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aaronvegh writes "Although it qualifies as a Young Adult novel, M.T. Anderson's Feed is a worthy read by any card-carrying geek. Especially the kind curious about where today's Net culture is heading. Set in a dystopian future America, the narrative follows a 14-year-old boy named Titus as he hangs out with his friends and tries to win the love of Violet, a girl much smarter than he." Read on for the rest of aaronvegh's review. Feed author M.T. Anderson pages 320 publisher Walker Childrens Paperbacks rating 8 reviewer aaronvegh ISBN 074459085X summary A disturbing and believeable rendering of a dystopian future America features some cool tech gone amazingly wrong.

The trouble is, all the citizens of this future state are connected to the global network with a direct neural link, called the Feed. The Feed connects its users directly to all others, allowing instant access to information and communication.

Like today's Net, however, the flow of information has grown disturbingly two-way: the Feed is owned by corporations, and their agenda to increase consumerism has led to such privacy-stripping "innovations" as predictive marketing (getting "bannered" by merely looking at purchaseable items) and constant interruptions (such as chats being broken by Google AdSense-inspired ads).

Even more sinister, those same corporations bought out the government's role in education, and so Titus and his friends attend School(TM) -- where literacy is not on the curriculum. Instead, students learn how to make purchase decisions and better use their Feed.

Titus' new girlfriend, however, is representative of a growing counter-culture. Violet's education is strictly home-based, and her objections to the mainstream grow increasingly strident, even as she becomes a victim of it. It is perhaps no coincidence that her lack of affluence in this society is tied to her resistance against it.

The citizens of this future America, weaned on the Feed, are shockingly illiterate. Their language is largely incoherent, riddled with "like"s and "thing"s. Poor verbal composition is combined with an almost complete lack of vocabulary, so characters are often caught referring to objects as "thing... uh..." -- pause while they look up the term through their Feed -- "table."

We often attribute poor language skills to teenagers, but the author's willingness to show adults with the same deficiencies is telling. Even the President of the United States appears unfocused and uneducated.

Not surprisingly, the inhabitants of this world are incredibly self-absorbed. Titus repeatedly demonstrates a callous disregard for the feelings of his dying girlfriend, although he has the good grace to feel guilty buying a sweater while she confesses her fear of death. It's a culture where citizens are trained to value only what's shiny and new, and to dispose of the old and used. How any relationship can survive in that environment is a mystery only philosophers and Slashdot commentators might dare address.

The author's handling of the characters is both realistic and sensitive. I found myself shaking my head at Titus and his friends, but my disgust was accompanied by a sympathy; like a baby raised by wolves, his behaviour is completely understood, if not acceptable.

In fact, the picture drawn of this future is all too clear, and the author's skill at connecting the dots between today and that time make for some serious introspection. After all, today's Internet is an obvious precursor of the Feed, and as commercial life makes ever-greater demands of our attention online, where does it end?

The gear that makes this future possible is incredibly empowering. It connects all people together, literally, to the sum total of all human knowledge, while providing a complete, instant telecommunications network. But corporate interest is clearly the villain here, with all technology perverted to consumerist ends, ripping away privacy, individual expression and true liberty. In the right hands, the Feed would be more powerful than the agricultural, industrial and communications revolutions put together; instead, the Feed is leading its users to an apocalypse, as the author strongly hints at the end of the novel.

Most savage of all, the citizens of this future America don't see the apocalypse coming. As they increasingly turn a blind eye to how their goods are manufactured and delivered (sound familiar?), they ignore the radiation-induced skin lesions that everyone has, the fact that couples can't reproduce without a "conceptionarium", the glowing green clouds, the dead seas, the ash falling from the sky. In their dome habitats, life goes on, in the malls and upcars and fake lawns underneath the Clouds(TM) -- while the other nations of the Earth vow to obliterate America's corporations by any means necessary.

It's a hell on Earth, but a hell that seems destined to come to a crashing halt. Like the best in science fiction, this novel shows us the worst-case scenario, so we can thoughtfully avoid it.

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310 comments

  1. Another Matrix Rip off by The_Real_Nire · · Score: 2, Interesting

    all the citizens of this future state are connected to the global network with a direct neural link, called the Feed.

    When will the rip offs of Ghost in the Shell/Matrix end?!!

    1. Re:Another Matrix Rip off by WoodChuckNorris · · Score: 1

      If you're looking for a good, not-a-Matrix/GITS-ripoff-but-still-Matrix-inspired book, check out Idlewild, by Nick Sagan (son of the famed Carl Sagan). It's a great book, and not at all ripped off. A very great read for fans of the Matrix and such.

    2. Re:Another Matrix Rip off by yohan1701 · · Score: 2, Informative

      Actually this is closer to an Outer limits episode that pre dates the Matrix by many years

    3. Re:Another Matrix Rip off by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      Presumably, if Ghost in the Shell came first then The Matrix should not be included in your statement.

    4. Re:Another Matrix Rip off by born_to_live_forever · · Score: 1

      One silly rhetorical question deserves another, so...

      "When will the idiots who think The Matrix is original enough to be worth ripping off, cease to post on /.?"

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      - Peter Ravn Rasmussen

    5. Re:Another Matrix Rip off by JCCyC · · Score: 4, Funny

      Even the President of the United States appears unfocused and uneducated.

      When will the rip offs of George W.Bush end?!!

    6. Re:Another Matrix Rip off by mchawi · · Score: 4, Insightful

      I always hope comments like these are meant as sarcasm. It really makes me wonder if today's generation has any idea of the author's from generations ago that did very similar work. For instance:

      http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cyberpunk

      I guess I'm getting old when I've actually read the books that current movies are based on, but when I try to discuss them with people I get a blank look. Sometimes I wonder if the thought process is 'what is a book?' Of course this would segue into Bradbury....oh nevermind...

    7. Re:Another Matrix Rip off by GlassUser · · Score: 1

      I was wondering if that immediately popped into anyone else's head.

    8. Re:Another Matrix Rip off by MinutiaeMan · · Score: 1

      Funny, I was thinking of Farenheit 451 more than the Matrix. It's really sounding like the ignorant culture of 451 with the advanced computer technology of tomorrow tossed in.

    9. Re:Another Matrix Rip off by Eccles · · Score: 1

      When will the rip offs of George W.Bush end?!!

      John Kerry is hoping it'll be January, 2005...

      --
      Ooh, a sarcasm detector. Oh, that's a real useful invention.
    10. Re:Another Matrix Rip off by global_diffusion · · Score: 1

      John Kerry is hoping it'll be January, 2005...

      So do the rest of us, silly.

    11. Re:Another Matrix Rip off by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      Nov. 2nd

  2. Even the President of the United States by stevemm81 · · Score: 5, Funny

    "Even the President of the United States appears unfocused and uneducated..."

    Sounds a little familiar.

    1. Re:Even the President of the United States by phyruxus · · Score: 4, Funny
      >> corporations bought out the government's role in education, and so Titus and his friends attend School(TM) -- where literacy is not on the curriculum.

      Ahhh... reality-based fiction. Those who do not remember the past, uh... oooh, shiny!

      --
      "A witty saying proves nothing." ~Voltaire
      "d'Oh!" ~Homer
    2. Re:Even the President of the United States by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 1, Insightful

      "while the other nations of the Earth vow to obliterate America's corporations by any means necessary." - wonderfull. At the core it's another America bashing work. Like the US is the only country with powerful corporations... What's the part about people not seeing what goes on around them. Oh ya, it's all the United State's fault.

      And for the president... I don't hold the problems that he sometimes has with speaking against him. I often stutter, say the wrong word... I realize everyone is not perfect and I don't want an actor as president. His intelligence is shown by his ability to delegate, pick good advisors, and choose amongst all the possibilities they present. I wish I had even a fraction of that ability.

    3. Re:Even the President of the United States by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      Yah, that does sound familiar...For some reason, the name 'Jimmy Carter' comes to mind - the architect of the most "unfocused", absurd and unwitting US foreign policy in my lifetime.

    4. Re:Even the President of the United States by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      It's probably not every corporation their after. Just a few.

    5. Re:Even the President of the United States by 1u3hr · · Score: 1
      I don't want an actor as president. His intelligence is shown by his ability to delegate, pick good advisors, and choose amongst all the possibilities they present. I wish I had even a fraction of that ability.

      And we all wish GWB had those abilities too. He seems to have chosen the worst advisors (Cheney, Rumsfeld most prominently) and made the worst choices of action.

    6. Re:Even the President of the United States by Ben+Hutchings · · Score: 1

      I don't know whether GWB chose his advisors or whether it was the other way round.

  3. Would never happen by EnnTeeDee · · Score: 4, Funny

    This book sounds totally unrealistic: "Even the President of the United States appears unfocused and uneducated."

    This would never happen in real life, you know.

    1. Re:Would never happen by jacoby · · Score: 3, Funny

      I totally agree! Our current president has degrees from Harvard and Yale!

    2. Re:Would never happen by SRain315 · · Score: 1

      Ah. School(TM). (Ivy League(TM) no less!) Well that certainly guarantees that he's not a dipshit.

      I'm sure he can tell his Mercedes(TM) from his Rolls-Royce(TM) and his Beluga(TM) from his foix-gras(TM).

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      --- Corporations Are A Fad.
  4. Young Adult Novel by vivek7006 · · Score: 5, Funny

    is NOT a porno.

    Sorry!

    1. Re:Young Adult Novel by Anita+Coney · · Score: 5, Funny

      Thanks, I was able to cancel my order at Amazon just in time!

      --
      If someone says he and his monkey have nothing to hide, they almost certainly do.
  5. One problem with posts like this by Youssef+Adnan · · Score: 5, Insightful

    Is that it kills the story. If there is a point that the story is trying to imply, it just kills it. Sometimes, the author is trying to leave something to the reader, but when you get it from another person, it just no longer is there.

    1. Re:One problem with posts like this by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      Fortunately, there's an easy solution called "don't read it."

    2. Re:One problem with posts like this by oneiron · · Score: 3, Insightful

      Pulling your own interpretation out of a book or movie after hearing someone else's interpretation is not difficult. Critical thinking skills are your friend. Think for yourself.

    3. Re:One problem with posts like this by halfacat · · Score: 1

      What are you saying here? That we should never discuss a work of art because that will taint the initial impression?

      How exactly does this kill the story? The point of sci-fi is the plot and the scenery. In order to really spoil any well done work of sci-fi you would have to write a review that is about ten times longer than the book because well done sci-fi has a depth that you cannot sum up by explaining the plot.

      Its not like he wrote a whole lot more than is probably on the back cover of the book. I for one am now intrigued about this story and will read it in the next week, but never would have if this post had not been made.

  6. So... by AKAImBatman · · Score: 2, Interesting

    ...do the characters actually *do* anything about it, or does his rebellious girlfriend die and life goes on?

    1. Re:So... by ink_13 · · Score: 4, Insightful
      Why not read the book and find out?

      'Round where I live, there's this amazing place called a library, that lends out books for free. You may like to investigate the existance of something similar in your area. They may even be able to furnish you with a copy of this particular book.

    2. Re:So... by Lord_Dweomer · · Score: 1
      Perhaps you need to read the book to find out.

      Or just check the Feed and find out from someone who already read it.

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      Buy Steampunk Clothing Online!
    3. Re:So... by aardvarkjoe · · Score: 1

      Maybe because there are so many good books out there that spending a couple hours reading this one to satisfy vague curiosity would be a waste of time?

      --

      How can we continue to believe in a just universe and freedom to eat crackers if we have no ale?
    4. Re:So... by Rognvald · · Score: 1

      Actually, that is part of the point of the book. While Titus does feel guilty, his girlfriend dies alone. Ironically, the reason she dies is that she did not have the feed implanted at birth, and it rejects her/she rejects it. Whether life goes on is left as an excercise for the reader - but remember, the lesions everyone are getting are actually become fashionable. One of the girls in Titus' clique gets plastic surgery to make her lesions bigger and redder than anyone else's.

    5. Re:So... by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      Just a thought, but you could read the book, I would at least hope the answer lies there. ;-)

    6. Re:So... by AKAImBatman · · Score: 4, Insightful

      To answer my own question, the reviews on Amazon suggest that the end of the story is that his girlfriend dies and life goes on. Well whoop-de-do. This sort of ending can be acceptable in a short story where the author wishes to bring attention to an issue, but is completely unacceptable in a novel. One of the core points of good literature is the struggle of human-kind to improve himself. How does this novel meet that goal if the author provides no solution to averting this future? The very literary purpose of dysotopian futures is to demonstrate that such a future is possible, and demonstrate how it might be avoided. Leaving the reader with no hope is not the way to accomplish this.

      To me it sounds like this book would have been far better had the author taken the opportunity to "awaken" the main character and allow him to learn about his humanity.

    7. Re:So... by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      I bet you're the kinda guy who's watching a movie and asks people, "What's going to happen next?" I hate you.

    8. Re:So... by AKAImBatman · · Score: 2, Insightful

      Because I do not feel like filling my head with such drivel. Shouldn't the point be to avoid a future like this instead of merely accepting it? What kind of lessons are we teaching our children if their literature tells them that there is no hope?

      Personally, I find this book rather disgusting. The fact that the "girlfriend" dies while attempting to obtain an implant only furthers the idea that life is cheap and emotions are pointless. The author should have more carefully chosen his pen name. "M.T. Anderson" is not synonymous with "M.T. Soul".

    9. Re:So... by AKAImBatman · · Score: 2, Funny

      I bet you're the kinda guy who's watching a movie and asks people, "What's going to happen next?"

      No, I'm the guy who yells from the back row, "WHAT THE HELL KIND OF ENDING WAS THAT?!" An appropriate platitude for drivel like this book.

    10. Re:So... by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 1, Insightful

      Apparently you have never read "A Brave New World".

      Happy endings are not by any means a necassity of literature of any sort. Steinbeck is an example of a very successful and accomplished author who didn't seem to believe in happy endings.

    11. Re:So... by rjstanford · · Score: 3, Insightful

      To me it sounds like this book would have been far better had the author taken the opportunity to "awaken" the main character and allow him to learn about his humanity.

      Maybe by not doing so, he hopes to "awaken" his readership instead? There's something to be said for books that don't follow standard formulae too, especially in the all-too-genre young adult section.

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    12. Re:So... by GORDOOM · · Score: 1

      If this is indeed the case (I haven't read the book), then it reminds me a good deal of Orwell's famous Nineteen Eighty-Four. At the end, the protagonist is seen as being totally brainwashed into believing everything Big Brother tries to tell him. I am convinced that Orwell did this for a reason. Once things in a society get that bad, it is difficult to impossible for things ever to change, because people don't know that there is anything better - they don't even have the ability to imagine anything better! By the time we see the formation of a society like the one Orwell described, it could well be too late. The only time to stop it is before it starts.

      The same could be said here. By having it end on such a depressing note, it reminds us that, once done, something like this is hard to undo. The only way to stop it is to prevent it from starting.

    13. Re:So... by Enigma_Man · · Score: 1

      Was that sarcasm, or do you just appear to be strongly religious?

      -Jesse

      --
      Nothing says "unprofessional job" like wrinkles in your duct tape.
    14. Re:So... by Enigma_Man · · Score: 1

      Just because it's not a happy ending doesn't mean it's drivel, use your head.

      -Jesse

      --
      Nothing says "unprofessional job" like wrinkles in your duct tape.
    15. Re:So... by AKAImBatman · · Score: 2, Insightful

      Very strong sarcasm aimed at the author. Perhaps its a result of having a family to protect, but I simply find it difficult to believe that anyone can be so callous as to write a story ending with no real concern over a pointless loss of a loved one. I'm even more disgusted by the fact that the author chose to present this garbage to impressionable young adults who lack a solid enough grasp on the depth of reality to effectively judge the content for themselves.

    16. Re:So... by AKAImBatman · · Score: 1

      The same could be said here. By having it end on such a depressing note, it reminds us that, once done, something like this is hard to undo. The only way to stop it is to prevent it from starting.

      Allow me to point out that the 1984 character struggled against the reality in which he found himself. This allows Orwell's warning to ring loud and clear. This book instead would have us believe that humans have become such sheep as to prefer a nonexistence of life and freedom.

      From everything I've heard about this book, there is no specific force attempting to subvert society. Rather, individuals go along with it because they *LIKE* it that way. That's a very disturbing idea to be putting in the minds of young adults.

    17. Re:So... by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      Personally, I find this book rather disgusting...

      So quick to judge. You were the one who asked questions about the book and now you turn around an make a judgement seemingly based off what another has said and not based on actually reading the book.

      Go to a bookstore or library and spend a few minutes reading the first few pages. At around 200 words per minute, and I'm low balling it, five minutes should be enough to make the determination yourself.

    18. Re:So... by Enigma_Man · · Score: 2, Insightful

      I dunno, I think a lot of young folk (of the age who'd read a sci-fi book, say 8 to 16, older being non-young anymore) would have enough builtup morals to be absolutely appalled by the ending, and that's apparently the point. Society had reached a point where one character's death didn't make much more of an impact over another beyond vague guilt. I believe that is the entire point of the book infact.

      -Jesse

      --
      Nothing says "unprofessional job" like wrinkles in your duct tape.
    19. Re:So... by AKAImBatman · · Score: 1

      Just because it's not a happy ending doesn't mean it's drivel, use your head.

      Sir, I am using not only my head, but also my heart. This book is either very poor writing, or a reprehensible attempt to subvert society through the younger generation. Its ending leaves the reader with the idea that man should LIKE the idea of becoming mindless sheep. In this society, there is no pain, no emotion, no true happiness. There is only despair masked by the distraction of a constant information flow.

      Where are the characters who make a bold statement against this society, and what would they be fighting against? If the author is to be believed, they have no enemy other than laziness.

    20. Re:So... by Trurl's+Machine · · Score: 1

      Allow me to point out that the 1984 character struggled against the reality in which he found himself.

      And lost. In the end, Winston Smith is a broken person, who embraced the ideology of his torturers and quietly awaits his inevitable execution. There's no hope left.

      This book instead would have us believe that humans have become such sheep as to prefer a nonexistence of life and freedom.

      Orwell's point exactly.

      From everything I've heard about this book, there is no specific force attempting to subvert society. Rather, individuals go along with it because they *LIKE* it that way.

      Just like the citizens of Oceania or animals at the Animal Farm.

    21. Re:So... by AKAImBatman · · Score: 2, Insightful

      Society had reached a point where one character's death didn't make much more of an impact over another beyond vague guilt. I believe that is the entire point of the book infact.

      Then this is a failure of the author to *study* the liberal arts. The very idea behind those arts is that some things are inherent in the makeup of mankind. This things are both his strengths and weaknesses. A great deal of literature has been produced on both of those concepts. In other words, *society* may not give a damn (not a good situation), but why doesn't the individual? If he had a personal tie to this person, where was his humanity when her life was on the line? Did anyone take it from him by force? No, the author pretends that this humanity does not exist.

      An example of a better ending would be that the character DOES care about her death, but no one around him can understand or care about his feelings on the issue. THAT would serve as a warning against such a future and warn others to not so easily part with their concern for others.

    22. Re:So... by AKAImBatman · · Score: 1

      And lost. In the end, Winston Smith is a broken person, who embraced the ideology of his torturers and quietly awaits his inevitable execution. There's no hope left.

      Exactly why Orwell's point rang so clearly! Who is the enemy of this story? What is the character struggling against? Oh wait, he's not struggling. He doesn't even give a damn. His humanity wasn't stripped from him by force, he simply isn't human. What kind of story is that?

    23. Re:So... by Fulcrum+of+Evil · · Score: 1

      Perhaps its a result of having a family to protect, but I simply find it difficult to believe that anyone can be so callous as to write a story ending with no real concern over a pointless loss of a loved one.

      That's the point - the main characer is so conditioned to only value baubles that he has no concern for his fellow human being. Life isn't all disney, you know.

      I'm even more disgusted by the fact that the author chose to present this garbage to impressionable young adults who lack a solid enough grasp on the depth of reality to effectively judge the content for themselves.

      I'm sure you were equally disgusted with Lord of the Flies. After all, making impressionable children read that is just going to encourage them to go kill each other.

      --
      "We returned the General to El Salvador, or maybe Guatemala, it's difficult to tell from 10,000 feet"
    24. Re:So... by JVert · · Score: 1

      And lost. In the end, Winston Smith is a broken person, who embraced the ideology of his torturers and quietly awaits his inevitable execution. There's no hope left.

      Wait, he was going to die? gah that makes so much more sense. But why was he let out into the open if he was going to die? explain this... I dont renember the ending very well because it didn't make sense.

    25. Re:So... by katarac · · Score: 2, Insightful

      Well I haven't read the book, but in the review it says that his friend was home schooled and was not satisfied with society until she was beaten down enough to give in. And it sounds like the book makes it obvious that the world it portrays is not something that would be desireable. I doubt the author was really trying to instill in our youth that we should do what the powers-that-be say, even if it means terrible health conditions and wanting to have cooler lesions than your classmates. Just think about how brainless the reader (young adult or not) would have to be to not get the obvious point of this novel.

    26. Re:So... by Eccles · · Score: 3, Funny

      One of the core points of good literature is the struggle of human-kind to improve himself. How does this novel meet that goal if the author provides no solution to averting this future?

      Sounds like this stupid play I once read. This guy gets told by the ghost of his father about the guy who killed him, so then he makes some pretty speeches and then everyone starts dying: his girlfriend, her father, a couple of flunkies, his mother, his stepfather, the guy himself, and a few others. What was that dren called? "Hamlet" or something goofy like that.

      --
      Ooh, a sarcasm detector. Oh, that's a real useful invention.
    27. Re:So... by AKAImBatman · · Score: 1

      Allow me to introduce you to the concept of "inner-struggle", something quite lacking in a work where the main character doesn't even give a damn that his girlfriend died. The author's conclusion is that life is cheap and humans are sheep.

      "To be, or not to be?" Does the author understand this question? "Whether 'tis nobler in the mind to suffer the slings and arrows of outrageous fortune, or to take arms against a sea of troubles, and by opposing end them?" is not a concept the character even considers. He's too busy purchasing a pretty sweater as she dies.

      Perhaps I am simply expecting too much from the average slashdotter.

    28. Re:So... by Tim+Browse · · Score: 1

      I'm confused. You've been criticising the 'poor' writing (although as far as I can tell, you've not read the book), and bemoaning the author's failure to study the liberal arts, yet you don't seem to be able to cope with a story that leaves questions unanswered, or maybe requires the reader to think when they close the book after finishing it.

      You're a bit like the people I meet now and then who are unable to dissociate the views of the characters from the views of the writers, be it in films, books, or whatever. I've had someone tell me they don't see why anyone would make a film like Se7en - John Doe was so awful, how could anyone think like that? They must be sick. etc.

      Here's an example of a lesson I and others learned early on in life, but it seems others never did.

      When I was a teenager, there was a TV mini-series on UK TV called "A Very British Coup". It was an excellent series, and used the premise of a committed Labour (socialist) political party and leader being elected. The leader proceeded to implement radical policies like disarming all the UK's nuclear arsenal, sending US forces back home from US bases on UK soil, diverting money to hospitals/schools, etc.

      Needless to say there was a backlash - but being in Britain, the reaction was muted, and behind closed doors. Various people in positions of power (e.g. unelected government officials, intelligence services, media chiefs) and so on began to hatch schemes. They spied on him, tried to synthesise suspicious financial transactions in the prime minister's accounts, and even assassinated one of his chief advisors. Eventually they settled on a scandal - they concocted rumours of an affair between the prime minister and a married woman years beforehand, to show the prime minister was not trustworthy. The rumours were printed/reported on in the media. There was absolutely nothing in the rumours; they were just friends. But the damage was done.

      The prime minister suspected who was behind all this (but had no hard proof), and went on TV to call a general election, and to explain what had happened, and thus why he was calling a general election.

      The final scene was of him getting up on the morning of the general election. He washed, shaved, ate his breakfast, and walked off down the road to the local polling station to vote.

      The series ended at that moment.

      I complained to my mother about the crap ending - did he get re-elected or not? What happened?!

      My mother said something to me that I've never forgotten: "It doesn't matter whether or not he wins - it matters that he was honest, and let the people decide the truth for themselves."

      At that moment, I began to appreciate dramatic writing on a whole new level, and realised that the writer wouldn't always tie everything up for me, or tell me what to think, or make it all better for the ending. Sometimes (often?) the writer is just trying to make you think and feel about a subject. What would you do? What would your friends do? What would other people do? What would happen?

      This does not imply bad writing.

      If you're still having trouble with this concept, trying reading/watching the play "An Inspector Calls" by JB Priestley. The ending of that one will probably have you in fits.

    29. Re:So... by AKAImBatman · · Score: 1

      The plot is not what I have an issue with. The author's conclusions are my primary concern. He concludes that it is possible and even desirable to no longer *be* human. The author asks no relevant questions about the human condition, he merely creates a story of a franken-society with no soul. Even more frustrating is that such a failure to ask these questions only results in more questions about how such a thing could happen.

      Where were the thinkers, dreamers, historians, artists, and great authors? How did they allow these things to happen? Did these soulful people die in a major catastrophe or something? How could one have a direct data line into their head without having access to the thought provoking works of history? Who was the antagonist who forced this sheep-like state on society? How is society maintained when there apparently no longer exists anyone with sufficient intelligence and education to advance science and industry?

    30. Re:So... by AllUsernamesAreGone · · Score: 1

      Did anyone take it from him by force? No, the author pretends that this humanity does not exist.

      And that may also be the point he is trying to make - that by creating a society like that it could destroy what we take to be our humanity.

      Call it a poor author thrashing at the edges of the Singularity.

      But yeah, I agree with you otherwise, this one doesn't sound like one I will have on my shelves. I can think of enough depressing things that could and probably will happen without some half-baked attempt by someone to make "literature" out of it.

    31. Re:So... by Trurl's+Machine · · Score: 3, Insightful

      But why was he let out into the open if he was going to die? explain this...

      In Soviet Russia, there is no such thing as "open". Neither in Oceania, mimicking the Stalinism as Orwell knew it. During the stalinist purges in late 30's - the ones that shocked Orwell so deeply - it was a common practice to first break down a man, and execute him only afterwards. They arrest you and they torture until you confess to anything they told you to confess in exchange for release. Obviously, even the strongest ones break down after just few weeks of torture. Then you are free... but they will still get you in a matter of months, this time a completely broken ex-man. You won't escape anywhere, you can't leave the country and NKVD will trace you everywhere within the country, even on Arctic station or somewhere in the Siberian wilderness. So you just wait for the last knocking at your door, drinking "Victory" gin and loathing yourself.

    32. Re:So... by AKAImBatman · · Score: 1

      Perhaps my explanation has been lacking some clarity, I have nothing against drama or making the reader think. I have a problem with the author's conclusions. In your example, the man struggled with his own humanity and made a decision. That's why the final scene was dramatic.

      In this case the character does very little struggling. An event that should completely devastate any normal human being, merely makes the character "feel bad". There is no inner struggle to come to terms with what happened. He buys his sweater and presumably goes on with life.

      One could imagine a situation whereby his humanity was somehow stripped from him. But what is the rationale for that occurrence in this book? There's no tangible antagonist. In fact, it sounds like all of human kind has become lazy and conceited just because there's a data feed in his head. How does this force him to lose his humanity? Does no one in this society care to philosophize on the human condition? Where did all those works of Shakespeare that are currently scattered across the 'net, go? If no one is educated, how is society maintained?

      It doesn't make any sense. Drama makes sense. It deals with the human condition head on, rather than avoiding it as if it didn't exist.

      For my suggestion of a far more dramatic ending, read the last paragraph of this post.

    33. Re:So... by CarrionBird · · Score: 1

      1984 is one of the prime examples of the genre, and it leaves you with absolutely no hope. The whole point was that once things get in that state there is no hope of change without external factors (invasion, liberation, whatever you want to call it.).

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    34. Re:So... by paskie · · Score: 1

      I get the impression from your comments that you in fact did not read the book, just a review concisely telling you the end.

      So, how do you know it's not there?

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    35. Re:So... by Ralph+Yarro · · Score: 1

      It doesn't make any sense.

      Maybe you could make better sense out of it if you actually read it or something?

      Sorry but the amount of ranting you're doing on the basis of what you've read ABOUT the book is absurd.

      If the book matters to you that much then read it.

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    36. Re:So... by jafuser · · Score: 1

      The very idea behind those arts is that some things are inherent in the makeup of mankind.

      You make an assumption that the inthernet aspects of mankind are incapable of change.

      No, the author pretends that this humanity does not exist.
      Maybe the tone of the story itself demonstrates that our humanity is dynamic and is shifting to a darker shade?

      Despite whether or not it was intentional, the story is a self-example.

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    37. Re:So... by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      That sort of thinking disappeared in 1984.

    38. Re:So... by Psymunn · · Score: 1

      i really don't see how that ending is all that diffrent. so the main character cares. but no one else understands his caring. the main character is simply a plot on the graph of society, having him deviate from the norm isn't a nessecity. the girlfriend already did this. had he died, the girlfriend would have felt sympathy. but it was her who died and, the main character is an example of the rest of society. why should he care that she died but no one else is able to understand this emotion. surely the girlfriend isn't the only fatality that's ever occured.

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    39. Re:So... by katarac · · Score: 1

      I'm not sure, but you seem incensed enough to read the book. It doesn't sound like it's very long. Check it out next time you go to the library and knock it out in an afternoon. At might have a better idea of the authors rationale regarding these issues. Or at least confirm your problems with it.

    40. Re:So... by kraut · · Score: 1

      ?From everything I've heard about this book, there is no specific force attempting to subvert society. Rather, individuals go along with it because they *LIKE* it that way. That's a very disturbing idea to be putting in the minds of young adults.

      Sounds like telling "young adult" the truth. There's no one big "evil guy", not even one "evil industry"; the wrongs in the world largely happen because most people like things the way they are.

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    41. Re:So... by toasted_calamari · · Score: 2, Insightful

      I have actually read this book, and disagree completely about the motives of the author. The characters are portrayed to enjoy their empty, meaningless lives. But the writing is such that the reader realizes that the world they are livining in is not happy at all. By the end of the book, the reader is desperate for the characters to realize what is happening to them and learn to think for themselves. But this will never occur. The message of the book is not that man should become sheep, it is that we can end up in a nightmarish situation in which we are sheep, and cannot help but bleat and graze along with the rest of humanity.

    42. Re:So... by Jherico · · Score: 1
      What kind of lessons are we teaching our children if their literature tells them that there is no hope?

      A book where there is no hope for the characters does not mean there is no hope for the reader. In fact, willful ignorance of possible futures that may seem hopeless is one of the better ways of ending up living in them, while trying to imagine nightmare scenarios is a good way of figuring out ways of not ending up in them.

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    43. Re:So... by Jherico · · Score: 1
      This sort of ending can be acceptable in a short story where the author wishes to bring attention to an issue, but is completely unacceptable in a novel.

      Can I please have a copy of your 'novel rules'? They sound most interesting. Please also include information about when and how they replaced the first ammendment.

      Authors can put any damn thing they want in novels. People are free to enjoy or not enjoy them as they wish.

      In point of fact, novels can serve to bring attention to issues just as well as short stories, perhaps better. Be they non-fiction or fiction.

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    44. Re:So... by Watts+Martin · · Score: 1

      You're one of those people who preferred the happy ending version of Brazil, aren't you? And you're waiting for the Disney version of 1984, where Big Brother repents and joins in the big musical finale number with Winston, Julia and a whole bunch of dancing rats.

    45. Re:So... by 1u3hr · · Score: 1
      Personally, I find this book rather disgusting. The fact that the "girlfriend" dies while attempting to obtain an implant only furthers the idea that life is cheap and emotions are pointless. The author should have more carefully chosen his pen name. "M.T. Anderson" is not synonymous with "M.T. Soul".

      Since neither of us have read the book, it's a bit much to label it. But to me it sounds like a dystopian novel, in the long tradition of Orwell, Swift, etc. Do you think Orwell was hoping you'd agree with Winston Smith in his love for Big Brother at the end? Stories like this aren't meant to give you hope for a happy ending after a disaster; they're telling you if you allow things to go this way it will not be good.

    46. Re:So... by bobtodd · · Score: 1

      From everything I've heard about this book, there is no specific force attempting to subvert society. Rather, individuals go along with it because they *LIKE* it that way. That's a very disturbing idea to be putting in the minds of young adults.

      It seems to me you're the one conceiving of our young people as sheep. Seriously, 'putting' ideas in their minds? Any literate fiction reader is able to grasp the concept that different characters have different points of view, and that the same set of events portrayed in the story may appear very different depending on the choice of protagonist. Simply reading a book that offers the viewpoint of a hopeless character is not going to wedge those characteristics into the young readers' head.

      Give your kids some credit, they may be more sophisticated readers than you seem prepared to believe. They (should) have minds of their own, and might even enjoy stretching their minds around some unfamiliar or even unpalatable concepts.

    47. Re:So... by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      I have read the book and to reply to the post, I am a person with a strong faith and I found the book interesting. Because despite the coldness and self centeredness of the main character titus the girlf the author puts into the mix changes him..not to ruin the end. To me this seems to bring hope to this reality. Which rather obvious or not, leaves you with a happy ending. I also think books like this are warnings, they are not there to say "HEY look this is how it is going to be" it is there to say.."Hey this could happen, make sure it doesn't!" Anyway, just thought I would put in my 2 cents.

  7. Dystopian by FatRatBastard · · Score: 5, Funny

    Set in a dystopian future America...

    In SciFi is there any other kind? I'm still waiting for Manhattan to be turned into a maximum security prison. They're about 7 years behind schedule. /snark

    1. Re:Dystopian by misleb · · Score: 2, Informative

      Star Trek (particularly TNG) would an example of near utopian Sci Fi. It does exist. It just doesn't stand out as "fiction" to many geeks when it is utopian.

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    2. Re:Dystopian by Elwood+P+Dowd · · Score: 1

      Class of 1999: "It's the last lesson you'll ever learn!"

      Set in 1999 Seattle, which has been "declared a warzone" and must employ security robots as high school teachers.

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    3. Re:Dystopian by Marxist+Hacker+42 · · Score: 1

      James White's Sector General Series was rather Utopian by comparison- sort of. A couple of wars, but even those wars contributed to a better-running multi-species hospital.

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    4. Re:Dystopian by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      "Set in a dystopian future America...

      In SciFi is there any other kind?"

      I think this possibly a telling comment about optimism in 2004. Where is the sci fi like 2001 (where the world is generally pretty cool)? When was the last time you read something like "The day after tomorrow in America... And the future kicks ass!" (apart from the fact that that would be crappy prose)

    5. Re:Dystopian by Bnugent66 · · Score: 0

      You mean you've never read "Little House on the Space Ferry?"

    6. Re:Dystopian by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      Don't worry, the Republican national convention is coming soon....

    7. Re:Dystopian by huchida · · Score: 1

      In SciFi is there any other kind? I'm still waiting for Manhattan to be turned into a maximum security prison. They're about 7 years behind schedule.

      And we're only fifteen years away from using replicants to harvest the moons of Saturn.

      Wait-- The Rutger Hauer replicant was four years old... Shit, that means we only have eleven years!

    8. Re:Dystopian by jejones · · Score: 1

      In SciFi is there any other kind [of future America than dystopian]?

      Yes, though dystopias and Ludditism have been very fashionable since WWII.

    9. Re:Dystopian by cavemanf16 · · Score: 2, Interesting

      That's because people hope for the best, fear the worst. In reality it's neither, and probably why so many have a hard time accepting the cold reality that we all suck and are all more than capable of turning our future into a dystopian one, far more than a utopian one. Ultimately we get neither, and just see freedom and liberty slip away as nation after nation tries to build on the failures of the nations before it, only to once again, slip away into past. It'd be nice if us humans could change this pathetically repeating history around, and actually BUILD upon our failures, but I don't see that happening ANYTIME soon.

    10. Re:Dystopian by misleb · · Score: 1

      It sounds like you are much closer to "fearing the worst" than "hoping for the best." Man, I thought I was cynical. Thanks for one-upping me. I feel better at your expense. :-)

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    11. Re:Dystopian by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      "It's morning in the future?"

    12. Re:Dystopian by anothy · · Score: 1

      they are?

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  8. Re:That's Not the Future, It's Now! by dnahelix · · Score: 1

    I know, I know, it's redundant... I should have known everyone would catch that one.

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  9. Back to the future by abhinavmodi · · Score: 1, Offtopic

    the Feed is owned by corporations, and their agenda to increase consumerism has led to such privacy-stripping "innovations" as predictive marketing (getting "bannered" by merely looking at purchaseable items) and constant interruptions (such as chats being broken by Google AdSense-inspired ads). This has been shown in umpteens of movies - The Minority Report being the most recent one. It has, actually been put into practice in intellligent homes - Bill Gates' mansion boasts of "Paintings" - screens on the wall which change the picture based on the person who enter's the room.

    1. Re:Back to the future by StalinsNotDead · · Score: 1

      He should incorporate this technology so the "painting" can display a picture based on who's looking at it.

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  10. The future sucks, it always does by gelfling · · Score: 2, Insightful

    Why do I get the feeling that if SF writers were in charge of the industrial revolution we'd still all be dairy farmers?

    Why does the future always suck, why is that the natural consequence of progress along any dimension? Why do they embrace defeat?

    It's always some dark dystopian future and the cure is always either free love or fascism isn't it?

    That's why I like PK Dick so much. No happy endings, we all die alone tortured by our paranoias.

    1. Re:The future sucks, it always does by Billobob · · Score: 1

      Why? Because happy books don't sell as well.

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    2. Re:The future sucks, it always does by dnahelix · · Score: 1

      Not all SF stories are like that. You are over-generalizing.

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    3. Re:The future sucks, it always does by A.S. · · Score: 3, Funny
      Because if everyone in the future was happy, that'd be really freakin' boring to read. Drama needs conflict, and there's hella more conflict the dystopia than utopia.

      3004-07-30: I got promoted at my job. I love my job.

      3004-07-31: Little Jimmy got a gold star in hyper-space art today. I love little Jimmy.

      3004-08-01: My wife told me today that she loves her job at the nano-tech factory. Isn't that keen.

      You get the idea.

      (I suppose one could argue that it is possible to write a good story set in a better-than-average future, but I can't think of any.)

    4. Re:The future sucks, it always does by SamiousHaze · · Score: 1, Insightful

      Because corporations do strive to take control of everything - it isn't fantasy man, its happening all the time. It isn't this bad yet but if you look at the size/power of corps in the last 50 years, you'll see that writers are only writing in the direction that society in the US and UK is moving.

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    5. Re:The future sucks, it always does by JohnsonJohnson · · Score: 3, Insightful

      Why do I get the feeling that if SF writers were in charge of the industrial revolution we'd still all be dairy farmers?

      Because you are likely only exposed to a very small segment of SF literature that is dystopic. Furthermore you regard all dystopic SF as Luddite.

      Why does the future always suck,

      In regards to SF, that's patently untrue. Heinlein, Brin, Asimov, Clarke, Rodenberry etc. are all utopianists, as are the gaggle of writer's churning out novels in the Star Trek franchise.

      why is that the natural consequence of progress along any dimension?

      That's an assumption on your part

      Why do they embrace defeat?

      Who's defeated? If you control one of the mega-corporations that are common in these types of dystopic stories you're doing very well in the world. In fact in such stories mega-corporations tend to subsume national governments so corporate executives even restrained by something as inconvenient as a constitution.

      the cure is always either free love or fascism isn't it?

      Huh?

      That's why I like PK Dick so much. No happy endings, we all die alone tortured by our paranoias.

      Dick died alone and tortured by his paranoias. His daughters survived to become a very profitable media enterprise. This is not meant to relect negatively on his daughters.

    6. Re:The future sucks, it always does by La_Boca · · Score: 1

      I think simply because if the future is the same, then why not just write it in the present?

    7. Re:The future sucks, it always does by lboxman · · Score: 1

      Technological progress seems to lead to a society that has nice things...and not much else. Even now, the internet is more of a global shopping mall than it is a place of information exchange.

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    8. Re:The future sucks, it always does by FauxPasIII · · Score: 1

      > Why does the future always suck, why is that the natural consequence of progress along any dimension? Why do they embrace defeat?

      Take two seasons of Star Trek: The Next Generation, and call me in the morning.

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    9. Re:The future sucks, it always does by etheriel · · Score: 1

      What about star trek? That was an awfully utopian vision of the future... Actually, I have this nagging suspicion that having been introduced to Star Trek at an age when the distinction between reality and fiction was not entirely clear to me is at least partially responsible for my disillusionment with the world I find myself living in.

    10. Re:The future sucks, it always does by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0
      Why does the future always suck [in Science Fiction Novels ?]

      Because without conflict, you have no story. Imagine: "Science and society has progressed to the point where there is no disease, no war, no strife. Everyone has everything they want."* Yawn. What story are you going to write about that?

      The truth is, SF is thought of a second rate genre. If you have a talented author who is able to work with interpersonal issues, relationships and so on, they write "respectible" fiction. SF only get the stories written by no-talent hacks or the stories by good authors that *can't* be told as non-SF - hence the prevelance of distopia. The hacks have an easy plotline, and the talented authors need to have conflict, and if "the future" wasn't the source of the conflict, they would write it as non-SF.

      I don't think that SF writters are luddites, it's just that there isn't much of a story in Utopia: "Jim lived in a utopian pariadise. He had a healthy, well adjusted childhood. He found a loving wife, with whom he had exactly two children. He lived a long, happy life, and died peacefully at the age of 152."*

      That said, I'd be happy to read a SF novel which focused on interpersonal or other "non-SF" sources of conflict, where the future is just a scenery choice. (Like setting a novel in LA versus NY.)

      * Admit it - you mentally inserted "the twist". A disgruntled slave force, millitary enforced population controls, brainwashing - some evil undercurrent to this otherwise paridise. Utopia is boring - without conflict there is no story.

    11. Re:The future sucks, it always does by hcg50a · · Score: 1
      Why does the future always suck?

      Maybe that seems more realistic than the stuff Arthur C. Clarke used to put out, which was boundlessly optimistic, and the future never sucked.

      Cases in point:

      • The level of space technology in 2001: A Space Odyssey.
      • The race to land first on the moon, in which the USA, Britain and the USSR (Russia) each mounted an effort to land on the moon, and they all succeeded simultaneously.
      • Childhood's End, in which the aliens were 100% good and noble and had only the best interests in humanity at heart.
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    12. Re:The future sucks, it always does by misleb · · Score: 1
      Why do I get the feeling that if SF writers were in charge of the industrial revolution we'd still all be dairy farmers?

      Why do I get the feeling that without SF writers we'd be living out the dystopian stories (in many ways we already are). Sci Fi serves a very important function in a society bent on destroying and/or overthrowing nature.

      Why does the future always suck, why is that the natural consequence of progress along any dimension?Why do they embrace defeat? It's always some dark dystopian future and the cure is always either free love or fascism isn't it?

      The future doesn't always suck in Sci Fi. Look at things like Star Trek TNG. It doesn't get much more utopian than that. The point of dystopian Sci-Fi isn't to warn us of the future. It is to open our eyes to the present. Good dystopian Sci-Fi will reflect many disturbing aspects of our own society. It sounds like "Feed" does a very good job of this.

      That's why I like PK Dick so much. No happy endings, we all die alone tortured by our paranoias.

      Indeed, these kinds of stories can be very refreshing, but don't forget to recognize the truth in the paranoia. We are paranoid for a reason. ALthough that reason isn't always what the paranoia would have you believe.

      -matthew

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    13. Re:The future sucks, it always does by nine-times · · Score: 1
      Why do I get the feeling that if SF writers were in charge of the industrial revolution we'd still all be dairy farmers?

      Worse than that, if the reviewer's right:

      But corporate interest is clearly the villain here, with all technology perverted to consumerist ends, ripping away privacy, individual expression and true liberty. In the right hands, the Feed would be more powerful than the agricultural, industrial and communications revolutions put together

      It's saying "The future will suck! It'll be the worst thing ever! But, if only we were communists, and outlawed companies which tried to seel you things and make money, then everything would be great! Dangerous and highly intrusive technology would never backfire then!" Awwwww. Aint that sweet.

    14. Re:The future sucks, it always does by tverbeek · · Score: 1
      Why does the future always suck...?

      I guess you've never read early popular sci-fi, which was usually about the glories that technology would bring in The Future. That's what people believed in those days. The stuff you're reading (mostly written later) is a reaction to that, first acting as cautionary tales against conventional wisdom, and more recently confirming the common belief that Things Are Getting Worse. So the future isn't what it used to be.

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    15. Re:The future sucks, it always does by vegasbright · · Score: 0

      Star Trek has novels? I thought that was single-sheet "rustic" TP with a star trek theme. Next to the ST TP they have tons of battletech TP as well.

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    16. Re:The future sucks, it always does by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      blahblahblah...

      Nothing has actually changed besides your memories.

      East India Company, Standard Oil, Microsoft. Same thing, different centuries.

    17. Re:The future sucks, it always does by AKAImBatman · · Score: 3, Insightful

      It's easy. Futures that seem to perfect, actually are. Man has decided to ignore all the problems instead of dealing with them. This results in stories like when a "perfect" guys of the future accidentally trips across some information that could unravel the false reality and expose the puppet-masters. This sends him on an adventure where his life is in danger and his family kidnapped. To save them, he must expose the world for what it really is...

      In other words, utopian and dystopian futures are easily used to show how people sometimes ignore reality. In the former case, they live an illusion that hurts them without their awareness. In the later case, man has ignored the issues in hopes of a utopian society and instead brought disaster on himself.

      BTW, you didn't mention the third type of Sci-Fi story. The one where the future is neither utopian or dystopian, but rather has characters who deal with many of the same issues that we have today. These stories often serve as a way of contrasting our lives against a new backdrop to shake out any points that we've taken for granted or simply failed to take notice of. Another type of story like this is designed to give mankind a future to strive for. e.g. The "Star Trek" type future where everything isn't quite perfect, but things have greatly improved.

    18. Re:The future sucks, it always does by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      You could take this one step further and state that the boundless optimism was a reaction to Brave New World and its ilk. These things go in phases, only partially limited by the current direction of events.

    19. Re:The future sucks, it always does by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0
      It's saying "The future will suck! It'll be the worst thing ever! But, if only we were communists, and outlawed companies which tried to seel you things and make money, then everything would be great! Dangerous and highly intrusive technology would never backfire then!" Awwwww. Aint that sweet.

      I'm so sick of this kind of knee-jerk reaction to the huge problems present in our capitalist system.

    20. Re:The future sucks, it always does by jejones · · Score: 4, Insightful

      Agreed--SF writers aren't Luddites. Remember the words of Lloyd Biggle, Jr. (if you don't know who he is, you have some good reading ahead of you): given a bunch of people in a sewer, mainstream literature will write at great, delighted length about the people who stay there; SF writers will write about the people trying to get out.

    21. Re:The future sucks, it always does by barcodeplane · · Score: 1

      Because the whole point of dystopian literature is to point out something wrong with society at the time. Technically it is being written in the present. It's written in the future to show if we continue along the path examined in the book that is what can [will] happen.

    22. Re:The future sucks, it always does by misleb · · Score: 1
      It's saying "The future will suck! It'll be the worst thing ever! But, if only we were communists, and outlawed companies which tried to seel you things and make money, then everything would be great! Dangerous and highly intrusive technology would never backfire then!" Awwwww. Aint that sweet.

      Right. Of course. Anytime someone criticizes corporations they must be communist or suggesting communism. Can't one be a Good Capitalist(tm) and still be critical of the system?

      -matthew

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    23. Re:The future sucks, it always does by bing · · Score: 1

      Hmm...that's interesting...all the reviewer did was describe a villian. You then assumed that any opposition to "corporate interest" must make him a Communist.

      You seem to have an excessively black-and-white, single-axis worldview with only two possible viewpoints: pro-corporate or Communist.

      While I am definitely not a Communist (nor is much of anyone else in the past 10 years, as you'd notice if you'd check out a news source besides Fox News Channel ;-) ), that doesn't mean that I'm a big fan of the sort of morally bankrupt, profit-obsessed behavior that most corporations seem to engage in these days, either (with the level of obsession seemingly directly proportional to their size).

    24. Re:The future sucks, it always does by misleb · · Score: 1

      There is plenty of good utopian Sci-Fi.

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    25. Re:The future sucks, it always does by misleb · · Score: 1

      That explanation might work for news, but Sci-Fi is a lot more complicated than that. THere is plenty of popular happy Sci-Fi, but even there you need some kind of drama to make a story.

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    26. Re:The future sucks, it always does by AKAImBatman · · Score: 1

      That'll teach me to proofread.

      Futures that seem to perfect, actually are.

      "Futures that seem too perfect, actually aren't"

    27. Re:The future sucks, it always does by iabervon · · Score: 2, Interesting

      I'd suggest reading some Kim Stanley Robinson. His futures are much more reasonable than most SF; the changing technology tears society apart because of how different things become, but people muddle through it. Both fascism and free love get tried, and neither is ultimately stable. There are no endings, happy or otherwise; the answers to one day's problems are wrong the next day.

      The natural consequence of progress along any dimension always seems like madness to the people from before and requires adaptations which may not be desired. PK Dick just focuses on people who don't adapt.

    28. Re:The future sucks, it always does by wjwlsn · · Score: 1

      This viewpoint is complete and utter bull. Yes, corporations have power. Yes, corporations sometimes exercise their power to excess. Does that mean they can do anything they want? NO!

      Let's take my industry for example. Nuclear power was the "next big thing" back in the 70s. Then the Three Mile Island incident occurred, and the US nuclear industry nearly came to a screeching halt due to public and regulatory pressures.

      Flash-forward to today, and what has happened? Nuclear has started to live up to it's early promises. Safety and efficiency are up, costs are down. For the first time in over 20 years, people in the US are starting to have a generally positive view of nuclear energy.

      Corporations are now talking about the possibility of building a new generation of safer, more efficient plants. This was an absolute fantasy 10 years ago. Now, corporations want to build these plants, and the public may let them.

      However, if there was a major accident at a nuclear plant in the near future, what do you think would happen to these plans for new plants? They wouldn't get built! Public pressure would turn the tide the other way, just as it has in many other instances.

      Why do you think energy companies are building wind farms now, because they're efficient? HA! The only reason they're being built is because public pressure has placed them on the energy map because of tax incentives. Otherwise, wind power would be abandoned as inefficient, unreliable, unsightly, and resource intensive.

      Public awareness of issues and representative forms of government ensure that corporate power can never get to the point envisioned by such dystopic fantasies. That's why representative government exists... they may not be perfect, and they can make mistakes, but they can also self-correct. Doom is not an inevitability.

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    29. Re:The future sucks, it always does by Rakishi · · Score: 1

      Wouldn't SF writers write about the horrible outside that those trying to get out may potentially find?

    30. Re:The future sucks, it always does by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      I don't think so. If you read Arthur C. Clarke or Issac Isimov, you'll see that they have written some really good SF novels and short stories. Like in the Space Odyssey series he(Clarke) wrote about some really cool inventions he predicts for the future basic on existing technologies.

    31. Re:The future sucks, it always does by nine-times · · Score: 1
      Hmm...that's interesting...all the reviewer did was describe a villian.

      And I return to the quote: "But corporate interest is clearly the villain here..." Yeah, so he didn' say "But a self-serving corporation is the villian here..." It's "corporate interest" in general which is the villian he's describing. You know what? Corporations aren't bad. Yes, they have interests, but there interests aren't evil. There are poorly run corporations who do bad things, just as there are people who do bad things. That doesn't mean humanity's interests are villianous, either.

      While I am definitely not a Communist (nor is much of anyone else in the past 10 years...

      Oh, no, nobody's "communist". There are just people who think we should have a progressive tax plan which taxes the rich to the point of making only a livable wage (because no one needs more than a livable wage, and, besides, all rich people are evil old white men), and then have the government use the extra tax revenue to provide everything for everyone, so we can live in a utopia wonderland. But, heaven forbid, there are no "communists".

    32. Re:The future sucks, it always does by Psymunn · · Score: 1

      actualyl, sci fi writers would write about the danger of teh sewer flooding and a world where everyone drowned. they would advocate getting out. (well most). you see, they write about a hypothetical situation regarding their present situation, not the ones that aren't explored. now, had there been people trhying to get out the sewere, half would write about the benevolent beings outside the swere who would give everyone cake and space ships. the other half would say that the people out htere would kick you back and flood the sewers.

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    33. Re:The future sucks, it always does by nine-times · · Score: 1
      Right. Of course. Anytime someone criticizes corporations they must be communist or suggesting communism."

      Let me put it this way. When someone thinks in terms of, "Companies want to make money off of me, which is greedy. Greed is evil, therefore companies are bad," I find this sort of thing communistic. I think the one of the major ideological differences between communism and capitalism is communism thinks, "Greed is evil, and we must root it out of civilization," while capitalists think, "greed is inevitable, so let's try to make the most of it." The reason I brought up communism is that, generally, "corporate interests" are just what's going to get you to spend money on their products. Corporations aren't evil. They won't make commercials that we won't watch. They won't sell products we won't buy. If you don't like the actions of a given corporation, alter their interests. Boycott until the get their priotities straight. Any businessman worth his salt knows that dissatisfied customers aren't good for business.

      But achk... I don't want to start a capitolist/communist flame war or something. But geeze. If you want to point the finger at "the cultprit" behind advertising pervading our lives, look in the mirror. You want to blame someone for the spam problem, don't attack spammers, attack the retards who buy products advertised through spam. If it weren't for them, spam would be ineffective, and no one would pay the spammers to advertise, and it would dry up.

      So, if we ever have implants in our brains reading our thoughts and sending it out to corporations, and beeming back advertisements, then the problem isn't "corporate interests". The real villian is our own stupidity. OK? We never should have allowed ourselves to get into that mess.

      And I don't care what high ideals and peppermint and gumdrops you have in mind, putting microchips that can read your mind and control your thoughts, and then turning control over these chips to anyone is really stupid. Really really stupid. So the idea that "this technology was corrupted by corporate interests- if only the mind-control chips were used for good!" is silly. It would be a technology just aching to be misused, whoever was at the controls.

    34. Re:The future sucks, it always does by misleb · · Score: 1
      Let me put it this way. When someone thinks in terms of, "Companies want to make money off of me, which is greedy. Greed is evil, therefore companies are bad," I find this sort of thing communistic.

      I doubt the book makes such a simplistic and thoughtless statement about capitalism. It wouldn't be a very interesting book if it did.

      Corporations aren't evil. They won't make commercials that we won't watch.

      But they will make commercials that deceive you and influence your values. By the Judeo-Christian definiton, that is evil. But then, I'm no Christian and evil isn't much a part of my vocabulary. Suffice it to say that there is some basis for the sentiment that corporations are "evil." At least some are.

      They won't sell products we won't buy. If you don't like the actions of a given corporation, alter their interests. Boycott until the get their priotities straight. Any businessman worth his salt knows that dissatisfied customers aren't good for business.

      Wow, you are really getting all geared up for the coming American corpocracy, aren't you? What does one do in the case of a virtual monopoly where there is only one viable choice for a product or service. What do you do when one corporation owns practically all the media, for example? We're not too far from this today.

      Also, we don't always have the option to vote with our wallets. I mean, not all companies deal with consumers directly.

      I don't want to start a capitolist/communist flame war or something.

      Communism has nothing to do with this. It is just a red herring, as they say. It is a convenient way for people you to discredit any critic of capitalism.

      If you want to point the finger at "the cultprit" behind advertising pervading our lives, look in the mirror. You want to blame someone for the spam problem, don't attack spammers, attack the retards who buy products advertised through spam. If it weren't for them, spam would be ineffective, and no one would pay the spammers to advertise, and it would dry up.

      Please excuse the flame, but that is utter bullshit. A person (spammer in this case) is just as responsible for his or her actions as anyone else. Being part of a corporation doesn't magically excuse people from acting ethically and honestly.

      So, if we ever have implants in our brains reading our thoughts and sending it out to corporations, and beeming back advertisements, then the problem isn't "corporate interests". The real villian is our own stupidity. OK? We never should have allowed ourselves to get into that mess.

      Well gee, why don't you take *all* responsibility away from corporations while you are at it? Why don't we just let them advertise in any way they want and leave it to the people to tell what is the truth and what is outright lies. I'm sorry, but you can't reasonally expect people to make rational decisions when they are exposed to the kind of marketing that they are exposed to ALL THEIR LIVES. If only capitalism were limited to a weekly trip to the market or something. But no, it is all pervasive. Simple competition has turned into a frenzy of advertisement as corporations go to war over every last penny in our bank acounts... and then some. It is me against thousands of corporations and them against each other. Pardon me if your whole "people should know better" falls on deaf ears. I wouldn't like it if my neighbor decieved me into buying something. Why should I like it when corporations do it?

      And I don't care what high ideals and peppermint and gumdrops you have in mind, putting microchips that can read your mind and control your thoughts, and then turning control over these chips to anyone is really stupid. Really really stupid. So the idea that "this technology was corrupted by corporate interests- if only the mind-control chips were used for good!" is silly. It would be a technology just aching to be misused, whoever was at the controls.

      True, but this doesn't excuse the

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    35. Re:The future sucks, it always does by nine-times · · Score: 1
      But they will make commercials that deceive you and influence your values. By the Judeo-Christian definiton, that is evil.

      Well, deception may be evil, but why are you so sure that "corporations" are more deceptive than... well, anyone? People in general are deceptive, but this doesn't make corporations particularly evil. As far as "influencing values", I don't know why that's evil according to the judeo-christian definition. If so, God is evil, moses is evil, jesus is evil, who isn't evil?

      What does one do in the case of a virtual monopoly where there is only one viable choice for a product or service. What do you do when one corporation owns practically all the media, for example? We're not too far from this today.

      Ok, lets use a common example. I've heard people complain about feeling ripped off by their cell phone company. Well, don't use it then. "Sure," they say, "but all the cell phone companies rip you off!" Well, don't use any of them. People lived without cell phones. If you don't believe they're giving you your money's worth, dont spend your money. Yeah, you'll have to live without a cell phone. You know what? Without the greed and desire to make money, there wouldn't be a cell phone business, and you'd be living without a cell phone anyway. Worst case scenario? If you ever come to an intractably situation, you revolt. But don't pretend that you can tear down our system and still enjoy the benefits that our system provides.

      Being part of a corporation doesn't magically excuse people from acting ethically and honestly.

      Never claimed it did, but the fact that you assume "corporation" is synonymous with "unethical" and "dishonest" betrays a sort of bias on your part. And "self-intrest" doesn't need to be hishonest, unethical, or "evil". It's a part of life. We're all self-interested. So the question gets to be, how are you going to deal with that fact?

      In relation to spam, yeah, spam is a pain in the butt. Obviously, someone likes it. Some consumers feel this is a valid form of advertising, or it wouldn't be profitable. In other words, your sh*t is another man's shinola. Arguing about whether inevitable things are "good" or "bad" often fails to be productive. You want to do something about it, dry up the demand. As long as there's a demand, someone will step up to fill the supply.

      I'm sorry, but you can't reasonally expect people to make rational decisions when they are exposed to the kind of marketing that they are exposed to ALL THEIR LIVES.

      yeah, I've been exposed to marketing ALL MY LIFE. So have you. Are you going to admit yourself incapable of making rational decisions? If so, please don't argue with me, since you are incapable of making rational decisions. But I guess maybe you're one of the "intellectual elite" or something, some group to which the rules don't apply. Or maybe you grew up in a vaccume of some sort?

      But that doesn't mean it is OK to take advatage of my stupidity.

      Ah, but that's my point. A capitalistic society understands that, so long as their's "your stupidity", someone will step up to the plate to take advantage of it. Corporations are not more or less likely to do so. What are you going to do, make "the government" keep people from taking advantage of your stupidity? Fine, put your trust in "the government".Then it will be the government who will take advantage of your stupidity, and you're no better off. Far better to not be stupid. Far, far better. So maybe let's not try to concoct governments who will guarentee utopian wonderlands, and instead work on getting people to be less stupid?

    36. Re:The future sucks, it always does by misleb · · Score: 1
      Well, deception may be evil, but why are you so sure that "corporations" are more deceptive than... well, anyone?

      First of all, corporations aren't people. It bothers me that our government gives a corporation, as an entity, the rights of a citizen. Which implicitly excuses the individuals who run the corporations from direct responsibility for what the corporation does in many cases,

      All I'm saying is that being part of a corporation doesn't excuse deception. You seem to think it is OK because it is inevitable.

      Never claimed it did,

      You have. Many times you have taken all the burden of responsibility off of corporations and put it on consumers. SPAM problem? Blame the few who respond to SPAM. God forbid you actually hold the spammer reponsible for their actions. No.

      but the fact that you assume "corporation" is synonymous with "unethical" and "dishonest" betrays a sort of bias on your part.

      You are presuming that about me. I'm perferctly willing to accept that corporations can be honest and ethical. But the sad fact is that a good number aren't. Have you ever spent much time dealing with a marketing department? I have, and it is disgusting.

      And "self-intrest" doesn't need to be hishonest, unethical, or "evil". It's a part of life. We're all self-interested. So the question gets to be, how are you going to deal with that fact?

      I'd prefer not to institutionalize self-interest such that it becomes all pervasive and amplified to an almost unbearable degree as we have in our society.

      In relation to spam, yeah, spam is a pain in the butt. Obviously, someone likes it. Some consumers feel this is a valid form of advertising, or it wouldn't be profitable. In other words, your sh*t is another man's shinola. Arguing about whether inevitable things are "good" or "bad" often fails to be productive. You want to do something about it, dry up the demand. As long as there's a demand, someone will step up to fill the supply.

      Once again, Bullshit. There is nothing I can do about the 1 in 1000 who respond to SPAM. I already am doing something about SPAM, though. I work for an ISP and we block a good percentage of it. Of course, this is resources we shouldn't have to utilize. Spammers are abusing our resources, without paying us a dime, to send email that our customers don't want. And that is wrong. At least the USPS gets compensated for delivering junk mail. Did you know that more than 60% of all email that goes over the internet is SPAM?

      I'm sorry if you don't see that this is a real problem. You can argue all the "cold hard realities" you want, but your amoral attitude isn't going to get very far with me.

      yeah, I've been exposed to marketing ALL MY LIFE. So have you. Are you going to admit yourself incapable of making rational decisions?

      I don't underestimate the impact that marketing has had on me. Whatever decisions I do make have been influenced by a lifetime of marketing exposure no matter what I do. And I resent that. To a significant degree, I feel brainwashed. You should too. Especially you. You seem to have bought into the capitalist system and all of its "cold realies" and assumptions about human nature hook, line and sinker. It bothers me to talk to people like you. It diminishes any hope I might have of a better tomorrow.

      Ah, but that's my point. A capitalistic society understands that, so long as their's "your stupidity", someone will step up to the plate to take advantage of it. Bullshit again. By this logic, we should find some way to institutionalize theft because there will always be people who leave themselves open to theft and always a theif to "step up to the plate."

      Corporations are not more or less likely to do so.

      Perhaps not, but they are in a position to do it on a much larger scale.

      What are you going to do, make "the government" keep people from taking advantage of your stupidity?

      You m

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    37. Re:The future sucks, it always does by nine-times · · Score: 1
      First of all, corporations aren't people. It bothers me that our government gives a corporation, as an entity, the rights of a citizen

      Yeah, that bothers me too. That's the government's fault. Not the corporation's.

      God forbid you actually hold the spammer reponsible for their actions. No.

      OK, sure, fine. BLAME the spammer. Seriously. Spend tons of money hunting him down and prosecuting him. Fine him or put him in jail. I'm fine with that. But there's just another person waiting in line to take his place. As long as there are people who will buy from spam, it will be a profitable business, and there will be spammers, not only spamming, but spending money to find ways around spam protection.

      If you just want to blame someone for the spam in your mailbox, you can put it all over the place: Microsoft for bad security, the designers of SMTP for not having measures in effect to stop spam, spam blockers who don't do a good enough job... But, you know what? The blame won't stop spam in your mailbox. The only thing that will stop it is if spam is no longer profitable. And whose to blame for making it profitable? Retards who actually buy the crap spammers sell. I'm not saying spam isn't a problem, but I am saying that you can stew in moral outrage for as long as you like, but as long as people keep buying things from spam, there'll be spam.

      You mean like laws against theft? To a degree, yes. It is call consumer protection...I'd prefer not to institutionalize self-interest such that it becomes all pervasive and amplified to an almost unbearable degree as we have in our society.

      Who said we should "institutionalize" theft? But there are a lot of things that go into stopping thieves beyond making laws. You can make all the laws you want to against theft, but if you're stupid enough, someone will still be standing ready to take advantage of it. If you're stupid enough, you'll give your property away, and won't even know it's theft. If you fall for the right con-man, you'll insist on giving him your money, against the government's advice, and you'll be happy about it. But the government shouldn't outlaw giving people your money willingly. Or maybe you think the government should take all our money and decide for us how to spend it? The best "consumer protection" is educating consumers about the marketplace.

      I'd prefer not to institutionalize self-interest such that it becomes all pervasive and amplified to an almost unbearable degree as we have in our society.

      My point is that "self interest" doesn't need to be "institutionalized" in order to be in control. It's in control. It will be in control. Your not-wanting to deal with spam is, itself, self-interest. Get over "self-interest" as the problem. It's not a problem. It's what keeps us from walking out in front of busses. And I don't know what "institutionalize" means here.

      Whenever someone is critical of capitalism, people like you make knee-jerk "communist" accusations.

      I'm sorry, but one of the common uses of the word "communist" is someone who believes that capitalist business is, by nature, villianous. Both you and the poster seem to have taken that stance. But regardless, the point of my original post was that it would be foolish to endorse this neural-linked internet that was described as being a "great good", if only it had not been used by "corporate interests". My response was that corporations aren't, by nature, evil, and neither are their interests. In addition, this supposed "great technology" is one that would most certainly be abused by whomever was in control of it. I didn't want to get into a "Communism is better! No Capitalism is better!" argument.

      You seem to have bought into the capitalist system and all of its "cold realies" and assumptions about human nature hook, line and sinker.

      "Cold realities" doesn't sound like me. I don't remember writing it, but, at least, it doesn't sound like something I would

  11. Why the qualification? by Anonymous+Crowhead · · Score: 2, Funny

    Judging by the moderation and post quality, the average age of a slashdot poster is probably 15, while the editors seem to average around 12 judging on spelling, grammar and attention span.

  12. uh huh by Tumbleweed · · Score: 2, Interesting

    Welcome to a novel form retelling of an Outer Limits episode.

    1. Re:uh huh by Eric+S.+Smith · · Score: 1
      Welcome to a novel form retelling of an Outer Limits episode.

      Minus the moral about the importance of good computer security, apparently. But with bonus dome-city dystopia.

    2. Re:uh huh by Tumbleweed · · Score: 2, Funny

      Mmm, sweet, sweet domed-city dystopia. Kickin' it 01d 5k001, Logan's Run-style! Awww, yeahhh.

    3. Re:uh huh by tverbeek · · Score: 1
      Yeah, and "West Side Story" was just a singing and dancing retelling of "Romeo and Juliet", and "Le Morte d'Arthur" was just a novel-form retelling of the Christian gospels, and "The Wrath of Kahn" was just a movie-form retelling of "Moby Dick".

      There aren't a whole lot of truly original story ideas out there. What matters is the telling.

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    4. Re:uh huh by Tumbleweed · · Score: 1

      > Yeah, and "West Side Story" was just a singing and dancing retelling
      > of "Romeo and Juliet", and "Le Morte d'Arthur" was just a novel-form
      > retelling of the Christian gospels, and "The Wrath of Kahn" was just
      > a movie-form retelling of "Moby Dick".

      Dude...whatever you're smoking, pass it on, it looks pretty sweet from here.

    5. Re:uh huh by ScottSpeaks! · · Score: 1

      Naw man, i can see that. West Side is a pair of star-crossed lovers and and obvious riff on R&J. King Arthur's just another savior who was betrayed and killed, and will come back again, like JC. And half of Khan's good lines from ST:TWOK were lifted from Melville. ("I'll chase him round Good Hope, and round the Horn, and round the Norway maelstrom, and round perdition's flames before I give him up." Sound familiar?)

    6. Re:uh huh by Lodragandraoidh · · Score: 1

      a girl much smarter than he...

      Ummm - along those lines, when is this not the case?

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  13. Spider? by howardjp · · Score: 1

    Warren Ellis did it better.

  14. Hopefully, not a "Hackers" rip off. by nawlej · · Score: 2, Funny

    At least they wont attempt to hack into a Gibson Supercomputer with Apple Notebooks. OR WILL THEY!

    1. Re:Hopefully, not a "Hackers" rip off. by StalinsNotDead · · Score: 1

      Your sig line reads "The floggings will continue until moral improves."

      Under normal circumstances, I try not to be pedantic. But since it's in a sig line "moral" should be "morale".

      Unless you're trying to go for something like the Spanish Inquisition, then "moral" should probably be "morals"

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    2. Re:Hopefully, not a "Hackers" rip off. by nawlej · · Score: 1

      Thanks, you're the first person to notice since I changed it. Cheers.

  15. The citizens of this future America.... by A.S. · · Score: 3, Insightful
    ...weaned on the Feed, are shockingly illiterate.

    The consumers of today's America, zombified by television, are shockingly illiterate. That this trend continues doesn't surprise me.

    1. Re:The citizens of this future America.... by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 1, Insightful

      The consumers of today's America, zombified by television, are shockingly illiterate. That this trend continues doesn't surprise me.

      Yes, it was much better one hundred years ago when everybody could read.

      Literacy is effectively non-existent in modern America. The "zombified" individuals you mention have always formed a sizeable portion of society. Television did not create them, it's just their current entertainment medium of choice.

    2. Re:The citizens of this future America.... by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      Literacy is effectively non-existent in modern America.

      It's not quite that bad, yet.

  16. I think I've read this before by JLavezzo · · Score: 3, Interesting

    Hmm sounds like most of the books about dystopian future Americas out there... Since this one seems even less likely than the nuclear war caused one in the books I read as a kid, and even THAT one was thwarted by humanity, I'm only wishing kids had more books of inspiring futures than angst-riddled depressing ones. Last think a teen needs, another thing to be depressed about.

    I can almost imagine the thoughts of the author as he sat down to write this: "Hmmm... there used to be a lot of fear-the-future books 20 years ago. They sold really well. But we've fixed the threat of world war three, nuclear disaster, and this terrorist thing doesn't seem tangible enough to write about. Guess I'll just have to make up something about a capitalistic conspiracy gone awry and hope no one stops to think about how many people would have to abandon their ethics to participate in setting up this conspiracy."

    Blah!

    I'm tired of being told to be afraid. Hurray for hope.

    1. Re:I think I've read this before by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      Last think a teen needs, another thing to be depressed about.

      Teens are constantly depressed? No, we're not. Don't make assumptions about us.

    2. Re:I think I've read this before by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      under "abandon their ethics..." see banality of evil esp. Germany 1939-1945. Not that I don't think the trend is for more alarmist fiction.

    3. Re:I think I've read this before by dan_sdot · · Score: 1

      Blah!

      I'm tired of being told to be afraid. Hurray for hope.

      I agree. Not only does this book seem like a lame attempt for a guy to make a buck off of 1984 and Brave New World's fame, but the author should understand that its time to maybe express a little more hope. Of course, the guy has his right to "artistic expression," but I would more liken this to trying to sell some paperbacks to a hip teenage crowd.
      If these kids want to read something good, try going to the two giants of this genre, 1984 and Brave New World. People so often read these kinds of books and then talk about how "1984ish" our world is today or how we are heading towards a "Brave New World." I wonder how many people who make those comments have even read the books.
      In those books, the authors developed their own ideas, rather than the most common pop culture idea among teenagers ("OMG!!! Corporations are going to destroy the world!!!").
      Boo.

      (sorry for the rant, but I really wanted to get it out. I have heard too many people talk about those two books in the last week, and then admit they have never read them.)
    4. Re:I think I've read this before by dasunt · · Score: 1

      Hmm sounds like most of the books about dystopian future Americas out there... Since this one seems even less likely than the nuclear war caused one in the books I read as a kid, and even THAT one was thwarted by humanity, I'm only wishing kids had more books of inspiring futures than angst-riddled depressing ones. Last think a teen needs, another thing to be depressed about.

      Its easy to write about dystopian futures. In the "Tales of Known Space" series, the stories basically end with a gene for luck spreading through the human population, leading to a lot of happy lucky people, and the author, Larry Niven, said something like it was very, very hard to write stories about these people. (Not that known space was very dystopian...)

      But SF has varyingn outlooks on the future. In addition to the common dystopian futures (1984, Brave New World, Clockword Orange), and the more utopian futures (TNG), there are futures that are basically the same as the present (Star Wars, the Vorkosigan series) or futures where the problems of the present are around, but manifest themselves in different ways, due to technology (Diamond Age, most of the Light of Other Days, etc).

      The Diamond Age is an interesting example. It has utopian elements, such as the Vickys and the Crafters. It has the dystopian elements, such as the life of the poor underclass. But the lives of the people in it aren't that much different from those today -- we have elite gated communities, and we have the homeless.

      Dystopians are easy to right about. Since a lot of "real" SF is about how technology changes us, its easy to make the changes all bad. Its harder to sit back and write a future where the changes have good and bad effects. Take the average citizen from 1804 -- tell them about nukes, about chemical warfare, about poisoned rivers, about massive genocide, about the AIDS plague. The world looks rather dystopian, huh? Then tell the citizen about the doubling of life expectency, the increase in literacy, life saving drugs and surgeries, the increase in oppertunities. The world looks rather utopian. Or just scare the shit out of them and tell them about equal rights regardless of race or gender, freedom of religion, freedom of speech, and about differing sexual orientations. (And yes, euro-slashdotians, the average citizen is from the USA. :P )

      Now, what's easier to write about? Living to 70? Or how people died horribly in Nagasaki and Hiroshima? Life-saving open heart surgery? Or genocide?

      The future is what you make of it.

    5. Re:I think I've read this before by Lodragandraoidh · · Score: 1

      I remember picking mostly dystopian scifi novels in my teens. I also see what my teenage daughter reads - mostly dark fiction.

      I think, by and large, teens are drawn to this fiction as a form of escape from the drab pleasantries of a normal life. Most of us weren't blessed with perfect teeth, being a star on the football team, and dating the head cheerleader. Basically, life is generally 'boring' for most people. We needed something that showed us another view of the world - and reached for something outside of the normal experience. This is the same reason we ride rollercoasters, go bungie jumping, or view horror movies etc...

      On a deeper level, I must ask the question: does this reflect our own mediocrity as human beings? Do we have a responsibility to live a 'zestful' life, rather than a 'safe' one? I don't know, but I think I need to go buy another dystopian novel right about now... :(

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  17. google for dating by asscroft · · Score: 1

    he uses google to try to act smart while instant messaging her. yeah, I know this story well.

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    because I have been enjoined by this Holy Office to abandon the false opinion which maintains that the Sun is the centre
  18. I actually read the book by Rognvald · · Score: 5, Interesting

    I thought one of the most telling scenes in the book was a ride they took to "the country." They found a steak farm that allowed visitors to watch the blood flowing through tubes to irrigate fields of steak, with the occasional horn or hoof sticking out of a hedge of beef. I recall Titus thinking that it was important to visit these kinds of places so people would remember where their food really came from.

    1. Re:I actually read the book by stienman · · Score: 1

      Well, what do you really think about this? Sure, our culture seems to have an aversion to blood, but if you could create meat without having a living animal (loosely defining living here) then are you saying we should still stick with live cows?

      I agree with titus that it is important to know where your food comes from - it seems like it would be an instinctual desire.

      But it does bring to mind the magic cow:
      Riff: Torg, you traded our magic beans for a cow?
      Torg: It's a magic cow!
      Torg: (whispered) It's full of steaks!
      Riff: Whoa!

      -Adam

  19. Depressing, yet interesting. by OwP_Fabricated · · Score: 1

    Has there ever been a fiction book describing a utopian society that wasn't secretly evil in some way?

    I guess we all get off on the sob stories and the apocalypse.

    1. Re:Depressing, yet interesting. by Sabaki · · Score: 1

      Probably for the same reason very vew episodes of Star Trek centered around those days of the mission where nothing happened.

      There's not much dramatically interesting without conflict, and if the world you created for the story doesn't provide that conflict, there's not much reason to have it in a science fiction setting. There's nothing inherently wrong with story where the conflicts are purely personal in an otherworld setting, but it's much less likely to get written than one where the world is integral to the conflict.

    2. Re:Depressing, yet interesting. by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      Well, there's everything Anne McCaffery has ever written. The Recluse series by L. E. Modesitt, Jr. Reaching back a bit there's the Foundation "Trilogy" Rendezvous with Rama, Triple Entente by Piers Anthony. That's just the ones that really made an impression on me.

  20. I read that book last year by L7_ · · Score: 0, Flamebait

    The only thing that i remember about it that the technology that he described (implants in your head to receive commercial shows and trendy fashions) is pretty far off. If I had an implant in my head, the last thing I would want is the inability to control what I receive all the time.

    I could understand implanting a cell phone mic into my jaw or a receiver into my ear, but an important note is that I would have to be able to turn them off (and they would have to be removable with no permanent damage).

    The last thing you would want would to be recieving spam projected into your brain 24-7.

    P.S. The girl dies in the end.

  21. commercialization of teenagers by keyshawn632 · · Score: 5, Insightful

    I read this in a few days, with only about 150 pages long during the school year, about 4 months ago. It's diction is pretty light, and is on a 8th grade reading level.
    *Tries to remember the story more*
    From what I do remember, it was pretty prophetic in describing the commercialization of schooling and teenagers. The reviewer touched on this point a little too. Speaking from a teenage geek's perspective; it's often sickening to see how invasive advertising is becoming in teenagers' lives.

    Unfortunately, the advertisers seem to have already won - as I and many others are already 'casted' by other peers as 'outsiders' for not being as consumptious or brand-loyal as them.
    Both the main character and I feel torn, as we do not like to befriend/hang out with such a 'phony' crowd [I hate to use Holden's word, but it fits here]; and there's little alternatives for us.

    1. Re:commercialization of teenagers by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      Both the main character and I feel torn, as we do not like to befriend/hang out with such a 'phony' crowd [I hate to use Holden's word, but it fits here]; and there's little alternatives for us.

      You already seem to have a grasp that popularity isn't everything (some unfortunates never out grow this stage), but you understandably aren't anti-social what can you do? Speaking as someone who was not too long ago a teenage geek (currently 24), why not try to seek out other people that share your view. Your peer group doesn't have to be limited by who your neighbors are and who you see in school. Join some activities and clubs outside of school, things like that. If you choose things you like, there's a good chance you will meet other teens with similar attitudes.

    2. Re:commercialization of teenagers by sinclair44 · · Score: 1
      "Speaking from a teenage geek's perspective; it's often sickening to see how invasive advertising is becoming in teenagers' lives."
      Yes! Definatly! We (the freshman class) had a presentation last fall that was supposed to be about "Making High School Count". It was just a long advertisment with a few bits of "interesting" stuff thrown in. They even went as far as to collect our addresses, phone numbers, emails, etc at the end! I wrote a letter to our principal, but I never heard anything back. They got their money; it doesn't matter what the student body thinks.
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    3. Re:commercialization of teenagers by Sgt+York · · Score: 3, Insightful
      I wrote a letter to our principal, but I never heard anything back. They got their money; it doesn't matter what the student body thinks.
      Make it matter. I know it sounds trite and cliche, but make it matter to them in an intelligent way.

      Talk to your parents about it. Prepare what you want them to understand and present it to them, and have them bitch. If your parents don't care, take it to someone else (and really, even if you think they don't care, try them first, even if only as a practice run for pitching to people who do care). Go to another relative, sympathetic teacher, school board, city council, anyone. If you are in any kind of youth group (club, church, whatever) use the people there. Trust me, the people that volunteer with those groups would be overjoyed at the idea of helping you out with something like this. I work with teenagers, and I love helping them bitch about things they think are screwed up, even if I don't think it's important. It makes up for me not having the balls to do it when I was younger.

      If you can't find a champion, do it yourself. Go to the city council, or the mayor, or the school board. Don't write a letter, and don't waste your time with an e-mail. Go see them. Walk into a city council or school board meeting and get up in front of them and talk. Most districts allow the general public to do this. The idea that elected people won't listen to you because you're a kid is bullshit. Championing the cause of teenagers who just want a good education is gold for an election campaign.

      You have to put up with this crap all the time in the real world. You should be left without it at school. It's bullshit. Don't let people ignore you because you are young.

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    4. Re:commercialization of teenagers by TeraBill · · Score: 1

      From what I just saw when I looked it up on site where I buy books is that is was listed as 320 pages in paperback, age target was 11-13 year olds and it had the following annotation:

      This satiric novel tells the story of Titus, a teenage boy living in a futuristic society where most people are controlled by a vast computer network which they connect to via electronic feeds in their heads. Titus is perfectly happy with his world, a world where his every need and want is suggested and met by his "feed." But then he meets Violet who, although she too is hooked up to a "feed," is nonetheless a free thinker who awakens him to the dangers of living in a computer-controlled society. Nominated for the 2002 National Book Award in the young people's literature category. Named one of the Best Children's Books 2002 by Publishers Weekly. A New York Times Notable Book for 2002.

      So, it would fit with your read of it as about 8th grade level
    5. Re:commercialization of teenagers by Alsee · · Score: 1

      and there's little alternatives for us.

      Sure there is! You can come here to Slashdot and be different just like everyone else!

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  22. Sounds like a stoner's dreamy thinking by 311Stylee · · Score: 1

    I mean, we really already are a glutinous, self-absorbed, incredibly selfish and illiterate country anyway. If you don't think corporations control educational materials today, you are sadly naive. This novel sounds not so much like a vision of the future, but a stylized version of today.

    Luckily for us, reality will soon free us from our collective delusion of disconectedness. I find it humourous that in the novel the people rely on their amazing communication system to just look up words, in the same way I am amazed at the lack of overall collaboration (besides open source) that exists on the 'net today. /rant.

  23. Is it me? by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    Or does this book sound like a Jon Katz atricle?

  24. A female engineer? by Trillan · · Score: 2, Funny

    Poor boy. Female engineers become attractive to male geeks at puberty, and remain so until 20 minutes after death. Longer on warm days.

    And as an engineer, she's probably way too smart to hang out with a boy named Titus.

    1. Re:A female engineer? by ediron2 · · Score: 1
      Poor boy. Female engineers become attractive to male geeks at puberty, and remain so until 20 minutes after death. Longer on warm days.
      20 mins after whose death-- the male's or the female's?

      ... Either!? Oh.

  25. geez by cascadingstylesheet · · Score: 4, Funny

    We often attribute poor language skills to teenagers, but the author's willingness to show adults with the same deficiencies is telling. Even the President of the United States appears unfocused and uneducated.

    You really posted this whole story just to say that, didn't you? ;)

    1. Re:geez by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      Hey, this is Slashdot, news for nerds, so its mandatory to have a Bush-bashing comment in every other thread, right?
      Oh, yeah, I guess that makes no sense. I wish people could learn to control themselves. People should read more about the Spanish civil war, a bloody war about people who fought over differing political opinions, then 10 years after it was over (and 1 million dead later) people realized that their exteme views on politics were a little over exaggerated.
      Thats what happens when politics become the most important thing in a persons life. Get some perspective on life.
      BTW, I am not voting for Bush, in case you were wondering.

    2. Re:geez by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      > Hey, this is Slashdot, news for nerds, so its mandatory to have a Bush-bashing comment in every other thread, right?

      Only if followed by blaming the clenus.....

      > then 10 years after it was over (and 1 million dead later)

      Like, wasn't there some collective set of events in that 10 year period (where several million more fucking people died, fer' christs sake!)? (yeah, spain stayed out of the later mess....)

  26. Does it just suck to be you or something? by OwP_Fabricated · · Score: 1

    Seriously, go outside, go buy a gun. Cheer up.

    Frownies. :(

  27. My thoughts exactly by zoloto · · Score: 1

    It's a culture where citizens are trained to value only what's shiny and new, and to dispose of the old and used. How any relationship can survive in that environment is a mystery only philosophers and Slashdot commentators might dare address

    This is what I've been trying to figure out for years! HOW!?!!??

  28. GAHHHH!! by Creepy+Crawler · · Score: 1

    THE ANGST!! I CANNOT STAND THE ANGST!!

    Go read Greg Egan's works, or something else like the 4 books of Hyperion.

    May you live in interesting times.

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  29. try Tad Williams (warning: spoiler) by Gothmolly · · Score: 1

    Read the Otherland series if you want a good, future, dystopian society where everyone has a direct connection to the Net. Extremely deep and broad world, where heroes find out that in RL they're young,old,opposite gender, etc. I'm not saying that this new book isn't good, but this stuff has been explored already, in depth, by masters (Neuromancer anyone?)

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    1. Re:try Tad Williams (warning: spoiler) by uxo · · Score: 1

      Where's the spoiler? I read the first volume, City of Golden Shadow. Tedious. Spare me from wading through the next 2,500 pages!

  30. some more digging into Outer Limits nets: by Tumbleweed · · Score: 1

    Season 3, epsidoe 5: "Streams of Consciousness"

    Outer Limits was such a great show. The same thing happened to another episode - the same premise got turned into a movie called, "The Truman Show." *yawn*

    At least this one is a novel, plus I guess there are only so many storylines available. *shrug*

  31. POTUS appears unfocused and uneducated by Strange_Attractor · · Score: 1

    Wha...I thought this was a futuristic story!

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  32. Not Matrix, Diamond Age! by theluckyleper · · Score: 1

    When I saw the word "Feed" I got excited and thought maybe it was an article about nanotechnology... maybe someone had created The Feed from Stephenson's Diamond Age?

    But alas, not yet... not yet.

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    1. Re:Not Matrix, Diamond Age! by jdray · · Score: 1

      My head is aching right now to remember the author's name of a short story I read wherein the entirety of Earth was covered with this grey sandy powder that was the result of (and contained) nanites gone wrong. There was one city left on Earth that was shielded from the otherwise complete sterilization of the planet, and it was mostly a museum. Visitors (mankind had migrated off planet by that time) who wanted to go "outside" had to wear special suits that protected them from the microscopic beasties. Coming back inside, the suits were destroyed, and the returning people went through a detoxification process that included removal (and replacement) of every square inch of their skin. Can you say ouch? As you might imagine, the process was excrutiatingly painful, and not a lot of people went through it. Of course, without someone to do it, there wouldn't be a story...

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    2. Re:Not Matrix, Diamond Age! by Beale · · Score: 1

      I thought it was an RSS bug. :)

    3. Re:Not Matrix, Diamond Age! by tigris · · Score: 1

      I want to say Blood Music by Greg Bear, but I don't remember the detoxification process. Been years since I've read it though.

    4. Re:Not Matrix, Diamond Age! by smallfries · · Score: 1

      No, blood music is the one about the researcher who takes the nanites out of the lab by injecting them into his blood stream. It's a pre-goo story about the coming goo rather than post-goo.

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  33. What do corporations want from education? by Pallando-zi · · Score: 4, Insightful
    Alvin and Heidi Toffler in their book The Third Wave make the point that industry doesn't just want the education system to turn out consumers. Industry also needs workers.

    We are seeing in the debates over the Japanese and Singaporean education systems the pressures being brought to bear by modern information, science and technology based industries upon the education system to turn out more creative, less regimented, adults.

    If the mass illiteracy future happens, it ain't going to be because that's what companies want.

    Douglas -- All speeling mistaks shoud be consedered intentionel irony

    1. Re:What do corporations want from education? by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      If the mass illiteracy future happens, it ain't going to be because that's what companies want.

      No, that's the goal of a state-run educational system.

    2. Re:What do corporations want from education? by wintermute42 · · Score: 1

      Yet another example of Toffler(s) being wrong. They were writing at a time when there actually was a labor shortage in the Western world. We can only hope that we will see those times again. We have "future shock", but not of the kind they invision.

      Our world is struggling with a shortage of jobs, not workers. Corporations have more than enough workers. Feed gets some of these themes right. As productivity increases, more and more stuff is produced by fewer and fewer workers. Who will consume all the stuff that is the fruit of all this productivity? Corporations will be increasingly interested in a consumer class, since they will have more than enough workers. And workers will compete ever more fiercely for the few real jobs that are available.

      We are starting to see the footprints of what may be a post capitalist world. Unfortunately I'm not convinced that it will be much of a utopia. At least not in my lifetime. I'm not sure what form the emerging market system will take. But it seems clear that a world where people work, in the sense that they have throughout human history, for the means of survival is less and less functional. The claim that service jobs will make up for all of the jobs lost to automation and globalization is simply a statement of faith ("I believe in the unseen...").

      Right now the economic system seems to be unstable. The global workforce is becoming integrated. Those of us in software engineering are now discovering what the steel workers found out: we are competing with large labor pools in India, China, Russia and Eastern Europe. Salaries are stagnating in the Western world as wages start to be averaged out on a global scale. As people have less disposable income who will buy all the stuff? There will be some increased demand in rising economies, but population pressure and automation will keep their salaries down. So their ability to pick up the consumer slack is equally limited.

      This suggests that corporations might actually move to create a consumer class, as Feed speculates. How else to feed the cycle of income and consumption when most people don't have what we would recognize today as jobs?

    3. Re:What do corporations want from education? by Artifakt · · Score: 1

      "If the mass illiteracy future happens, it ain't going to be because that's what companies want."

      Why on earth not? A company (let's call it A) that makes disposeable diapers wants there to be lots of people who make enough money to afford to buy disposable diapers, but that doesn't mean those have to be the company's employees. Company A can even have a lousy maternity leave policy and take various steps to make becomeing a customer for disposable diapers among its own work force less likely than the average.
      One of the 'dismissed','socialistic' arguements we have supposedly seen the last of with the fall of the Soviet Union is the idea that "The workers at the Ford plant should be able to afford Fords, and the workers at Caddilac should be able to afford Caddilacs.". Fine, but if company A wants to sell 100 Million units of X, there have to be 100 Million customers who both want X and can afford it. Company A won't sell its quota of X unless some other company B pays enough to create those 'consumers'.
      In the same way, company A can 'want' there to be educated employees who can think for themselves, but the massively illiterate filled future can still happen while company A waits for someone else to foot the resulting bills.

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  34. Bottom of the page quote: by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    IBM Pollyanna Principle: Machines should work. People should think.

    Adam T associated statement: I will happily think. I just don't want to work.

  35. Holy crap by carcosa30 · · Score: 1

    My mom knows this guy. He had dinner at her house a couple of weeks back. Haven't read this book but people speak of it very highly.

    Awesome to see some "children's cyberpunk" if that's not an oxymoron. I should pick this book up.

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    1. Re:Holy crap by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      What the hell are you talking about? Why don't you just ask your mommy to get the book for you for free?

      BTW, what the hell does your sig mean??? We're not going to take what lying down?? Why delay elections??
      This is the reason you must be 18 to vote, buddy. Seriously, though, answer these questions above.

    2. Re:Holy crap by carcosa30 · · Score: 1

      I suspect you of being a dumbfuck. If you don't understand my sig et cetera, seriously read the news.

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  36. Dude, that's not a novel, that's happening today by JudgeFurious · · Score: 5, Informative

    At least the part about the language skills.

    Example (And I'm going to preface this with a solid "I have absolutely minimal input in this situation though I'm trying" statement)

    My stepson is a frickin pod person thanks to DSL and a father (who he lives with) who literally refuses to pull the plug. The kid comes home from school (not School(TM) yet but soon I'm sure) and goes online. He stays online until he goes to sleep. When he's at our house (every other weekend, his dad got custody and then prompty opted to let the net and television handle most of the chores) it's a war to get him to do anything that doesn't involve a video game. We have broadband too but we try to keep him from spending the entire weekend on it. What's two days though every two weeks when he lives online the rest of the time (admittedly outside of school).

    He seems to me to be a pretty bright kid and makes ok grades but his communication skills are almost non-existent. Getting more than a couple of sentences out of him at one time is a triumph and if they're understandable then that's a bonus. He's got to use the English language at school (doesn't he?) so you would think he'd know a few words. A noun or two here and there? Maybe? If that's the case though then he doesn't exhibit any sign of it that I can see.

    At his age (Almost 16) I was trying to figure out how to earn enough money to get a car, trying to get laid (with little luck), and had interests in music, books, sports, and a pack of friends all thinking about much of the same things.

    The idea of this kid working anywhere is laughable. He doesn't even mention cars or driving and to the best of my knowledge doesn't know what a girl is (and I check his browser cache when he leaves so we're not even talking about hitting the porn here). He doesn't read, he doesn't listen to music, and he doesn't even want to go outside much less actually do something that might require sweating. Friends? Hell if I know.

    I wonder how many other kids are already hooked up to "The Feed" for all practical purposes?

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  37. Walden Two by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    B.F. Skinners utopian vision.
    Although there are some who will find it depressing.

  38. like, this book sounds... by jwriney · · Score: 1

    uh...

    uh...

    good.

    --riney

  39. Question by stratjakt · · Score: 1

    Anyone know where I can find a decent quality image of Ingignogdt giving the earth the finger out of the window of his Mooninite spacecraft?

    It's linux related, so it's OK to ask - mod me up! I want to make a silent bootsplash where the "progress bar" is ignignotds' finger getting longer and longer.

    On second thought, I'll just start a sourceforge project and wait for someone else to come along and do it for me.

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  40. Thoughts by BitwizeGHC · · Score: 1

    On the main character, Titus:

    In my mind's eye I imagine him to carry a blue water sword and voice-over annoyingly.

    On their language:

    "Hey Marge, where's that uhhhhhh, thing you use to ummmmmmmmmmm..... dig?"

    "Oh, you mean a spoon!"

    "Yeahyeahyeahyeahyeahyeahyeah!!!"

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    1. Re:Thoughts by Elsebet · · Score: 1

      In my mind's eye I imagine him to carry a blue water sword and voice-over annoyingly.

      But unlike woefully female-inept Titus, Tidus knows blitzers want to SCORE!!!

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  41. The Future Sucks = hope by Strange_Attractor · · Score: 1

    Same reason newspapers are full of awful events - that's what's interesting, and what stands in contrast to the "mundane" workaday world of our own lives. Plus, SF dystopias are cautionary - they're waving red flags about present or incipient problems and rabble-rousing to try to inspire corrective action. The only world in which forward-looking, concerned people aren't presented with doomsday scenarios...is the happy-face worlds depicted BY those scenarios (no dark dystopian visions would be allowed/distributed by The Feed, for example).

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  42. Re:Dude, that's not a novel, that's happening toda by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    Non-existent communication skills.

    He's a teenage male, right?

    Congratulations, he's normal.
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    "At his age (Almost 16) I was trying to figure out how to earn enough money to get a car, trying to get laid (with little luck), and had interests in music, books, sports, and a pack of friends all thinking about much of the same things."

    Aha. You're really a guy. This like a sitcom. But sad and pathetic. Which is like a sitcom.

  43. This is the future? by smooth+wombat · · Score: 1
    The citizens of this future America, weaned on the Feed, are shockingly illiterate. Their language is largely incoherent, riddled with "like"s and "thing"s.

    As I was reading the review the first thing that came to mind was, "This is about the future? This is how things are now!"

    Matrix, meet Today
    Today, meet Matrix

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  44. Re:Dude, that's not a novel, that's happening toda by Sjobeck · · Score: 0

    I agree. This scares me stiff. I trust that people's inner clock/inner pendulum can detect this stuff and avert before actual doom, but I'm not quite as sure about that as I used to be. This election, not to over-reach, might be an interesting test of my theory about that. Gees, I hope my daugthers arent mind-controlled robot billboards.

  45. not that new-fangled by mblase · · Score: 1

    Poor verbal composition is combined with an almost complete lack of vocabulary, so characters are often caught referring to objects as "thing... uh..." -- pause while they look up the term through their Feed -- "table."

    Nowadays, we call that "lag".

    This is a typical result of lazy programming. Never underestimate the value of caching a local copy of your data for faster look-ups.

  46. Quote from OP by Brain+Stew · · Score: 1

    "Even the President of the United States appears unfocused and uneducated."

    Duh...But tell us more about the book!

    Just kidding. This sounds interesting. It would seem that in a universe such as the one this book describes technology must be liberally balanced with conscience, something we as (computer) scientists often forget.

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  47. and there's little alternatives for us. by SmallFurryCreature · · Score: 4, Insightful

    Damn to late the future is now. You do use some big words, googled for them? Pity you can't google grammar eh?

    Just messing with you, not like I could do much better but then english ain't my first language.

    As for advertising and american education, the rest of the world is just a few years behind, I once saw a documentary on kids in an american school being forced to watch commercials. The companies who owned the ads had paid for the lessons so if you didn't watch you were BANNED from class. It was a few years ago and I only saw half of the program so it could have been a spoof. It was supposed to be in one of the more depressed areas of big city.

    Anyway we have long since passed the point of sponsored kantines and sponsored school books. We can bitch all we want about it but as long as we allow campaigns that promise tax cuts and don't gas people that vote based on this we can't expect anything else. He who promises the biggest cuts gets the power, to make the cuts he needs to cut money to schools. Then "industry" steps in but they don't do it for free.

    Someone else commented how this kinda of future requires a lot of people to overcome their ethics. No it doesn't, it just requires everyone to make a tiny little adjustment of their ethics every couple of years. That is presuming people have ethics anyway. Look at how easily people turn to butchering their neighbours and perhaps the human race has about the same amount of ethics as a cat.

    The book review talks about the "hero" having little feelings about his girlfriend dying while he is shopping. But as we shop for candy and luxury goods and speculate on the latest ship or bitch how camera phones are crap PEOPLE ARE DYING FROM HUNGER. Do we give a damn about them? I don't. Oh sure when you corner me on the street and shove a tv-camera in my face I will say I care but really I don't. If I did I would do something about it and I don't. None of us do. Well at least not enough of us to make any difference.

    Oh well at least you and I feel torn about it. Better then some of the posters who prefer books that say "everything is going to be alright". We are all consumer slaves but at least some of us are aware of it. Like alcoholism the first step is admitting you got a problem. The real problem is all the steps that come after it. Looks like a long journey, better have a drink first to encourage us.

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    You may solo them, I prefer them in a group.

  48. Ah... Violet... by antiher0 · · Score: 1

    I remember her. She was definitely waaaay smarter than me. Every time I tried to touch her, she smacked me. *sigh* I miss Legend of the Red Dragon

  49. Why talk? by po8 · · Score: 1

    I don't get it. If everybody has a direct neural Feed, why talk at all, except through it? Seems like it would revolutionize society in ways too hard to write about...oh, now I get it.

    See Alfred Bester's famous novel The Demolished Man for an interesting take on a future in which just a subset of folks are telepaths. Highly recommended.

    1. Re:Why talk? by Rakishi · · Score: 1

      That's basically what I think whenever I try to imagine a society with either mass telepaths or neural links. Although I'm not sure about the rest of the series as I haven't read it Asimov basically had non-talking telepaths in Forward the Foundation, which made me feel fuzzy on the inside.

      In general every single change had dozens of consequences, if you can connect neural feeds then the societies knowledge of the brain (and science in general) is rather high needs to be taken into account, for example supper geniuses. There are indeed ways of getting around this (science being controlled by corporations, a sudden discovery in one field, alien technology or whatever) however then imho you slowly become less and less tied into reality.

    2. Re:Why talk? by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      I don't get it. If everybody has a direct neural Feed, why talk at all, except through it? Seems like it would revolutionize society in ways too hard to write about...oh, now I get it.

      I can think of an alternative reason. If the direct neural feed is not implanted shortly after birth, people will still need a way to communicate with their children.

  50. Good Review by Jack9 · · Score: 1

    Sounds exactly like a book I would like to buy.

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    I am Jack9.
    Everyone knows me.
  51. relationship by ch-chuck · · Score: 2, Insightful

    Ok, I'll dare to address the question of how any relationship can survive in such an environment: Frankly, it doesn't need to. In The Future®, relationships are superflulous and unnecessary as all human reproduction is handled by a corporation formed from the merging of the sperm bank, planned parenthood, and artificial insemination clinics. Certain males, selected from the gene pool after application and carefull screening, are permitted to make a 'deposit' in the sperm bank, where their 'funds' remain anonymous but are catagorized by physical characteristics. Certain select females are granted a license to reproduce when deemed necessary in light of population statistics, the desired qualities of new members, etc (do we need more scientists, hair stylists or equipment operators) and permitted to conceive (unlicensed conception is severely punished). After birth the newborn begins to spend more and more time in corporate training centers (day care) where s/he is raised to fulfill the role in society ordained for him/her.

    So, all the sentiment about 'love', 'relationship' , 'romance' is completely unnecessary and dangerous to the established order and prone to produce troublemakers who don't 'fit in'. The only relationship necessary is that between the individual and the corporation.

    And they have flying cars.

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    1. Re:relationship by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

      So are you for or against this system of reproduction?

    2. Re:relationship by nsayer · · Score: 1

      "This is city probe. We've run across some illegal sexual activity. It should be on your monitors now. Relay to investigating officers."
      "Thank you for your assistance in crime prevention."

      This bit of dialog has been brought to you by THX-1138: Dystopian visions for a new millenium.

  52. Feed by Bart+Read · · Score: 2, Interesting

    To be honest this sounds interesting, I think branding it as another Matrix etc rip-off is probably missing the point, and I think slating it for using ideas that have occurred in other SF novels is probably doing the same. No novel is ever entirely original in all aspects: if you're going to nitpick about the reuse of ideas you may as well give up now and never read another book in your life.

    However:

    The citizens of this future America, weaned on the Feed, are shockingly illiterate.

    The fact is that for most of human history, most of humanity, most of the time has been shockingly illiterate. Even today, if you look at literacy throughout the world, rather than looking at just the U.S.... it's quite shockingly low (America is not and never has been representative of the world at large). But the reasons are different and tend to be a reflection of the rich / poor divide, rather than because education is controlled by powerful corporations. The difference is that many people who are illiterate today would give almost anything for an education and some decent opportunities in life, whereas the characters in this novel just don't care.

    1. Re:Feed by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0
      the characters in this novel just don't care.

      Books like this make people illiterate.
  53. Re:Dude, that's not a novel, that's happening toda by HarveyBirdman · · Score: 1
    The kid comes home from school (not School(TM) yet but soon I'm sure) and goes online.

    Gee, I dunno... could School(TM) really be worse than School(Govt-Spec-12-5129-00917)?

    How about a pilot program?

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  54. Women making smart relationship decissions? by SmallFurryCreature · · Score: 1
    This is Sci-Fi not fantasy. We are talking things that are theoretically possible based on what we know now and adding a generous dose of wild speculation and random guesswork.

    You are well into the realms of pure fantasy. No basis in real life whatsoever. Women being able to avoid men that are bad for them. Yeah right you are even incapable of it yourselve. You reject him just because of his name. That is rational. We all know you can tell the wifebeaters by their given name.

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    You may solo them, I prefer them in a group.

  55. Moneyless is the way to go... by suso · · Score: 1
  56. Plot Hole by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    "the narrative follows a 14-year-old boy named Titus as he hangs out with his friends"

    14-year-old geeks don't have friends.

  57. Re:Dude, that's not a novel, that's happening toda by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    Nice try at an anti-government jab, but the School(TM) is vastly different than the (sometimes oversold) private schools in real life. I would take nearly any real world school, public or private, over the ones portrayed in this book! That is speaking as a student, parent of a student, or even just a general member of society.

  58. You're mistaken. by theonomist · · Score: 1

    Industry may need workers, but the workers don't need to think, because a corporation can always spend some of its ill-gotten profits hiring somebody to think for their employees, so nobody on the payroll actually needs to think at all.

    Leaving aside the quasi-libertarian dogma, the only solution to the problems described in the book is a series of well-considered government programs designed to address what's really wrong. I'm sorry, but you simply can't trust private enterprise to solve these things, because they are driven by incentives, rather than ethics and laws. With the proper legal structure, government programs must, by definition, achieve their goals. The only indispensible requirement is that the lawmakers be ethical people, and that's easily achieved once you have a properly educated electorate. The people can be trusted to make the right decisions, once they understand the issues. Fostering a full and proper understanding in the voters will indeed require us first to break the back of corporate media and replace it with something consistently objective, but this is not insurmountable.

    You can see a program taking shape here: First, a free media, out from under the thumb of corporate ideology. Once the corporations aren't drowning the public in their own version of reality, their power will evaporate and their very existence will sooner or later follow.

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    "Offtopic, Inflammatory, Inappropriate, Illegal, or Offensive" -- hey, that's me!
    1. Re:You're mistaken. by Celandro · · Score: 1

      The only indispensible requirement is that the lawmakers be ethical people, and that's easily achieved once you have a properly educated electorate. The people can be trusted to make the right decisions, once they understand the issues.

      This has gotta be the funniest thing Ive heard all day. Ethical lawmakers, educated electorate, and people making the right decisions. Thats funny stuff right there. If it was all so easy it would have happened at least one time in the past. But no.. There have always been unethical lawmakers, uneducated electorate and most of all.. People make bad decisions all the time and even when they think they are making a good decision, there are people who would disagree.

      Not to mention that what is the "right decision" is impossible to determine even in hindsight.. Hindsight may be 20/20 but even 20/20 cant read a sign from a mile away.

    2. Re:You're mistaken. by Rakishi · · Score: 1

      So everything would be a monopoly then? You see if there is any chance of competition then companies need those "free thinking" individuals to compete. Since we are in a global market place they also need to compete with other countries. If the US suddenly became a static non-innovative nation then unless we withdrew from the global market place (both import and export) the Russians and Chinese would within a few decades decimate US corporations.

  59. It's a bait 'n' switch. by Grendel+Drago · · Score: 2, Informative

    It's a bait-and-switch, see, originating in the 1950s. The 1950s were supposedly the halcyon days of apple pie, clean (too cheap to meter!) nuclear power and robots that would clean your house---any day now! The 1950s were also a time of paranoia, McCarthyism and of course the ever-present threat of nuclear annihilation.

    To reflect this duality, take Asimov and PKD. Asimov's stories reflect the attitude that technology will save us, that robots will do our bidding and be our Fuzzy Friends. PKD's view is that aliens, or maybe robots, or maybe mutants, but in any case something utterly inhuman, will supplant and replace us. (See the short stories "The Golden Man", "The Hanging Man" or "The Father-Thing" for some really top-drawer examples of that.)

    If you've been reading solely PKD, no wonder you think it's all doom and gloom!

    Let's look at the last few SF books I read. "A Fire Upon the Deep" (Vernor Vinge), "The Left Hand of Darkness" (Ursula K LeGuin), "The Turing Option" (Harry Harrison and Marvin Minsky). Hmm---not a dystopia to be found. (Though that last books was a damned waste of time.)

    Hell, Vinge writes about ubiquitous computing in a way that doesn't lead to suckness and defeat. (See "Fast Times at Fairmont High" or the upcoming "Rainbows End".)

    Also---you say that "the cure is always free love or fascism". Aside from Norman Spinrad trying to make a point ("The Iron Dream"), when is fascism recommended? When is "free love" recommended as a cure for a dystopia? The only free-love-proposing book I remember is "Stranger in a Strange Land", and that was hardly set in a dystopia.

    --grendel drago

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    Laws do not persuade just because they threaten. --Seneca
  60. Let's see... by jejones · · Score: 1

    OK. In this book, the US is a nation of dunces--but somehow all the infrastructure to keep the Feed, the high-tech GM food functions. The people who run that clearly can't be the mindless, attention-span-of-a gnat zombies that the author posits the general public has become...and they can all be counted on, or coerced to, not object to the hell that life has turned into.

    For that matter, somehow this country of imbeciles can afford to buy the latest gewgaws. How? What can they trade for money? Organs? Blood plasma? Drool? (Doubtful, given the genetic technology implied.)

    I don't think the author has thought things through; probably didn't figure he or she had to--after all, he's pushing all the fashionable buttons for the Rage Against the Machine set.

    1. Re:Let's see... by Rakishi · · Score: 1

      Your post reminded me of Brave New World, and I guess a similar system could be used in the Feed world. Of course then the whole thing would be exactly like Brave New World and thus a rip off.

      I wonder how the Russians and the Chinese peacefully joined this New World Order, I guess I'll read the book. It might be amusing.

  61. Re:Dude, that's not a novel, that's happening toda by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 1, Insightful

    It must be rough knowing someone with different interests. I recommend spending all your time with your "pack of friends all thinking about much of the same things" to avoid such difficult encounters in the future.

  62. Depends, how do you feel about real-life popups? by SuperKendall · · Score: 1

    I think School(TM) Could be vastly worse - Government run things are generally just sluggish and ineffective. But a corperation run school where they were allowed to pull every subliminal trick in the book on you? Scary stuff.

    Personally I think it would backfire though and people would just become hardened to the ads.

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  63. Mod vegasbright -1, Simpleton by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0


    Slashdot is for all manner of discussion, whether you and your groupthinking friends believe it or not. The mod system, like today's GOP, serves primarily to stymie the discussion of interesting ideas in favor of those of the group.

  64. Ain't all sweetness and light. by Grendel+Drago · · Score: 1

    There's a good reason for reading dystopias. Heck, there are lots of 'em. See, any good story has to have conflict in it. I'm in the middle of reading "A Deepness in the Sky" right now---not a dystopia, but it features what I consider pretty damned scary bad guys. If they weren't as sinister as they are, the book wouldn't be exciting. Who wants to see Fluffy Bear out-cuddle Slightly Less Fluffy Bear?

    Now, I'm not defensing dystopias which are unimaginative or poorly written. As another reply to you put it, People so often read these kinds of books and then talk about how "1984ish" our world is today or how we are heading towards a "Brave New World." I wonder how many people who make those comments have even read the books. How many of them could name the main SF elements in each book (two-way television and a genetically engineered caste system, respectively)?

    A good dystopian novel will make you consider elements of the society you live in, see it in a different way. PKD didn't have alien marauders secretly replacing humans left and right in his town, but that doesn't mean that "The Hanging Man" isn't a good read.

    --grendel drago

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    Laws do not persuade just because they threaten. --Seneca
  65. KINKY MONKEYFUCKER! by mandrake*rpgdx · · Score: 1

    *cough Negative Utopia cough*. Not distopia. Difference? In a Dystopian society everyone knows it sucks. It's usually a degenerative advanced In a negative utopian socity/future, everyone *thinks* it's great because no on knows any better, but a dark underbelly shows itself and the reader is let in on the flaws on the Utopian society.

    Dystopian -> Blade Runner
    Negative Utopian -> Brave New World

    Dystopian-> Lord of the Flies
    Negative Utopian -> 1984

    Once upon a time the distinction was used more often. It seems this day, literary people use the same term for both. But to me that's as disgraceful as calling Sci Fi a branch of Fantasy.

    1. Re:KINKY MONKEYFUCKER! by belg4mit · · Score: 1

      Hardly if you like dystopias you'll almost certainly
      like your second category. Liking fantasy or sci-fi does not provide the same degree of certainty.

      --
      Were that I say, pancakes?
    2. Re:KINKY MONKEYFUCKER! by voodoo1man · · Score: 1

      I still stand by Anthony Burgess' use of the term "cacotopia," originally coined by Jeremy Bentham and an inspiration for JS Mill's "dystopia." I find it both more concise and evocative than "negative utopia."

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      In the great CONS chain of life, you can either be the CAR or be in the CDR.

  66. Speech is overrated, right? by Grendel+Drago · · Score: 1

    Indeed, we should campaign for equal rights for pod people who piss away their lives playing Everquest! Clearly that's just as valid as making friends, or creating something, or writing...

    Ass.

    --grendel drago

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    Laws do not persuade just because they threaten. --Seneca
  67. Ah, memories. by Grendel+Drago · · Score: 1

    Remember when the Internet was going to be so damned good because it was going to be an interactive medium, where people talked back, and wrote, and would gain a voice as a massive, unruly, democratic whole?

    Oh, wait, for the vast majority of users, it's television with higher resolution and more porn. Even the games require the smallest possible level of thought or strategy. (I tried an MMORPG once---the WoW beta. Possibly the most stultifying gameply ever. Walk over to a bad guy whose level is less than or equal to yours. Hit 'auto-attack'. Wait about sixty to ninety seconds. Pick up Six Rusty Copper Bits. Repeat.) (Not to bust on Warcraft. I had a damned good time playing WCIII and the expansion.)

    Damn, you know, I spend five or six hours a day in front of a computer, but I write (for myself), I edit Wikipedia, I blather on Slashdot, I read, I write mail to people that uses complete sentences and capital letters... hell, I instant message using complete sentences and capital letters. Hell, I even go outside sometimes, exercise, read a book.

    How did this kid end up so different from me? I was a dork; I didn't really have friends, but I wasn't so... passive.

    I am so not having kids of my own for a long, long time.

    --grendel drago

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    Laws do not persuade just because they threaten. --Seneca
    1. Re:Ah, memories. by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0
      Obligatory:

      I am so not having kids of my own for a long, long time.
      Of course not - you're posting on /., aren't you?

  68. Teens are constantly depressed? by JLavezzo · · Score: 1

    Didn't say teens WERE depressed a lot. I said there's a lot to be depressed about. There are lots and lots of ADULTS who are plenty depressed. Plenty of teens, too. The book's targeted at "Young Adults", that's why I mentioned teens.

    Also, I'm only 30 and not suffering from memory loss, so I remember plenty of times my friends or I were depressed between ages 13 and 20. We had a lot of genuine happiness, too.

  69. like....uh...illiterate? by FerretFrottage · · Score: 1

    I is not sick

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    "Look Lois, the two symbols of the Republican Party: an elephant, and a fat white guy who is threatened by change."
  70. Re:I think I've read this before, but didn't get i by Un+pobre+guey · · Score: 1
    But we've fixed the threat of world war three, nuclear disaster...

    The book is for people like you, who think that we've fixed the threat of world war three and nuclear disaster, among other dusty old SF threats.

  71. Re:Depends, how do you feel about real-life popups by HarveyBirdman · · Score: 1
    If the popups lead to better educated children, I have absolutely no problem with them at all.

    As I *said*, how about a ***pilot*** program. You know... TRY IT OUT instead of making ideological prejudgements based on scare tactics of subliminal advertising and other urban myths? Can we at least TRY and be scientific by running an experiment?

    Personally I think it would backfire though and people would just become hardened to the ads.

    Do you have a actual factual basis for this conclusion other than "business = evil"?

    Can people not set aside their political prejudices once in a while so we can actually try something new? This is actually the main problem facing this country these days. If a solution can be shown to not be 100% perfect, it gets tossed away even if the new solution is 80% effective versus the 40% effectiveness of the incumbent system. It's madness.

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    --- Ban humanity.
  72. Re:Dude, that's not a novel, that's happening toda by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 2, Insightful

    Maybe he doesen't like cars and fast women!

    God, is this the Fifties again...?

    Just because you're "antisocial" doesn't mean there's something wrong with you!

  73. CHIMPY!!! by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 2, Funny

    Yeah. Terribly unfocused. Those hostages, stuck in Iran... it's good that we had the moral clarity of Reagan, who, you know, sent the Iranians arms in exchange for hostages. And look, our current chimp^Hpresident has the same kind of moral clarity! Sweet!

    1. Re:CHIMPY!!! by Crazy_MYKL · · Score: 1

      ^H is a SINGLE backspace, so I am wondering what a chimpresident is...

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  74. Re:Dude, that's not a novel, that's happening toda by JudgeFurious · · Score: 1

    No it's not rough really. See since his different interest (You can't say "different interests" because that implies that there's more than one) involves sitting in a dark room all of the time staring at a monitor while trying to find a key to open the blue door without setting off the explosive it's not hard to avoid an encounter.

    I spend plenty of time online myself. I game, participate in a couple of discussion boards, and like to surf as much as anyone. I don't do it all the time. There's nothing wrong with online games or the internet but if you do anything exclusively all the time you need to step back from it.

    "Well rounded" You familiar with that idea?

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  75. Weird Timing For Me... by DumbSwede · · Score: 1
    I just posted some thoughts on something like this in my journal yesterday.
    Ultra Veal

    (let the food fight begin)

  76. Re:Dude, that's not a novel, that's happening toda by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 1, Insightful
    Lets see here, you were a slightly nerdy jock.
    Congratulations.

    I'm 20, and I've only really though about getting a car for a year or so now.

    So he's a DSL-absorbed teenage male.
    Have you talked to him about music, and why he doesn't listen to it?
    Ditto for reading.
    As for going outside and sweating...sweatings not fun.
    Especially if one doesn't have friends to share the pain with.

    Sounds like you, as step-father, need to take the poor fellow out for a talk and get a actual
    relationship going instead of whining on /.

    Especially as his real father has abdicated responsibility.
    If he enjoys computers that much, why don't you buy him a compiler and a introduction to
    programming and a intro to game programming book?

    That way he can start putting his enjoyment of computer games into something educuated.

  77. Sounds like a classic ominous foreboding future by chaosmage42 · · Score: 1

    I mean, we really already are a glutinous, self-absorbed, incredibly selfish and illiterate country anyway. If you don't think corporations control educational materials today, you are sadly naive. This novel sounds not so much like a vision of the future, but a stylized version of today.

    Don't you think maybe, just maybe, the author is maybe trying to make a point? That the future described by this book is what will happen to us if we don't change what's going on today {of course the future is stylized compared to today}? Kind of like a large amount of other good sci-fi books {1984, Fahrenheit 451, Brave New World, The Giver, lots of PK Dick, etc.}?

    also, if your worried about corporate control of text books,etc., I recommend some books.

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    done
    1. Re:Sounds like a classic ominous foreboding future by 311Stylee · · Score: 1

      I'm not saying that being a "stylized version of today" precludes it from being good science fiction, I'm just pointing out that particular fact. Plenty of good fiction has serious flaws in one way or another; perhaps intentionally, perhaps not.

      Anyhow, I applaud any effort to kindle dead sticks of apathy to bright flames of well-informed rage (ie politcal participation).

  78. China... by Grendel+Drago · · Score: 1

    While I am definitely not a Communist (nor is much of anyone else in the past 10 years, as you'd notice if you'd check out a news source besides Fox News Channel ;-) )

    China is. I think the most populous nation in the world counts. Also North Korea and Cuba.

    Communism is not dead! It's just... resting... after a prolonged squawk, you see.

    --grendel drago

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    Laws do not persuade just because they threaten. --Seneca
    1. Re:China... by bing · · Score: 1
      Dude...you have obviously not been to Hong Kong, Shanghai or Bejing lately. The government leadership may be composed of 90-year-old Long Marchers who repress free speech with a vengence, but EVERYONE there seems pretty focused on making a buck and living a fine Burgeois lifestyle.

      North Korea is so screwed up I don't think they have a category for it (I don't think, "Disaster Area" can be considered a system of government), but I think that Feudal Monarchy is a pretty apt description of their political system (Inherited leadership, peasantry tied to the land, massive privation...sounds like the Middle Ages with Nukes to me).

      Cuba comes closer, following an Authoritarian Socialism model with a Cult Of Personality on top of a Centrally-Planned Economy, but that's not Communism either. Heck, that's the same politcal-economic system that Iraq had before the US went in and swapped it for a nice 80's-Lebanon-style Islamic Anarchy, and nobody ever accused Iraq of being a bunch of Commies.

      But if it makes you feel better, I'll agree that their governments all *claim* to be Communist, even if the leadership in all three of those places would probably shoot anyone who honestly espoused the concepts of true Communism within their borders.

      Of course, I can *claim* to be rich and good-looking, but that doesn't necessarily make it so.

  79. So... by VirtuaKnight · · Score: 1

    "Even the President of the United States appears unfocused and uneducated." This is set in the future, you say? I guess some things just don't change.

  80. An opposite viewpoint example by wolfemi1 · · Score: 1

    There is another example of the same idea, though not dystopian like this one, written by Stephen Baxter. I believe it was Manifold Space, and in it a large group of people are voluntarily given implants which link their brains directly together in sort of an organic beowulf cluster. Good reading.

  81. Re:Dude, that's not a novel, that's happening toda by gurps_npc · · Score: 1
    Find out what he likes on line. Pay for him to take classes in a related field.

    Best possible things he could try is some kind of Dance (NOT Ballet, but partner dance).

    Tell him you'll pay for any of the following: Salsa/Mambo Class, Swing Class , Tango Class

    Lots of people get hooked on these dances, and they go from total geeks -> social people in less than two months.

    My personal view is Salsa/Mambo = "look at me", Swing = "look at us", Tango = "Stop looking at us so we can have sex."

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  82. Re:Dude, that's not a novel, that's happening toda by sapped · · Score: 1

    The idea of this kid working anywhere is laughable. He doesn't even mention cars or driving and to the best of my knowledge doesn't know what a girl is (and I check his browser cache when he leaves so we're not even talking about hitting the porn here).

    So what does the kid read when he is online? Maybe you can use this knowledge to tear him away from the PC for a while?

  83. already feed'ed by Gribflex · · Score: 1

    I wonder if there's any significane to the fact that before I had finished this article, I had five other windows open:

    - google search for 'the feed'
    - bn.com
    - amazon.ca
    - chapters.ca (use all three for cost comparison)
    - local library web page (why buy, when you can borrow)

    I feel fed already, perhaps I don't need the book.

  84. Re:Dude, that's not a novel, that's happening toda by Adam9 · · Score: 1

    Agreed.

    Though, my deal was once I got a job then I could get a car.

    So what's in the browser cache? The things that he is interested in may be available in the real world too.

    I didn't start listening to music until about 5 years ago.

    Anyway, I think that if you could work with his interests, it would help out a lot.

  85. good call by chaosmage42 · · Score: 1

    thats a really good suggestion. I love seeing the 'kids' {young adults} at dances whos goal was to pick up girls and they ended up getting good at dancing from going to so many.
    But related to the kid, they force social interaction.

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    done
  86. Re:Dude, that's not a novel, that's happening toda by HarveyBirdman · · Score: 1
    Nice try at an anti-government jab

    Hey, just trying to get in as many as I can before they're outlawed.

    And there are inanimate bricks lying under a bridge in the outskirts of Rio that knew I wasn't talking about the schools in the book.

    ObDuh: Duh!

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    --- Ban humanity.
  87. Re:Depends, how do you feel about real-life popups by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    If the popups lead to better educated children, I have absolutely no problem with them at all.
    As I *said*, how about a ***pilot*** program. You know... TRY IT OUT instead of making ideological prejudgements based on scare tactics of subliminal advertising and other urban myths? Can we at least TRY and be scientific by running an experiment?

    Personally I think it would backfire though and people would just become hardened to the ads.

    Do you have a actual factual basis for this conclusion other than "business = evil"?

    Can people not set aside their political prejudices once in a while so we can actually try something new? This is actually the main problem facing this country these days. If a solution can be shown to not be 100% perfect, it gets tossed away even if the new solution is 80% effective versus the 40% effectiveness of the incumbent system. It's madness.


    The problem with this philosophy is that "education" is not the same as a scientific theory, no matter how complex a theory. Education is two parts knowledge, one part teaching someone how to think. No, I'm not a tin-foil hat wearing paranoid, or a rabid anti-capitalist, I am just speaking the truth about all systems of education, good or bad. If you treat a group kids like part of an experiment, you must be prepared for the consequences. For a change that is as potentially drastic as this, I'm against subjecting anyone's kids to it.

    I believe that any "good" education would include things like critical thinking skills, championing the ability to stand by what you believe in even if it is unpopular, etc.... Now maybe a school run under such corporate sponsership discribed in the books might be supportive of such values, but I just don't see any reason for them to be.

  88. MOD PARENT UP! by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    Seriously! This is one of the most constructive posts I've seen this week.

  89. Re:Depends, how do you feel about real-life popups by HarveyBirdman · · Score: 1
    An experiment does not have to be dehumanizing. You do a pilot program. You HAVE to try things or you never know if it works. I agree that it's not really hard science, hence you have to **TRY** **IT**.

    I just waant to try something new. WHY DOES THIS ATTITUDE ALWATS ENCOUNTER RESISTANCE EVEN FROM THE MAN (geek) IN THE STREET (Internet)?

    People are also just tossing out strawman arguments against the idea. That's what I mean by releasing your political prejudices for a while. All I implied was private sector schools (TM). It should have been obvious I don't mean the robot mills described in the book review, just the general concept. School(TM) in the real world does not automatically imply it's completely unregulated.

    Everyone and his brother thinks they know exactly what will happen without a single scrap of empirical experience to back the opinion up, and that's just frigging annoying as all hell.

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  90. Re:Dude, that's not a novel, that's happening toda by Hard_Code · · Score: 2, Interesting

    Have you tried beatings? If it doesn't work, at least it's exercise.

    Well, for you that is.

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    It's 10 PM. Do you know if you're un-American?
  91. Optimism "uncool" by decipher_saint · · Score: 1

    As far back as I remember (the '70s) "cool" characters in books, television and films are always cynical pessimists. We're at the point today where people can't get excited about something like the X-Prize whereas less than a century ago people got so excited about Zeppelins they actually designed buildings with mooring masts on them (i.e. the Empire State building).

    Whatever happened to optimism about the future? Well, my thought is that fiction saying that "things might not be so good no matter what you do now" will sell better than "look everything will be bright, shiny and better"...

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    1. Re:Optimism "uncool" by RatBastard · · Score: 1
      Whatever happened to optimism about the future?

      In no particular order:

      McCarthyism - The persecution of anyone with different values than the ruling class.

      The stagnating conformity of post-WWII America.

      The advent of suburbs and the dissolution of neighborhoods.

      The bitter generation gap of the 1960's and the persicution of the youing by the ruling classes of that time.

      The Atomic Bomb, and the fear of run-away science.

      The Cold War and the fear of a constant, unsleeping enemy.

      The growing corporate takeover of modern life. There are more factors, I'm sure.

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    2. Re:Optimism "uncool" by misleb · · Score: 1

      Sci-Fi isn't about the future. It is about the present. It most definitly isn't saying "things might not be so good no matter what you do." Sci-Fi opens our eyes to current problems and issues so we can make things better or at least preventing them from gettign as bad as the story. Fiction is a way of abstracting current issues so that we might understand them better. Well, that and for entertainment.

      -matthew

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  92. Re:Kerry won the presidency last night by CommanderSmoothie · · Score: 1

    Haha, everyone knows that Rudy Ray Moore is really going to win.

  93. SF vs gen authors. by Grendel+Drago · · Score: 2, Interesting

    If you have a talented author who is able to work with interpersonal issues, relationships and so on, they write "respectible" fiction. SF only get the stories written by no-talent hacks or the stories by good authors that *can't* be told as non-SF.

    I disagree, but would like to include a brief and admittedly vague anecdote. Ursula K LeGuin, who became famous for her SF exploring sociological and anthropological themes---but could The Left Hand of Darkness have been told without genetically engineered androgynes?---and later tried to distance herself from her SF roots, to be more palatable to The Literary Establishment. She ended up writing a lot of bad work.

    You say, That said, I'd be happy to read a SF novel which focused on interpersonal or other "non-SF" sources of conflict, where the future is just a scenery choice. There's plenty of work that does just that. It's not SF; it's a Western or a crime drama with the word 'boat' crossed out and replaced with 'transgalactic skipship' or some similar verbal frottage.

    SF is about hwo technology changes us. Vinge's "Realtime" series for stasis fields, "The Left Hand of Darkness" for a lack of gender, "1984" for two-way television and "Brave New World" for a genetically engineered caste system. I say that no really great work of SF could be re-cast in what you call a non-SF locale.

    SF isn't just scenery. A lot of it is crap, but that can be said for general fiction as well. It's been unfairly ghettoized, its authors shunned until after their deaths, then grave-robbed for buzzwords and plot points. (See: Philip K Dick, Paycheck; Isaac Asimov, I, Robot; Robert Heinlein, Starship Troopers.)

    And the shunning of SF continues into other media, TV and movies. With the exception of Trek, which has its own problems, and which (I'm told) has gone straight to hell lately, what SF is there on television? What was the last SF movie you saw? And I mean real SF. Look what's considered SF.

    There's a tendency among the general readership to shun SF. I can't imagine why someone would have such an aversion to picking up "The Left Hand of Darkness" or "A Deepness in the Sky". Do you know what causes it?

    --grendel drago

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  94. Re:Depends, how do you feel about real-life popups by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    People are also just tossing out strawman arguments against the idea. That's what I mean by releasing your political prejudices for a while. All I implied was private sector schools (TM). It should have been obvious I don't mean the robot mills described in the book review, just the general concept. School(TM) in the real world does not automatically imply it's completely unregulated.

    Yes, we already have privately run schools, but where is the experiment if you are talking about something similar to existing schools? Therefore, your impassioned grandparent post implied (at least to me) you wanted to try something noticably different that current public or private schools. Since you didn't include any specific differences in the approach you wanted to try, I reasoned you ment a system similar to that described by the book, with perhaps some minor changes.

    That is my line of reasoning for making my reply. If I am wrong, could you clarify exactly what you want to try in your experiment?

  95. Re:So...so read another type of story by cwest · · Score: 1

    Perhaps you'd be better off with stories beginning with "Once upon a time" and concludng with "and they lived happily ever after"! Alas, the real world doesn't work that way.

  96. Re:Dude, that's not a novel, that's happening toda by Zebbers · · Score: 1

    Ummm. I'm sorry but your stepsons problems have little to do with the internet and probably show deeper sources.

    The majority of teenybopper netheads love music, are horny, chatting, etc etc. Internet addiction and overuse may be true but it is not causal of your stepsons problems. I wonder what he is doing online, just playing games?

    The internet doesnt have much to do with this. Before the internet there were social outcasts who came home from school and stayed in their room doing god knows what repeat ad nauseum. It is indicitive of a deeper problem. It is a symptom not the source.

  97. Consider it a warning. by RatBastard · · Score: 1

    Ever since Mary Shelley (sp?), some authors have tried to warn us about the dangers they see on the horizon. And science fiction is the best genre to house these warnings. The Cold War becaomes the war between The Federation and The Klingon Empire, teh fear of the Soviet Union becomes invaders from Mars, fears of corporations taking over out lives become RoboCop, etc...

    By placing the events of the story in a world that does not (yet) exist, the author can explore the issues he/she wants to talk about without pointing fingers directly at existing entities, and can take steps to remove us from the coccoon of our lives. They can show us their fears in a context outside of our daily lives, allowing us to see them in a context unclouded by what we;ve already taken for granted.

    Sceince Fiction is a genre that can elegantly searve to make social comentaries about things we otherwise might not be willing to look at. Sceince fiction has dealt with racism, sexism, politics, matters of sexual orientation, rampant consumerism, medical breakthroughs, etc...

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  98. Re:Dude, that's not a novel, that's happening toda by jafuser · · Score: 1

    Just going by what you've said, you might consider doing some research on high functioning autism (ie Asperger's Syndrome) and see if the profile fits his behavior.

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  99. I've read the bulk of this book sitting in a store by MacBorg · · Score: 1

    ...and while the idea of the Feed and hyper-commercialized living is interesting, the prose is merely mediocre and the storyline is rather flat. The one thing that I can remember is that the protagionist seemed to lack any high-level cognitive function : I mean, communicating via semi-lingual grunts, having no emotion in regard to friends (girlfriend's death). Macborg gives this book 1.5 of 5. Worth reading only if you're really bored. But better than a lot of the really vapid YA-novel shite that has been published. Tell the kids to go read Snow Crash or something...

  100. only fools learn from their own mistakes... by 3xtricati0n · · Score: 1

    repetitive themes are an indication of nothing more than a lack of creative insight, or are they? putting aside the mundane references to a futuristic dystopia, i found myself intrigued by the closing paragraph; the more pertinent theme takes its place as the concluding clause:
    'so we can thoughtfully avoid it.'
    I find it difficult to comment on the status quo without being cynical; i must, however, maintain a positive frame of mind in respect to the future; the defeatist attitude encourages nothing more than apathy. What are seemingly more and more people trying to get across to the masses without presenting themselves as the paranoid, stimulant driven, conspiracy theorists?
    With the world being so dynamically active, i find it hard to envision how much control we have over our changing planet. With the advent of the industrial revolution come consequences as well; natural disasters have shown a consistent increase over the past 50 years; statistics show that over the stated period (http://www.cipra.de/berchtesgaden/reden/Kron.engl .pdf); we have endured a three-fold increase in the frequency of natural disasters; an eight-fold increase in economic losses and a fourteen-fold increase in insured losses. Do we really have to come face to face, as individuals, with the ultimate powers of nature to initiate the change necessary? The news is saturated with disaster and plight, while the seemingly singular positive response from the masses are when we choose to revel in our own glory - the world cups, the olympic games... imagine the implications of a major natural disaster striking an economic hub, a threat that millions already face. What happens when humans cease to exist as consumerists, but as survivalists instead? Most of us agree that the future looks bleak and discouraging; why aren't we doing something about it yet?

    1. Re:only fools learn from their own mistakes... by 3xtricati0n · · Score: 1

      As daunting as the task may appear; we must concentrate our energies on the only object we can truly exhibit a total confidence of control over; ourselves. Taking on the masses would be a frivolous pursuit indeed.

  101. Oh, come on. by jswalter9 · · Score: 1

    Let go of the unpleasant present, and embrace the semi-conscious blissful ignorance of the future.

    Truly, literate people are so sentimental. Just give it up already.

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  102. "Sherman, Set the Wayback Machine for 1980" by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 1, Insightful
    Just for fun, I altered your post by substituting a few words here and there. It should be obvious which ones:
    My stepson is a frickin pod person thanks to CABLE TV and a father (who he lives with) who literally refuses to pull the plug. The kid comes home from school (not School(TM) yet but soon I'm sure) and SITS IN FRONT OF THE TV. He WATCHES TV until he goes to sleep. When he's at our house (every other weekend, his dad got custody and then prompty opted to let the TV handle most of the chores) it's a war to get him to do anything that doesn't involve SITTING IN FRONT OF THE TV. We have CABLE TV too but we try to keep him from spending the entire weekend on it. What's two days though every two weeks when he lives IN FRONT OF THE TV the rest of the time (admittedly outside of school).

    ...

    The idea of this kid working anywhere is laughable. He doesn't even mention cars or driving and to the best of my knowledge doesn't know what a girl is (and I check his VIDEO TAPES when he leaves so we're not even talking about hitting the porn here). He doesn't read, he doesn't listen to music, and he doesn't even want to go outside much less actually do something that might require sweating. Friends? Hell if I know.



    I am sure you could do something similar for radio, books, etc.

    This is an old problem: how to get a kid out of the house doing things. Good luck. Its a hard but important task. It is MUCH harder to become active as an adult than as a kid. I know from personal experience.

  103. Sounds Like... by Nom+du+Keyboard · · Score: 1

    This sounds like both an Outer Limits, and Stargate SG-1 episode that I recall.

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  104. disconnecting through the internet by Psymunn · · Score: 1

    The author's conclusion is that life is cheap and humans are sheep.

    and is the author wrong. I'm sorry if you don't like the message, and it upsets you, but a world where instant communication replaces one on one human interaction, and everyone locks them away remotely does limit a persons empathy for another. a person, in life, has the capacity to distance themselvse from a person, be they alive or deceased. in a time where all social connections are merely superficial, it is concievable that society could manifest an inherint autism. the loss of another is about as harrowing as the season finale if a favorite show. i suppose what you dislike is that there are no 'firefighters' or 'thought police' imposing this reality. that people, collectivly, without some kind of overseer, arrived at this state. well? why couldn't they. and, the main character might not struggle against society, but the girlfriend does. the struggle is hers, seen through the eyes of a disenchanted person who is just like everyone else. This is sci fi. It's simply hyperbole. it's an extreme extrapolation of where our society is headed. and, as with many distopias, it's not somethign we want. i think this is exactly what youth should be reading. afterall, the conclusion is never that 'life is cheap' but that 'life is becoming cheaper and, we should hold onto our humanity lest we fall into the trap depicted in the tale.' too use an example, not yet cited, in 'a clockwork orange,' anthony burguesse explores freedom of choice and what constitutes morality. he does so by having a disinfected main character who, at the end of the tale, repents nothing. is it dangerous for the youth to read a tale where the main character learns nothing?
    and no i didn't RTFB, but thanks to your

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  105. Not quite. by theonomist · · Score: 1

    So everything would be a monopoly then?

    No, quite the opposite. A monopoly is when the supply for a given demand is controlled by a minority (e.g. Microsoft); I advocate freedom: The people make the decisions for themselves, based on an educated understanding of their own interests.

    You see if there is any chance of competition then companies need those "free thinking" individuals to compete.

    Be that as it may, as long as corporations control education and the media, there won't be very many free-thinking individuals; that's the topic of this entire discussion. Those few free-thinking individuals who slip through the cracks won't be very interested in indentured servitude to corporations. This is the case even now: Show me somebody who doesn't own a TV, and I'll show you somebody who knows better than to be fooled by corporatism. Rare exceptions aside, capitalism and television correlate very nearly 100%.

    This is the fundamental flaw in neo-liberalism: Capitalism rewards short-sighted, unplanned behavior. That sort of random, blind trial-and-error just can't compete with intelligent planning. It's stupefyingly inefficient and staggeringly wasteful. If the effort now wasted on non-productive competition -- which benefits only the very rich -- were instead devoted to useful ends, or even spent on enjoyable and harmless pursuits, human quality of life would be immeasurably enhanced. Think about it: Something like half of your working hours are spent on this nonsense. We often have three or more corporations producing essentially the same product, but where is the money going? Advertising (read: competition), redundant R&D (due to competition, and to corporate-designed IP law), and all manner of other madness. Take R&D alone: Once you've designed a workable airplane, for example, it's a bizarre waste of time and effort for the guy down the street to design one that does essentially the same thing. If the designers of the second airplane just took a few months off from work and went fishing, greater social benefit would surely accrue. Then of course you've got redundant factories, when a single factory of greater capacity could produce just as much, with considerably greater econmies of scale. Everybody wins -- except the corporations.

    Since we are in a global market place they also need to compete with other countries.

    The cutting edge of resistance to corporatism is resistance to globalization. Now you know why. As long as people are reduced to animals or automatons, "competing" for meaningless prizes, nothing useful or worthwhile will be accomplished. It's the old "divide and conquer" routine. You're telling me that to fix things, we need to devote more time and energy to establish more firmly the root cause of the very problems we're trying to solve. No thanks.

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  106. The Low Carb Craze by Synn · · Score: 1

    I think we're already experiencing something similar to that with just the internet. For example, we've had diet fads before but the current Atkins / low carb craze is just insane.

    I mean, everywhere you go it's low carb this, low carb that, even Coke and Pepsi have low carb versions. Not to mention low carb beers??

    Would the low carb craze have been as pervasive, as quick to take off, if it wasn't for the internet? And what happens in another 100 years when communication technology really starts to get advanced?

  107. whoops posted to early by Psymunn · · Score: 1

    barrage of comments i don't have to.
    also, you really don't give credit to the late teens critical analysis that this book is focused towards. i think, like yourself, the audience would be disgusted by the main characters inhumanity and, indoing so, the authors point is reached.

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  108. The History Repeats Itself by kc_cyrus · · Score: 1, Insightful
    Even the President of the United States appears unfocused and uneducated.

    There is a place for George Bush The 5th in The White House.

  109. You have me wrong by SuperKendall · · Score: 1

    If the popups lead to better educated children, I have absolutely no problem with them at all.

    As I *said*, how about a ***pilot*** program. You know... TRY IT OUT instead of making ideological prejudgements based on scare tactics of subliminal advertising and other urban myths? Can we at least TRY and be scientific by running an experiment?


    I don't think at all that business has to equal evil. I am a big fan of business myself.

    I'm an even bigger fan of privitization of schools.

    What I am not a big fan of is a preponderance of advertising in schools, at all - I think it creates a major diestration and makes it hard to learn. Your first sentance is especially silly to me as there is NO WAY you would be able to learn squat if new windows wer really popping up on your desktop all the top. Similarily a huge number of conflicting colorful ads all over school is not well suited to retention of anything, except perhaps that Coke is Good.

    I'm not exactly sure what pilot program you are for - as I said I welcome privitzation, as long as it comes without advertising for the kids. The taxes we pay should cover it.

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  110. don't worry about corporations by Psymunn · · Score: 1

    ahh but whoever controls the spice, controls life...

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  111. if you liked this... by scottking · · Score: 1

    try jennifer government... a slightly more adult vision of a similar future.

    http://www.amazon.ca/exec/obidos/ASIN/1400030927 /q id=1091224726/ref=sr_8_xs_ap_i1_xgl/702-9988470-84 92837

    ISBN: 1400030927

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  112. Re:Dude, that's not a novel, that's happening toda by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 2, Interesting

    That sounds terrible. Until you realize all you can actually do online, other than surf for porn.

    He could be composing his own music, rather than listening to some fool sing about how terrible/great their life is.

    He could be drawing.

    He could be having intelligent discussions with other people, and have far more friends than you may think, even if they are just online.

    He could be writing his own books, as well as reading them.

    He could be making his own games, rather than just playing someone else's.

    Many other things are also possible..

    Not only can the internet/computers be used for creating many, many things but it also gives you a massive auidence to show them to.

    Maybe it's just me, but about all of these seem more meaningful to me than looking into how to drive a stupid machine for getting to places, how to become a slave who merley does enough work to get food to continue his existence rather than living off his creations, and trying to reproduce when it wouldn't be feasible to raise said offspring.

    Of course he could be doing nothing of the sort, but even sitting in front of a screen doing nothing in particular dosen't seem much worse in my eyes than your life at that age.

    Of course, I'm probably severley biased on this issue since you practically just described my life.

  113. Tsk Tsk by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    Ah yes, these liberals and their propaganda... such a touching sight...

  114. Maybe his Problem is not DSL . . . by llywrch · · Score: 4, Insightful

    Just out of curiousity, have you had a therapist talk with this kid? I ask this because it sounds as if the kid could be clinically depressed.

    The fact he's your stepson & lives half of the time with his dad suggests that he's gone thru some serious trauma: he's seen his family break up & getting bounced back & forth could be undercutting his sense of a home & security. This would make a case of depression understandable.

    Then consider your following paragraph:

    > He doesn't even mention cars or driving and to the best of my knowledge doesn't know what a girl is (and I check his
    > browser cache when he leaves so we're not even talking about hitting the porn here). He doesn't read, he doesn't listen
    > to music, and he doesn't even want to go outside much less actually do something that might require sweating.
    > Friends? Hell if I know.

    Lack of interest in things like cars, sex, any activities or friends are all textbook indicators of depression. And doctors have only admitted in the last 5 years or so that children _can_ suffer from depression.

    When he's not around sometime, use Google to find some webpages on depression, & compare a couple of the tests against his behavior. If they suggest he might have depression, get him some medical help: depression is a disease. And once he starts coping with it, & starts to show an interest in those things, he will be glad for the help.

    On the other hand, if you have had him examined by a medical professional, & he's not depressed --just lazy -- then it's well within your rights to talk to his mother about sending him to a military boarding school. ;-)

    Geoff

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  115. you mean no happy ending?... by Numen · · Score: 1

    Are you sure your main gripe isn't just that the novel doesn't have a happy ending?

    I'm a little suprised that because an author chooses to take a downbeat view on a topic it produces responses of "disgust".

    As for the bit about the liberal arts and what may or may not be inherent in the makeup of mankind... I'd suggest that such rarified notions wouldn't survive contact with that's going on in the Congo at the moment.

  116. The Giver by Lois Lowry by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    Have you ever read this book?
    The Giver is exactly like this, where occupations are planned and "love" has no place in society.

    It is a children's book (won the Newbery Medal) and dosen't get into the whole capitalist angle (IIRC they were socialists) but the description of reproduction seems verbatim from the book...

  117. SciFi is often more upbeat than down. by DonGar · · Score: 1

    "For us the Living" is the one I've read most recently. "The Dispossessed" is another.

    These are extreme examples talking about the Utopia's that we could reach if we only accept "Idea(s) A, B and C", and tend to be a bit preachy.

    But overall, I think Sci Fi is usually TOO optimistic.

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  118. Re:Dude, that's not a novel, that's happening toda by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    Ask him to show you what he does online. Maybe you could become interested and become a pod person too like the rest of us here.

  119. Is this novel really set in the future? by Julia+Cameron · · Score: 1
    Timothy writes:
    • Even the President of the United States appears unfocused and uneducated.

    So Dubya is going to remain president forever and forever.

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  120. young adult? by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    That's 99% of slashdot readers! right on target!

  121. Reminds Me Of Marvel's "Doom 2099" Series by Master+of+Transhuman · · Score: 1

    where the ultimate Marvel supervillain, Doctor Doom, pops out of time travel in 2099 and sees a corporate-dominated world. Being a 20th Century dictator with Victorian era attitudes, he decides to remake the world - which includes invading the United States and using nanotech to subvert the corporations.

    One of the best Marvel series ever done, with quotes from Bakunin and other radicals scattered through the stories - they even had Doom quoting Noam Chomsky.

    Which is probably why (along with low sales) the series was abruptly canceled and the editor canned.

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  122. Re:Dude, that's not a novel, that's happening toda by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    Sounds like my college roommate, only worse.

    It took me a while before I realized that his whole family behaved this way to some extent.

    My roommate does, in fact, listen to music, and read, but he mostly plays video games and watches TV or movies(which are downloaded from SA torrents so that he need not spend a dime on that sort of thing). His passive nature is not really the problem; it's a symptom of his not knowing what he really wants to do. He obviously hasn't had much guidance in that area, and I know I can't help him, not if he doesn't want to talk. I can only be inspirational by doing something every day, which I didn't quite maintain last year. Perhaps this year :)

  123. Brave New World? by Anonymous Coward · · Score: 0

    Sounds awfully familiar.

  124. Unit. . . by AvantPunk · · Score: 1

    I read the book, and it's nothing like The Matrix, which is itself a rip-off.

    For starters, while most --NOT all-- of the citizens are connected to the network, they're all fully aware of it.

  125. World Literacy by uxo · · Score: 1

    According to the World Factbook, world literacy is approximately seventy-nine percent.

    The United States is sixty-sixth in literacy, with ninety-seven percent literacy.

  126. normalcy today by Down8 · · Score: 1

    Uhh... he's a teenager. That makes him anti-social by definition.

    The fact that his distraction of choice is the Internet vs. say hot rods, is just a modern difference. I was quiet as a teenager, and damned if I was gonna go chat it up with my stepfather when I did get the urge to bounce ideas of someone.

    The fact that his parents are divorced is easily related to him not wanting to communicate with either one. and, the father probably has his own deal, depending on how the relationship with your wife ended.

    In summary: the kid is basically normal. Give him some time before calling in psychotherapists and other idiots who'll just drug him up, or before ripping away his only distraction so he goes Columbine from BadParenting©.

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