorist plot?

  2. information wants to be anthropomorphised. by macadamia_harold · · Score: 5, Funny

    Newspaper Headlines Bow to SEO Demands

    Did the SEO have hostages?

    1. Re:information wants to be anthropomorphised. by dubl-u · · Score: 1

      Newspaper Headlines Bow to SEO Demands
      Did the SEO have hostages?

      Yes. You, and eight zillion people who are getting most of their news via things other than dead trees.
  3. A particularly apt headline by otisaardvark · · Score: 1
  4. Headlines? by despik · · Score: 2, Insightful

    Since when search engines care only about the headlines?

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    1. Re:Headlines? by kongit · · Score: 1, Interesting

      Since search engines somewhat care about links to pages and most front pages of news sites have headlines as links to the stories, I would assume that headlines on news sites have some significance. Additionally, look at http://boston.com/ and count the number of headlines on the home page.

    2. Re:Headlines? by rvw · · Score: 1

      Since when search engines care only about the headlines?

      Search engines read the HTML, and evaluate it according to its structure. And in general a big heading like H1 is more important than a H2-heading, which is more important than a paragraph. So the search engine values big headings more, and ranks words found in it higher. The same goes for the order of headings, keywords and description tags, the title of the page, url-path of the page and the domain name.

  5. Old news; dupe by 1u3hr · · Score: 4, Informative

    See This Boring Headline Is Written for Google, NYT April 2006. Covered by Slashdot.

    1. Re:Old news; dupe by anagama · · Score: 2, Insightful

      Ya beat me to it. I suppose this is a way in which "news" sites can cut back on reporters yet still generate content which gets them search results -- simply republish old news 8-12 months later. In this way, we're not only doomed to repeat history, we're doomed to read about it twice (at least).

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    2. Re:Old news; dupe by bazald · · Score: 3, Funny

      Slashdot should train its editors to put "dupe" in its headlines! That way, we'll have an easier time finding the latest Slashdot dupes using Google news!

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  6. What?! by JanneM · · Score: 4, Insightful

    What are you saying? We'll get clear, concise headlines that actually summarize the story? Oh, the horror, oh the humanity! Will the pain never end?!

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    1. Re:What?! by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      I never thought it would come to this. Can I beat on the people that constantly put puns the headlines, now that they are no longer needed? Pretty Please?

    2. Re:What?! by GMontag · · Score: 0

      Same thing that I was thinking. What on earth is wrong with headlines actually describing the story they are attached to?

    3. Re:What?! by vic-traill · · Score: 2, Interesting

      Well, straight news headlines are one thing, I suppose. However, sportswriters are damned near defined by the puns that they do linguistic flips and twists to get into their headlines and stories.

      I will confess that while I groan and turn my nose up like everyone else, I secretly admire headlines like 'Bull riders in chute-out tonight at the Corel' (from when Ottawa's Scotiabank Place - blech - was called the Corel Centre). It takes Glengarry Glen Ross-sized brass balls to put your name beside that teaser.

      So, while I do appreciate the desirability of headlines that actually have something to do with the story, it would be a shame to see all headlines homogenized in a quest to improve SE rankings and thus eyeballs for advertising.

      The Guardian is a perfect example of how a little guy can look real big on-line; while it is the second smallest national print newspaper in the U.K., it gets more than 7.5 million views per month, more than a quarter of those views going to readers in the U.S.

      http://www.ojr.org/ojr/business/1063229872.php

      Emily Bell - Editor in Chief of the Guardian Unlimited, which is what the on-line version is called - attributes the bulk of the Guardian's on-line success to the high volume of blog and Google links to Guardian articles, a result, she says, of *not* requiring registration to read the Guardian on-line.

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    4. Re:What?! by Seraphim_72 · · Score: 2, Insightful
      No, what you will get instead is:

      HMS Britannia's swan song as she is sunk for new reef, fisheries to benefit
      Titles made to titillate, no thanks I will take the newspaper's bad ones instead. All they have to do is slightly inform, not bow to an algorithm.

      Sera

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    5. Re:What?! by vague_ascetic · · Score: 1

      It would mean the end to Drudge....

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  7. Witty headlines. by TapeCutter · · Score: 4, Funny

    Reminds me of the time when Virgin airlines lost out on gate allocations at Sydney airport. The bussiness headline read "Virgin get screwed".

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    1. Re:Witty headlines. by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      third army push bottles up germans

    2. Re:Witty headlines. by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      I think "Virgin screwed at airport" would be even better.

    3. Re:Witty headlines. by netbuzz · · Score: 1

      I've told this story so many times I'm no longer sure if it's true or apochryphal: The Northeastern News, my college newspaper in Boston, is covering the debut of the first-ever women's crew team back in the '70s. Headline:
      "Virgin Crew Strokes Charles at Dawn."

    4. Re:Witty headlines. by empaler · · Score: 1

      Virgin denied access to mile high club?

  8. About time by taustin · · Score: 1, Insightful

    Newspapers that use headlines that actually tell you what the story is aobut, rather than making a cheap joke out of someone's misey? If the profession of journalism had any integrity, this would never have been a story, because the offensiveness of turning news headlines in to jokes would never have happened in the first place.

    1. Re:About time by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      A call for integrity in the journalism profession? On Slashdot? My sides are splitting with irony!

    2. Re:About time by tinkertim · · Score: 1

      Newspapers that use headlines that actually tell you what the story is aobut, rather than making a cheap joke out of someone's misey? If the profession of journalism had any integrity, this would never have been a story, because the offensiveness of turning news headlines in to jokes would never have happened in the first place.
      Lets look back on that story about Dick Cheney shooting his lawyer buddy in the face with a shotgun. What this article is talking about doing is reducing the headlines within the html semantics (h1 - h5) to accurately summarize in as few words (all unique) as possible.

      Often, this is the same practice employed by someone wanting to inject a spin on the headline. Lets say for instance, I needed to reduce the story about Cheney, it would probably read something like :

      h1 - "Cheney shoots lawyer in the face"

      And I'd augment with my supporting details in h2 - h5 tags, iterating through them.

      h2 - "Tragic hunting accident" ... etc. Someone reading my headline would immediately smell a spin ;)

      My point is (and yes I have one) is that this would have a reverse effect. Headlines will most likely seem even funnier since the irony was unintentional and most likely machine generated, yet similar to what a human with a sense of humor or sarcasm would conjure.

    3. Re:About time by Joebert · · Score: 1

      Why do machines get to start taking the fun jobs, yet the kid at McDonalds still fucks our orders up every time ?

      Give the machines thoose jobs & let everyone else screw off & make jokes all day.

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    4. Re:About time by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      Newspapers that use headlines that actually tell you what the story is aobut, rather than making a cheap joke out of someone's misey?

      1. Why do you think the headlines (and stories) suck so much on CNN's web site?

      2. Here's my catchy headline "Turner Flips Boston The Bird".

  9. Good by Karma+Vampire · · Score: 0

    Arent we all sick of seeing the same cliched "witty" and "clever" headlines?

  10. Too bad by RichPowers · · Score: 1

    During my brief stint studying journalism, the editors had a hoot writing clever and witty headlines. Off the top of my head: "Bond goes up to bat" (describing a school bond measure on the ballot) and "Political party poppycock" (a column discussing political absurdities). But the times are a-changin'. If you want Google News or some other aggregator to pick up your story, you need a clear headline. This isn't limited to news media either. I've noticed that more and more videogame review sites will come up with a killer summary line that stands out when it's aggregated on sites like Metacritic. ("The experience of playing this game can be roughly compared to swimming through a pile of sewage to get to a diamond ring," from a review of X3: Reunion that appears on Metacritic.)

    1. Re:Too bad by gmack · · Score: 1

      I have rarely enjoyed headline puns and usually just find them irritating instead. I'm sure the journalists think it's funny because other journalists think it's funny.

      Kind of like webcomic artists who think characters talking to the writer is somehow witty because the other webcomics all do the same.

      It's not funny. It might have been funny the first 10 times it was done but now it's stale and boring. If you ask me the search engines have done them a huge favor by forcing them to put an end to it.

    2. Re:Too bad by flacco · · Score: 1
      During my brief stint studying journalism, the editors had a hoot writing clever and witty headlines. Off the top of my head: "Bond goes up to bat" (describing a school bond measure on the ballot) and "Political party poppycock" (a column discussing political absurdities).



      are those supposed to be funny or clever?


      aside from being useless, annoying, and distracting, "clever" headlines sometimes produce misinformation.


      for example, consider this recent headline from linuxtoday.com:


      "Fluendo Media Decoders Sound Bad to Open Source Advocates"


      if you're scanning the headlines without your "cheeky two-bit punster" glasses on, you might come away with the impression that there is a serious sound quality issue with fluendo decoders. only if you read the article do you realize that this is just a hilaaaaarious play on words by the author, and then you laugh and laugh and laugh! hahahaha! i can't stop laughing!


      these artificial, forced puns should not be confused with straight headlines that by grace of circumstance are amusing all by themselves. consider this NY Post headline from days gone by:


      "Headless Body Found in Topless Bar"


      see? great headline, accurate and informative, and doesn't have to resort to any smarmy manipulations by the writer to be amusing.

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  11. Thank God by pavon · · Score: 2, Insightful

    Newspaper headlines are horrible. Between the fact that english has far too many words that could be both nouns or verbs depending on context, that proper often nouns cannot be discerned from normal words when everything is capitalized, and journalists being way too clever for their own good leads to monstrosities of randomly juxtaposed words that cannot be parsed until you have read at least the first couple paragraphs of the article.

    1. Re:Thank God by Anonymous+McCartneyf · · Score: 1

      Yeah--but the attempts to fix this problem is definitely making things tough for the writers of the Tonight Show with Jay Leno. They're using a lot more flyers, menus, and police blotter entries than they used to...

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    2. Re:Thank God by markhb · · Score: 1

      You don't suppose they'd actually try writing, would you? Maybe it's time for a revival of the Mighty Leno Art Players!

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    3. Re:Thank God by Anonymous+McCartneyf · · Score: 1

      Awww--I like their "Headlines" feature.
      They do try writing. The monologues are one of the best sources of horrific comedy anywhere--even Jay knows it. This does not stop us from watching--though I do it only on nights when I think "Headlines" will air.

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  12. About Time by germansausage · · Score: 1

    Making them write a headline that tells a reader what the story is about. Oh dear Gods Nooo!! How cruel and inhuman.

    Who knows what horrors this will lead to. Next they'll be forced into _proofreading_ their stories and using correct spelling, grammar and punctuation.

    While they are fixing things maybe they could abolish the "Grim Task" rule. You know the one I mean. The rule that says any time people are hauling bodies out of the scene of some disaster they can only use the phrase "Grim Task" to describe it. - "Today rescue crews began the grim task of recovering bodies from the......."

  13. Yes, but by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    Some headlines are just better left where they are :

    http://www.thesun.co.uk/article/0,,2-2004040451,00 .html

  14. As A Journalist... by TyrWanJo · · Score: 5, Insightful

    I worked for a couple years on a School Newspaper, http://www.dailyillini.com/The Daily Illini, at the University of Illinois, and although it was a School paper, it was at the time the top rated University paper in America, and also in direct competition with the local news paper, The News Gazette. One of the things that i learned was that there is a constant tension between journalists and the advertisers that make the paper run. We were independent, we relied, and the paper still does rely, entirely on ads to cover the costs of running the paper and paying the journalists. People always gripe about how much journalism is a whore to the forces of the general populous, but, in order for a paper to sustain itself, it has to be.

    Responsible journalism takes a hit from the interestes of keeping a paper running - and it is always a struggle to determine which stories are best suited to these interests. The fact that headlines are changing is, frankly, not surprising, except in the fact that this change has come so late. Print journalism is floundering in a morass of uncertainty, people rarely pick up the paper anymore, and insted get their information online. Previous posters have said that headlines are dumb, ill-concieved, etc, however, headlines are the most, and often, only part of a paper ever read, and copy editors, who are responsible for headlines, often just sit around fixing grammar, spelling, and ap style, their last bastion of hope was these ridiculous headlines. How do you cram as much information as possible in to two or three words, and keep people interested in the story? If the headline is sucessful, a person will continue reading, if not, at least he or she will get the information she needs.

    The alteration of headlines is both disheartening and expected. It is that ugly journalist versus ads department rearing its ugly head - something has to die in order for the paper to live. Views and click-throughs now generate the capital that print advertising once garnered, so it is unfourtunately imperative for newspapers to change with the times. It is an end to an era of whimsy generated by underpaid and understimulated spell-checkers, and I think, however inevitable, it is kind of sad.

  15. Backlinks? by adambha · · Score: 1

    And when do they start trading backlinks to build page rank?

  16. Re:A sublte form of censorship Paris Hilton by daeg · · Score: 1

    Alas, Paris Hilton, that you didn't put Paris Hilton in your post subject, thus dooming your post to the eternity of never coming up in a search again, Parison Hilton.

    I don't understand, Paris Hilton, why you would connect simple news headlines to mass censorship, that seems like a pretty far leap that only you, Paris Hilton, would make.

  17. Uh, why? by jd · · Score: 4, Informative
    It seems perfectly easy to have the page use an SSI to patch in a "traditional" headline for human readers and a "searchable" headline for webcrawlers. It involves a conditional SSI that checks the browser ID, an else clause, and an end of conditional. Three lines. Since these pages are all dynamically generated from a template, all you do is surround each of the headline areas. A few minutes work, not much more, and if the conditional makes an error, the alternative is perfectly good.

    (Search engines don't like you replacing the entire page with a bunch of keywords, but since the engine is going to get the massaged headline no matter what, improving the interface for the users doesn't seem to be too great a sacrifice.)

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    1. Re:Uh, why? by jZnat · · Score: 4, Informative

      And that's a surefire way to get banned from Google's results. They don't like it when people show different content dependant on user agent.

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    2. Re:Uh, why? by Breakfast+Pants · · Score: 1

      You are totally off. People link to stories using their headlines. That is where the Google ranking will primarily come from, the anchor text in people's links.

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  18. Sticks Nix Hick Pix by MDMurphy · · Score: 1

    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sticks_Nix_Hick_Pix

    Headlines are different for a newspaper where you're trying to draw attention to a story when someone's already on the page. The reader is already looking there, you need to catch their attention to a portion of the page, you're not attracting them to a paper on a rack. For readers who are searching for a specific story, clear and concise is the way to be found.

    There's still room for "style" in headlines. If it's your paper ( webpage) someone's looking at, use catchy titles to draw the eye. On pages that are specific to a story, stick with the clear and concise. By that time you've got their attention and it's the time to start giving the information they are looking for.

    Search engines are going to deep link to the story's page anyway, so there's no need to resort to funny at that point.

  19. Very Important! by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    Actually, it's not important at all. Who cares? "Stuff that matters"... Bull! Any given single gluon on the dark side of the Moon has more relevance to any given Slashdot reader than the entire Earth and all it's past, current, and future residents combined will ever matter to the Universe. Go crawl in a hole and ponder the worthlessness of your existence.

  20. sEo, not sCo by philo_enyce · · Score: 3, Funny
    man, on first glance i read that as:

    "Newspaper Headlines Bow to SCO Demands"

    phew.

    philo

    1. Re:sEo, not sCo by Peyna · · Score: 1

      Glad to know I'm not the only one, it took me about a minute after reading the blurb to realize this had nothing do with SCO.

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  21. Tags? by Ando[evilmedic] · · Score: 3, Insightful

    It seems to me that this would be the perfect use of tags - let the papers keep their current style of headline, but tag the stories for parsing by google news et al.

    1. Re:Tags? by Anders+Andersson · · Score: 1

      Indeed, and subject tags (keywords) have been used for ages in academic papers for precisely this purpose (indexing, not even limited to computerized indexing). However, I guess those few newspaper editors who even barely understand the concept are afraid they would have to display all those tags to the human reader at the beginning of each article, just like the printed scientific journals do it.

      The article mentions tweaking other fields beside the headline as well, such as the page title going into the browser window bar. Still, they are only talking about items visible to the user, not about hidden tags. The Google search engine may be dyslectic or blind, but it can read HTML in the dark.

      <H1>Now, if They Wanted to Support Full-Text Indexing, They Would Probably Suggest Putting the Entire Story in the Headline Itself.</H1>

      It's hard to train old dogs to deal with a new medium. And it's not likely to get better quick, as long as the young dogs keep being trained by the old ones, and they all insist that a web page must be designed using the experience gained over the centuries designing its printed counterpart. Witness how difficult it seems to be for most web page designers to grasp the difference between <I> and <EM>, between <B> and <STRONG>.

  22. Re:A sublte form of censorship by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    Copied from slacktivist.typepad.com in response to a near identical post:

    So far as I can tell, America Deceived was never available through Amazon because the publisher (iUniverse) never offered it for sale through any channel other than their own website. iUniverse can be reached at 1-800-AUTHORS, if you wish to confirm this for yourself.

    Personally, I suspect you already knew that, though. After all, it's a nice little marketing tactic. "This book about government conspiracies, and Amazon won't sell it - because of a government conspiracy!Quick! Buy it from here before they get to Google, too!"

    Even though Google Books has nothing to do with the link you provided, anyway. Which just happens to appear on many comments in many political weblogs, and nowhere else. Could it be that these comments are being placed by employees of iUniverse in an attempt to spur sales of a book that has been panned by every reviewer for (among other things) unintelligible grammar?

    See? I can dream up conspiracies, too.

    Oh, and iUniverse's website describes it as a "novel", which generally means "fiction". Which makes the conspiracy against it seem even weaker.

  23. Gay Terrorist Stem Cell Baby Kills Environment by pipingguy · · Score: 1

    Should I add more keywords?

    1. Re:Gay Terrorist Stem Cell Baby Kills Environment by Joebert · · Score: 1

      Start it with Micheal Jacksons' & you've got gold.

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  24. Try Chinese! by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    Seriously- in written Chinese, single characters will have multiple definitions, and words are often made from several characters, which can be read separately for a different meaning, extremely rich ground for jokes. This is ignoring the incredible number of generally understood metaphors and traditional sayings in Chinese culture. On top of that, there are tons of homophones, near homophones (because of tones), and multiple words with the same definitions, which makes punning a national pastime.

    Somehow, though, the mainland newspapers don't seem to have much of a sense of humor.

  25. Re:As A Journalist... by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    *i*, currently, study, journalism, my, self, and, this, seems, quite, frag, mented...

  26. Planners Spanner Banners! by haakondahl · · Score: 1
    If only we had some way to signal the computer about the form of text, without cluttering up the reader's content. If only...

    This is a solution urgently seeking a problem. Sounds like somebody's Master's Thesis being taken out for a walk.

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    1. Re:Planners Spanner Banners! by mdfst13 · · Score: 1

      If only we had some way to signal the computer about the form of text, without cluttering up the reader's content. Yeah, but if we had that, people would just abuse it to draw traffic to their sites, so we'd get a new kind of search engine. The new kind of search engine would figure that people want to find search terms where the content matches the search terms rather than where the meta-information matches the search terms. This new type of search engine would give more credit to headings (which are bigger and easier to read). Further, it might lower pages in its search rankings if the meta-information does not match the content. The search company could also give extra points for having links to the page having text match the search keywords. Call it link scoring or pigeon ranking or something. Because the people who start the search engine would need to be kind of nerdy, they should name it after a really big number, e.g. infinity or Infiniti (misspellings are kewl).

      Too bad Infiniti's already taken, so I guess we'll just have to stick with Google...
  27. maybe slashdot.... by acedotcom · · Score: 0

    maybe slashdot should try clearer, more concise headlines? Seriously, I know i am not the only one that gets suckered into reading some BS story about baseball players http://apple.slashdot.org/article.pl?sid=07/02/01/ 0425216

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  28. also removes length restrictions by marhar · · Score: 1

    One other interesting fact about newspaper headline writing is that the headline writer is given a character count by the page editor -- i.e., a 3-column story with a certain type size would need a certain number of characters to fill in the headline.

    There were some other style guidelines regarding how lines could be split ("and" couldn't be the first word on a continuation line, for example), so it was rather impressive to see what gems could be made with the various constraints.

  29. Being informative and witty by roskakori · · Score: 2, Interesting
    From the submitter:

    Forget about clever puns, double entendres and witty analogies
    It doesn't have to be this way. As a couter example, consider The Register: they typically use a main caption that is informative, and a smaller sub caption that attempts to be witty. Some quotes from their current front page:
    • Vista encryption 'no threat' to computer forensics
      Who needs a backdoor when users leave the Windows open?
    • Officials sued for $3m for disciplining MySpace spoofers
      Bloodied principal, muzzled students
    • Internet users play tag with online content: study
      Folksonomies
    • Romania: Software piracy made us what we are today
      Thank-you, Mr Gates
    I could do without the clever parts though.
    1. Re:Being informative and witty by dodobh · · Score: 1

      Or Slashdot's posting departments.

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  30. Re:As A Journalist... by jez9999 · · Score: 0, Flamebait

    One of the things that i learned was that there is a constant tension between journalists and the advertisers that make the paper run.

    Did you run adverts dressed as news, or did the advertisers get an Opinion Center?

  31. Retarded by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    They need only add a subheading for SEO purposes, they can use display: none to relegate the descriptive title to pure search engine spam.

    Search engine spammers are the last people who should be defining language use.

  32. Re:As A Journalist... by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    "...forces of the general populous..."
    Who is general populous?

    Did you mean population? Did you mean populace? Did you mean the whims of the mob?

    "...understimulated spell-checkers..."

    Judging by your post, your spell-checker may be comatose.

    These might seem to be minor points on any other discussion board, but when it comes to the issue of the public's trust in information provided as long as it's paid for in advance, minor points can--and do--destroy the source's credibility.

  33. just add paris hilton to the title by jsepeta · · Score: 1

    if you want the title of your article to get more hits on google, just add paris hilton to the title. great, just what we need is news services being more blatantly manipulative.

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  34. Good idea but not particularly new by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 1, Insightful

    So basically, what they're saying is that headlines have to make sense out of context? It's good practice. With printed headlines, you just need to move your eyes down a bit to read the article or look at a picture if the headline isn't immediately obvious. On the Web, it's a lot more effort (comparatively, clicking a mouse is much more effort than moving your eyes). On a number of occasions, I've clicked an unclear headline only to find that it was about something completely unrelated to what I expected.

    In any case, this isn't new. In 1998, usability type Jakob Nielsen said that Web headlines and the like need to be clear.

  35. For every headline there is a season by Dachannien · · Score: 1

    I know I'm inviting The Wrath of Slashdot by even mentioning Fox News, but their website (and probably other news websites as well) uses the clever headlines for links on their front page, but then gives the boring-yet-informative headline on the actual article.

    For example, the article officially titled "Report: Giant Weights to Be Dropped Into Mouth of Erupting Mud Volcano" received the link text "Can Giant Balls Plug Erupting Volcano?"

  36. Evil by gridsleep · · Score: 1

    Anything that limits creativity is evil and should be destroyed.

  37. Hed + Eyebrow by Roblimo · · Score: 4, Informative

    On the Internet, all a reader sees of a story on a site's main page are the hed and lede (journo shorthand for "headline" and "lead paragraph"), which makes them more important than they are in a paper publication where a reader can glance down a bit and see more of the story.

    Some online publications are now using an "eyebrow" sentence below the hed -- essentially a long subhed, in effect a brief story summary.

    I like this style because it gives readers -- and search engines -- a good idea of what's in the story without forcing the writer to load its first paragraph with too many facts. Instead, the writer has the option of opening a story with a quote, a description, an anecdote or something else instead of the traditional, terse lede.

    News has always been tailored to its delivery medium. The "inverted pyramid" style, where a story is written so that the most important facts come first, and others are delivered in decreasing order of importance until the story trails off into irrelevance, was developed to make "cutting" a story to fit a given amount of space simple. The typesetter simply took sentences off the end of the story until it was the right length.

    Back in the days of hand-set type, and even later, during the pre-offset Linotype (hot metal typesetting machine) period, the type was set backwards, as a mirror image, so editing a story with any kind of judgement during the typesetting process was a time-consuming task. It was easier to whack the end, sentence by sentence -- and many newspapers used one-sentence paragraphs to make this even easier -- and if a story ended up a bit short the typesetter could stick in a small-type "filler" story chosen for size, not relevance.

    (Fillers were once a whole separate wire service genre. AP's fillers almost always contained the phrase, "It was reported yesterday." You would read a story about local political malfeasance, and at the end, usually in italics, you'd see a little piece that said someting like, "Hummingbirds often migrate 2000 miles or more every Spring and Fall, it was reported yesterday." Fillers not only filled the type case -- which had to be "locked down" to keep all the type from falling out when it was put on the press, but brought zest to newspapers. I think I last saw a newspaper filler in 1974 or so, but I still miss fillers. Slashdot quotes of the day just aren't the same...)

    In TV news, the basic story style tends to be a spoken hed, possibly with a brief shot of the scene, followed by a "more after this" statement, then a commercial break. The linear format of television broadcasting, combined with its dependence on inline ads for revenue, makes this format the standard one, as ingrained in TV people as the inverted pyramid syle is in newspaper journalists.

    And so on. I assume direct neural "full sense" info delivery will create another whole set of story styles.

    The medium may not be the message, but it plays a large part in determining how that message is delivered.

    Headlines written to please search engines rate no more than a small sidebar in the endless tale of media evolution. And sidebars.... they rate a whole rant of their own. Deciding what information should be in a story's main body and what should be relegated to sidebar status is as much of an art as headline writing....

    1. Re:Hed + Eyebrow by Teancum · · Score: 1

      Just to add a little bit of extra here, that the "inverted pyramid" style was originally created due to the deficiencies of the medium that was used to transmit messages throughout most of the 19th Century: The electric telegraph.

      If you thought communications systems have a horrid "uptime" now, it is downright miserable when the telegraph first was up and going. Having a good connection for a few minutes or hours was considered good service, and it would often go down even for "natural events", much less from ranchers or Indians who would push down the telegraph poles deliberately because they thought it adversly affected the "buffalo" or the cattle. Or simply seemed ugly.

      It didn't help during the U.S. Civil War that reporters trying to send messages back to their editors that telegraph lines where also a deliberate target of sabotage either.

      The point here being that the telegraph reinforced the inverted pyramid, because for larger stories it was common for the final few paragraphs simply to be cut off when the telegraph line when down. That perhaps the story would be re-transmitted later on, but that would often result in missing deadlines and more.

      There are two other "news delivery" mediums that you also missed out here: radio and (movie) news reels. Of these the news reels are perhaps the most interesting because they set many of the preceedents for television news coverage, even though they did overlap TV news broadcasts for a brief period of time. Both of them had some very interesting methodologies for their delivery that were also tied directly to their media, and are unique to all other kinds of news media delivery.

  38. My favorite New York Post headline.... by jalvear · · Score: 0

    It was on the cover, and it was a news story about a dead person found in a strip club:

    "Headless Body Found in Topless Bar"

    Here are some other interesting headlines: http://nymag.com/nymetro/news/anniversary/35th/n_8 568/

  39. "As a journalist", you should be ashamed by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    That's a wordy, grammatically incorrect blob of text, and you should capitalize "I" and not "School". Like so many U of I grads you got a crappy education (while convincing yourself it was a "top rated School", so my sympathies. Comparing the DI to the News Gazoo isn't really a smart idea, anyway. The News Gazette has what, a 5th grade reading level?

  40. Good riddance to the "clever pun" headlines by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    When I worked as a reporter, my greatest pet peeve was some dimwit section editor putting a cutesy headline on my story.

  41. Old dogs and reinventing the wheel by cdrguru · · Score: 1
    One of the huge problems of the "Internet generation" is almost an utter refusal to accept that anyone over the age of about 30 knows anything of value. I have seen so much that indicates a clear progression:
    1. Discard all previous knowledge about subject in favor of new stuff
    2. Much confusion reigns and bad things happen
    3. Someone makes a decision that to some is faintly reminiscent of the old ways
    4. New stuff is intelligently mixed with lessons of the past, leading to much goodness.


    The problem with much of the Internet age is that it step 1 is done immediately without question and by the time step 4 is reached years have gone by.