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The Novel as Software

LukePieStalker writes "Former English professor Eric Brown has published the first work in what he claims is a new literary category called the 'digital epistolary novel', or DEN. 'Intimacies', based on an 18th century novel, requires the DEN 1.2 software. The program's interface has windows for mock e-mail, instant messaging, Web browser and pager, through which the narrative unfolds. For those wishing to create their own works in this genre, Mr. Brown is marketing composition software called DEN WriterWare."

150 comments

  1. Whoops! by Seth+Finklestein · · Score: 2, Funny

    I know this is going to sound silly, but I read the title as "The Novell as Software"! Did anyone else make that mental typo, or "mypo"?

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    1. Re:Whoops! by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      And i also saw Zen instead of Den, as in Novell Zenworks.

    2. Re:Whoops! by elleomea · · Score: 1

      Hmm, if a typo is a typographcial error, then you must have made a memographical error; a memo.

    3. Re:Whoops! by Andrewkov · · Score: 1

      Yeah, I thought it said "The Novell as Server" ... My first reaction was "been there, done that", and then "man, Slashdot editors have bad grammar", until I re-read it slowly! LOL!

    4. Re:Whoops! by Deideldorfer · · Score: 0

      That's nothing! I read it as 'The Novell as Spyware'!

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    5. Re:Whoops! by neurokal · · Score: 1

      mammographical error?

      wow what an image!

    6. Re:Whoops! by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      Yep I did,
      but this story is tripe and if I had created the game "Up-Link" I would have my lawyers on this right away!!

      or any game for that mater.

    7. Re:Whoops! by mider · · Score: 1

      I did that too, I was rather confused when I started to read the body of the article, not to mention disappointed. Like what /.ers read novels?

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  2. Great... by maan · · Score: 5, Funny

    Great: first of all there's no link in the NY times article to find where this guy's homepage is. Then I go to google, and the first link is a guy named "Eric Brown" who's an FBI top ten wanted person. But hey, this Eric Brown has published a guide to all Eric Browns on the net. Thank you!

    Maan

    1. Re:Great... by Viking+Coder · · Score: 4, Informative

      What do you mean there's no link? RTFA.

      www.greatamericannovel.com

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    2. Re:Great... by maan · · Score: 2, Informative

      Oops, my bad...it's right there... For anyone else, the site is here.

      Maan

    3. Re:Great... by Kiyooka · · Score: 1

      He would rtfa but he can't find the link remember? : )

  3. hmm... by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    am i the first one to think "novel as software" and think DUH!!! ??

  4. Love It! by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    Art imitates life!

  5. So basically.... by SkaOMatic · · Score: 4, Funny

    Interesting concept. Sometimes it would feel nice to virtually live another life in such a detailed manner. This one is making me sleepy.

    Now if only Microsoft could do something with this.....

    *naps in his cube dreaming of malware-infected reading materials*

  6. Been there done that by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 4, Funny
    "...if you join Sallah on his balloon journey, turn to page 31. If you decide to continue on your own, turn to page 46."

    Interesting idea. But new literary category? Please.

    1. Re:Been there done that by MoonBuggy · · Score: 0

      Just what I was thinking. I actually still have some of these books based on Sonic the Hedgehog from back in the Megadrive (Genesis) era.

    2. Re:Been there done that by acramon1 · · Score: 1

      Well, it's experimenting with a form that hasn't really been used in novels, so it can be classified as a new literary category, that is if it's not just a POS (forgive me, I haven't yet read the book).

      As for the choose-your-own-adventure books? They're not novels, at least not very good ones. Characterization is minimal. There's an overemphasis on plot. Pretty much like most video games =).

    3. Re:Been there done that by blancolioni · · Score: 2, Informative

      Well, if you'd RTFA, you'd have found out that what they're describing has nothing in common with Choose Your Own Adventure books, except perhaps that both can be implemented on a computer.

      I swear, every day Slashdot gets more and more like a bunch wanna-bes sitting in a circle watching somebody else do all the work, saying "that sucks" every five minutes.

      (DEN does, in fact, suck. But at least I read the article to find out why)

    4. Re:Been there done that by Nick+of+NSTime · · Score: 1

      This comment is in reference to the Choose Your Own Adventure series of book published by Bantam in the 1980s and 1990s. The series was "invented" by a lawyer named Edward Packard. He went on to write the best books in the series.

      If you ever decide to check out a CYOA book, stay away from the titles by R.A. Montgomery (including By Balloon to the Sahara, referenced in the parent post). He sucked.

    5. Re:Been there done that by cubicledrone · · Score: 1

      every day Slashdot gets more and more like a bunch wanna-bes sitting in a circle watching somebody else do all the work, saying "that sucks" every five minutes.

      +5 Brilliant

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  7. When I first read this by jlechem · · Score: 3, Funny

    I imagined a choose your own adventure novel online. If you pick the machine gun turn to page 36 if you pick the rocket launcher turn to page 54.

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    1. Re:When I first read this by Dun+Malg · · Score: 5, Funny
      I imagined a choose your own adventure novel online. If you pick the machine gun turn to page 36 if you pick the rocket launcher turn to page 54.

      Heh. Choose your own FPS.

      You got the rocket launcher!
      . If you run at him and fire, go to 71
      . If you choose to bunny-hop to the side while firing, go to 13

      pg71 - ***BLAM!*** he totally rocket blasts you and GIBS fly everywhere! U sux0rz!
      . Respawn at page 1

      pg13 - ***SPLACK!*** you totally gibbed him!
      . If you pick up his ammo, go to 19
      . if you keep firing, go to 62

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    2. Re:When I first read this by Deraj+DeZine · · Score: 1

      That's funny, because your story isn't in first person. That's a second person shooter (something I have not yet seen implemented). You may now commence development on hundreds of similar genre fad (I mean second person) shooters.

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    3. Re:When I first read this by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      . If you run at him and fire, go to 71
      . If you choose to bunny-hop to the side while firing, go to 13


      If you choose to hop in three directions at the same time, then telefrag the four people to your left without touching the ground, absorb 700 rounds of minigun fire without so much as a zitscab, switch weapons, spin and hit the poor dumb sonofabitch 38 stories overhead with the shock rifle, leap back into the doorway, turn and plant five rockets at the feet of the person you can't possibly know is inside and to your right without being able to SEE THROUGH THE FUCKING WALLS YOU CHEATING ASSCRACK, then turn to page 54.

    4. Re:When I first read this by anomalous+cohort · · Score: 1
  8. A first in a new genre? by __aawavt7683 · · Score: 4, Interesting

    Really, this seems very much like the concept of .Hack//Sign.

    That game takes place in a massively multiplayer online RPG; the events unfold through happenings in the world, posts to the message board and e-mail. It seems like this "novel" is very much the same thing, but perhaps more in depth.

    In either case, as far as literature goes, there's no need to have people clicking around to get to the next part. That, to me, says "game". This can just as easily be accomplished in a book with a bit of narration.. it seems just an attempt to shift the style of narration.

    -DrkShadow

    1. Re:A first in a new genre? by SFEley · · Score: 1
      Really, this seems very much like the concept of .Hack//Sign.

      It seems more like a watered-down version of Majestic. Anyone remember that game a couple years ago? You'd get voicemail, IMs and faxes from the fictional characters in some big conspiracy story. Great concept; unfortunately the game itself turned out to be a rather obvious and cruddy puzzle game, so I ditched it in the second month.

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    2. Re:A first in a new genre? by harrisj · · Score: 5, Interesting
      What I was hoping for from the title of the story was something like Galatea 2.2 by Richard Powers. To sum up part of the story there, a professor has a smart AI which drives an interface allowing the user to engage in realistic emails to literary characters. So, the user is able to figure out the story interactively and be part of their own epistolary work (not just read someone else's letters). Obviously, we aren't anywhere near that, and I guess the disappointment leaves me underwhelmed.

      It seems like the innovation here is that instead of chapters, the user has days of the week they can click on to look at the formatted messages. And the vaunted interactivity is that the user can read the story out of sequence, not really in a nonlinear fiction sense (that can be hard), but really just in the same way I can skip forwards and backwards in a book if I want. Wow. I agree that while the interface is cute I suppose, the style really is more like a "game" version of a book. You might as well try interactive fiction instead.

    3. Re:A first in a new genre? by texasandroid · · Score: 1

      Actually, it would be .Hack//Infection, .Hack//Outbreak, etc, the game series. .Hack//Sign was one of the TV shows.

      While they all have the MMORPG as the setting, it's the series of four games that has the interface that you describe.

    4. Re:A first in a new genre? by cardshark2001 · · Score: 3, Interesting
      In either case, as far as literature goes, there's no need to have people clicking around to get to the next part. That, to me, says "game". This can just as easily be accomplished in a book with a bit of narration.. it seems just an attempt to shift the style of narration.

      Well, I think people tend to discount new ways of telling stories. I say there's a reason interactive fiction lives on: people are naturally drawn to a medium which allows them to feel they are in control of a story. This sounds like it's a new form of interactive fiction, and I for one am happy that this professor has pushed the boundaries just a little with respect to how we receive our fiction.

      I love a good novel as much as the next person, but in this age of tech, the novel format is not the only way to present a storyline, and I enjoy being challenged every now and then with a new format for the art form I admire most. I think the interactive novel is the way of the future with respect to fiction.

      There is a reason that interactive fiction lives on despite the lack of pretty graphics and bells and whistles and so forth. People like to be a part of the fictional worlds they enjoy, and fancy graphics can only tell so much of a story. In the end, there's no substitute for good writing.

      Someday, interactive fiction may be the norm, with the old, passively read novel format becoming quaint and outdated. This work may be seen as a pioneering work, when that day comes.

      When people think interactive fiction, they think games, but I think this space has not been explored in depth and I see great opportunities for the future. I for one applaud this man and wish him great success.

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    5. Re:A first in a new genre? by JoeNotCharles · · Score: 1

      Much older than that. System Shock (1994), where you wander around the 3D world, but most backstory and all character interaction other than fighting comes through email and diaries you discover. The earliest I know of is Portal (1986), which takes place entirely in a simulated computer interface.

    6. Re:A first in a new genre? by kin_korn_karn · · Score: 2, Informative

      A Mind Forever Voyaging, Infocom, 1984.

      Best game title ever, btw.

    7. Re:A first in a new genre? by imr · · Score: 1

      I agree.
      The fact that the medium leads and in many ways restrain the experience of the reader put it outside litteracy to me.

      I remember for instance the way John Brunner echoed the zapping frenzy of its world in its Zanzibar novel. He didnt need a screen and an automated zapping to share that feeling with his readers, only style and talent. Same goes for Gibson's views of cyberspace.

    8. Re:A first in a new genre? by daniel_mcl · · Score: 3, Insightful

      The point of a good novel is NOT simply to tell a story but to express a theme in some manner or other. Can you imagine, say, "Great Expectations" without the unification provided by Dicken's social insight? "Boy meets fugitive in chance event, later becomes pivotal experience in life, wastes a bunch of money, and then we find out everyone is related to everyone else somehow." People would call it boring, unrealistic, out of touch. The novel format, however, takes this story and makes it into much more -- an indictment of the absurdities of the British class system the author lived in, a heartful endorsement of the rustic life over the dehumanization of industry, a survey of all the paths life can lead one down.

      I'm not saying it's impossible to rework the Bildungsroman into a more "modern" style -- try watching a John Hughes movie and notice how much of a genius the man was when it came to social interactions. It's unfortunate that his work is ignored as "sentimental" or "cute;" he's probably one of the most brilliant analysts of human emotion alive. However, the idea of turning something into a computer game begins to destroy the author's sense of control over the story. There's a tradeoff between interactivity and control here, and I don't think a compromise can be reached. After all, if the interactive fiction work has a message, it's going to constrain the audience to pursuits which make this message clear; this makes for poor gameplay. On the other hand, if the audience is allowed to control everything they want to, the question of who's actually telling the story begins to come up.

      In order to create the equivalent of a novel in the form of interactive fiction, an author would have to create digital analogs of real people, able to interact with the audience in a manner that live actors would be able to do. This has never, to my knowledge, been tested even with human agents (although the Bill Murray movie "The Man Who Knew Too Little" has such a premise), and the interactive fiction aspect would involve all such difficulties plus the whole issue of passing a Turing test. In short, I don't think this is going to happen any time soon.

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    9. Re:A first in a new genre? by 3terrabyte · · Score: 1
      Yep, I tried it out. I think it would have been more fun if I was 14, but I was bored and willing to try something new.

      HOwever, I quit once they came out with some announcement about shutting down, and that there was just enough time to finish the whole thing if you kept playing.

      My only disappointment with the game was how you'd have to wait a whole day for new stuff. Sometimes I had time to do more. Other days I was too busy to do everything (or too bored to read all the clippings). I also had a difficult time suspending reality and pretending it was real. It's no fun when you KNOW the phone calls are coming...

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    10. Re:A first in a new genre? by thegrue76 · · Score: 1

      I say there's a reason interactive fiction lives on: people are naturally drawn to a medium which allows them to feel they are in control of a story.

      Like...life?

    11. Re:A first in a new genre? by cardshark2001 · · Score: 1
      In order to create the equivalent of a novel in the form of interactive fiction, an author would have to create digital analogs of real people, able to interact with the audience in a manner that live actors would be able to do. This has never, to my knowledge, been tested even with human agents

      Actually, it's been done rather well, take a look at Trinity (winner of the very first IF contest) for a good example.

      Obviously a program cannot yet pass the Turing test, but within the limited realm of interactive fiction, an illusion of reader interaction with the characters can be done to very interesting (if not completely realistic) effect, and there's more that can be done than has been yet tried. As old as the genre is, there's yet great room and possibility for improvement.

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  9. Yeah... by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 1, Insightful
    I liked this better the first time around when it was called a video game

    but, you know, some professors just need to stir up a little press to get raises and/or funding. especially professors without any actual skills

    1. Re:Yeah... by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      Dude. That's interesting. I wonder if it's a DMCA violation if you're only virtually circumventing an access control.

  10. So, how long before this "genre" goes open-source? by The_REAL_DZA · · Score: 1

    Huh? Oh, yeah...

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  11. Prior art? by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    Does anyone else remember a PC game from the 80's called "Portal", which was more of a science fiction narrative that 'played' by reading 'updates' like this?

    For that matter, this was a storytelling technique used in some 19th century classics, such as "Dracula" and "The War of the Worlds", which were narrated through news items, letters, journal entries, etc.

    1. Re:Prior art? by LostOne · · Score: 1

      Ummm, War of the Worlds was only done as a news item for the radio version. IIRC, the novel is a first person narrative.

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  12. Kind of reminds me of Portal by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 4, Informative

    Portal was a great Sci-fi novel that I read back on my trusty C-64 back in the mid 80's. It was kind of like reading a series of emails and logs, and every so often it would provide you with "resarch material". Ah the good ole days.....

    1. Re:Kind of reminds me of Portal by Short+Circuit · · Score: 1

      When I was in high school, I had this really neat idea for a text-based adventure game that was a lot like the technical aspects of Shadowrun. Here are some of the key thoughts I had (all within a virtual environment, mind you):

      You'd rummage through the trash of a target looking for clues like written-down passwords, or website printouts.

      You'd get shell access to a machine, and could use a utility to mirror all of the hopefully sensitive data.

      You'd be able to blackmail company insiders for useful information, or to take the fall if you were detected, etc.

      Basically, it would be an environment where you could pretend to be a black hat. Unfortunately, if I tried to make a game like that, it'd be a political and legal lightning rod in today's climate.

    2. Re:Kind of reminds me of Portal by 3terrabyte · · Score: 1
      There's a text game out there just like that (sans Shadowrun). It was boring as hell.

      Virtual hacking is boring.

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  13. How is this any different from IF? by SadatChowdhury · · Score: 1

    How is this any different from Interactive Fiction. Its form being epistolary (letter formed novel, like Dracula) doesn't matter - this whole idea is till basically interactive fiction...or am I missing something here?

    1. Re:How is this any different from IF? by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      Interactive fiction is considered by many of its supporters to be 'puzzle-driven'. This isn't totally fair, of course, but it does give you incenvtive to call your style something else.

    2. Re:How is this any different from IF? by SFEley · · Score: 1

      What you're missing is that Brown's idea isn't actually interactive. What you're doing is looking at your screen while a bunch of IMs and e-mails show up. There's no game here, you're just reading what's presented to you.

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    3. Re:How is this any different from IF? by thrash242 · · Score: 1

      That's the traditional view of IF, but it's been moving toward puzzleless "games" generally, and there are many puzzleless works of IF now.

      Which I generally think is good, because if there are too many puzzles, it's more of a game than an IF to me. I'd rather focus on the story and the process of discovering it rather than some convoluted puzzle.

      I'm working on a Lovecraftian interactive story now that will hopefully live up to or surpass Anchorhead. It will have some obstacles that are relatively easy to overcome, but no traditional puzzles. The hard part will be finishing the story without going insane. :)

  14. I remember tinkering with this... by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    I'm skeptical about his approach of building it as software. I played with a similar idea a couple years back, but I just replaced the letters and journal entries of the traditional epistlary novel with emails and chat logs (with the device of an older sister out of town who gets emailed the news to fill in the wholes left by not having journals).

    More modern epistles makes sense, but I don't see how I can print this out as a book, which, old fashioned as I am, I prefer.

  15. DEN 1.2? by ackthpt · · Score: 1

    I remember reading DEN 2 in Heavy Metal about 20 years ago.

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  16. Epistolary form by scottennis · · Score: 3, Interesting

    The epistolary form requires the reader to put additional effort into understanding the author's intent. It died out as a viable form more than a hundred years ago as authors realized their readers didn't want to put that much effort into reading. So they came up with the "omniscient narrator." (Hey, cool, now I don't have to think at all, the author is telling the story as if he were god, so I can trust everything he says!)
    I doubt that people today are much more interested in putting effort into their reading than they were 100 years ago.
    My predicition is that the DEN will not revolutionize writing.

    1. Re:Epistolary form by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0
    2. Re:Epistolary form by JLyle · · Score: 2, Funny
      The epistolary form requires the reader to put additional effort into understanding the author's intent. It died out as a viable form more than a hundred years ago as authors realized their readers didn't want to put that much effort into reading. So they came up with the "omniscient narrator."
      So you finally get a chance to put that English Lit. major to use, eh? ;)
    3. Re:Epistolary form by panda · · Score: 2, Funny

      Yeah, except that he should have studied Medieval Lit., too, and then he'd know that the omniscient narrator has been around longer than the epistolary novel.

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    4. Re:Epistolary form by elid · · Score: 2, Interesting
      (Hey, cool, now I don't have to think at all, the author is telling the story as if he were god, so I can trust everything he says!)

      Ever read The Murder Of Roger Ackroyd by Agatha Christie?

    5. Re:Epistolary form by jsac · · Score: 2, Interesting

      Also, Wayne Booth's The Rhetoric of Fiction is all about the extent to which omniscient narrators are not omniscient, and furthermore, how they are often are deserving only a limited degree of trust.

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    6. Re:Epistolary form by scottennis · · Score: 1

      So you finally get a chance to put that English Lit. major to use, eh? ;)

      Actually, I've never had a chance to stop using it!

    7. Re:Epistolary form by scottennis · · Score: 1

      My point was about when the omniscient narrator edged out the epistolary novel, not about when it originated.

    8. Re:Epistolary form by cubicledrone · · Score: 0, Offtopic

      So you finally get a chance to put that English Lit. major to use, eh? ;)

      Yep, guess so. Isn't it funny how people who study the very thing which makes civilization, science, culture, education, government, journalism, literacy, etc. possible is usually the subject of ridicule and derision for the worthlessness of their studies?

      What's the joke? English Lit. majors can't get a job? Gee. That's really interesting, because every company depends on the spoken and written word for every last FUCKING dime they make or spend, no matter how smart management thinks they are.

      Most people like to celebrate the achievements of culture and science. Without language, not only would there be no culture or science, but we'd also still be living in caves.

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    9. Re:Epistolary form by JLyle · · Score: 1
      Yep, guess so. Isn't it funny how people who study the very thing which makes civilization, science, culture, education, government, journalism, literacy, etc. possible is usually the subject of ridicule and derision for the worthlessness of their studies?
      Easy there, big fella, time to switch to decaf. Just making a little joke. Some of my best friends are liberal arts majors.
    10. Re:Epistolary form by cubicledrone · · Score: 1

      Some of my best friends are liberal arts majors.

      Some of my best friends are too. :) I just get somewhat depressed when bright, intelligent people with a lot to contribute are labeled "worthless" by business because they chose to study something other than making money as fast as possible.

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    11. Re:Epistolary form by Jonathan · · Score: 1

      What's the joke? English Lit. majors can't get a job? Gee. That's really interesting, because every company depends on the spoken and written word for every last FUCKING dime they make or spend, no matter how smart management thinks they are.

      Yes, language is important. However whether English Lit. as a field of study is important is a different issue entirely, as language and literature exist independently of critical analysis. The same can't be said of science, which is a product of scientists, or art, which is a product of artists.

  17. Iain M. Bank's take by kilf · · Score: 2, Informative

    There is a large portion of Iain M. Bank's "Excession" that is told as a series of communications between distant and powerful AIs. The joy of these pages is that they read pretty much like a cross between IRC logs and usenet digests. The same petty cliques and tendancies are on display. Even a sort of "TINC" concept is there.

    Each message is topped and tailed by a fictional, futuristic header and footer with an addressing mechism, timestamp, location and the like.

    I recommend it to all.

    1. Re:Iain M. Bank's take by WhiteDragon · · Score: 1

      TINC? There Is No Conspiracy?

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    2. Re:Iain M. Bank's take by kilf · · Score: 1

      Well, There is no Cabal. In the novel, there is a Cabal called the Interesting Times Gang, who step in to coordinate the reponse to unusual circumstances.

  18. Thanks a lot. by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0
    Worst. Idea. Ever.

    Now we're going to get tons of crap "books" which are really just lame attempts to show how people do stuff on computers... Good god, when will people realize that trivial actions on a machine are not LITERATURE??

    This reminds me of those crap Reality TV shows that were all the rage a little while back (Survivor, et. crap.)

  19. Unbelievable!!!!!! by 53cur!ty · · Score: 0, Offtopic

    I can't believe this made /. and none of my submissions have been picked up!

    I'm sure I'm not the only one thinking this right now...Hello...HEllo...Anyone...?

  20. The opening act... except by lacrymology.com · · Score: 3, Funny

    You are standing in an open field west of a white house, with a boarded front door.
    There is a small mailbox here.

    WTF?!?

    -m

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    1. Re:The opening act... except by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      Look mailbox

      > The mailbox is closed

      open mailbox

      > The mailbox is open

      look mailbox

      > It's just an ordinary mailbox

      look in mailbox

      > I don't understand what you want to do.

      afjkl;dsasd nasdfasdfnk;!!!!!!!!11111

    2. Re:The opening act... except by doublem · · Score: 2, Funny

      Take Mailbox

      > The Mailbox is attached to the ground

      Kick Mailbox

      > The mailbox jiggles and shimmies like a pole dancer on acid. The reverberations reach the ground and a humming tone comes from the vibrating soil. Earthworms emerge from the ground, driven out by the vibrating mailbox pole. You see a white envelope slowly emerge from the mailbox, falling to the ground just before the mailbox stops vibrating.

      >Press Enter to Continue

      ENTER

      >Your foot hurts.

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    3. Re:The opening act... except by Dun+Malg · · Score: 1
      You are standing in an open field west of a white house, with a boarded front door.
      There is a small mailbox here.

      No mention of Zork is complete without a reference to the Zork 404 error as implemented by my friend Krux at thcnet.net.

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  21. Re:What If it's a... by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 1, Informative

    Holy shit, don't people even read the blurbs anymore?

    The software doesn't work like EA's old Majestic game... it's a self-contained program that creates a fake interface to the story's "emails".

  22. Wrong way round. by maxwell+demon · · Score: 1

    A novel as software would use something like the Shakespeare Programming Language, but for novels instead of dramas.

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  23. More information on other art forms using this by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    This FAQ will tell you everything you ever wanted to know and more about literary and other art forms based on displaying a variety of browser pop-ups to the viewer.

  24. F-R-Not-R by obsidianpreacher · · Score: 3, Informative
    Here's the free registration NOT required link

    From the article:
    Thom Swiss, editor of The Iowa Review Web and a professor of English at the University of Iowa who focuses on those forms of hypertext, said that to him Mr. Brown's creation seemed mechanical. "While inventive if buggy, I'm not sure how useful it is," he said. "At this stage of its development, it's more of a game and less literature - and not because of the pulp story but because the formal elements of composing the piece are given to you: you just fill in the content."

    And I couldn't agree more. I don't see this style as being appealing to me. Neat concept, but it's not quite "it" ...
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  25. Bah by daeley · · Score: 1, Insightful

    The key here is "Mr. Brown is marketing composition software called DEN WriterWare."

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  26. Re:Come on people by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0
    You know that's an interesting point.

    I also noticed that the amount of posts are really down recently for a lot of these stories. Some of them less than a hundred posts??

    Maybe people are finding things other than slashdot to talk about!! Oh the horror!

    Seriously, I think people are just on vacation and don't have computers around them (Odd concept, eh?)

    Hey, that's an idea for a poll, when do you go on vacation! (Or have we already done that)

  27. Portal from Activision by FromWithin · · Score: 3, Informative

    A long time ago (1986 I think), Activision published a game called Portal, and C64, PC, Amiga, Mac, etc. It is an interactive novel where an intelligent computer pieces together the story of why nobody is left on the Earth. The pieces come as memos, effectively e-mails, and you can browse other parts of the system for various bits of information on characters, events, etc. It's very absorbing and is obviously predates this "new" thing by nearly 20 years!

    There are other excellent games from around the same time like The Fourth Protocol which, although much more interactive, effectively work in the same manner via an icon-based system. A brilliant game, by the way, highly recommended.

  28. this is stupid by darweidu · · Score: 1

    And I mean it, this is a stupid gimmick and will be forgotten in a week. Why did it make frontpage?

    1. Re:this is stupid by SFEley · · Score: 1
      I agree it's a gimmick and doomed to failure, but not because the idea itself is bad. The problem is the silly software you need to read it. People are too lazy to download an app for a work like this, and anyway it breaks the illusion.

      Similiar things have been been done before on real Web pages and in real e-mail forums. One of these days someone will write an actually interesting story this way, they'll get lucky and it'll become popular, and the art form will start to gain some traction. It's not going to be this Professor Brown guy, but you can't fault him for trying something almost new.

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  29. It's been done by jd142 · · Score: 4, Informative

    Griffin and Sabine (and the followups) did this with dead trees back in the late 80's early 90's. The book contained a series of letters, postcards, etc. between the two main characters. And unlike all the novels that were written in letter form before, the letters and post cards were physical objects in the book.

    It's one of those oh-so-clever ideas that gets done once just to show it can be done, then is never done again because it's not that great of an idea.

    There was even a video game like this. I think it was Majestic, http://www.gamezone.com/gamesell/p16652.htm , that I'm thinking of. You could give it your beeper number and it would call you, etc. A one person LARP.

    1. Re:It's been done by dabadab · · Score: 1

      As pointed out in the blurb, it is an epistolean novel, and that means it consists of (fictional) letters and it has been done for a few hundred years.
      It is the first digital one, or the author claims so.

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    2. Re:It's been done by nrabinowitz · · Score: 2, Interesting

      As in the Griffin and Sabine books, the key here is not the form of the story, but the medium - the reason that G+S were interesting was not really the writing (which was was well-done but nothing special) but the artwork and the physical nature of the medium. Holding someone's letter and reading it is actually quite a different experience from reading the same text in a book - you're presented not with the story of someone's life, but with physical objects from that life.

      In the same way, I can see that the on-screen email epistolary novel could give you the same immersive feeling. But it's not a new genre, it's just a slightly new medium. It's still an epistolary novel, just presented in a form meant to make it more immersive.

      As a sidenote, Nick Bantock, the writer/illustrator of the G+S books, also did a ook called the Venetian's Wife, in which most of the messages are emails. IMHO, this book was significantly less successful than G+S - the paper medium, entirely appropriate for the G+S letters and postcards, just looked foolish when applied to email. I can see how the software-based medium might be a really good choice for this kind of work.

      All that said, I agree with the parent post that this is primarily a one-shot gimmick. I don't foresee many (read: any) real writers adopting this medium, which bodes ill for the DEN software biz.

  30. Question about novel piracy by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 1, Interesting

    How do Slashdotters feel about pirating novels? Is it "free advertising" or "sampling?" Just curious.

    1. Re:Question about novel piracy by maxwell+demon · · Score: 3, Funny

      Well, you cannot pirate a novel, since if you copy it, it's not novel any more, is it?

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    2. Re:Question about novel piracy by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      Ba-dum-splash.

    3. Re:Question about novel piracy by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0
      Information just wants to be free. Er... unless I own it of course.

    4. Re:Question about novel piracy by shadowcabbit · · Score: 1

      How do Slashdotters feel about pirating novels? Is it "free advertising" or "sampling?" Just curious.

      Interesting question. I'd suggest posing it as an Ask Slashdot.

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  31. Too early! by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    Software novels for computers? I'm sorry but this won't sell before AI.

  32. Sounds a bit like the game... by rusty0101 · · Score: 3, Insightful

    ...where you were sent e-mail, pages, called at work and home, on your cell phone, faxes, etc. Each event was a clue to a mystery, or an indication you had to go look for something.

    I seem to recall the game folding itself up and going away immediately after the Trade Center Tower Attack.

    Other than the phone and fax events, this sounds quite similar, and I suspect it may end up with some of the same flaws.

    The primary flaw that I see with this is that I personally have no problem reading bits and pieces out of dozens of books, often several different books by the same author. This is purely my decision, and I am in a mindset for that book when I go back to reading it, because I choose to be. Getting IM's, e-mail, etc as "Novel" content, seems to me to be eliminating the reader's election to get back into the frame of mind for properly processing the content, and I suspect will end up being ignored.

    Then again, I could be wrong.

    -Rusty

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    1. Re:Sounds a bit like the game... by HisMother · · Score: 1

      Was that real, or was that just a movie with Michael Douglass?

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    2. Re:Sounds a bit like the game... by pheriannath · · Score: 1

      Before the Dan Brown's The Davinci Code was published, the official website had a variant on this game... You were given a starting point, which had a clue where to find the next bit of information... Parts of it allowed you to log onto a corporate 'portal', read emails, and such. It was fairly short and culminated in an ad for the book, but it was still a fairly interesting idea.

    3. Re:Sounds a bit like the game... by fcheslack · · Score: 1

      that was a real game which I was about to comment on myself. I could not for the life of me remember the name of the game, probably because it curled up and died in the corner after horrible reviews and sales. Its always been an interesting idea, but I still dont see it being successful just yet. Maybe in 2 or 3 years someone else will come up with this "revolutionary" idea again and make it actually work, but I dont think this one is there yet.

  33. Digital Epistolary Novel. . ? by Fantastic+Lad · · Score: 2, Interesting
    he claims is a new literary category called the 'digital epistolary novel', or DEN.


    If all his works sound this appealing, then I'm sure he'll be making tens of dollars in no time.

    Anyway, Griffin and Sabine has done the series of letters as a story already, and in grand style, I might add. The novelty novel. With paintings and cursive handwriting and little pasted-in envelopes.

    Frankly, I can't think of anything further from the romantic ideal than ASCII. Of course, I can also think of several relationships which began on-line, so who am I to judge?


    -FL

  34. Eye-strain by Ra5pu7in · · Score: 2, Interesting

    Don't we already spend enough time looking at our computer screens? Looking through a bunch of faux emails and webpages to "read" the story just doesn't sound appealing. Instead it sounds like a recipe to keep people in front of their computers even more than they already do.

    Now, the one thing I don't see any indication of, but that several people have mentioned, is the ability to alter the story by how you respond. This DEN looks pretty cut and dried to me - i.e. the sequence of emails and webpages is preset to tell the story - it isn't something you as the reader respond to. Maybe I missed something because I didn't read the NY Times article (won't register) - but looking at his own site should have been more informative.

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  35. Official Site by beeglebug · · Score: 2, Informative

    More information about the novel, the software and the author can be found here.

    It's not a bad read actually, even if the idea is not exactly new...

  36. Novels are for relaxation... by thesaur · · Score: 1

    I'm sorry, I don't think that a novel in this form is going to be popular bedtime literature... it requires effort from the reader. Of course, there were many popular text adventure games, so it's not like there will be no market for this.

    Just don't forget that interactive books aren't in vogue anymore. What's so different about this?

  37. Not my cup of caffeinated beverage... by CharonX · · Score: 1

    I mean, I love to read, many generes - from Terry Pratchett over Tad Williams to Karl May
    But when I'm faced with interactive fiction I always get the feeling to have to "split up".

    "So were all the subtile hints true? Is the conspiracy real? For Yes, go to page 56, for No go to page 241"

    I somehow cannot stand such books. Sorry.

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  38. What Is Art? by linuxdoctor · · Score: 4, Insightful

    Yet another contribution to that age old conundrum. Other posters have weighed in on whether they like it or not, and whether it is even a new genre citing similar approaches going back over a hundred years.

    An Anonymous Coward dismissed it entirely saying it was not even literature. Isn't it, though?

    The one point that caught my eye was the last sentence. "Mr. Brown is marketing ..." That said it all.

    Is it art, or marketing ploy? Considering that even television commericals are considered by some to be art, one wonders.

    I've always been in the "art for art's sake school." The fact that Mr. Brown is marketing his 'genre' diminishes the value of his 'literature', at least for me. But does that mean that it's not art?

    1. Re:What Is Art? by ShieldWolf · · Score: 2, Interesting

      I have a rather useful definition that seems to cover all cases I consider art:

      "Art it the indirect communication of one persons abstract idea to another through an indirect medium."

      The more abstract the idea, the less the audience connects with the artist; the more direct the communication the less 'revelatory' the experience is.

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    2. Re:What Is Art? by corian · · Score: 1

      Is it art, or marketing ploy?

      I gave a bit of a double-take to the web address for this. Calling it "great american novel" speaks a lot more of ego than of substance.

  39. ARG by MagicM · · Score: 1

    This sounds more like reading the past events of an ARG than a novel.

  40. yeah, I'm an idiot... by Thud457 · · Score: 2, Funny

    arrrrrrr, me likes a good pirate novel to while away the time on a long third watch!!!

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  41. Isn't highly similar to LJBook ?! by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 1, Interesting

    The LJBook thing turns your blog into a PDF archive/book suitable for printing... It's produced by LaTeX and looks quite good...

    It's highly similar when people use their blog as a journal like livejournal's users...

  42. For the love of God, PLEASE HELP ME!!!! by Thud457 · · Score: 2, Funny
    I signed up for that "game" when it first started and I haven't been able to escape since! They're still following me!!!

    Oh God, I've gotta go, one of "Them" just came into the library...

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  43. Shuteye Town by jefu · · Score: 2, Informative

    For those interested in such things, there is also "Shuteye Town" by R. F. Laird, author of the puzzlingly odd and brilliant "Boomer Bible". Unhappily it is all MS Word files so I've never been able to explore it correctly and can only report this at second hand.

  44. Exegesis by dmorin · · Score: 2, Interesting

    Everybody's mentioning Griffin and Sabine (or however you say it). If you actually like this style, look for Exegesis by Astro Teller. The story consists of a series of emails between an emergent AI and its unwitting creator. Nothing special in terms of story or character, but that particular aspect does make it stand out as different from the rest.

  45. Just My Opinion by g_goblin · · Score: 0

    Since all this week it has taken me no less than 10 minutes to log into my PC because our Novell servers have been AWOL, I'm starting to think Novell software suX0rz!!!

  46. Folded long before that by doublem · · Score: 1

    Majestic died long before Sept 11. It only lasted a couple months after the initial release. The few people who tried it didn't like it.

    Based on what I've heard, it was a bad idea, not much fun and required a massive time investment.

    That, and I'm sure all those phone calls and pages added up in cost, both both the publisher maintaining it all and the people "playing" the game.

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  47. How about writing software as a novel? by ninejaguar · · Score: 1
    Not entirely offtopic as it deals with authoring works, but flips the subject behind the article on its head. And, it's something I couldn't resist sharing.

    Jos Claerbout, in teaching himself OOP, has written one of the more creative and instructive tutorials on OOP design hosted at Stanford. The work is admittably rough around the edges and may be too short (nothing a good publishing editor couldn't have polished up). But, it remains valuable for those who tend to be more right-brained thinkers, rather than left, and who wish to participate in software engineering. Sadly, the author has passed away at a young age, but he's left a useful legacy for the rest of us. I've come to appreciate his humor by reading his college entrance essays.

    = 9J =

    1. Re:How about writing software as a novel? by warriorpostman · · Score: 1

      I only started reading that tutorial, but it demonstrates very clearly that writing software is tied to a unique sense of literacy. Much like creative writing, programmers have to develop program flow (much like a plot) and they do a butt-load of "naming". As far as I'm concerned, when reading other people's code, "naming" is my biggest pet peeve. What you call a function or variable determines the overall readability of code. The best creative writers have often "bent" the language to create a new literary sensibility. I have to wonder if programmers had more creative sensibility when naming variables, classes and methods (hell, even package/component names), wouldn't it make code more interesting to read?

    2. Re:How about writing software as a novel? by ninejaguar · · Score: 1
      I have to wonder if programmers had more creative sensibility when naming variables, classes and methods (hell, even package/component names), wouldn't it make code more interesting to read?

      At the very least, it would make code a pleasure to navigate. No one appreciates being lost if your aim is to reach a definite goal. Considerate and friendly signs accurately describing the foreign landscape would be a welcome sight for a stranger. Who enjoys hacking through the thicket of maze-like logic in the dark without a helpful hint of the right direction to take?

      = 9J =

  48. interactive computer games by sir_cello · · Score: 1


    Nice going prof, but you are tunnel visioned.

    'The novel as software' has long existed in the form of interactive computer games - dare we go back to nethack, maniac mansion and the various other unfolding adventures of the genre.

  49. Self evolving storyline? by ShelfWare · · Score: 1
    This doesn't sound that original ...

    Maybe a better approach would be something like one of those tests that adapts to your previous answers, except the user would have to rate sections of the story and it would serve up alternate paths based on what the reader likes (more action, suspense, plot twists, romance, *action*, etc.)

    They could read the story hundreds of times and have hundreds of possible path's and endings.

  50. Older than that by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    Back in probably the early to mid eighties (maybe a bit before that?) when D&D was getting big, some publishers got the bright idea to combine reading with a touch of role playing and started putting out the "Choose your own adventure" novels. AFAIK, that is how the choose your own adventure novels came about.

  51. remember the "goto" novels? by peter303 · · Score: 1

    These were stories writen in a non-sequential order. You had to flip to another page at the end of a section. Sometimes you had more than one choice.

    Some instructional material wa written this way. It got rather annoying. I prefere the "expanded outline" type. You only go into the detail you think you need.

  52. My favorite was the Screwtape Letters by peter303 · · Score: 1

    The devil did his work by appealing to one's intellectual arrogance- "I'm too smart for that". Sounds familar? The devil has lots of opportunity in the modern world when knowledge is a prized commodity.

  53. Not the first DEN by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    Yet another instance where the PLATO system was first, with at least two instances of literary works done as digital epistolary novels, that you had to "read" by "experiencing" them online. This would have been circa 1975-76.

  54. Bad Download by imnoteddy · · Score: 1

    Download file is WinDOS only. No thanks.

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  55. Narrative through technology? by mopslik · · Score: 3, Funny

    The program's interface has windows for mock e-mail, instant messaging, Web browser and pager, through which the narrative unfolds.

    Just browsing through the table of contents...

    Chapter I: John deletes his spam
    Chapter II: John closes a million popups
    Chapter III: John deletes more spam
    Chapter IV: John cybers **hotChIcKa69**
    Chapter V: John deletes more spam and sets up a new mail client
    Chapter VI: John closes more popups, installs Mozilla
    Chapter VII: John deletes more spam, puts his fist through the monitor
    Chapter VIII: John goes to the hospital
    ...

  56. The First Software Novel of this Sort: by gershbaz · · Score: 1

    Was Uncle Buddy's Phantom Funhouse, a hypercard stack (or rather set of stacks) designed as a whole free-exploratory mystery. Really still brilliant stuff, and a hint at the possibilities of hypertext before EastGate defined it into a certain narrow and dull scope. Some links: http://www.eastgate.com/catalog/Funhouse.html http://www.kith.org/logos/wander/10.west/Buddy.htm l http://www.iath.virginia.edu/elab/hfl0285.html

  57. EA's Majestic by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    Actually Majestic was pretty interesting, I paid up the $10/month fee for two or three months to try it. The game would IM you, email you and phone you with prerecorded messages and you had to do interenet searches to find information that would take you on to the next "puzzle". THe problem was that the plot wasn't very interesting and their were built in time delays so you couldn't just plow through the puzzles like in most interactive puzzle-based games. Ultimately I suspect this led to the failure, but it was an interesting concept and the technology was executed well in Majestic.

  58. Great by radiophonic · · Score: 1

    It's not like me to smack new technology but, c'mon, how far could somethig like this go?

    It seems that it's the type of technology that'll wind up wearing a big t-shirt that says: "If you've seen one of me, you've seen it all".

    If I wanted to look through a bunch of email and follow a soap opera-like story I'd go to work.

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  59. interactive fiction by gitana · · Score: 1

    People interested in this might also be interested in some interactive fiction.

    http://www.ifarchive.org/

  60. Re:what's the difference? by ryen · · Score: 1

    The one point that caught my eye was the last sentence. "Mr. Brown is marketing ..." That said it all.

    Was it Mr. Brown or the submitter of the article that put it in terms of "marketing". perhaps you should think about that first.

  61. Interesting yes, novel no by Sky_Wrytr · · Score: 1

    While Mr. Brown certainly has found an unusual albeit geeky medium for literary expression, I doubt that he has uncovered a new genre. In 1994, Chronicle Books published "Gryphon and Sabine" by Nick Bantock. I submit that this work of fiction was the first epistolary novel. Follow this link for more info about "Gryphon and Sabine": http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/ASIN/0811806960/ qid=1082147684/sr=2-2/ref=sr_2_2/002-8089876-64000 12#product-details

  62. Epistolary without the software by Robotech_Master · · Score: 1

    Of course, you don't need software to write an epistolary novel...or even an e-pistolary novel.

    There was a rather fun gaming product that came out a couple years back called De Profundis , which involved roleplaying by writing letters back and forth. Sadly, it came out shortly before Hogshead went out of the gaming business, so it's not widely available anymore.

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  63. Just another way to shove ads down our throats by MissTuxie · · Score: 0

    Literature is one of the last places we can reach for a ad-free enviroment. Now, if they start calling this game a novel, you can be sure people will be shown lots of ads and stuff "relating" to the storyline. Just give me back my dead trees, I'm very happy with them, thank you.

  64. did we read the same book? by Transient0 · · Score: 1

    It seems to me that Galatea 2.2 was actually about an attempt to get a neural network to parse a literary novel into an English essay of approximately the same calibre as that produced by a graduate student.

    Well, that and Richard Powers getting over his break-up with his wife.

    Excellent book, but I don't remember anything about this interactive epistolary novel stuff.

  65. Someone has probably said this by now... by mzo · · Score: 1

    but to anyone (all 10 of us? haha) who played Majestic this is kind of a weaker version of that. In Majestic the game would contact you using real AIM, real emails, fake webpages, videos and would even call your house. None of this simulated crap. However I really applaud people trying to move this genre of interactive fiction forwards. While some people just won't "get" why you would wanna do any sort of work just to "turn the page" it's basically about immersion. With a game like Majestic, the fact that you had no idea when the game was gonna call or e-mail or IM you made it even more exciting. Some people may have thought that game was stupid but I think it was an amazing attempt and f**k EA for shutting it down like they do so many original projects only to put out another 2003,2004,etc edition of their sports franchises.

  66. Plenty of other email stories by txtjill · · Score: 1

    Here's a list of other email narratives: http://huminf.uib.no/~jill/txt/emailnarratives.htm l