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Reason Excoriates Paper On "Glaciers, Gender, and Science" (reason.com)

An anonymous reader writes: Reason.com's Robby Soave criticizes an article published in the journal Progress in Human Geography, for being "utterly incomprehensible," and "the least essential paper ever written." Entitled Glaciers, Gender, and Science--A feminist glaciology framework for global environmental climate change, the article is authored by researchers at the University of Oregon and funded by a grant from the National Science Foundation. Despite being filled with "buzzwords -- colonialism, marginalization, masculinist discourses, etc. -- with such frequency that the entire thing comes off like a joke," the article is accompanied by an enthusiastic press release from the University of Oregon, stating that "glacier research has been intertwined with gender relations, masculine cultures of exploration, geopolitics, and individual and institutional power. That, in turn, led to glacier-related academic and governmental jobs being predominantly filled by men. ... Melting glaciers are today considered a national security risk for numerous countries,' [one of the researchers] said. 'Power and colonialism have shaped the science.' That message is detailed extensively in the paper."

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  1. Funded by the NSF by Crashmarik · · Score: 5, Insightful

    Your tax dollars at work.

    1. Re:Funded by the NSF by arth1 · · Score: 4, Insightful

      Here's an ugly truth:

      Democracy must pander to the majority, which happens to be women.

      And there's not much you can do about it.

      Democracy doesn't imply that every human has a vote, nor that each vote has equal weight. Plato, for example, wanted to limit voting to the educated. I tend to agree,
      Others have had votes with different weighting, much like some publicly traded companies have.

    2. Re:Funded by the NSF by jtayon · · Score: 5, Interesting

      Athen used to be fine and non imperialist until it stopped being an imperfect democracy to embrace Plato's "meritocratic" Republic based on fame and money.

      Then, greek civilization disappeared in a war driven by the private interest of a few incompetent selfish people.

      Such as Alcibiade, the one described as Socrates lover. Plato's master.

      Remember Periclès words that echoes Eisenhower's. Ploutocracy is the ennemy of democracy.

    3. Re:Funded by the NSF by Jhon · · Score: 5, Interesting

      "Plato, for example, wanted to limit voting to the educated. I tend to agree,"

      In the US, once upon a time, there was a layer of separation between the people and the federal government (the exception being the House of Representatives). Senators were mostly appointed by state legislatures and states would select who they wanted to be President by a popular vote and electors would actually VOTE but their votes were weighted by the number of representatives they had in congress (not quite, but close to populations).

      We've been moving away from that and more towards direct democracy. Senators are now popularly elected. Some states are toying with the idea of splitting electors. Supreme court justices are now appointed based on their views rather than their understanding of the constitution and their qualifications as jurists. Few people seem to understand that democracy doesn't exist in the US to promote freedom and liberty -- it exists as a safeguard against the tyranny of a government that over extends power beyond what the Constitution allows.

      To our founders, democracy was just as if not more scary than monarchy. Democracy, as scary as it was, was reined in and used as a tool to give the people a chance to "undo" or "fix" a government that went too far. The Constitution not only defines the governments powers, but by design, limited the damage the "mob" could do by limiting their voice -- the Constitution, which SHOULD be protecting our rights, liberties and freedoms has been nibbled away by rulings not based on reason and the constitution but by passions.

      I honestly don't know if this snowball can be stopped. One of our nations rally crys at birth was "no taxation without representation". We have countless examples of the opposite (which I believe to be equally bad) -- representation without taxation. With both the Senate and House being elected by the people directly and the constitution being "interpreted" based on things other than it's intent and a senate (directly elected by the people) it makes it impossible to get a Justice appointed who doesn't fit the majority parties "group think". There is very little to counter the will of the people who have no skin in the game to ask for more as they don't need to pay for it.

      We can focus all we want on the 1% -- but the fact is if you seize all their wealth in the US, you wouldn't even be able to cover a few years of deficit spending (never mind paying the debt) -- and in the meantime you've wreaked the economy.

    4. Re:Funded by the NSF by kwbauer · · Score: 3, Informative

      Have you not been paying attention, man. The whole point of identity politics is to be able to more easily inform people that they are out of line, out of step with their "peers" and to be able to denigrate those that don't fit the stereotype as "identify haters".

      There is no "identities all the way down" because those at the top decide which identities are valid, who fits the identity and which opinion the identity will have.

    5. Re: Funded by the NSF by ArmoredDragon · · Score: 4, Interesting

      You didn't necessarily have to be a land owner (and certainly didn't have to be wealthy) to vote in the early days. Back in those days the only way it was possible to prove that you actually lived in the state whose government you were voting for is if you had to have some kind of proof in public record that you resided in said state. This was to prevent people from hopping over the border into the next state in order to game its election (this did actually happen in those days, hence the existence of laws aimed at preventing it.) That didn't necessarily have to be land, however having your name written on a deed for a piece of immovable property was a really easy (and common) way of achieving this.

      Wealth never did enter into the equation, and neither did being white. In fact, after Independence was declared (1776) and both before and after the constitution was even a thing, (1788) blacks did actually have the right to vote in 7 of the original 13 states.

      Transient/homeless people were able to vote once public record keeping got much better. Remember that back in those days, there were no ID cards, no social security numbers, etc.

  2. Another Sokal affair ? by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 5, Insightful

    https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sokal_affair

    1. Re:Another Sokal affair ? by youngone · · Score: 3, Insightful

      That was my first thought. Someone's trolling.

    2. Re:Another Sokal affair ? by Qbertino · · Score: 5, Insightful

      The problem is, that there are papers around that make the sokal affair essay sound sane - and they're meant as a serious contribution to science. I've seen the bizarest of bullshit being taught in schools, with sociology leading the pack in the bullshit bingo camp, closely followed by just about anything that people in agencies do.

      There are scientific articles out there that make less sense and are dumber than anything you can find on reality TV. And I'm not exaggerating.

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      We suffer more in our imagination than in reality. - Seneca
    3. Re:Another Sokal affair ? by hawkeyeMI · · Score: 4, Informative

      This is the PI. I'm afraid it looks "legit". https://honors.uoregon.edu/fac...

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    4. Re:Another Sokal affair ? by phantomfive · · Score: 3, Informative

      It builds on the ideas set forth in Simians, Cyborgs, and Women. It's a social science paper, not a climate science paper, so that's why there's some confusion.

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      "First they came for the slanderers and i said nothing."
    5. Re:Another Sokal affair ? by NicBenjamin · · Score: 4, Informative

      Doubt it.

      If you actually understand the terms she's using, the paper sounds fine. Or at least well within the normal traditions of feminism in the social sciences.

      Men tend to be into very specific areas of interest. Which means they'll research those areas. That's not bad, and none of the individual men involved are doing anything wrong, and women tend to do the same thing. As a personal example, when I talk military history women tend to completely tune me out. When they're talking about things that are objectively speaking pretty important (ie: my immortal soul) that don't fit into my "dudes should be into this" box I tune them out. This also happens in the sciences, but in many sciences (particularly hard sciences with no human element) it's completely irrelevant.

      This paper is about glacier-climate change research. And research into climate change frequently involves human elements because you're trying to figure out what can humans do to a) fix, b) mitigate, and/or c) respond to the problem. In those papers, half of what you're talking about is women doing women stuff. And a largely-male researcher base is likely to ignore some things that a female researcher-base would make the main headline of their paper.

      Which is pretty much what feminists have been doing in social sciences ever since there have been feminists to be in the social sciences.

  3. gotta be a joke, yes? by youngjeffrey · · Score: 4, Funny

    Can't believe the final sentence of the abstract is not a giveaway: "thereby leading to more just and equitable ... human-ice interactions." Wha??

    1. Re:gotta be a joke, yes? by Ken+D · · Score: 3, Interesting

      ... it's to be published... in the April issue?

  4. My take by brennz · · Score: 4, Informative

    SJW agitprop masquerading as science.

    They don't call it cultural marxism for nothing!

    1. Re:My take by brennz · · Score: 3, Informative

      Paul Weyrich created it I think, but it is now very popular with libertarians, and the libertarian left

      The term has come up a bit with the gamergate vs anti-GG crowd, and discussions on the "regressive left"

  5. Re:So... by khallow · · Score: 3, Insightful

    What makes you think it's not news? And why does it matter that the story comes from Reason?

  6. Possible explanation by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 3, Interesting

    The part about melting glaciers and the impacts on the security of countries is legitimate. Even in highly developed countries, water is a highly sought resource. It's essential for power generation, agriculture, sanitation, and human consumption. This has resulted in legal squabbles in the United States, especially in which individuals, businesses, and states have agreements to be allocated a certain amount of water while others have a demonstrable need for the same water. In some states, this has led to laws making it illegal to even do things like collecting rain that falls on your own property. Places like California and the northern Great Plains depend on melting glaciers and snow pack for a significant amount of their water. That's also true elsewhere in the world, such as Tibet and Nepal, where water from melting glaciers in the Himalayas is a hugely important source of water to the region. While there have been significant steps toward gender equality in highly developed parts of the world, there are more traditional gender roles in many less developed parts of the world. This is especially true in places where it's frequent for men to leave their families and take jobs in other cities and countries as migrant workers to provide for their families while women remain in their homes. It's very possible in those regions that the impacts of water shortages will be different for women than for men. The research isn't entirely inexplicable, unlike what the summary author would want you to believe.

    1. Re:Possible explanation by harperska · · Score: 4, Insightful

      I think you're right. However, the paper could have gotten to the point quicker, and done more to actually further that argument. Whereas instead, it seems to be written by somebody with a feminist axe to grind, and almost seems to intentionally bait the anti-sjw crowd. Most of the paper seems to follow the argument of "Women's contribution to science tends to be overlooked" => "Glaciology is science" => "Therefore we ought to focus on women's contributions to glaciology". This may be true, but it comes across as a lot of fist shaking, and not a lot of getting to the point about what specific advancements in that field in particular have been overlooked due to male-dominated science. It reads more like an undergrad term paper written for a women's study class than something belonging in a serious academic journal.

  7. Re:Progress in Human Geography? by nava68 · · Score: 5, Informative

    Actually Human Geography is how humans create and maintain spacial interactions and how those interactions may form space. It is just a way of dividing geography into different branches (human geography and physical geography). And since I both studied and lectured geography (specializing in human geography and regional econometrics) - I haven't dug through the whole article, but it seems rather legit albeit more about how glaciological knowledge is created and how this knowledge is influenced by gender and how some of the presentation of that knowledge to the public has a strong gender bias.

  8. Re:Documented Truth, just Unsettling by JaredOfEuropa · · Score: 5, Insightful

    It is utter rubbish. Please do read the conclusion: "a broader consideration of ‘cryoscapes’, the human, and the insights and potentials of alternative ice narratives and folk glaciologies.". "Global environmental change research must pluralize its ontologies, epistemologies, and sensibilities". Seriously, this is what passes for science these days?

    This thing truly reads like a poor April fools article, and I am sad to say that this is the case for a lot of other papers coming out of gender study departments. "Many humanities and social science disciplines and sub-disciplines have given significant attention to these issues, but there remain boundaries between these analyses and those considered central to the environmental change question." That part is true, and for good reasons. For examples of these reaons, read the conclusion of this ridiculous paper. If you want to be included in any serious discussion about these matters, you'll have be able to bring something worthwhile to the table. This ain't it.

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  9. Re:Wow... by xxxJonBoyxxx · · Score: 5, Funny

    >> Just wow.. Other words escape me..

    Unfortunately for us, they landed here.

  10. Re: Documented Truth, just Unsettling by Type44Q · · Score: 4, Insightful

    bridging sociology and climatology

    I'm willing - hesitant but willing - to concede that while this might be a well-intended attempt to bridge sociology and climatology, the colossal insecurity and complete inability to think critically revealed by this insanity guarantees that an attempt is all it's going to be.

  11. Re:So... by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 4, Interesting

    The criticism is groundless. Okay, maybe the paper is crap. You know what? It doesn't take that much time (tax dollars) to write the paper. They got it published in a journal with a good impact factor. Beyond that, who cares?

    Now, if you bothered to read the paper, you'd find cool stuff like, "Paterson’s artwork builds on an earlier project where she submerged a phone line connected to Vatnajökull, Iceland and Europe’s largest glacier. People could call the glacier (+44(0)7757001122) and listen to the distinctive pops, trills, and gurgles of the ice. More than ten thousand people called during the installation"

  12. Re:The really scary thing by halivar · · Score: 4, Funny

    You have no right to apply such binary labels to zir gender!

  13. Re:Progress in Human Geography? by reboot246 · · Score: 3, Funny

    I've been studying human female geography for years. Fascinating terrain and beautiful features are there for all to admire. I can look at a platinum blonde and tell whether it's virgin metal or a common ore.

    I've also met my fair share of females who have too much in common with glaciers. Got too close to one of them and nearly got frostbite on my naughty bits.

  14. Wishful thinking? by s.petry · · Score: 3, Interesting

    I watch and listen to politicians and commercials which discount this being a hoax. Several times a day I hear the ads about how men need to teach their kids not to beat up women (the assumption of course is that they all do). Several times a day I hear about the gender gap and how men just abuse women and keep them out of the technical jobs. Several times a day I hear about the wage gap and 70c on the dollar myth. Several times a day I hear about how men rape women without ever getting near them. (Today's was some reality TV woman claiming that some Uber driver raped her. But not really, he looked at her lustily and she 'thought' it could escalate into rape because he looked at her. *sigh* I really wish that I was joking.)

    We in the intellectual crowd know that this is the upper crust trying to divide us to keep us busy. We have seen proof repeatedly that these are simply myths. The majority of the populous is not intellectual though. They fall for this just like they fall for celebrity gossip and reality TV.

    While I certainly hope that this is a hoax, I am quite skeptical.

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    -The wise argue that there are few absolutes, the fool argues that there are no probabilities.

    1. Re:Wishful thinking? by PopeRatzo · · Score: 3, Funny

      I hear the ads about how men need to teach their kids not to beat up women (the assumption of course is that they all do).

      To be fair, not all men are able to beat up their wives.

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  15. Ice is just ice by steveha · · Score: 4, Insightful

    The introduction of the paper brings up the idea that "ice is just ice" and then dismisses it. If I am understanding the paper correctly (and how can I be certain of that!) the idea is that people care about glaciers, therefore there is a sociological component to them:

    Through a review and synthesis of a multi-disciplinary and wide-ranging literature on human-ice relations, this paper proposes a feminist glaciology framework to analyze human-glacier dynamics, glacier narratives and discourse, and claims to credibility and authority of glaciological knowledge through the lens of feminist studies.

    (italics in original)

    The paper goes on to say that most research on glaciers was produced by males, which of course is a problem.

    Most existing glaciological research — and hence discourse and discussions about cryospheric change — stems from information produced by men, about men, with manly characteristics, and within masculinist discourses.

    No, I didn't punch that up to make it funny, the original really says "men, with manly characteristics".

    Structures of power and domination also stimulated the first large-scale ice core drilling projects — these archetypal masculinist projects to literally penetrate glaciers and extract for measurement and exploitation the ice in Greenland and Antarctica.

    Again, this is the original text. "penetrate" and "exploitation" are both from the paper.

    So the paper argues that all existing knowledge of glaciers is tainted by the maleness of the research, and also by the "colonialism" of the research. In short, not even the study of glaciers can be a pure study of the natural world; glacier scientists must be feminist postcolonial social-justice warriors.

    The conclusion of the paper states:

    Ice is not just ice. The dominant way Western societies understand it through the science of glaciology is not a neutral representation of nature.

    I'm not convinced. The paper is very long on speculation and very short on evidence. If the maleness and colonialism of glacier studies have given us a blind spot in our understanding of what glaciers are, then give at least one example.

    Even in the paper, female mountaineers and female scientists are mentioned. If the study of glaciers somehow rejected these women and their contributions, the paper doesn't give any examples.

    Also I reject the paper's idea that the word "glaciology" should be expanded to include sociological and feminist context. It seems like a transparent attempt to latch fuzzy SJW ideas onto a natural science. Ice really is just ice; people can study ice without studying how society reacts to ice.

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  16. More on the grant by dlenmn · · Score: 5, Interesting

    The NSF is usually very careful about who it gives money to; only something like 10% of funding request are granted. For those who are curious, the basic grant information on this grant is available from the NSF:

    http://www.nsf.gov/awardsearch...

    The grant was done through the Directorate for Social, Behavioral and Economic Sciences (specifically the division of Social and Economic Sciences) -- as opposed to the Geosciences Directorate, which I believe normally handles the climate change work. (The NSF is divided into different parts for funding different areas.)

    FWIW, the house science committee has long been working to cut the budget for the Directorate for Social, Behavioral and Economic Sciences. I'm sure that good work gets funded by that directorate, but it sure does make me pissed that a BS grant like this gets funded, while more useful grants in applied physics (my area) don't get funded.

    I wouldn't pin this bad grant on the NSF as a whole. Hopefully it's the exception for that directorate rather than the rule.

    1. Re:More on the grant by NicBenjamin · · Score: 3, Informative

      Have you read anything on this except Reason.com's takedown? Literally anything? Because this is Social Science, and they're reaction to Social Sciences tends to be heavily colored by the fact that most Scientists studying society do not actually find that Libertarianism is the One True Gospel. They're also much closer to the climate-skeptics camp then they like to admit, arguing the global-warmiong-pause,/a> is real and excoriating Di Caprio for using his Oscar Acceptance speech on the topic. Their stands on both subjects tend to be dominated by a steadfast refusal to care what their opponents are saying when they use words differently.

      Pretty much the entire article that we are talking about can be summarized by the phrase "Ayn Rand didn't use the words 'gendered,' 'postcolonial,' or 'political ecology' in her books; therefore I don't know what they mean; therefore this paper's abstract is meaningless gibberish."

      FYI, the abstract means she was doing some very basic research into how science emphasizes (for lack of a term a reason.com reader would understand) man shit at the expense of woman shit, and how that specifically impacts papers on glaciers and climate change. If I had access to the article I suspect the man shit would be stuff like military science implications of climate change such as terrorism, environmental effects on local livestock, other large-scale economic dislocation, etc. Whereas the woman shit would be much smaller-scale.

      For example, most of Central Asian cultures near glaciers are gonna be burning stuff for heat. Maybe it's actual shit, maybe it's local plant-life. Will the local plant-life change? If they're using sheep dung, and the plants change, will post-climate-change still burn the same? How can they adapt? That's pretty fucking important in that region, and a) I'd be stunned if anyone had bothered to gather the data necessary for the paper, and b) I'd be even more stunned if it got published. The Imperialism bits are included because groups that Empress Victoria of India disliked are likely still on the bad-list of important people in the region, and thus if they use some unique heating strategy that will be screwed by climate change it's likely nobody will notice until the poor bastards start freezing to death.

  17. Re:So... by Lendrick · · Score: 4, Funny

    Reason is a partisan think-tank without much thinking

    So just a tank, then?

  18. Re:Adult Day Care by BarbaraHudson · · Score: 4, Interesting

    This is what happens when you start off with one faulty deduction.

    "Jaclyn found a report that noted how women are more vulnerable to glacier changes and hazards than are men," said Carey, associate dean of the Clark Honors College and a professor of history and environmental studies. "I had never researched these gendered vulnerabilities."

    That report linked flooding from a glacial lake with an increase of sexually transmitted infections in women. "I was fascinated by how two seemingly disparate issues could be so intimately linked through glacial ice," Rushing said. "I wanted to know more about the relationship between women and ice, so we pursued the topic from climate-change vulnerability to knowledge."

    Unless you're having sex with the wildlife, you get sexually transmitted diseases from, you know, sex with other humans. It's more likely to be a correlation between not being able to adequately dry off inner garbs while moving from flood areas, or staying in those areas, leading to more yeast infections which increases susceptibility to STDs.

    People commonly believe that having sex will cause women to develop a yeast infection, but this is not the case. Women that are not having sex can still develop a yeast infection. In most cases a yeast infection occurs when the immune system is weak. Those that are overworked or tired can have a higher risk for developing a yeast infection. If you have just recovered from being ill or using antibiotics may also be susceptible to developing a yeast infection. Those that do not eat a proper diet, suffer from diabetes or are pregnant can also have an increased risk

    A yeast infection is not a sexually transmitted disease in spite of the symptoms being relatively similar. However, if you have been scratching the vagina due to the itchiness associated with yeast infections you may have left small cuts on the skin that increase your risk of developing an STD.

    Also, one report about flooding and stds around one lake does not good science make.

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  19. Re:Progress in Human Geography? by Nutria · · Score: 4, Insightful

    Yes.

    Why? Because it's direct, to the point, and accurate.

    Anyone in Academia that breaks Orwell's Five Rules should be tossed from a very high altitude airplane

    1) Never use a metaphor, simile, or other figure of speech which you are used to seeing in print.
    2) Never use a long word where a short one will do.
    3) If it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it out.
    4) Never use the passive where you can use the active.
    5) Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word, or a jargon word if you can think of an everyday English equivalent.
    6) Break any of these rules sooner than say anything outright barbarous.

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  20. Re:So... by Applehu+Akbar · · Score: 4, Insightful

    "Or is Reason bad because they laugh at you ?"

    You got it. Reason Foundation is a libertarian, but not Randian, think tank with some refreshingly iconoclastic views about the major political factions.

  21. Re:lol by microbox · · Score: 5, Insightful

    Most people believe that men and women should be treated equally, and have equal opportunities. Feminism goes wrong when it turns in to myopic whining about unequal outcomes. Unfortunately this is what much modern feminism has turned in to. It is not about equality at all.

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  22. True Scotsmen nerds by TapeCutter · · Score: 4, Insightful

    The whole premise is that people find some science more credible than other science based on sexist judgments.

    Agree, your defense of this paper is pretty conclusive evidence that some people can't tell the difference between a political argument and a scientific one.

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  23. Re:So... by TapeCutter · · Score: 5, Insightful

    The paper is newsworthy in the same way as creationism in science class is newsworthy.

    The only significant (and cruel) state sponsored gender discrimination remaining in the western world is against fathers in family courts where the default custody arrangements are dad gets the kids 4days/mth, mum gets the kids the other 26 and dad is forced to foot the bill for her privileged position in the eyes of the law. When will modern feminists stop openly supporting sexual discrimination against dads in divorce court, if gender equality is actually anything more than a slogan why are they actively lobbying AGAINST equal custody rights for both sexes?

    If I'm wrong then it should be easy to point to a feminist organisation that has come out in support of 50/50 shared parenting, and yes every feminist organisation in the US has been politely invited to show their support by various fathers rights groups. To date not one of those organisations have accepted that invitation and many have actually responded by voicing their support for the status quo.

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  24. Re:lol by kwbauer · · Score: 3, Insightful

    "I am normally pretty supportive of feminist agendas as treating everyone equally is a strangely compelling idea, but I feel that this is such an easy target that I cannot ignore it."

    The inability to see the internal contradiction within that sentence is a very common trait among those who are "pretty supportive of feminist agendas."

  25. Good and bad by imidan · · Score: 4, Insightful

    I read the actual journal article. What the authors seem to be talking about is the low credence that scientists in the past have given to indigenous knowledge about glaciers, which is a valid complaint and one that has been leveled at various branches of natural resources sciences of late. Why recognizing that knowledge counts as 'feminist' I cannot say. There are also observations that women have been excluded from glaciology in the past, and that had women been more involved, we may have done more and different research on, for example, the relationships between indigenous people and glaciers. I think those points are okay, as far as they go.

    It's not a 'science' article in the quantitative sense. It's a survey of the state of the domain. It is clearly identified as such in the text. And it was published in a journal where such an article is appropriate.

    People are making much of the $400,000 price tag. That money is distributed over the course of 5 years. I don't know what UO's institutional overhead rate is, but it is a reasonable guess that the Carey (the lead author) gets access to around $50,000 per year of this money. He has some budget worked out for that money that likely includes funding some number of hours of his own time, some hours for a graduate student, and then things like computer equipment and travel and so on. This particular paper is not the sole product of that money. In fact, it's not even listed as one of the intended outputs of the project. It is likely something that struck his interest as he was researching, and he chose to write it and see if anyone would publish it.

    I do think the writing is florid. Sadly, that is the academic style right now. I believe that he could have made his point with half the word count. I also think that focusing on feminism rather than broader ideas of inclusiveness is likely to cause complaint, and, indeed, that is what we see here on Slashdot and in the reason.com write-up.

    I don't think it's a bad article for what it says. I think how it says it could be improved. And I think the press coverage does a disservice with straw-man arguments. They're click-baiting people into raging about positions that the paper doesn't take.