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Straczynski Offers To Re-Boot Star Trek [updated]

EvilMagnus writes "I just came across this thread over on usenet where J. Michael Straczynski, creator of Babylon 5 and Jeremiah, talks about the cancellation of Enterprise. It seems he and a collaborator have already written a series bible and treatment for a new version of Star Trek - but it's not been pitched to Paramount out of 'political considerations' (Berman refusing to give up his dead horse?). JMS calls for everyone who thinks a JMS-run Star Trek series would be a good idea to write Paramount and let them know." Along similar lines, yonnage writes "Last week there was an article posted here about Enterprise fans atempting to pay for the next season of Enterprise. It seems that all the efforts have been pulled together and a new website has been created and has started collecting contributions for Enterprise's next season." Update: 02/16 19:47 GMT by T : Read the rest of the thread to see JMS's followup; he's decided to at least postpone this endeavor.

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  1. Great idea by Fox_1 · · Score: 5, Insightful

    The nice thing about JMS's work is how he weaves complex themes into the story arc, rather then exploring and discarding them in single episode blips. That was great for the original Star Trek and early science fiction on tv (time tunnel, that sub show, quantum leap, etc) but the work of series like Bab5 has raise sci fi on tv to a higher level - where they take advantage of the serial esque nature of weekly broadcasts.
    I'm in.

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    1. Re:Great idea by cnettel · · Score: 4, Interesting
      I don't think that's only a good thing, because that also may lock the series into certain views and themes in a bad way. The TNG episodes have a huge diversity, at the cost of consistency :-)

      OTOH, I liked much of Babylon 5 and prefer it over Enterprise (but not anything that really has Star Trek in its name). I think he would certainly be able to do a good job.

    2. Re:Great idea by Fox_1 · · Score: 5, Interesting

      people change and cultures change and while too structured an arc may be out of date by the time it is complete (see what 9/11 did to some shows and movies), I think that with the right 'architect' so to speak the arc can adapt. You are right about TNG - early episodes in tng (season 1) show a different flavor and philosophy to some of the more complex episodes near the end of the run. trying to think of an example - best I have is how the Data character evolved, or some of the prime directive messes - I know there are inconsistencies in there somewhere. However they had the PICARD and that overcomes all clumsy plot devices. The beauty of the ARC is really complex character development can happen over multiple shows - of course you miss a few episodes and it can be confusing. (farscape, glactica, bab5) Course I perfer a hybrid where the one off episodes are well woven into a larger ARC - Star Gate does this pretty well.

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    3. Re:Great idea by EyeSavant · · Score: 4, Interesting

      The bad thing about JMS is that once the curtain has been pulled away after the huge and great buildup my reaction was HUH?. Wonderful intricate buildup, no followthrough.

      Of course with Bab5 he got some help in screwing up the end with the fact that it almost got cancelled after 4 series, so series 4 is compressed to fit it all in. Then series 5 does not have enough content and has too many filler episodes.

    4. Re:Great idea by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 4, Insightful

      Yeah, I think that cancellation threat was the real reason that everything got screwed up. He had the original idea that it should take 5 seasons (which is great, you make this story with a fixed duration, you can make things work out nicely) but had to rush everything to fit into 4 (which showed), then had to append an entire 5th season when the whole story had already been told.


      The sad thing is that Enterprise got cancelled when they had found some kind of nice equilibrium, building depth into the very foundations of the Star Trek universe. It was nice to see the strife on Vulcan, and exploring the Andorian civilization. It would have been nice to see the establishment of the federation etc (the first two seasons with the temporal cold war theme were simply pathetic).


      Still, JMS does excellent work if the networks don't keep changing the allotted time. I got hooked into Bab 5 right from the pilot movie as it clearly indicated that there was a complex story behind the scenes... and you could feel that it had an end. A series that is too open ended without an end in sight automatically builds inconsistencies.

    5. Re:Great idea by ajs · · Score: 5, Funny
      Great idea or tragedy waiting to happen?

      Probably neither. It's probably so unlikely that it's not worth categorizing. The reasons are many, but it comes down to this: Straczynski is pig-headed, but not stupid. He would never agree to do it without complete creative control, and there's practically no way Paramount would allow that to happen. It would be along the lines of Bill Gates giving over control of the Windows platform to Linus Torvalds without even retaining the right to veto checkins.

      Without complete creative control, you know what would happen: JMS would put forward his bible saying, "we tear down half of Starfleet and kill off a few notables to shake things up," and Paramount would reply with notes like the following:
      • Sounds good, but I don't think we want to kill anyone who has an action figure
      • "Tear down" might be too strong. Let's just say that there's a night-club bombing somewhere on Ferengi-prime
      • Great ideas, but you need to sex it up a bit
      • The first scene needs to really pull the viewers in: make it a fist fight
      • My kid loves tribbles, can you work one in as a major character?
      He's been through this before with TNT and Crusade (the mess that you saw on TV was the result). He won't do it again.

      All that said, YES, petition Paramount to do it. I think that at the very least it shows a massive lack of confidence in current show-runners and might upset the apple-cart enough to get someone creative in there.
    6. Re:Great idea by drsquare · · Score: 5, Insightful

      On the other hand, it makes it so that people who aren't obsessive TV viewers who religiously watch every single episode, all in order, can't get into it. If you sit down and watch a single episode, you won't understand it. That doesn't make it a better programme, it doesn't 'raise it to a higher level', it just narrows its appeal, and turns it more into a soap.

    7. Re:Great idea by Jeff+DeMaagd · · Score: 4, Interesting

      The problem, IMO, is that episodic television tends to dumb down the content. Having a sequential story, IMO does raise it to a higher level as it does allow a more complex and intertwined story. And IMO, yes, it really does raise it to a higher level when done well. Reducing TV, or keeping TV reduced to simplified stories, is an insult to the watchers, especially if few to no episodes have a meaningful impact on those following it.

      Each episode of B5 can be watched on its own and watched in sequence as well.

      Yes, there will be unknown bits but that doesn't mean the episode itself isn't relevant on its own without watching other parts.

      Shows like 24 and Alias have proven that prime time TV audiences are willing to accept a continuing story. I've watched three episodes of Alias, and despite not knowing certain bits, I didn't feel punished for not having seen previous episodes.

    8. Re:Great idea by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 4, Insightful

      sorry but all of his projects were never allowed to see their end properly.

      B5 was screwed with by the morons in the suits.

      and Jeremiah was utterly destroyed by the idiots that run Showtime.

      the first season had people rivited and giving up what they did on friday nights to watch it. The second season was finished but not with JMS's control and anyone can easily see that. He made it exactly like how the suits wanted it in the 2nd season and it sucked horribly because of it.

      he did that because it was his proof to themthat the suits know absolutely nothing about Television and a good story. which is 100% true.

      management will fuck up something good whenever they get the chance to.

      JMS is a great storyteller, his book is a great insight into the PITA the industry is..

  2. It's Berman's fault by sugapablo · · Score: 5, Interesting

    It's Berman's fault the series on TV is as stale as it is. Proof is that some of the ST novels are tremendously well-written, proving their are plenty of new, fresh, and quality stories left to tell in the final frontier.

    Of the best, are the DS9 relaunch, which continues the story of Deep Space Nine directly after the TV series ends, and Peter David's remarkable New Frontier series with it's Xenexian captain Mackenzie Calhoun. This series has proved, IMHO, to be one of the best out of all the Trek series.

    1. Re:It's Berman's fault by blowdart · · Score: 5, Funny
      "Kaptain we're being zucked into a black Berman hole"

      "Fire the JMS ego ray ensign, they should cancel each other out"

      "A hot space babe has just appeared, the ratings levels are going up rapidly, most logical captain"

      Whoever does it around 50% of the fans are going to complain.

  3. Forget Trek by imag0 · · Score: 4, Insightful

    How about bringing back a show that was interesting and original, like Firefly?

    That would be worth the money. Not watching YATS (Yet Another Trek Show).

  4. Go for it by nuclear305 · · Score: 4, Insightful

    Cue all the "Let it die already!" and "Trek needs a rest" comments...

    These people have nothing to lose by pitching another series to Paramount. Enterprise is dead, and I'm sure Paramount would eagerly pick up anything with the slightest chance of turning a profit.

    Since the article mentions they're taking their idea "to the public" I think they'd get a better reaction by releasing a preview of some type. Kind of hard for an audience to approve and support a project without knowing what it is! (Because we all know counting on the Trek name alone doesn't always work)

  5. JMS - PLEASE READ THIS! by Seumas · · Score: 5, Funny

    More Wil Wheaton!

    1. Re:JMS - PLEASE READ THIS! by Nogami_Saeko · · Score: 4, Insightful

      And more Walter Koenig :)

      One of Trek's nicest guys played the B5 villain that everyone loved to hate! But I loved how JMS actually gave him a bit of a human side when you understood what made him the way he was...

      Even villain need motives and factors that drive them - very few people are just inherently nasty for the sake of being mean :P

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  6. Recanted by mondoterrifico · · Score: 5, Informative

    He has already recanted this offer. http://www.jmsnews.com/msg.aspx?id=1-17287/

    1. Re:Recanted by cnettel · · Score: 5, Informative
  7. Actually he retracted the request for now.... by MauMan · · Score: 5, Informative
    Actually he retracted the request for now....

    Actually...belay everything I just said.

    In the 24 hours between the time I composed the prior note, and sent
    it, and it made its way through the moderation software, two things
    happened:

    1) I heard from a trusted source that Paramount is giving the Trek TV
    world a rest for maybe one to two years, depending on circumstances, no
    matter who would come along to run it. So it's not right to have folks
    putting in time doing something that ultimately would be pointless, I
    don't think that's a proper use of anybody's time.

    2) At the same time as the above, an offer came in to run a new TV
    series for fall of '06, and since there's no way anything Trek can
    happen in the interim, I've said yes (now we have to negotiate the
    deal, but that should be fairly straightforward).

    So on two counts, the whole thing is kind of moot.

    We can reconvene a year or two down the road to see where this takes
    us, but in the interim...my apologies for waking everybody up in the
    middle of the night.

    As you were.

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  8. They lost it after DS9... by bani · · Score: 5, Insightful

    ..Voyager, and then Enterprise proved that the producers have completely lost their marbles, and totally lost touch with the core audience.

    As soon as I heard the Enterprise opening theme, I knew it was dead.

    I think trek needs to die, and stay dead for another 15 years or so. Only then will it be ready for another revival.

    Such wasted effort on tripe like Enterprise, when stuff like Firefly is far more deserving.

  9. Startrek Campaign ? by ehack · · Score: 4, Interesting

    Maybe JMS can sell one-year long mini-series or something ? Bab5 was overlong, although the idea of a multi-episode script was nicely exercised .

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  10. Idea already been pulled by Dionysus · · Score: 5, Informative

    JMS already pulled the idea (Paramount decided to give Trek TV a rest).
    Check out the updated info at TrekWeb

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  11. I can't bare to see Star Trek end! by lordmetroid · · Score: 5, Interesting

    I continously hope for enterprise to be ended in it's seven season as a Star Trek series ought to be ended! I must admit though that some seasons were really lame, I liked enterprise at first. When they didn't have any equipment that worked and their was no experience in anything of what they did had political problems with klingons and vulcans as well as andorians, pretty much the starting seasons. later on as they got photonic torpedoes and other technologies to their usage so that the humans wouldn't seem so inferior, that was when the show started to go bad and it's anticlimax must in my opinion been the whole time wars shit. This season been quite good though with Vulcans having internal problems and dealing with Andorians and Romulans starting to look like something good again, and hence I would like to have the series continue. Hopefully a new Star Trek series will also be made, I seem to never be able to get enough of Star Trek. I would have nothing against a remake of the old series, but I think they need to cram in some more juice into it, better scenery and Klingons that actually look like they should do and not human!

  12. I am getting sick of this.... by brunes69 · · Score: 5, Interesting

    ... tripe on Slashdot. People go on and on about how "It has all been downhill since TNG" and it has all been Berman's fault, etc.

    For one thing, Roddenberry died midway through TNG. Berman was basically the man at the helm for what was argueable the best portion of the series, the last 3 seasons. Even before that, he played a very, very large part in TNG. So to say that "Berman is Death" of everything, than to praise TNG, borders on the edge of ridiculousness.

    For another, DS9 (the first series run soley by Berman) was actually very good (once it got going - the first season or two were quite.. icky).

    Voyager, well..... what can you say. An amazing capability for a plot line, but it descended into fodder. Basically, the same thing with Enterprise.

    So from *my* point of view, he is batting 0.500 - a decent average the way I look at it.

    Aside from all this - you people seem to believe that the whole series lives and dies by Berman's word. Shouldn't some of the blame be put on the writers? The writers are the ones coming up with the same old crap over and over again.

    1. Re:I am getting sick of this.... by Mordaximus · · Score: 4, Insightful
      For another, DS9 (the first series run soley by Berman) was actually very good (once it got going - the first season or two were quite.. icky).

      Actually, Ira Steven Behr and Michael Piller were also executive producers. However, I don't think that it's a coincidence that Deep Space 9 picked up steam around the time when Voyager was launched. Personally I suspect Ira Steven Behr had far more to do with the success of Deep Space 9 than Berman ; he likely got more control of the show as Berman turned his attention to Voyager.

      That's not to say that I think Berman is solely, nor even mostly responsible for the downfall of the franchise : Check Brannon Braga's credits : He had his fingers in a great deal of the two worst Star Trek shows. And notably absent from my favorite trek, DS9.

  13. DS9 and B5 by GQuon · · Score: 4, Interesting

    It's generally thought that DS9 was a pretty good series, getting better as it went along and getting a story arc.

    However, JMS might be reluctant to speak about DS9 for a personal reason. JMS had tried to pitch Babylon 5 to a number of studios, such as Paramount, but they wouldn't have it. After years of work, WB finally took up the show. After the Babylon 5 pilot was shot, Paramount just happens to shoot a pilot of their own new show that just happens to be set on a space station, and get the pilot to air just before the Babylon 5 pilot. (Why are some of the sets from the Enterprise?)

    Although this had happened, JMS vocally disliked rivalry between the fans of Trek and B5 and advocated that one could like both.

    DS9 turned out quite different in the end, so the competition from B5 was kind of good for Trek, wasn't it?

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  14. Re:I see... by EnsilZah · · Score: 5, Funny

    Makes his corpse reverse polarity in its grave, one might say.

  15. Let it die by gooman · · Score: 5, Interesting

    I think I speak for many Trek fans that when I first heard about Enterprise, the possibilities for a prequel series seemed very interesting, and after Voyager we deserved something decent.

    Like many I was worried about Berman being involved. I became more worried when the opening credits feature a dreadful recycled pop song instead of something symphonic. Then the temporal cold war silliness starts. Meanwhile, all along has been little effort to remain consistant with the Trek universe.

    I will admit, I have not laughed so hard in a long time as I did when I saw the Xindi Nazi at the end of last season. But I don't think that was the intended effect.

    For everyone who who is proclaiming this season is much better, how could it get much worse. Paramount and Berman especially should be ashamed at how they have treated such a large and loyal fanbase.

    That said, I'm actually surprised that UPN killed it. They kept Voyager going for seven years and it was horrible most of that time. Enterprise seems like the high spot on their garbage filled network.

    Trek needs a rest. If you want to send someone your money give it to http://www.eff.org/ or some other worthy cause. Don't worry, there will be more Trek, it has made too much money to be ignored forever.

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  16. Starch Wreck by ch-chuck · · Score: 4, Funny

    The story of two Chinese laundry truck drivers. Their 5 hour mission, to deliver clean lanudry, to seek out new customers and clients, to Boldly Go® where no chinese laundry truck drivers have gone before!

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  17. Re:World Without Trek by Teancum · · Score: 4, Insightful

    While I will beg to differ that the well has dried up for the Star Trek universe, I would have to agree that putting the series into hiatus would be a good idea.

    When I hear director commentaries of Star Trek movies, or listen to actors make comments regarding their involvement with Star Trek, they seemingly have a universal theme: "I never saw Star Trek before I was hired by Paramount."

    It makes me wonder about the writers as well. It is one thing to try and bring in some people from outside the Trekkies fan base to add some new and fresh ideas, but the near universality of the people producing and creating both the movies and the series doing it just as another job speaks volumes about how committed Paramount is to maintaining quality in the series.

    Basically none.

    One of the reasons why the Lord of the Rings was so absolutely fantastic was that the people involved with making those movies were some major fans of the work. Sure, a couple of actors may not have been as familiar with the story as die-hard fanatics, but with the rest of the production team really pulling to make it something special, those actors "caught the vision" and even added more to the passion to get it done.

    I could even use the "Passion of the Christ" produced by Mel Gibson as an example of how somebody with in this case a deep religious conviction bringing something extra to the production that turned what could have been an ordinary movie into something extra ordinary.

    I just don't see that kind of fire coming from Paramount these days. The attitude of William Shatner comments of "Get a Life" to fans is more typical. Star Trek has simply become a cash cow for studio executives, and they really don't care at all about the fan base other than trying to figure out how to get more money from what they percieve as a bunch of suckers. The Trek-based fan web pages legal mess is more proof of how stupid Paramount doesn't really know what they are doing other than trying to make a quick buck.

  18. Re:I am getting sick of Berman.... by Snaller · · Score: 4, Interesting

    ... tripe on Slashdot. People go on and on about how "It has all been downhill since TNG" and it has all been Berman's fault, etc.

    But it is - he is in charge, ego he is to blame.

    For one thing, Roddenberry died midway through TNG.

    Lies. Roddenberry died at the end of season 5.
    Berman was basically the man at the helm for what was argueable the best portion of the series, the last 3 seasons.

    1: He was mostly working with the talent Roddenberry had hired.
    2: He didn't have the guts to suddenly change TNG to something else in the middle of the series (like he let them do with DS9)

    Ie, he just continued on the course set by Roddenberry.

    For another, DS9 (the first series run soley by Berman) was actually very good (once it got going - the first season or two were quite.. icky).

    So DS9 became better once Berman withdrew from day to day running of the series and started to focus on Voayger - funny that. Not to mention again, he had Ira Steven Behr("Dark Angel"),Michael Piller("Dead Zone") , Ronald Moore("Battlestar Galactica") to help him. I entirely suspect he was out having lunch with management while they were writing.

    Aside from all this - you people seem to believe that the whole series lives and dies by Berman's word. Shouldn't some of the blame be put on the writers? The writers are the ones coming up with the same old crap over and over again.

    Yeah, except: HE HIRES THE WRITERS, his blame.

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  19. Expensive Props and Poor Writing by bfline · · Score: 5, Insightful

    Star Trek has suffered from poor writing since after TNG. Even Deep Space Nine still had some good plots that made you interested. Another problem with Enterprise is that they have bores like Trip and Malcom. I loved B5. Loved it. I am sure JMS would make sure that the writing wasn't lame. How? Because with little money to work with he concentrated on the storylines. I think they should stop spending so much money on the props, sets, makeup, etc., and start spending it on the writing. I also loved the original Trek which became classic because of the writing again, certainly not the props.

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  20. Re:I see... by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 4, Insightful

    I do not believe there is any need to "rest" Star Trek, I think what it needs is creative talent that can improve the quality of the episodes, and it needs a series that is set after the DS9 and Voyager. I think Enterprise was a bad idea, creating a series which is set long before the other star trek series, it allows for a lot of trouble with messing up the timelines, and takes away some of the value of moving the star trek timeline forward into the future, new territory, and instead must dwell within an already defined past timeline.

    In a sci-fi series like Star Trek, accuracy in timelines, events, facts and detials is very important and errors in the timelines, which they seem to have a hard time avoiding in Enterprise since it occurs previous to the other series', can shake ones confidence in the series and introduce paradoxes which weaken the entire structure of the franchise.

    A new series I believe as well should incorporate the exploration and discovery aspects of Star Trek, finding strange new worlds, new civilisations, strange distant reaches of the galaxy filled with odd pecularities and phenomena. Integrating a sort of mystery-genre aspect into many episodes where the crew encounter odd mysterious and wierd phenomena and discovering what they are can be quite fascinating. There are so many creative possibilities for plots that don't involve pure action and violence but offer a deep and involving plot line, with mysteries, strangeness, and oddities, that there is no reason Star Trek cannot be revived. Furthermore we do have today far more resources avialable than in the original series in creating compelling renderings of these strange worlds and different races and beings that werent avialable in the original star trek. While the series should be based on a ship, there should also be episodes allowing the viewer to see other parts of the federation, such as the crew visiting space docks, and federation planets. In addition to exploration and discovery of distant corners of the galaxy, it would also be nice to see in several episodes the ship visit several core federation planets which we seem to see little of, like Vulcan and Earth.

  21. funny foreheaded aliens by gobbo · · Score: 4, Insightful
    Great, one thing I appreciated about JMS was his resistance to the hollywood notion that aliens -- a whole galaxy of them -- are pretty much all white people with convoluted foreheads and a different arrangement of internal organs.

    I mean, I know that SF on TV is pretty much a kind of stage-play allegory, but it all feels so grounded in a '60s kind of shiny smarmy middle-class american morality (yes, I know all about demographics, I'm a director/producer). JMS's B5 brought a touch of biological diversity into the vidiotic galaxy.

    What I would really like is a SF series that takes nanotech and extreme body customization into human -- not just evil borg -- society. One that has Samuel Delaney's sense of cultural development, Ridley Scott's visual and human grittiness, and KS Robinson's sense of the march of history. B5 had some of all that, but some truly cheesy interludes and unconvincing dialogue, and in the end fell back frequently to rely on the hollywood galactic tropes, so he should be able to cope in the ST version of 'future.' Here's hoping he can move the franchise into something more... contemporary.

  22. JMS offer rescinded by zurkog · · Score: 4, Informative
    As great as a JMS-written Trek might be, he just rescinded his offer:

    Trekweb

    Actually...belay everything I just said.

    In the 24 hours between the time I composed the prior note, and sent it, and it made its way through the moderation software, two things happened:

    1) I heard from a trusted source that Paramount is giving the Trek TV world a rest for maybe one to two years, depending on circumstances, no matter who would come along to run it. So it's not right to have folks putting in time doing something that ultimately would be pointless, I don't think that's a proper use of anybody's time.

    2) At the same time as the above, an offer came in to run a new TV series for fall of '06, and since there's no way anything Trek can happen in the interim, I've said yes (now we have to negotiate the deal, but that should be fairly straightforward).

    So on two counts, the whole thing is kind of moot.

    We can reconvene a year or two down the road to see where this takes us, but in the interim...my apologies for waking everybody up in the middle of the night.

    As you were.

    Thanks and with great chagrinedness --

    jms
  23. Or Star Trek reality TV! by Snaller · · Score: 4, Funny
    The Star Trek Amazing Race!

    11 teams of people with an existing relationship will race around federation worlds solving problems and seeing improbable sights.

    The teams are:

    Captains Picard and Riker.

    Riker has too much facial hair and Picard has none!

    Dr. Crusher and all powerful son being Wesley Crusher.

    Dr. Crusher can't cure the common cold because it has been cured, and Wesley Crusher can bring it back with a snap of his fingers!

    Lt. Commander Tuvok and Captain Kathryn Janeway

    He's logical and she isn't!

    The Doctor and The Doctor

    One's a hologram and another is a possibly copyright infringing timelord!

    Lt. Ezri Dax and Dr. Phlox

    She's a hottie and he's nottie!

    Captain Jonathan Archer and Porthos

    One is a dumb unreasoning animal the other is a beagle!

    Constable Odo and Seven Of Nine

    He's a shapeshifter and you'd like to shift her shapes!

    Chief Miles O'Brien and Lt. Cmdr. Data

    One will fix your bits and the other is full of them!

    Sub-Commander T'Pol and Tasha Yar

    One is an expert on decon gel and the other is back from hell!

    Lt. Cmdr. Deanna Troi and Commander Kira Nerys

    One is a counsellor the other needs one!

    Guinan Ensign Hoshi Sato

    One speaks in riddles the other speak riddle!


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