Designing Virtual Worlds
It never occurred to me that my review would be read by a wider public, most of whom had never heard of me or even Dr. Bartle, and would see only the hostility, and not understand the narrowness of the focus. When the column was picked up by Slashdot I was stunned, when I realized it was also linked by Clay Shirky in Many to Many and by Joystick101 among other places, I felt slightly ill. Without intending to, I may have damaged the reputation of Dr. Bartle and of his book, and I feel an obligation to set the record straight with an actual review of his book. I'm not sure why it has not already received such a review, except that only a few dozen people in the world currently make their living at virtual world design and would really be qualified to write it.
What is in the book? The "Introduction to Virtual Worlds" of the first chapter does a very good job of laying out what a virtual world is, and defending that definition as a category that includes but is not limited to the online games that are the most common examples of the type. The history lesson included a lot of information even I, after six years in the industry and a serious attempt at studying it, was not aware of. The second chapter gives a very good overview of the process by which the world is created both in business terms and in structural arrangements. The third includes a reprise and updating of Dr. Bartle's now-classic Players that Suit MUD's, the touchstone for every theory of player motivation in online games, and continues into a description of the properties and dynamics of the communities that form in and around the worlds.
Where most of the first three chapters are a primer -- containing the base knowledge needed to understand the whole field in functional terms -- the 4th and 5th chapters focus much more on the worlds as games. The mechanics of game systems, the structure of "advancement" systems and the psychology that makes them run, all of the myriad elements that make a virtual world a game.
Chapters 6 and 7 take a more academic overview of the field, discussing the "why's" of the worlds, what they are, what they may become, and what other fields of human endeavour they are most similar to and therefore may have lessons to offer. Chapter 7's effort to establish the academic and artistic "legitimacy" of virtual worlds was the main source of my disagreement with the book: I think that virtual worlds are entirely capable of standing on their own merits and do not need to be considered credible by the academic arts to be worthy. But this is the "almost theological" issue, and although significant to myself and a handful of others in the field, it's not something that should be counted against the work as a whole.
Chapter 8 focuses on the fact that as virtual as the worlds may be, the people in them (and therefore the relationships) are real, and therefore certain ethical factors normally not considered an issue in game design become much more important. Added to this are questions of "ownership"; if there is no game without the players, but the operator has a finger on the power button, who is in control? Who should be? The book doesn't solve many of these problems (every solution is likely to be unique to a particular setting), but does lay out where most of the fracture lines occur.
What I liked: The book establishes good points and brings the reader up to date on the known principles of the field, with copious references to other writings on the subject provided in the footnotes. The general focus on the "players eye" view is a very important attribute: too often, discussions of virtual worlds have the "God's Eye" designer's view from orbit, and forget that in the end it's the ground-level "fun or not-fun" experience of the players that makes or breaks a design.
What I didn't like: Dr. Bartle is much more broadly educated than I am (they don't give out any titles for an Associates degree in electronics), and tries very hard to make a case to the academic community that virtual worlds are worthy of consideration as serious works of Capital-A "Art." Since I am not concerned about credibility with the dilettantes and dabblers who make up most of academia in the Arts, the repeated references to the Hero's Journey and the effort to define a dramatic theory of online games in Chapter 7 distracted and occasionally annoyed me. But those interested in such things will probably find his efforts there as workmanlike as the rest of the volume.
Summary: This book is a must-read for anyone who works in the field of online games, and highly recommended for anyone who wants to understand the theory and structure of the systems that make them run, or to effectively discuss them with the teams that work on them.
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Slashdotter are stupid and biased.
you can bet that Dr. James will back him up...
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I think that virtual worlds are entirely capable of standing on their own merits and do not need to be considered credible by the academic arts to be worthy.
Having played on and assisted in development of a host of muds for over 10 years (ranging from old diku and lp based all the way through EQ, Planetscape, etc...) I would agree 100%. There is no substitute for 'Fun Factor' in a mud. In fact the more reasonable and sensable (our world like) a mud becomes, the less interesting I find it.
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I think a lot of these problems can be solved simply by observation of the real world, and then deciding to either subset it or superset it. It is easy to think of current existence as a black box with certain properties, that one would either want to take a subset of those properties, or extend them in some way. I don't think it takes a special book -- if you're looking for a book on life, try all the millions of great novels out there. Those writers (i.e. Steinbeck) present a lot of information about the design of a world in the way that they create their "virtual worlds".
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Start breathing a little more rapidly after discovering that their article (or worse website) has been posted up on a major site such as slashdot. Pending bandwidth disasters aside, many things are meant to be shared with the general "world-at-large," but not with a large portion of the world. More scary is when they only focus on part of a story or opinion, leading to the appearing of bias on the part of the writer.
/. was good enough to post it up.
It's nice to see that not only did Mr Rickey put in a "full-opinion" follow-up, but that
Personally, I have a lot of stories, postings, etc that I really have no problem sharing with a random interested netter... but having several thousand people poring over and commenting on it would make me a bit green.
A lot of slashdotters write that "if you don't want it read, don't post it"... but really there's a difference between putting something up so that global interested parties can check it out, and having it swarmed on by the masses. Makes me wonder if I should append a "property of owner XYZ, please do not copy or link this article without permission"... at least to cover my ass in some form if such an article got in the wild.
Calling the environments created in the glut of recent MMORPG "virtual worlds" is a disservice to the term. Most of these so-called worlds are woefully small in scope and the inhabitants reduced to a very small subset of brainless activities.
I always save my last mod point to mod up a good troll. You people are too serious.
Dr. Bartle is much more broadly educated than I am
I like books written by people more educated than myself, that way I learn things. If you want to feel intellectually superior, check out the local thrift/used book shop for some old "choose your own adventure"s
Or read anything by Grisham or Clancy.
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Ha, but I'm guessing you were just following the rules of Verant. Must be great to be out there doing something instead of banning people for "kill stealing".
-Libertarian secular transhumanist
It's all so inane to me. They are crappy games, that's all. I wish people would stop trying to find some mystical and spiritual meaning in them.
I think one of the most interesting things to me in the games, esp. set in virtual worlds is the relationship of cause and effect.
In real life, we get to "learn" some cause-effects, and use them in making future decisions. But, I personally believe, that there are no hard and fast cause-effects that do not alter when the frame of the system in question is either reduced or enlarged.
I play the games so that I can understand the cause-effect equation. I can sometimes try something in the virtual world and see a real world physical or psychological effect. At other times I can try something in the real-world and see its effect in the virtual world.
The round trip i.e. real-virtual-real is very much possible and observable by me. But the other round trip i.e. virtual-real-virtual is not possible for me, and the only way that I can imagine that is to consider it to be loosely a "mirror" form of the real-virtual-real string.
These cause and effect in the real-virtual-real and virtual-real-virtual strings, and how they in some way help me make sense of my body-mind duality is why the virtual worlds are very real for me .... That is why I am drawn to these "virtual" worlds that very "real" for me ...
To see a world in a grain of sand, and then to step back and see the beach where the sand lies
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Don't be fooled by the MMO description, EQ, UO and their ilk are still MUDs. Adding pretty pictures to a concept does not change what it is.
I've been writing some lecture notes for a class on designing virtual worlds that illustrate the real world (usually under water here) and have not discussed with those in the class the how, why, and philosophy of designing virtual worlds.
thanks for the review!
Anyways here you can read my text with 0% english errors.
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Just a small plug for one of the incarnations of his game MUD2 www.mudii.co.uk .Having also met Richard at a few mudmeets (where the players and wizzes all meet up in a pub and get very drunk :-)) not only is he clever with the text based games, he is also a funny chap.
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I think the reviewer needs to define just what the book's scope is, and just what "virtual worlds" consist of. The phrase "a few dozen people in the world currently make their living at virtual world design," makes me believe that he's only considering the chief designers at high-profile commercial MMORPGs, leaving out everyone who might design non-online gaming worlds, sub-designers, etc. Not to mention all those people creating things off in Hollywood. Not to mention pen-and-paper game designers. And not to mention my science fiction writing breathern, of which there are, at a minimum, some 200 or so making their living from designing "virtual worlds" consisting of words on a page...
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From where I stand, I see two very distinct type of "gamers" these days.... Rather than get to the point, I'll regail you with a story.
I've been playing video games of all sorts for plenty of years now, and I have no problem admitting that I am not hooked on Counter-Strike. I'm involved with a gaming center that hosts one of those servers, and it is regularly active. I don't love CS, but I don't consider myself a bad player either.... Most of the maps in rotation are simple deathmatch type maps, none of the maps from version 1.5.... Typically, I rank in the top 3 or 4 out of 20 players when I hop on once or twice a month, a stat that surprises me even now. However, being the "old school" gamer, I often switch to maps that aren't so usual... With the CS 1.5 maps or classic maps (vegas, 747, as_ maps), I completely blow everyone else out of the water. I wouldn't say that it's the "lag" of newer maps, nor the fact that most of these guys don't know the maps... Heck, I hardly know some of these maps, so much of this is just a raw skill competition.
I honestly believe that well over 80%, maybe up to 90% of "regular" online gamers are in it primarily for the social contact and environment. I'm sure there's plenty of people (like me) who would rather play for other primary reasons, such as the andrenaline rush or competitive nature, and those factors influence the social gamers greatly, but nontheless.... The vast majority of gamers seem to enjoy or are addicted to the social aspects more than anything else, and learn how to "go through the motions" and base their gameplay on mastery of these motions, and complain when things are altered in the slightest, even to the benefit of gameplay.
I would have been much more interested to hear from the author about his own firsthand experiences with the dynamics of balancing social and gameplay components.... How *DO* you improve a game that people are addicted to, when addicts tend to fight change of any sort? As for that entire article, it seemed too pseudo-intellectual, and I see no benefit of questioning where the lines are drawn between art, social matters, and gaming... After all, I could classify the results of a masterful promoter attracting masses to an art exhibition as art itself.
So your Practical and useful observation is that you're super 1337 when it comes to counter-strike?
There is a lot more there worth reading.
Also, Richard Bartle is also doing a column at Skotos called Notes from the Dawn of Time.
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The University of Illinois PLATO system had "Multi-User Dungeon" type games before 1978. Just a reminder that lots of innovative things happened on PLATO that then got "reinvented" years later. Having a 512x512 plasma(AC) screen based terminal hooked up to a mainframe and being able to write interterminal games easily was a lot more fun than trying to use the "graphics" on a trs-80 or apple.
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Take Big Brother 4 for example, the participants acknowledge the show for what it is: a game. Therefore, they don't take it quite as seriously as The Amazing Race, which is also a game.
Now, you probably all are wondering where I'm going with this. Games are still that, games. No matter which way you play them, or how seriously you take them, they are still games. And the beautiful thing about them is they are designed to provide entertainment. Whether you find watching them and being pulled into the drama entertaining, or laughing at them, or debating the philosophy behind the strategy, you are still being entertained, which is allowing the game to do what it was designed to do.
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What's the problem with collision detection in a Quake3 BSP?
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lots of good art history and how it relates to immersive worlds:
http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/tg/detail/-/0735 711712/
When I wrote up my Engines of Creation column for August 12th with a focus on Dr. Richard Bartle's Designing Virtual Worlds, I had no idea it was the closest thing to an independent review the book had yet received and that i would be able to use slashdot to get people to read it.
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Honestly, I meant for it to be " gamers seem to be far more 'socializers' than 'gamers' ", but yeah, it did kinda come out that way. I'm not "l33t", but what is somewhat scary to me is the preponderance of gamers who simply go through motions, and how it is evidenced in the slightest change to gameplay....
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Excuse me for using my peronsal experience as an example. I should have used someone else's point-of-view instead
motivator for more than half of our very large clan as well. It can be seen by the number of people just chatting, I also see a corelation between age, the younger are generally more driven and competitive, while the older are generally more relaxed and there for the social aspect. This does not always hold true of course but I've been playing online games for a long time in many formats and that's what I've seen.
Also I reallt think in games like EQ, people underestimate the number of women playing and just NOT telling anyone they are female. After a long term association with several guild members I was able to pick out numerous closet women playing male characters and actively trying to hide there sex.
errr....umm...*whooosh* *whoosh* Is this thing on ?
I am curious about Dave Rickey's comment in his old article (Engines of Creation #6) where he mentions the connection between increased territory directly corresponding to increased pvp population. His proof lies in the introduction of a new expansion to EQ that increased the territory on the Zek server (pvp server).
The pvp server population increased after the expansion was released, so he assumes that the two are directly related to each other. My qualm is that it is has been my experience that expansion packs increase the general population anyway, so how can you say that increased territory, not the popularity of expansion packs, increased the pvp population. Would the pvp have increased anyway even if the expansion didn't include a territory increase?
Not necessarily. More accurate to say that it's a stage without actors. You could still have a setting, or even multiple settings, props, etc.
And in fact, that's how you want it -- because ideally your players are your actors, and the stories are those that they make up themselves.
The ideal experience for a game company is to set up a stage so compelling that actors flock to it to tell their own stories, thus lessening the work on you.
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Well, is it *all* of them or *most* of them? If its *most* of them then there must be some that are worthy of the term "virtual world" and thus something to write about. If its none of them, then why not say so...
In any case a virtual world (The Matrix if you will) is hardly going to spring into being fully formed. There have to be steps to get there. Hopefully this book is about what steps have been tried.
What MMOGs have you tried, and what would you do differently?
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You miss the point.
The game is the background for social interactions between real people. Without that there would be nothing much to wax philosophical about.
the book is about making these kinds of games more fun/successful. In single-player games the experience is entirely about the one person playing it. Some of the same principles still apply, but it is the added dimension of social interaction which distinguishes MMOGs from regular games.
And guess what - when you get a bunch of people together you have to be able to satisfy as many of them at the same time as you can.
That's what MMOG designers need to learn, and that's what this book is mostly about.
The inventor of the MUD? Well then, I bet that last line then continues "...with his mother."
I've never played any MMOGs. Not a single one. You called my bluff. What do you think about that?
I always save my last mod point to mod up a good troll. You people are too serious.
No, he's a slut
I was going to make some pithy comment, but this quote pretty much speaks for itself.
Sell out? Where do I sign!?
This would be done by CGI (not a big deal anyhow), but is there an actual apache setting for this. I've often considered setting up something that would simply temporarily down the webserver in the event that it consumes a large amount of bandwidth of a specified small amount of time (say, a gig in under an hour) - or to as you said ignore a referer, if there is a lot of bandwidth hits coming from said referer (e.g. 100 hits and 200kb coming from slashdot starts to ignore slashdot).
Well, I think its sad anyone can get to +3 insightful without trying.
Can't say I'm surprised though.
Actually, yes I am, I'm surprised you didn't get to +5...
Lord Pixel - The cat who walks through walls
A little bigger on the inside than out
In a shared game world, you have the ability to give players the ability to do almost anything they can imagine. There are only two problems with this: you have to give them a hook that makes them feel it's meaningful to do something, and (worse) they have to live in a world in which _everyone else_ can do anything you let them do.
Regarding the first problem - in the real world, why aren't you out living adventures? What makes it an exciting notion to think that someone would have adventures? It's the risk - the notion of putting it all on the line for some reward. Most people are unwilling to put it all on the line, probably because the people who were willing to tended to die before they bred. In the game, the most common way to give meaning to activities to give them an element of risk. Of course, you have to balance that against the things that keep people from having adventures in real life - if you do things that have real risk, eventually you lose whatever you were risking.
The second problem is the bigger one. Some people decide that they don't care about whatever it is that they are risking, they care about affecting other people, usually for the worse. Griefers will log in with a character and needle other people into doing things that get their character killed, or worse.
Anyway, my point is that picking what works in a virtual world is only related to how things work in the real world (or in books) in that one can inspire the other. The real world defines what we think is believable, and what we think is interesting. Books distill what we think is interesting. If you don't consider those things in the context of a massively multiplayer game, though, you're going to build a game that sucks.
*sigh* You are obviously new here. This has already been debated. (a lot!)
Of course most of these refer to "deep linking" which is an extra "evil" version of linking. But since you're against any large entity linking to your page you are probably against them "deep linking" to your page as well. This page (note this link comes from the "has" article) lists a number of sites that don't want anyone to link to them or have linking policies that heavily restrict how they can be linked to. At least in theory.
And while you might (note I say might) have a point about how it's a terrible thing that all someone has to do is post a link to a site on slashdot and have it, thereby, slashdotted. But how do you really intend to prevent it?
After all, a link is really just a string of text. E.g. H-T-T-P-COLON-SLASH-SLASH-W-W-W-DOT-P-H-O-R-M-I-X- DOT-C-O-M
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I picked up this book at the local chain bookstore, and I guess I was expecting a book from a programmer's viewpoint, you know, "define an area where your players dwell with this virtual class that overrides...". The contents seemed a bit "soft" to me, but now that I know that the author comes from the liberal-arts side of academia, I guess that's understandable.
/., the shelves had been cleared of all copies that afternoon). I'm still interested in the topic, and while I'm not really a game player, I've always thought MUDS and MOOs were cool.
I think I'll go back and give it another peek (if it's still on the shelf when I get there - the last time there was a reviewed book on
I'll leave my bitching about the cost of books for another post...
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I admit that some of the combat was massively intense (as in 5 frames-per-second intense on a fast rig), but the periods of inaction and travel time between hotspots got boring; the game started to feel like a job of retaking the same boring continent over and over. The game's backstory for the three factions didn't make the conflict any more interesting.
IMO, a game needs to allow for a high degree of emergence so it can take on a life of its own. Plant some simple rules and allow the players to create the complexity they want from the bottom-up. (Yeah, easier said than done). I guess this is why I love games like SimCity...
(*) To play through more than one trial period you just have to create a bogus GameSpy account for each new unique trialcode.
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Yes, it is an evolution of MUDs. But most (if not all) new game types evolve from the games before them. Adding 3D and making it a commercial success took some talent, enough to let them have a new acronym. ;)
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I went to Amazon to 'Look inside' the book and I am definitely buying. I was working on a game that could be characterized in that 'virtual worlds' field for some 5 years and this book covers many of the problems I have been thinking about for last few years.
If programs would be read like poetry, most programmers would be Vogons.
how is this offtopic?
it's +5, informative
even if it supports amazon, you people need to grow up
damn straight.
in 1997 when they told me that VRML is the future and i began to develop VRML worlds.
And now in 2003, VRML where are you ? hou hou ?....